(0-3)Alphadog vs (1-1)The Infamous[Open For Votes]

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Originally Posted by Nahlidge

Smog n Let in the finals ? Someone loan a punch cos these cats really need one.
I'll hit these faggots w/ so many fly kicks - the new Jordan's 6's'll have a nation wide refund.
-I thought this was cool, at first I thought it was a reach with the punch/kick reference. But I think the Jordan 6/finals reference was cool. I just think the wordin' on this was pretty bad.

Smog wears the pants. He maid ill his bitch but chances of offspring are kinda slim
Unless he wants to see decrease in his genes...every night when Kay's done ironing them
-Nice, I like the maid/bitch work slap that you hit kay with lol. but I don't think you really dissed smog. you kinda big upped him lol.

These faggot fucks ain't felt, it's obvious along the ways some massive luck was dealt...
When all it takes is knuckles to silence letter K.... or anybody tryna grab or touch my belt...
-I think you shoulda spelled out Kay, but other than that I thought this was nice.


I think smog got this. Kay had bad wording. So it was between Letterman and Smog to me. And Letterman didn't really diss Smog with his punch imo.

Vote - Smog

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Originally Posted by miracle

v/kid

i thought letter was choppy.. n smogs bar got little choppy toward the end..with saying 'or' twice

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@alphadog @The Infamous

Dead...

End

Ready for blind drops

im sure u ugly ass fuck,no chick giving ass to this chump
if u hear a chick letting 'the dog pound, she was a groupie to daz n kurupt..

@alphadog infamous posted

This is a Mild Steal if he comin with gun bars i'll leave his Hearth open if hammers suddenly raising
Stop the talk u ain't poppin glocks cuz if we see that Ingot iron, I'll pick up a lump n pummel his face in

Lmfao bra I can't vote on this

Kind of an easy win... Kind of!

Only setback to inf's bar is the "letting" part kinda destructs tge duality of reading
Smooth concept though
Only setback to alphas bar it's the length takes away from the diss
If the whole concept was strong enough, I could overlook long bar for quality
But... The concepts one of those imo that require swift delivery of the punch
Mvgt infamous

Infamous had an outdated as fuck bar, but it was still a nice jab and actually got me to laugh

Alphadog... You did too much for such a little reward. The punch itself was wack, but e fact that you put so much build up into e set up and the punch made it appear even less impactful

Infamous should get this by a landslide for the overall better attempt.

Vote - The Infamous

infamous had an ok name play nothing crazy but it connected.


alpha alpha alpha, you still trying to pack to much shit into one punch. Hypothetically IF ingot was pronounced in got (its pronounced in get) u coulda have axed away alot of words here to make this cleaner. This is a complete miss for me.

v/Infamous

alpha man your punch is too stretched man u need to lengthen up ur choice of wording. infamous had a good punch overall good humor factor.

V/Infamous

Cool battle. Infa I lied your concept, seen it used in alpha but your approach was better. Alpha this bar was stretched but waaaay better than ur last two weeks. I liked the name play better than infas dog pound concept. If u dumb it down a bit and make it smoother, less filler bar could be dope.


Vote/alph

inf's was on the simple side, a little corny too but not horrible

alphadog surprised me here w/ a pretty good concept. execution was blah but def a good nameplays

v/adog

Alpha was a little wordy, and also worded strangely, took away from the impact of the punch, the dog pound play was cool and the bar hit well at the end, easy one here vote infamous

Infamous: this was tight as fuck... Solid ass punch tbh.. And I'm just keeping it real.. If someone dislikes anything about this has no idea wtf a good concept/punch is. Good shit. Wording was also pretty nice.

Vs

Alpha: lol.. I'm gonna keep it 20000, this was fucking terrible. But let me explain. U need to cut off unneeded words in your punch alpha.. This will make it more smooth and cleaner to read... Also try to come with a stronger and harder punch that will have an impact on readers.. Last thing make sure your concepts are dope & not retarded like what u usually say.

Vote: infamous.. By a landslide.. He just had a way doper punch.


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V/alphadog

I liked the nameplay/tie ins

Ingot Iron I'll pick up a lump n pummel his face in

Nice

Wasn't feeling infamous g-funk ref. Letting the dogg-pound

That means tge dogg is pounding

Not the entire dog pound

Ehh petty mistake but still

V/alpha

Infamous - nameplays on this guy are pretty played at this point, but your flip was pretty solid. Wording not too bad and the execution was fine also. It was enough to seal it.

Alphadog - your wordplay attempt didn't work here man lol wording was all over the place and I couldn't find any type of punch in your bar tbh..

Pretty one sided

Vote: infamous

An passive aggressive bar vs a really long bar that never hit.

V/inf

fame ur concept was dece nothing crazy the opener was worded badly kinda thru off the start


al ur bars seen choppy as fuk w no real direction I get some of the shit u attempt but u try n cram so much in a 2 liner


fame

alpha dog.. decent enough concept. but bro again.. its worded too crazy.. too long.. tryna do too much. it takes away the impact of the punch.. which was decent. infamous.. OK bar here.. had the humor factor, wording was good.. crisp too the point. because of that it did hit harder and got you the V from me.

V-infamous

Alpha was all over the place. You went with the angle of attacking his gun bar preference but you need to take one idea, form a set up that relates and finish with a punchline. In had a solid bar, it was enough to take this.

v/In

Surprisingly i got AD here... Inf just didn't hit hard at all... Alpha crammed too much shit in the punch again, but the wp wasn't awful...

inf - wasn't really feeling this. All worked but not really creative at all anything dog pound based is pretty played by now, but at least it was tied into him.
alpha - it was more of a punch from you than usual, was terrible the punch was half decent but the build ups too much hit n miss word association .

vote inf

12-4 in favor of The Infamous