Contenders Match: Og Maestro Vs Notti[Notti wins]

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@OG Maestro

VS

@Notti

Check in DUE Tuesday, Sept 15th 11:59PM EST

Verses Due Saturday, Sept 19th 11:59pm EST

10 Lines MIN

16 Lines MAX


A FEW WORDS WITH THE CONTENDERS

-OG Maestro
Whats good man how you been?

Shiit, man I been in a real good place bro. Besides this art I'm chasing to perfect, my actual life is filled with a lot of opportunity right now & positive vibes.

Why are you in the hunt for the FL belt

I want to become a legend on RB. I believe my idols, Orc, Spit, TKC, Witty, Nigma, Blacketh/Cognition & Oats can be surpassed. My pen game is unlimited & I'm on a fuckin' mission to prove I can excel in ALL forms of writing on RB.
The FL belt is something I know can be reached at this point. So, I've been training to refine how I experiment with punches & ideas & wording, etc. I got like 50 or 60 points through all that shit, yo. Been grinding, nobody can say I haven't.

What are your thoughts on your opponent Notti?

Dude's only good when he's inspired so I'm curious to see what I'll inspire him to write.
We saw him BODY Muff's pitbull looking ass not too long ago, but Muff went & pissed him off.
Besides that, Notti is probably a C- battler on average.
Also, I gotta pay him back for that L I didn't think I'd get when I first battled him.


What are your thoughts on the new Champ?

Well deserved, the guy's been constantly working & putting in effort so I can't complain on his success. You know?
Nothing much to say forreal.
In fact, let's just take a moment to soak in the fact that M.T.M managed to get damn near 20+ Wins in a short period of time. I've never seen no shit like that on RB. Real talk man, that motivated me to start grinding extra hard in text. I was 5-9 on RB at one point dawg. Let that sink in.

If you could say anything right now....what would it be?

Okay, you picked the wrong MUHFUCKA TO ASK THAT QUESTION.
1. Motherfuck Packed Graves. That dick riding lil boy need to learn his place.
2. Congratulations to my fucking brother Nigma, that boy finna take shit over on the topical side.
3. Amen needs to retire, period. With his old ass.
4. Lenox need to stop being lazy, he was getting better & I personally feel like he's been stagnant lately.
5. Good shit to @KingOx for whooping my ass. We gotta battle again, I respect that

Shout out to Dagel, he ain't perfect & those tourney names are straight BUTT, but he has been the reason the topical side has been on a resurgence. That's some admirable shit
Shout out to my nigga Tuckz. Forever fam
Shout out to you my brotha, Action KS Bronson. You been doing ya thing with FL
Shout out to Notti, let's make this shit a classic. you feel me G? AND LET ME FIND OUT YOU FROM BALTIMORE?

AND SHOUT OUT TO THE MUHFUCKIN ARCHITEXTS. BRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-Notti

Whats good man how you been?
wus good bro, i been good jus chillin and tryna get back into the swing of things. finally starting to get my wording on point alil here and there.

Why are you in the hunt for the FL belt?
this is all about competition and im a competitor, anything to be won, im tryna win that shit.


What are your thoughts on your opponent OG Maestro?
I already beat OG, once in FL and once in 1-2 last week. He is improving a lot but he doesn't have what it takes to hold a title yet. Verses aren't polished enough yet and I plan to show the difference when we drop these verses.

what are your thoughts on the new Champ?
Ehh.. new champ is ight.. Lol na Muff is coo, pretty consistent for the most part. I already beat him in FL's as well tho. Looking forward to giving him a rematch and snatchin that belt from him.

if you could say anything right now....what would it be?
Fuck everybody.

aiyo check. i got 10 already.

Damn boy, you ain't playing. You waiting for me or posting on your own time?

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Originally Posted by OG Maestro

My bad for making you wait

Yo. I'm going through he most right now. I mean, my life is good as fuck, but there's some
stress and tension building because of smart ass people making dumb ass decisions. I'll try
to work on it as soon as possible.

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Life gettin rough for you, you comin out and ya family uncomfortable... pray for resolve
but the way you be fondling balls in ya hands, i thought you'd have no stress at all
2 cans of steel reserve, AND 2 cans, i got that steel reserved...I blaze dutches
you not a starter...you steal/reserve...like wen you watch a URL battle 'N SAVE punches
no chance to win, n ya shawty needa winner, so i be hittin that til' she squirt, shit
its like, no dick from me be havin ya bae sick... like every single one of your verses
niggas been exposed you... said you was stealin bars and you denied it, GOD he needs help
cuz listening to you spit is like the Steelers headsets... ALL we hearin is somebody else

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Originally Posted by OG Maestro

yeah, it reminds me of what u and joog said about the fact that
a certain tier of people can beat each other at any point in time

give any writer on here more time than somebody considered "better" and suddenly we looking
at an upset

- - - Updated - - -

a highly possible upset.

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im favored to win, so don't get mad and talk shit or im at the front door, suprisin dude
how i find you? OOHHHH, ya Miss led...<<< Like thinking what joog'n said applies to YOU

I'll be assembling & disassembling your head when I'm cracking you, dweeb
2 punches will take off this Writer's Block till Joog'n comes back in the league

A machete to your neck & you'll be silent... but you use to the CHOKE
After this Nott get Split Open, I'll put the Burner to him like I'm Fusing A Rope
Use to the choke,
Muff beat your bum ass for the 1-2 belt. I'm guessing you're retarded.
Cause you LET HIM get more QUOTES.... before the battle fucking started

After gunning you down, I'll Sprinkle Some Crack on top to go with it
But the bullets will leave O's on ya Cap 'till it look like an Orioles Fitted

You got a wife & that poop nosed Pig is sexy to you. look at how that mug lied
Nott <- she got you Wrapped Around her finger. it's no wonder you're Hog Tied

Life gettin rough for you, you comin out and ya family uncomfortable... pray for resolve
but the way you be fondling balls in ya hands, i thought you'd have no stress at all
(this was kinda eh now that im reading it. ur saying fondling balls makes him relieve stress like a stress ball. as if rubbing on balls would understandably sooth him. this some ehh gay)
2 cans of steel reserve, AND 2 cans, i got that steel reserved...I blaze dutches
you not a starter...you steal/reserve...like wen you watch a URL battle 'N SAVE punches
(nice)
no chance to win, n ya shawty needa winner, so i be hittin that til' she squirt, shit
its like, no dick from me be havin ya bae sick... like every single one of your verses
(that wp is too played. the execution is ass)
niggas been exposed you... said you was stealin bars and you denied it, GOD he needs help
cuz listening to you spit is like the Steelers headsets... ALL we hearin is somebody else
(ok)
im favored to win, so don't get mad and talk shit or im at the front door, suprisin dude
how i find you? OOHHHH, ya Miss led...<<< Like thinking what joog'n said applies to YOU
(the wp is tired. in the oooooo ya miss led etc was unneccesary. I like how tied in the quote tho at the end this is pretty good.

I'll be assembling & disassembling your head when I'm cracking you, dweeb
2 punches will take off this Writer's Block till Joog'n comes back in the league
(worded nice but concept was ass tbh. its barely decent )

A machete to your neck & you'll be silent... but you use to the CHOKE
After this Nott get Split Open, I'll put the Burner to him like I'm Fusing A Rope
(I get it but im not that well versed on the art of rope making . fusing a rope by putting the burner to knots just souns alien to me. if it makes sense it makes sense but its not something im familiar w/)
Use to the choke,
Muff beat your bum ass for the 1-2 belt. I'm guessing you're retarded.
Cause you LET HIM get more QUOTES.... before the battle fucking started
(its a 1-2. not going to get many quotes in a 1-2 battle but I get what u meant by the personal digging thing but ur association was liiiiiight)

After gunning you down, I'll Sprinkle Some Crack on top to go with it
But the bullets will leave O's on ya Cap 'till it look like an Orioles Fitted
(incredibly simple. n ive seen a lot of these w/ teamns that have o on their headgear. like Oregon)
You got a wife & that poop nosed Pig is sexy to you. look at how that mug lied
Nott <- she got you Wrapped Around her finger. it's no wonder you're Hog Tied
(old concept. very weak execution)

mmm iono I got notti. not feelin this battle too much. looked very remedial but I got notti

v/notti

Yo let's get some votes, this a damn contenders match

This was a lack luster battle. I was only feeling Notts opener and OGs opener. Notti had a few played wps and i think that alone kinda made OG verse get a bit of an edge. This battle should have been better gentlemen.

V-OG

Life gettin rough for you, you comin out and ya family uncomfortable... pray for resolve
but the way you be fondling balls in ya hands, i thought you'd have no stress at all
No, played concept as well
2 cans of steel reserve, AND 2 cans, i got that steel reserved...I blaze dutches
you not a starter...you steal/reserve...like wen you watch a URL battle 'N SAVE punches
this was cool. nice personal...BUT, i used a steel reserve concept about a month ago in LLL, and it was doper
no chance to win, n ya shawty needa winner, so i be hittin that til' she squirt, shit
its like, no dick from me be havin ya bae sick... like every single one of your verses
Bae sick is played. think Joog used it awhile back and ppl started butchering it
niggas been exposed you... said you was stealin bars and you denied it, GOD he needs help
cuz listening to you spit is like the Steelers headsets... ALL we hearin is somebody else
this was nice. i fucks with this
im favored to win, so don't get mad and talk shit or im at the front door, suprisin dude
how i find you? OOHHHH, ya Miss led...<<< Like thinking what joog'n said applies to YOU
no...

vs


I'll be assembling & disassembling your head when I'm cracking you, dweeb
2 punches will take off this Writer's Block till Joog'n comes back in the league
what?
A machete to your neck & you'll be silent... but you use to the CHOKE
After this Nott get Split Open, I'll put the Burner to him like I'm Fusing A Rope
this was nice
Muff beat your bum ass for the 1-2 belt. I'm guessing you're retarded.
Cause you LET HIM get more QUOTES.... before the battle fucking started
not feeling this at all

After gunning you down, I'll Sprinkle Some Crack on top to go with it
But the bullets will leave O's on ya Cap 'till it look like an Orioles Fitted
at first i was like nah...but i see what u did here. this is LOTB so far
You got a wife & that poop nosed Pig is sexy to you. look at how that mug lied
Nott <- she got you Wrapped Around her finger. it's no wonder you're Hog Tied
no..this was wack imo


Overall....
wack battle. wasnt feeling much from both of you. ive seen way better from both of you. notti had some played attempts and i had a steel reserved bar a month back in the LLL and he just was tooo much. OG had some misses felt he was lazy but that orials fitted was dope. and fusing rope was clean. so i got OG with better misses and two better punches

V/OG

@joog'n @Fresh @Joe Boston @Spit Classic @Enbombz @Blanco. @Nigma
Let's get some votes

notti

Life gettin rough for you, you comin out and ya family uncomfortable... pray for resolve
but the way you be fondling balls in ya hands, i thought you'd have no stress at all
this was a funny attempt but it lacked execution I felt u could've displayed better wording on this concept

2 cans of steel reserve, AND 2 cans, i got that steel reserved...I blaze dutches
you not a starter...you steal/reserve...like wen you watch a URL battle 'N SAVE punches
wasn't really feeling the wordplay repetiveness here

no chance to win, n ya shawty needa winner, so i be hittin that til' she squirt, shit
its like, no dick from me be havin ya bae sick... like every single one of your verses
ok flip basic wordplay tho

niggas been exposed you... said you was stealin bars and you denied it, GOD he needs help
cuz listening to you spit is like the Steelers headsets... ALL we hearin is somebody else
nice flip here I did a steelers flip but this was pretty decent

im favored to win, so don't get mad and talk shit or im at the front door, suprisin dude
how i find you? OOHHHH, ya Miss led...<<< Like thinking what joog'n said applies to YOU
wasn't feeling this

OG

I'll be assembling & disassembling your head when I'm cracking you, dweeb
2 punches will take off this Writer's Block till Joog'n comes back in the league
didn't like the display of the wording here

A machete to your neck & you'll be silent... but you use to the CHOKE
After this Nott get Split Open, I'll put the Burner to him like I'm Fusing A Rope
this was an ok metaphorical comparison

Use to the choke,
Muff beat your bum ass for the 1-2 belt. I'm guessing you're retarded.
Cause you LET HIM get more QUOTES.... before the battle fucking started
too simple of a personal


After gunning you down, I'll Sprinkle Some Crack on top to go with it
But the bullets will leave O's on ya Cap 'till it look like an Orioles Fitted
no played af lol sorry

You got a wife & that poop nosed Pig is sexy to you. look at how that mug lied
Nott <- she got you Wrapped Around her finger. it's no wonder you're Hog Tied
not feeling this flip

Well Ive seen better from OG he fell flat on execution and wording of his punches this time around. Notti nothing special couple quotes to get him by though bae sick and the steelers metaphore was ight. like ive said felt both rushed they usually have netter execution

V/Notti had two quotes which I felt gave him enough to win

2-2 uppin

Saving my spot. Will edit vote

Life gettin rough for you, you comin out and ya family uncomfortable... pray for resolve
but the way you be fondling balls in ya hands, i thought you'd have no stress at all
EHH OPENER IMO. NOT A FAN OF VISUAL GAY LINES TBH

2 cans of steel reserve, AND 2 cans, i got that steel reserved...I blaze dutches
you not a starter...you steal/reserve...like wen you watch a URL battle 'N SAVE punches
YIKES. FIRE

no chance to win, n ya shawty needa winner, so i be hittin that til' she squirt, shit
its like, no dick from me be havin ya bae sick... like every single one of your verses
BAESICK IS A BIT PLAYED. GOOD ATTEMPT THO

niggas been exposed you... said you was stealin bars and you denied it, GOD he needs help
cuz listening to you spit is like the Steelers headsets... ALL we hearin is somebody else
NICE

 Originally Posted by OG Maestro 

yeah, it reminds me of what u and joog said about the fact that 
a certain tier of people can beat each other at any point in time

give any writer on here more time than somebody considered "better" and suddenly we looking 
at an upset

- - - Updated - - -

a highly possible upset.

im favored to win, so don't get mad and talk shit or im at the front door, suprisin dude
how i find you? OOHHHH, ya Miss led...<<< Like thinking what joog'n said applies to YOU
A LIL WORDY. BUT DECENT CONCEPT

VS

I'll be assembling & disassembling your head when I'm cracking you, dweeb
2 punches will take off this Writer's Block till Joog'n comes back in the league
MMMM. A LIL BIT BETTER THAN NOTTIS OPENER

A machete to your neck & you'll be silent... but you use to the CHOKE
After this Nott get Split Open, I'll put the Burner to him like I'm Fusing A Rope
GOOD. I LIKE THIS

Use to the choke,
Muff beat your bum ass for the 1-2 belt. I'm guessing you're retarded.
Cause you LET HIM get more QUOTES.... before the battle fucking started
NAH. MAKES NO SENSE IMO.

After gunning you down, I'll Sprinkle Some Crack on top to go with it
But the bullets will leave O's on ya Cap 'till it look like an Orioles Fitted
SHEESH. FIRE

You got a wife & that poop nosed Pig is sexy to you. look at how that mug lied
Nott <- she got you Wrapped Around her finger. it's no wonder you're Hog Tied
NAH. HOG TIED IS A PLAYED GF ANGLE


overall. I have this dead even.
Ill go off best line from both and worse.

Notti:
Best/steel reserve
Worst/basic
Vs
Omg:
Best/Orioles
Worst/hogtied

Vote notti. Slightly better best and worst.

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Originally Posted by Notti

Life gettin rough for you, you comin out and ya family uncomfortable... pray for resolve
but the way you be fondling balls in ya hands, i thought you'd have no stress at all

okay decent

2 cans of steel reserve, AND 2 cans, i got that steel reserved...I blaze dutches
you not a starter...you steal/reserve...like wen you watch a URL battle 'N SAVE punches
nope, not feeling it
no chance to win, n ya shawty needa winner, so i be hittin that til' she squirt, shit
its like, no dick from me be havin ya bae sick... like every single one of your verses
meh,
niggas been exposed you... said you was stealin bars and you denied it, GOD he needs help
cuz listening to you spit is like the Steelers headsets... ALL we hearin is somebody else

hahah okay, I like this. good flip

im favored to win, so don't get mad and talk shit or im at the front door, suprisin dude
how i find you? OOHHHH, ya Miss led...<<< Like thinking what joog'n said applies to YOU
not liking this one

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by OG Maestro

I'll be assembling & disassembling your head when I'm cracking you, dweeb
2 punches will take off this Writer's Block till Joog'n comes back in the league
decent
A machete to your neck & you'll be silent... but you use to the CHOKE
After this Nott get Split Open, I'll put the Burner to him like I'm Fusing A Rope
meh
Use to the choke,
Muff beat your bum ass for the 1-2 belt. I'm guessing you're retarded.
Cause you LET HIM get more QUOTES.... before the battle fucking started
NOPE
After gunning you down, I'll Sprinkle Some Crack on top to go with it
But the bullets will leave O's on ya Cap 'till it look like an Orioles Fitted
ok.
You got a wife & that poop nosed Pig is sexy to you. look at how that mug lied
Nott <- she got you Wrapped Around her finger. it's no wonder you're Hog Tied

meh

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Honestly, I was expecting a bit more. Notti had more hits than OG did. Both definitely have to step it up if they want that title.

I'm leaning towards minotti

niggas been exposed you... said you was stealin bars and you denied it, GOD he needs help
cuz listening to you spit is like the Steelers headsets... ALL we hearin is somebody else
im favored to win, so don't get mad and talk shit or im at the front door, suprisin dude
how i find you? OOHHHH, ya Miss led...<<< Like thinking what joog'n said applies to YOU


Only bars I was feeln from u. Rest of ur verse was played. The steelers line was a current event flip bit still meh, mis led is super played too but I liked the personal/quote tie in.

Vs.

I'll be assembling & disassembling your head when I'm cracking you, dweeb
2 punches will take off this Writer's Block till Joog'n comes back in the league
Muff beat your bum ass for the 1-2 belt. I'm guessing you're retarded.
Cause you LET HIM get more QUOTES.... before the battle fucking started
After gunning you down, I'll Sprinkle Some Crack on top to go with it
But the bullets will leave O's on ya Cap 'till it look like an Orioles Fitted

Aite writer block is played af but I like the fresh flip. More quotes was an almost, coulda flipped it better. Orioles fitted is played but u coulda executed it a lot better, what I mean is u coulda flipped it and did something more creative with it, was too strait forward.

Overall: I think og got it barely but neither really did anything to open anyone's eyes in this battle.

V. Og maestro

4-3 notti's favor lets get more

4-3, let's go, we need votes

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Notti

Life gettin rough for you, you comin out and ya family uncomfortable... pray for resolve
but the way you be fondling balls in ya hands, i thought you'd have no stress at all
aight

2 cans of steel reserve, AND 2 cans, i got that steel reserved...I blaze dutches
you not a starter...you steal/reserve...like wen you watch a URL battle 'N SAVE punches
cool
no chance to win, n ya shawty needa winner, so i be hittin that til' she squirt, shit
its like, no dick from me be havin ya bae sick... like every single one of your verses
nah
niggas been exposed you... said you was stealin bars and you denied it, GOD he needs help
cuz listening to you spit is like the Steelers headsets... ALL we hearin is somebody else
this good

im favored to win, so don't get mad and talk shit or im at the front door, suprisin dude
how i find you? OOHHHH, ya Miss led...<<< Like thinking what joog'n said applies to YOU
goodd

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Originally Posted by OG Maestro

I'll be assembling & disassembling your head when I'm cracking you, dweeb
2 punches will take off this Writer's Block till Joog'n comes back in the league
this ok
A machete to your neck & you'll be silent... but you use to the CHOKE
After this Nott get Split Open, I'll put the Burner to him like I'm Fusing A Rope
good haha
Use to the choke,
Muff beat your bum ass for the 1-2 belt. I'm guessing you're retarded.
Cause you LET HIM get more QUOTES.... before the battle fucking started
good

After gunning you down, I'll Sprinkle Some Crack on top to go with it
But the bullets will leave O's on ya Cap 'till it look like an Orioles Fitted
nah

You got a wife & that poop nosed Pig is sexy to you. look at how that mug lied
Nott <- she got you Wrapped Around her finger. it's no wonder you're Hog Tied
good

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both were good but my v/ goes to OG stayed consistent throughout . some wp was too played but worked.
notti had good shit too but i felt og had just the better bars overall. fair is in

4-4 more votes!!!

@Amen @KnowP @Nigma @Blanco. @Fresh @Enbombz @Jonny Blaze
If you already voted dismind this

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Originally Posted by Notti

Life gettin rough for you, you comin out and ya family uncomfortable... pray for resolve
but the way you be fondling balls in ya hands, i thought you'd have no stress at all
- Cool angle on a pretty dated concept. Very light tho.
2 cans of steel reserve, AND 2 cans, i got that steel reserved...I blaze dutches
you not a starter...you steal/reserve...like wen you watch a URL battle 'N SAVE punches
- Don't know why you talk about GUNS then the "Blaze dutches in your setup which was just filler and not needed. But the creativity here is noticed, I like this but have seen the concept flipped before... Your angle was cool tho because you tied it in with a personal.
no chance to win, n ya shawty needa winner, so i be hittin that til' she squirt, shit
its like, no dick from me be havin ya bae sick... like every single one of your verses
Bae sick/Basic is dumb played... And so was your angle on it... So this was a miss for me.
niggas been exposed you... said you was stealin bars and you denied it, GOD he needs help
cuz listening to you spit is like the Steelers headsets... ALL we hearin is somebody else
- Very wordy and it hurt your potential impact you could have had... Wasn't feeling this.
im favored to win, so don't get mad and talk shit or im at the front door, suprisin dude
how i find you? OOHHHH, ya Miss led...<<< Like thinking what joog'n said applies to YOU
- This needed some touching up on, cause the execution was sloppy IMO... I see what you were trying to accomplish but to me your attempt was terrible... WP there and tied in with a personal but fell flat for me... This could have been tough.

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Originally Posted by OG Maestro

I'll be assembling & disassembling your head when I'm cracking you, dweeb
2 punches will take off this Writer's Block till Joog'n comes back in the league
- Nahh... NOt a fan of using other members to formulate a punch. This was corny too me and extremely light.
A machete to your neck & you'll be silent... but you use to the CHOKE
After this Nott get Split Open, I'll put the Burner to him like I'm Fusing A Rope
- I liked this... Didn't really like the SPLIT OPEN part, but it worked... sup w/ the use to the choke in the set up and then after the punch leading in to the next bar tho?
Use to the choke, <---- Isn't needed and I know you did it for the sake of flowing, next time use another scheme and not the same thing you closed out your set up with... lol
Muff beat your bum ass for the 1-2 belt. I'm guessing you're retarded.
Cause you LET HIM get more QUOTES.... before the battle fucking started
- Personal but execution was light... This could have been tough if it was executed properly.
After gunning you down, I'll Sprinkle Some Crack on top to go with it
But the bullets will leave O's on ya Cap 'till it look like an Orioles Fitted
- Seen these flipped too many times to give it credit. Should have tried a different angle if you were going to use this concept.
You got a wife & that poop nosed Pig is sexy to you. look at how that mug lied
Nott <- she got you Wrapped Around her finger. it's no wonder you're Hog Tied
- Wack

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Damn this was relatively close and equally terrible IMO. Both had a lot of outdated material and/or weak & light bars. OG had that fuse a rope line in which I enjoyed and thought was cool while Notti had a few bars I thought were cool, no haymakers from either TBH, but I think I got Notti w/ the edge here with just a tad bit of a more effective verse. This could go either way, I'me sure... I, myself had to read this 3 times and 2 out of 3 of the times I was leaning towards Notti, so with that being said...

Notti w/ the slight edge.

5-4 notti.
@Killing Spree u doing "must win by 2" or just "first to 5"?

@Notti Advances to the champ match to face Muff
***CLOSED****