(1-1)Meks. vs (1-1)Joe Boston[Joe B wins]

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Originally Posted by Nahlidge

Smog n Let in the finals ? Someone loan a punch cos these cats really need one.
I'll hit these faggots w/ so many fly kicks - the new Jordan's 6's'll have a nation wide refund.
-I thought this was cool, at first I thought it was a reach with the punch/kick reference. But I think the Jordan 6/finals reference was cool. I just think the wordin' on this was pretty bad.

Smog wears the pants. He maid ill his bitch but chances of offspring are kinda slim
Unless he wants to see decrease in his genes...every night when Kay's done ironing them
-Nice, I like the maid/bitch work slap that you hit kay with lol. but I don't think you really dissed smog. you kinda big upped him lol.

These faggot fucks ain't felt, it's obvious along the ways some massive luck was dealt...
When all it takes is knuckles to silence letter K.... or anybody tryna grab or touch my belt...
-I think you shoulda spelled out Kay, but other than that I thought this was nice.


I think smog got this. Kay had bad wording. So it was between Letterman and Smog to me. And Letterman didn't really diss Smog with his punch imo.

Vote - Smog

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Originally Posted by miracle

v/kid

i thought letter was choppy.. n smogs bar got little choppy toward the end..with saying 'or' twice

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Voters List
Zelph
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Smog
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Letterman
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Ready for Blind Drops

Tell me if I'm wrong he don't fight type to get his bite on
This won't be Drake at Coachella when the gun down his throat like a Pop Icon

@Meks. I dropped

Ur check in states my MO pretty clear, thinks he's got Meks rattled this queer...
Its no wonder his eMO is different, when he's bout to lose a text battle to someone who hasn't text battled in years

Joe - not a bad concept, as you say it's a "current event" lol. I feel you probably could have made the punch a bit harder but overall not bad, wording pretty on point too this week.

Meks - damn man wasn't feelin this at all tbh, you didn't really have any concept in there and you had potential to tie in the eMO concept into something but went a total different route, also wording wasn't good here.

Vote: Joe Boston

1 vote

Joe Boston.

I'll be honest..I'm totally unfamiliar w/ the reference here man. Like terribly. Usually I'd avoid voting but I have to..so due to not getting the reference or if there was more to it..I thought it was weak


MeKS

Urs was weird too
...wat was the e before modus operandi there for?

Dnt see the significance but ur line came off slicker to me

V/meks

Joe wasn't feeling ur bar man.. Wtf is getting ur bite on. The punchline was weak I mean "thios won't be drake at coachella blah blah like a pop icon" is just weird n i dont like it.

Meks did not like ur bar at all either... It feels like u were trying to make the MO emo with the E but thats forced and any other reason makes no sense. This shit stretched to all of fuck too.

Wasn't feeling either but Joe was a little less sloppy so he's gonna get my vote.

v/JB

Meks, liked the concept but that the last line was so run in it hurt the impact of the punch. Joe i really enjoyed your Drake/ Madonna Flip. You executed it well and the set up was cool. Well done.

Vote boston

4 votes

Tell me if I'm wrong he don't fight type to get his bite on
This won't be Drake at Coachella when the gun down his throat like a Pop Icon

Current event as usual, flip was decent, could've been worded better couple inner rhymes to spruce it up, eh "don't fight type" sounds odd to me, second bar was stretched but I like the metaphors used, ok bar overall not showing alot of creativity Joe


Ur check in states my MO pretty clear, thinks he's got Meks rattled this queer...
Its no wonder his eMO is different, when he's bout to lose a text battle to someone who hasn't text battled in years

Wasn't feeling this bar son, didn't like it, dunno wat to make of it, why is MO in capitals twice n saying text battle twice kidna makes it sound redundant tbh, I don't think you'll win if that Drake shit Joe posted goes over heads u may scrap a W but Joe took this easy

Mvgt Joe Boston

Wasn't a huge fan of these bars, but I just felt necks used to many words on his punch n it took away so much impact while joe wasn't sound but did hit harder IMO therefore I got him edging this..


Vote jb

Really not into either drop to be honest. The wording in both was really shaky and made it a bit awkward getting to the punchlines. But if I'm gonna vote for one it's going to be Joe. Meks came off really statement ish and his drop felt like a concept that'd be used in 2002. Joe was a little more direct but overall a better finish.

Vote Joe for actually dropping.

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Tell me if I'm wrong he don't fight type to get his bite on
This won't be Drake at Coachella when the gun down his throat like a Pop Icon

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Current event but a very weak punch. The set up was very choppy and the punch was very much the same. Creative concept, meh... the thought was there. Execution, was very laxed.

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Ur check in states my MO pretty clear, thinks he's got Meks rattled this queer...
Its no wonder his eMO is different, when he's bout to lose a text battle to someone who hasn't text battled in years

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This was rather wordy af, but the punch was slightly tighter than Joe's and was more or less a decent jab. Nothing creative but it actually landed.

vote - Meks

Joe - idea was alright. execution was sloppy though. Didn't read out to great but it made sense. I shoud've known she was one of your Pop icons.
meks - I thing you could of made this alot better. I wasn't feelin it as was. The emo part didn't really work with me. I thought it was a decent flip idea overall though.

vote joe

V.joe/neither punch had a wow factor, but joes was better concept wise,the closer couldve been better tho..

Boston- your rhyme was poor, the punch was nice

Meks- your punch was way too stretched, you took all your sting out of your punch

Vote boston for better overall bar

- Joe had a decent bar, current events and shit. Not sure about the setup but decent punch and delivery

- meks that was a long ass sentence. I get the whole mo emo thing, everything felt a little statementish. Wasn't feeling it a whole lot

Vote joe

Joes bar was a bit wordy. I liked the concept, punch was cool. Set up was weak tbh. Meals bar was all
Over the place really. Thought it fell short. Punch was weak and the whole bar was stretched to the moon.
Seen better from meks

V/bean joe

v-meks

bostons line was ok.. but it was basic.. good current event but meks came with the wordplay.. better set up and a harder hit. not a bad battle but ive got meks winning it

Meks was super stretched lol you don't need to be that wordy with text. Smooth, concise and to the point is what makes the best execution. Your concept was ok. Joe had the Drake/Madonna concept that I feel like could've been done differently for a stronger impact. His was still ok. This one probably comes down to preference because they were about even. Joe's current events can give him an advantage because of the fresh concept and I think that's what helped him edge this one.

v/Joe

joe i get the concept wording was just shakey needs to be cleaned up

meks urs was even worse that mo shit was pretty wack fam

joe for habing a better concept

Vote Joe Boston.

Not a great one this week.
JB: solid reference. Current and unused, so props for that. You also kept it short and sweet this time which kept me with the concept throughout the bar. Props on that too.
Mexican: urs was a bit too simple for my taste. Not much impact imo. It also took too long for the punchline, which took any impact it could've had, right up out that shit.

didn't like either

meks had that personal aspect. not much of one, but enough to get my vote over a whack comparison punch

v/meks

JB had a decent idea but for some reason it just didn't connect for me... I know the situation but it would hit harder if madonna tied in better... Meks was simple but rather effective... a bit long winded, but it hit..

vote Meks

Wasn't feeling either tbh, but in my opinion Meks just failed to diss him his concept was basically he's losing to someone whose rusty ehich isn't really that harsh. Joe surprisingly had a current even punch a bit wordy but it was a jab. MVGT joe

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16-5 JOE