14... in 48 @slecht
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14... in 48 @slecht
wait wait. I didn't agree on 48hr. Let's do wednesday 11:59 est
geting links tonight
He's next on my list. Bullets fly thru his heart quick before he even figure out why he's a target,
Ironically, I'll put out blaze after bombz, ..u'd think I was trained in a Syrian Fire Department.
If He's trying to start shit. I'll have his fan base in tears cause this Champ is crazy.
I'd have beliebers losing their goddamn mind ..as soon as they hear I put these hands on J.B
Excuse my french but I'm more than a threat. My 1-2 punchlines are rare n heavy.
François Hollande declared national emergency as soon as he saw my fist....cause the paris deadly
We're not in the same tier. HE uses punchlines and childish concepts that need to grow up soon,
A perfect example is to point out that I champed the league that he got kicked out and struggled to show up too
I'll fire back. Give him a lesson because I have jotten down on paper that slecht's a specialist
the way I cross paths n trail blaze ...it would revolutionize new methods for state park rangers and environmentalist
YOU clearly went up against the wrong person. That is not healthy.
If we meet n greet, these Punches land write on the face like an autographed selfie.
I can say again that You're not in my level. By now, I'm prolly your idol.
Cause you got lines that make low tier competitors like hypotheses ...think they got a chance at my title
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@Tim...
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http://rapbattles.com/showthread.php?489139-Notti(14-5)-Vs-joog-n(13-9)**-OPEN-FOR-VOTES
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http://rapbattles.com/showthread.php?489134-Phalanx-(1-0)-vs-puravida-(5-10)-OPEN-FOR-VOTES
don't no show me lol.. i have one more line which I'm going to be posting tonight and I'm getting my links now
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meth vs j
muff vs notez
Prayed he would give amen a W.. Then bragged.. That ain't a good look u creep,
ironic.. we said "dream chase"... Not lose every battle & get put to sleep,
torture methods endless.. Fuck with me & get stuffed in a vault,
First, Trinomial for days... cuz being unable to function is the fking result,
ur hoping I don't kill u, huh?. Keep dreamin, cocky faggot,
better knock on wood.. cuz my crew e'll be doin that on top of ya casket,
slechtsbtcndsvh.... Fuck... A mouthful of bullshit.. Ur a dork lame,
& we don't know this guy like names in college sports games,
a nobody.. Ironic.. Ur just more old news my friend,
leave him cut open then sowed up like ya came out ur mothers womb again,
u an aids infested pig, fuck off or I'm endin ur life,
Told him tie a noose.. Instead he asked Charlie sheen for advice,
On some cold mobster shit.. Waste ya if u think ur funny,
I won't even count.. It'll be 1..2..10 like the way snakes kills somebody
Uh...nobody voting anywhere like always.
Flow: Slecht, nothing amazing grace just was more easier to follow.
Multiples: Slecht, yet some transitions didn't convey enough support with another.
Wordplay: Slecht, I didn't like your nameplay it was too basic and lacked depth. Blaze you didn't even try to flip a decent concept sadly.
Personals: None, that last jab attempt at me Slecht is entirely false teabagging followers holding each other like the human centipede.
Punchlines: Slecht, nothing too major in this department but held enough to gain.
Creativity: None....both were basic not played there is a difference. Tired of people claiming played tax reforms with no children. Idiots.
Slecht: You're verse wasn't too bad just felt some concepts didn't keep a well balanced on consistency. I only seen enough damage to get the job done with little effort. Just remember l'm no low tier participant just fed up with bs voters who think they creative yet can't prove to me off the head. Anyway nothing more or less here.
Blaze: I don't know, but your lines were all over the place like it was conjuring skill through an etch-a-sketch. The setups were okay just didn't initiate the robberies planned out. I think you just need to work on the concepts first then utilize them with a flow. Watch your wording too. Use discretion depending on what approach you take. Keep writing informed!
Overall analysis: Slecht get's the victory slightly more with a better polished verse.
@Tim this isn't even the right voting format^^^^
He's next on my list. Bullets fly thru his heart quick before he even figure out why he's a target,
Ironically, I'll put out blaze after bombz, ..u'd think I was trained in a Syrian Fire Department.
I'll fire back. Give him a lesson because I have jotten down on paper that slecht's a specialist
the way I cross paths n trail blaze ...it would revolutionize new methods for state park rangers and environmentalist
vs.
Prayed he would give amen a W.. Then bragged.. That ain't a good look u creep,
ironic.. we said "dream chase"... Not lose every battle & get put to sleep,
ur hoping I don't kill u, huh?. Keep dreamin, cocky faggot,
better knock on wood.. cuz my crew e'll be doin that on top of ya casket,
Vote: Lenox gay ass
Simple and plain, he had 1 or 2 good direct punches with some wit involved. Slecht had too much long-winded, underwhelming lines that ruined the impact they initially started to gain traction to do.
He's next on my list. Bullets fly thru his heart quick before he even figure out why he's a target,
Ironically, I'll put out blaze after bombz, ..u'd think I was trained in a Syrian Fire Department.
this bar and all of the bars you wrote in here are too long...great concept tho..punch was decent
If He's trying to start shit. I'll have his fan base in tears cause this Champ is crazy.
I'd have beliebers losing their goddamn mind ..as soon as they hear I put these hands on J.B
i didnt really like this one cuz it was too wordy...id like to see inner rhyme schemes if your going to make your bars this long somthing to keep the flow going
Excuse my french but I'm more than a threat. My 1-2 punchlines are rare n heavy.
François Hollande declared national emergency as soon as he saw my fist....cause the paris deadly
good punch just lengthy bars kill the enjoyment for me
We're not in the same tier. HE uses punchlines and childish concepts that need to grow up soon,
A perfect example is to point out that I champed the league that he got kicked out and struggled to show up too
lol...i liked this..still too long tho
I'll fire back. Give him a lesson because I have jotten down on paper that slecht's a specialist
the way I cross paths n trail blaze ...it would revolutionize new methods for state park rangers and environmentalist
old name play wordplay for sure, flipped well tho.....
YOU clearly went up against the wrong person. That is not healthy.
If we meet n greet, these Punches land write on the face like an autographed selfie.
this was okay to me didnt really like the delivery...
I can say again that You're not in my level. By now, I'm prolly your idol.
Cause you got lines that make low tier competitors like hypotheses ...think they got a chance at my title
lol....lengthy but funny.....
vrs.
Prayed he would give amen a W.. Then bragged.. That ain't a good look u creep,
ironic.. we said "dream chase"... Not lose every battle & get put to sleep,
this was alright for an opener...decent shot
torture methods endless.. Fuck with me & get stuffed in a vault,
First, Trinomial for days... cuz being unable to function is the fking result,
i dont get this bar fully cuz a trinomial is a algebraic expression consisting of three terms? and if its meant to be any kinda Wp its Forced AF...
ur hoping I don't kill u, huh?. Keep dreamin, cocky faggot,
better knock on wood.. cuz my crew e'll be doin that on top of ya casket,
this was better has a played vibe to it but it still was effective for me
slechtsbtcndsvh.... Fuck... A mouthful of bullshit.. Ur a dork lame,
& we don't know this guy like names in college sports games,
this bar was...lame only cuz ive heard the no name college jersey shit buncha times
a nobody.. Ironic.. Ur just more old news my friend,
leave him cut open then sowed up like ya came out ur mothers womb again,
this was weak lack of creativity really hurt you here
u an aids infested pig, fuck off or I'm endin ur life,
Told him tie a noose.. Instead he asked Charlie sheen for advice,
this was good i think if u coulda found a better word than pig it woulda stung alot more..best bar for u here imo
On some cold mobster shit.. Waste ya if u think ur funny,
I won't even count.. It'll be 1..2..10 like the way snakes kills somebody
again this wasnt all that creative...
overall Slecht had a ridiculously long ass bar style that delivered better concepts although it took forever to get there...whereas JB had a more flowy verse but i felt it lacked creativity in some bars...
MVGT Slecht for better punches...although i woulda voted JB easy if his punches woulda been even just a lil more thought out
He's next on my list. Bullets fly thru his heart quick before he even figure out why he's a target,
Ironically, I'll put out blaze after bombz, ..u'd think I was trained in a Syrian Fire Department.
this was cool
If He's trying to start shit. I'll have his fan base in tears cause this Champ is crazy.
I'd have beliebers losing their goddamn mind ..as soon as they hear I put these hands on J.B
worked but light
Excuse my french but I'm more than a threat. My 1-2 punchlines are rare n heavy.
François Hollande declared national emergency as soon as he saw my fist....cause the paris deadly
Didn't like how you did this, could of took it an any direction, also i have never in my life said paris like parry
We're not in the same tier. HE uses punchlines and childish concepts that need to grow up soon,
A perfect example is to point out that I champed the league that he got kicked out and struggled to show up too
light, stretched too dude
I'll fire back. Give him a lesson because I have jotten down on paper that slecht's a specialist
the way I cross paths n trail blaze ...it would revolutionize new methods for state park rangers and environmentalist
you had a concept here, why did you do that with it? got very wordy and wasnt feeling how executed the punch
YOU clearly went up against the wrong person. That is not healthy.
If we meet n greet, these Punches land write on the face like an autographed selfie.
meh okay i guess
I can say again that You're not in my level. By now, I'm prolly your idol.
Cause you got lines that make low tier competitors like hypotheses ...think they got a chance at my title
meh wasn't really feeling this, not a complete miss but meh
vs
Prayed he would give amen a W.. Then bragged.. That ain't a good look u creep,
ironic.. we said "dream chase"... Not lose every battle & get put to sleep,
mixed feelings- if your taking him n amen thats 1-2 which he has only lost once, i'll give u the benefit cos his site records bad, could of done better with the chase dreams/put to sleep angle
torture methods endless.. Fuck with me & get stuffed in a vault,
First, Trinomial for days... cuz being unable to function is the fking result,
this didn't work for me
ur hoping I don't kill u, huh?. Keep dreamin, cocky faggot,
better knock on wood.. cuz my crew e'll be doin that on top of ya casket,
nuthin original but crisp
slechtsbtcndsvh.... Fuck... A mouthful of bullshit.. Ur a dork lame,
& we don't know this guy like names in college sports games,
nah
a nobody.. Ironic.. Ur just more old news my friend,
leave him cut open then sowed up like ya came out ur mothers womb again,
basic but executed okay
u an aids infested pig, fuck off or I'm endin ur life,
Told him tie a noose.. Instead he asked Charlie sheen for advice,
didn't do anything for me tiea noose /charlie sheen? i know he just had that interview but no ink for me
On some cold mobster shit.. Waste ya if u think ur funny,
I won't even count.. It'll be 1..2..10 like the way snakes kills somebody
ur a snake killing somebody? came off as a weird statemnet here len
Not too impressed here expected better than both, normally len has a quotable but nothing here, i felt i was even being a little generous with the opener. Len you had a couple of concepts you could of done alot better with, your best lines where your simpler ones here. Slecht expected better aswell especially off ya 1-2 run. I thought your opener was cool, that was the best bar for me. Your biggest poblem overall here was you need to go in more personal on your opponent, half your material was based around your doing well in 1-2 that got a bit stale. You did okay though, lots of light jabs not too many misses.
vote slecht
3-1
slecht
He's next on my list. Bullets fly thru his heart quick before he even figure out why he's a target,
Ironically, I'll put out blaze after bombz, ..u'd think I was trained in a Syrian Fire Department.
ok nameplay I did like the concept and the metaphore here
If He's trying to start shit. I'll have his fan base in tears cause this Champ is crazy.
I'd have beliebers losing their goddamn mind ..as soon as they hear I put these hands on J.B
I wasn't really digging how u executed the finisher the wording was too stretched
Excuse my french but I'm more than a threat. My 1-2 punchlines are rare n heavy.
François Hollande declared national emergency as soon as he saw my fist....cause the paris deadly
fresh concept but more of a self hype bar not directed at the opponent
We're not in the same tier. HE uses punchlines and childish concepts that need to grow up soon,
A perfect example is to point out that I champed the league that he got kicked out and struggled to show up too
lol cool personal but tone down the wording long bar takes impact off the punch get straight to the point
I'll fire back. Give him a lesson because I have jotten down on paper that slecht's a specialist
the way I cross paths n trail blaze ...it would revolutionize new methods for state park rangers and environmentalist
ok nameplay concept
YOU clearly went up against the wrong person. That is not healthy.
If we meet n greet, these Punches land write on the face like an autographed selfie.
wasn't feeling this metaphore
I can say again that You're not in my level. By now, I'm prolly your idol.
Cause you got lines that make low tier competitors like hypotheses ...think they got a chance at my title
ok
Blaze
Prayed he would give amen a W.. Then bragged.. That ain't a good look u creep,
ironic.. we said "dream chase"... Not lose every battle & get put to sleep,
not a bad personal
torture methods endless.. Fuck with me & get stuffed in a vault,
First, Trinomial for days... cuz being unable to function is the fking result,
forced wordplay here
ur hoping I don't kill u, huh?. Keep dreamin, cocky faggot,
better knock on wood.. cuz my crew e'll be doin that on top of ya casket,
didn't like this flip
slechtsbtcndsvh.... Fuck... A mouthful of bullshit.. Ur a dork lame,
& we don't know this guy like names in college sports games,
nah
a nobody.. Ironic.. Ur just more old news my friend,
leave him cut open then sowed up like ya came out ur mothers womb again,
played sorry
u an aids infested pig, fuck off or I'm endin ur life,
Told him tie a noose.. Instead he asked Charlie sheen for advice,
nothing in comparison to Charlie and this concept
On some cold mobster shit.. Waste ya if u think ur funny,
I won't even count.. It'll be 1..2..10 like the way snakes kills somebody
nah
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felt Johnny rushed here concept were all over the place only felt his opener. Slecht good attempts n shit but gotta shorten the length of ur bars takes impact from the punches. ur opener was cool and the trail blaze hit.
V/slecht
4-1, Slecht
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Originally Posted by slecht
Lenox usually drops way better wasn't digging almost any of his shitQuote:
Originally Posted by Jonny Blaze
Slecht was alright French line and autographed selfie won this for him
V/ slecht
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