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You already know what I think about this - I’m not exaggerating when I say it’s one of the best British hip hop songs I’ve heard in a very long time. The balance between sick, unhinged delivery and emotion is awesome. The singing is dope - the message is profound. The beat choice is great and Cryptic knocked the mix out the park. It’s art and I think a lot of people will relate and find comfort in your words and how you approach such a sadly taboo subject. The video is actually okay - I think the minimalistic vibe actually compliments the track - a couple typos and maybe misheard lyrics here and there but that’s me nitpicking as I’m a nerd. Let me know if you still want me to do something because I love this track!
Greetings,
First, I agree with MCD about this being very well written, delivered and executed. You checked every box - singing lyrics production - all on point. Sadly I don't believe this subject is very taboo in the states. There are many people actually going through this, but there is almost a whole subgenre of emotionally entitled people that use suicide and depression as an identity to get attention or shock people.
Second, I am impressed with Cryptics mixing and engineering lately. He did an amazing job with the mix, just to reiterate what Ben said. Sorry MCD... My Bad! I have been very impressed with the networking skills, as well as the quality, that THEM has been producing. I wild out a lot but I see the real! At this point they can't be denied. But I digress. The quality of the mix is impressive.
Finally, keep this type of music coming. Our societies need to hear this. Also, you should let MCD make a lyric video to this or something new from his Visuals by THEM entity. Just a suggestion because your lyric video is good but it could be taken up a notch. This track deserves it. Thanks for sharing your art.
Bong, Bong
Beat is nice.. the singing is nice man.. dig it.. the delivery and emotion is great flow is dope.. lyrics are well written and there is some great imagery in there. I think the subject matter and content were handled very well and in a refreshing original way.
Cryptic did a great job on the mix as well. Lyric vid is okay it does add something to the visual but I agree, you should have MCD do one for you next time.
Great job, keep creating, loving the sounds!
Mimic, Im on my phone so can’t feed the way Id like but quick msg to say I thought that
this was raw/real and so well done.
appreciated guys
I don't usually like British songs, but this is fire no doubt. Love the adlib singing. Everything was great from the flow and delivery to the mixing ect.. Only thing I don't like is the negativity of it, but that's just me I ain't into no suicide mental health issues feel sorry for me crap, but you got mad talent and skills keep hustling homie hope to hear more from you on a more positive note!!
Damn this is some different shit! UK vibes
Love the delivery switches. Mad entertaining.
You remind me of if Eminem was born in Birmingham or something lol. The bridge singing is creepy as fuck, good shit.
Smoothe transitions throughout. That's always appreciated by my ears. You did a good job putting this together. Gotta say i don't have much critique to give on this one.
Keep em coming.
Appreciated bro
yo this shit here is tight as fuck. emotional banger. great flow and mic presence. solid. that part where you were running out of breath sounded intentional and dope as fuck. lyrically killing it. reminds me a lot of NF especially with the style of the song and the beat. how you crafted this together. great mix and mastering. ill probably bump this again! good stuff dudes. keep em coming.
The energy from this is pretty amazing man. The mixing and vibe is superbly on point.
Emotional delivery ramping up through the verse adds so much character. The first verse was incredibly engrossing - lyrics that pulled you in, putting the listener in the room with the speaker.
The melodic hook is a fantastic touch that compliments the song immensely.
I felt the second verse lost a bit of its momentum, but the third verse pulls it together well. Like the speaker is exhausting. It was almost a little underwhelming considering how powerful the song started, but this a powerful listen either way.
Very polished, direct, and hits the emotions you were aiming for. Well done.
Keep dropping.
Yo!!! This is fire!!! Wild boy!
I fuck with this bro.. beats nice.. I feel the emotion in this flow is on point to I can’t stand a British accent lol but I fuck with it
I'm late on this, 2 years old, this was dope really enjoyed this piece
shame thats all you got posted would have liked to have heard some other stuff from you
nice song like the angle
Trash
Dude used to pretend to be black and claim to go on tours with Chris Brown