the good dictator vs. Feeble Minded

RULES:

8-20 LINES
NO HATE VOTES
POLL ATTACHED (FOR VOTES)
2 ROUNDS

mine will come up in a few minutes.

aight....
im ready for this.................................good luck dawg..................................

now i know what you were hoping for but I just wont quit
hooking up all the people with that funky new shit
things for you are starting to look pretty grim
cause i'm the biggest pimp since iceberg slim

i'm continuing the battle with rhymes just so versatile
you better stick to memorizing the lines from that movie 8 mile
you claim you're as good as that boy eminem
but then I mock you and your value system

breaking out the Simpsons, yeah i know my pop culture
come up with something that nice, you lyrical vulture
picking the rotten meat off the bones of your betters
the best you can create are a bunch of verbal chain letters:
"pass this song to 20 people or you'll soon be dead
trust me, this shit is legit it happened to this guy called fred"

what the fuck do you think you are trying to pull
pushing this crap over our eyes like it was wool
you should really quit sending your waste out in bulk
cause you wouldn't like me angry, like the incredible hulk

yo
you better pass this on, and be ready for the casket/
cuz in the last bit, i can have this fag arrested for harassment/
so dont even think that ya shitty ink can sink me/
ill have you more outta 'sync' that timberlake see?/
i envision my flows, thats why this time my language is better/
i wrote my decision to kill you lyrically in a chain letter/
im hot like 100 degree heat, wearin a heavy sweater/
this guys a rookie, that why i take and 'vet ya'/
i was born with a set of traits that set you straight/
you await your fate while i debate whether to desecrate/
u take and conujugate -when i tell ya u gon meet the gate/
'crossing u over' like 'john edwards' while doin the figure eight/
the little bitch is waiting for this battle to be over-scum/
but to 'beat' me ya gota put my dick in ya hand and 'make it cum'/
'2+2' equals meta-'four', and the faggot likes that sum/
he about to go and 'catch' the way i 'kick' a pun/
to win ya gotta confine my flow but u fucking wit the wrong type of guy/ this guys a little pussy so i know it wont take much to make him cry/ when he flows, hes just wasting rhymes/ and i got 'all day' but hes still a 'waste of time'



nice batttle

but wait...there is still a round left my bad homie........ur turn now............................................... .................

YO ITS BEEN LIKE AN OUR AND I HAVE TO GO...VOTES........................................ ......................<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

one line of your's i thought was pretty clever
but at a ratio of 1 to 20 you'll be behind forever
i liked the shit with the 2s and the "meta-four"
but only one math rhyme so i'll give you some more

your other rhymes are insignificant in the statistical
lines so old they border on the archialogical
your words are rediculous, damn near forgetable
hyping yourself as timeless, but i'm the integral

your mental level is on the elementary
compared to you, i've got the MC PHD
i'm complex, while your skills are imaginary
my lyrics have meaning while yours are arbitrary

now i set a vector increasing your pain
infinite like Pi are your lines mundane
try to awe me with length, but you gotta behold
twenty pounds of your crap aint worth an ounce of my gold


ten points if you know all the math references

At feeble minds first rap, I thought he had it, but Good Dictator knocked his @$$ out in the second round. No matter who wins, this was still an good battle. The last one had some killer flow with the word play

YO
this cat needs to practice, i cant remember past the introduction/
talking about 'mathematics', now his vote faces a 'reduction'/
dont let my flow fool ya, i do this shit for habit and leisure/
throw him a 'ruler', so his rhymes can find some good 'measure'/
i pull out the three win 'hat trick' so ima magician on a mission/
im feeble, but this guys flow commissions my condition/
throw knives at ya, cuz in rhymes im causing a massacre/
go cry bitch..someone give the little baby his passifir/
its all a blur, but u can call me sir, cuz im a vet and i cause a stir/
you refer to me in numerals/ but ill cut off ya legs, cuz u got a LOW stature, and ya soon to fall/ i write it unforgettable, its soon to set on ya/ im beating you to death with my case of writers block/ my lyrics 'sweep you off your feet' and knock off your socks/


i'll kill you lyrically and have voters numerically grading my wrath/
ur flow is more like a five, not a ten, if you stop and do the math/
im digging ur grave with spades slowly and slitting ur throat with blades/
i drop verbal grenades, but he only acts like he can rap like we playin charades/

elevate more next time...

good job. a little off topic as well as a few questionable rhymes (massacre, pacifier, etc), but a very good showing nevertheless. nice battle

i dont feel u tried as hard as u can, not tryin to be disrespectful.
but what the hell is an off topic rhyme???? in battles u can rhyme about whatever u want...as long as u go from one topic to another smoothly which i did...

my vote goes to feeble minded...
he just had better flow, vocab, punches.. and liked both of his verses
vote: feeble minded

chek out my battle vs. QB Snyper
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Feeble Minded:

ok, on further examination, I can say you were on topic (nebulous reasoning to the max), but I was under the idea that rap sort of rhymes. your structure leaves a good bit to be desired. with better formatting it might be clear, but in a bigass chunk, it is much harder to see. maybe i am new at this, but i see lines without rhymes in your attacks.

aight.. i poll voted
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thanks, i would rather lose then have this languish in the land of the undecided.

Ok, the damn php code is telling me the post is too short so disregard what follows.
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NAH, THERE ARE NONE...
ILL SHOW YOU (NOT INCLUDING MIDDLE AND BEGINNING RHYMES)...WHICH ARENT NEEDED EXCEPT FOR A MORE COMPLEX FLOW...


RHYME SCHEME:
RAP 1:
CASKET, HARASSMENT
SINK ME. SEE
BETTER, LETTA, SWEATA, VET YA.
STRAIGHT, DESECRATE, MEET THE GATE,

I COULD GO ON...BUT EVERYTHING RHYMED...

yeah, you see, my biggest problems are with the second rhyme (massacre, pacifier, stir, etc.). I hope that you can clarify it for me, as well as the "vet ya" thing. I was not aware "vet" in any form was a verb.

MASSACRE AND PASSIFIR RHYME PERFECTLY...

AND VET YA...ITS CALLED WORDPLAY...VETS KILL OTHER RHYMERS THERFORE VET YA MEANS KILL YOU...ANYONE WHO READS IT WILL MOT LIKELY KNOW VET YA IS SOME FORM OF LYRICALLY KICKING UR ASS.

i am sorry, but massacre ( http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=massacre ) and pacifier ( http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=pacifier ) dont rhyme, whatever verbal contorsion you put on it. period.

there is a difference between wordplay ( http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=wordplay ) and completely fucking up the english language.

Examples:
massacre rhymes with capacitor
pacifier rhymes with fire

HAHA..THIS GUY IS A DUMBASS!!!!

PACIFIER DOES NOT RHYME WITH FIRE YOU COMPLETE MORON...I CHECKED OUT UR STUPID RHYMING DICTIONARY SHIT AND IT ONLY RHYMES THE LAST SYLLABLE NOT THE WHOLE WORD...AND ANY REAL MC CAN TELL YOU THAT MASSACRE AND PACCIFER (THE THING A BABY LIKE U USES)...DO RHYME...SO GET A FUCKING CLUE...AND STOP USING A GAY ASS RHYING DICTIONARY AND BECOME A REAL MC!!! LOL THIS CAT DOESNT THINK PACIFER AND MASSACRE RHYME.....GET A MOTHA FUCKING CLUE!!!

MAS RHYME WITH PASS
IC RHYMES VERY CLOSELY WITH IF
AND FER AND CRE RHYME PERFECTLY...THAT IS WHY UR DICTIONARY WONT RHYME THEM...ONLY A TRUE MC CAN FIND A WORD LIKE THAT...ADMIT IT U LOST AND STOP UR BITCHING...I CAN BEAT U WHENEVER I WANT..

are you out of your fucking mind? check the goddam link to pacifier at dictionary.com. the word you are thinking of is spelled PACIFIER. . . IER not IR not "PACCIFER" or whatever the fuck you think it is. and fire rhymes a hell of a lot better then massacre. IC and IF do not rhyme in the least. We are dealing with text, so verbal inflection does not apply. Learn to speak, and while you are at it, learn to fucking spell.

I dont know where you got the "rhying dictionary" shit, but I assure you that I come up with all my rhymes myself and manage to spell them somewhat correctly. Before creating accusations, you might want to check out an actual dictionary just so people are able to read what the hell you are trying to say

Punches: Feeble
Flow: dick-tator(Still not the best)
originality: Feeble
Personals: Feeble(Still little, dictator's sounded kind of kiddish)
Overall: Feeble
keeep doin your thing dogg

Bonecrusher:

when you say "kiddish". do you refer to my reluctence to use every curse word i know, or that I refrain from equating homosexuality with some sort of verbal slur. I am as straight as bill clinton or jfk, but I dont like putting down any sort of people. I do have problems with using "nigga", but I usually have no problem with others using it when it is not gratuitous. Your signature uses it roughly 7 times along with an uncounted number of other useless curse words (biatch, motherfucker, other absurdly spelled versions of same words). I am just wondering, do you expect that shit to actually make any sense? Is it just to pad your rhymes? I'm just asking. Since we are talking about all things "kiddish"

yo good dictator ya if wanna battle me hit me up................................................ ......................................

yea...this guy is a free win...he

some more votes.......

andsomeone clarify for him that pacifier (pronounced- pass-i-fir) rhymes better than fire

i think you both had a good flow, as bone crusher said you were childish & careless like it didnt matter if you won or not & im not votin cuz im kool with feeble which i am its just that i feel that he hit harder & was more creative.
good battle though but i must say feeble took it.

lmao at the opener of feeble mind'd's verse lol harrasment

but doc i dun even think your shit was a battle verse more like a general diss to anyone not really nohin too spectacula f.m had some dope shit in his verse at most of the time

vote feeble

hey yo...thaks for voting....if uv got anything u need me to vote on.....actually, u can send m a link here if ya do, but it wont let me vote right now...i just pm'd the administrator...im well over 100 posts...its messed up...bu thanks for voting..

hey feeble minded can you please poll vote in my battle that you voted on thanx.................................................. .................................................. ........

oh lmao i just read ya reply my bad im sorry lol............................................... .................................................. .....................

haha dicttor....u seem mad from how u sared talking shit....but il b glad to rip you apart another time....just one more vote.............................................. ........................................

vote: Feeble Minded

He had a harder verse and better punchlines than Dictator.

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