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im a newbie, flow hard like a diamond,
first blood when i'm breakin' Clout's hymen, see it pour like the Shinin'.
elevator climb just in time for some violence,
don't copy my rhymes bitch i didn't say simon.
you used to be "useful", username changes brutal,
"mjolnir" like thor? guess this site's pretty feudal.
think you're ruler? you junior, got a foot in your mouth,
see no future, no rumors bout Jager losin' to Clout.
so when i check in, this your sentence, they the judge and the jury.
send the defendant to the pen, make sure his bunky's a furry...
Here's my links:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...open-for-votes
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...open-for-votes
someone lmk if im doin this wrong.
Check @KnowP i literally voted on everything lol do i need to link every thread?
Jagermeister, jagerbombs good alcohol
Howdy, friend.
Prayers as ya family reflects & searches really deep down.
for the added depth in maskin the stench from the corpse of this clown.
he hides it well but in this guise it dwells ur a bitch within.
Ur Such a piece of shit? u make dia appear to be an outstanding citizen.
ur girl loves me & admits ur the worst that's smashed kid.
if she eye'n Jager? its just shots of it to forget the night ever happened.
ur not memorable cept for this moment here & oh brother.
U Made quite an ass out ya self & niki minaj wants ya surgeons number.
says his bars r godly. How he lets the delusions Take him.
such a bad showing it makes the LLL voting numbers look record breaking
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@Clout you good. Thanks. I'll open this for votes.
Jagger ur verse was dope for an audio battle loved the multis too man. Text verse is way different from audio. In text u gotta be more creative used wordplays nameplays metaphores.
Clout
Prayers as ya family reflects & searches really deep down.
for the added depth in maskin the stench from the corpse of this clown.
he hides it well but in this guise it dwells ur a bitch within.
Ur Such a piece of shit? u make dia appear to be an outstanding citizen.
Lmao
L
ur girl loves me & admits ur the worst that's smashed kid.
if she eye'n Jager? its just shots of it to forget the night ever happened.
Forced but good attempt his name is Jagger
ur not memorable cept for this moment here & oh brother.
U Made quite an ass out ya self & niki minaj wants ya surgeons number.
Lmfao
says his bars r godly. How he lets the delusions Take him.
such a bad showing it makes the LLL voting numbers look record breaking
Lol
V/Clout just overall took this comfortably his drop was more of what a text battle related verse should include. He had some good humor factor in a couple bars.
nah actually it is jager the username was taken so i threw th double a. clout had me on that bar.Quote:
Originally Posted by Joe Boston
Appreciate the honesty, u heard it here it is Jager (yay-gur)Quote:
Originally Posted by jaager
V. Clout
He had some misses but most of his verse was aite but light. Jaeger needs to go read old LLL battles and see how it's done. Go to closed battles and go back about 25 pages.
-vote wont count until broken down
@Ronin thx for voting. can you break your vote down better so we can count it please? thx.
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im a newbie, flow hard like a diamond,
first blood when i'm breakin' Clout's hymen, see it pour like the Shinin'.
pretty light punch. nothing creative here.
elevator climb just in time for some violence,
don't copy my rhymes bitch i didn't say simon.
gotta bring in the new concepts. Simon says is played out bro
you used to be "useful", username changes brutal,
"mjolnir" like thor? guess this site's pretty feudal.
too indirect here. didnt attack your opponent really.
think you're ruler? you junior, got a foot in your mouth,
see no future, no rumors bout Jager losin' to Clout.
again not really direct. just a multi statement bar.
so when i check in, this your sentence, they the judge and the jury.
send the defendant to the pen, make sure his bunky's a furry...
potential to be a solid hit here but "bunky's a furry" killed the flow.
vs
Prayers as ya family reflects & searches really deep down.
for the added depth in maskin the stench from the corpse of this clown.
ehhh not feelin this overall. set up was lackin. basic punch
he hides it well but in this guise it dwells ur a bitch within.
Ur Such a piece of shit? u make dia appear to be an outstanding citizen.
light perosnal flip on dia but no real stinger imo
ur girl loves me & admits ur the worst that's smashed kid.
if she eye'n Jager? its just shots of it to forget the night ever happened.
this is slick
ur not memorable cept for this moment here & oh brother.
U Made quite an ass out ya self & niki minaj wants ya surgeons number.
lmao dope bar
says his bars r godly. How he lets the delusions Take him.
such a bad showing it makes the LLL voting numbers look record breaking
played concept. ligiht jab here.
Jaager u gotta get more creative with your concepts and think outside the box a bit more when it comes to attacking your opponent.
try to ready the LLL champ match to get a better idea. Clout that nikki and eye'n Jager bars was solid. The rest was blahh imo. we need a rematch!
v. clout
No. I'm not here to teach. Clout got potential tho.
Quote:
Originally Posted by jaager
Quote:
Originally Posted by Clout
Clout took this rather easily. Jaager should familiarize himself with the archives and see what he can do to better himself. Nothing he posted moved me. Clout's verse moved me so hard right now.
v-Clout
Jaager has sick multis & flow. Clout is more polished with wordplays & punches. The standout line of this battle was the surgeons number bar.
V/clout
I don't really got any skills myself but i feel clout won it jaager was good too but i think he just needed to play with the words a bit
Please break this vote down more.Quote:
Originally Posted by whorticulture
Regardless of that terrible vote, is this over?Quote:
Originally Posted by KnowP
jaager
im a newbie, flow hard like a diamond,
first blood when i'm breakin' Clout's hymen, see it pour like the Shinin'.
You should be dissing your opponent not your self.
elevator climb just in time for some violence,
don't copy my rhymes bitch i didn't say simon.
lmao this was corny.
you used to be "useful", username changes brutal,
"mjolnir" like thor? guess this site's pretty feudal.
not feeling this bruh.
think you're ruler? you junior, got a foot in your mouth,
see no future, no rumors bout Jager losin' to Clout.
not rumour fact bro, not digging this.
so when i check in, this your sentence, they the judge and the jury.
send the defendant to the pen, make sure his bunky's a furry…
the verdicts in, this is a no.
Man, I know you’re new, so I’m just going to say you need to focus more on dissing your opponent, and stop with the self hype lines, a few is okay, but when they’re over saturated in your verse, it’s a no IMO, you got a lot of wiggle room to improve, get on that.
clout
Prayers as ya family reflects & searches really deep down.
for the added depth in maskin the stench from the corpse of this clown.
not really feeling, self hype more than a punch.
he hides it well but in this guise it dwells ur a bitch within.
Ur Such a piece of shit? u make dia appear to be an outstanding citizen.
that was mean, idk you snuck in a reference seem to sacrifice the punch to him.
ur girl loves me & admits ur the worst that's smashed kid.
if she eye'n Jager? its just shots of it to forget the night ever happened.
I really hate your bitch bars, its about annoying as gunplay.
ur not memorable cept for this moment here & oh brother.
U Made quite an ass out ya self & niki minaj wants ya surgeons number.
I like this one, good hit.
says his bars r godly. How he lets the delusions Take him.
such a bad showing it makes the LLL voting numbers look record breaking
haha, another good hit.
You did what you need to do, you had a few good hits here, nothing too amazing, you should watch it with those references against skilled battlers, this was an easy win for you here, so I’m not going to dig into your verse much more.
V/ Clout