WK 10: JEM(3-5) Vs Allen Knight(1-1) - AK Wins

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@JEM. @Allen Knight

two.

yup

@Jem @Allen Knight
Bars due tonight

i'll find ur slut an pistol whip her skull in, that heat'll harm her
Tractor down & plowed her face till shes chewin thru a straw like a wheat field farmer

If this ikon snap… than shit means
I could go extendo lens -
but J sharp enough to rip knights head off, guillotine

Nah Jem came a lil too simple here & Knight brought some dope shit imo

Shit was clean

V/Knight

Your hands will missile (miss soul); I'll appease the strike; I walk on water and fire; but you'll burn in fire; like Jesus Christ
You believe you're a prince of darkness; but you'll cry to the serene of night; when God's light was first created; you were killed by darkness; to see the light!

Leave, this here. They can vote on the proceeding battles. But please, leave this here. It is necessary.

Anyways, both bars were kind of flawed; as both don't have proper directness; but skewered road perception. These weren't bad bars; clever in their owns ways; but it isn't enough to really compete with really good punches and disses. Not too bad at all; could use work on syntax and meaning; but good work. Keep writing, guys.

Allen Knight had the better bar; by too much; but not too much at all. If you know what I mean. He could do better. It isn't a fatality; and will never be a fatality; when my sword cuts you; you're done; got it. Not too bad. JEM was kind of bad; but not by much. He needs more practice in a way. Good work, guys. Not that bad...of a battle..but..yeah......

V/ Allen Knight

Yea knight takes this, direct punch, clever concept solid bar. Jem’s was the same, but less.

V/knight

sheesh. what a match up!!
allen knight. the tractor wordplay is super played, but it goes well with the concept to make the bar great!! the straw ref just put this over the top

jem, this was pretty good also.i just feel like you should have taken a dif route then ending the punch w guillotine. unless thats some type of camera!!

vote allen knght, but dont worry jem, ur a real winner in my book!!

Quote:

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Originally Posted by AJ the Menace

Your hands will missile (miss soul); I'll appease the strike; I walk on water and fire; but you'll burn in fire; like Jesus Christ
You believe you're a prince of darkness; but you'll cry to the serene of night; when God's light was first created; you were killed by darkness; to see the light!

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TF is this trash?

v/ AK

Jim's punch was too simple and had a weird cadence. ak with a brutal punch

You're kidding me right, who in the hell are you? You're nothing to anyone, remember that. This bar is very good; and you couldn't match it even if you tried your hardest. It's quite a shame you, or this site doesn't recognize good diss bars. Maybe you'll recognize them when you lose your dignity. Go away, bye.

I seen the tractor wp before and the plowed her face route fucked ur bitch reference. The metaphorical comparison was ok. Not aks best bar but it beat Jem. Jem didn’t really like the wording

V/AK

Oh my.. jem has so much potential just executed it bad..Allen was cool.. just delivered much better


Ak

Wasn’t really feeling Jem’s Bar. AK was good and I think he takes this clear

v/AK

Aks shit is old but worded nice. Jem had a chance here but didnt take advantage.

V jem

AKwins