10 lines
Due Tuesday Midnight(just in case)
@Professor Frost
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10 lines
Due Tuesday Midnight(just in case)
@Professor Frost
Catch me boolin' wit them slimes, cuz them my youngins
@Letterman it's past the deadline, I'm waiting. Not trying to waste bars
Btw, let's go 12 instead
I didn't know you wanted eastern time. And we can do 12Quote:
Originally Posted by Professor Frost
@Letterman
just post up whenever u feel like it tonight, at least I know you're showing up
cycling backwards won't get u anywhere in the future but a habit to loseQuote:
Originally Posted by Fresh
nigga the only metal u peddling is when ur bitch ass is grabbin' my news
had to send this text cuz i got a message for U, PS: remember me-
-...................shit never arrives cuz he always lett-down delivery
Quote:
Originally Posted by The Archetype vs. Letterman @July 12th, 2014, 01:54 AM
crazy how u tried to take the easy route over Arch, that's a sign u bailedQuote:
Originally Posted by The Archetype vs. Letterman @July 12th, 2014, 01:57 AM
heard of suicide attempts, but since u still alive u must be designed to fail
since he asked for extensions, i'ma stretch his chest apart just to test the heart
when letters stop, i'ma sentence his head under body like a question mark
detectives looked puzzled at a family homicide, said i must bang clans;
when they found Letter's strung up in a tree, laughed n played hang Man
before letterman battled drunks in his mom kitchen(n lost); father never had sell rocks
but i'd be out on the street too if my son liked packages n busting in mailbox
I'm a beast with text. Copy Lett & you'll no longer suck
Cuz if frostbite me, we all know dude would be cold as fuck
You've had some hideous chicks. I'm just speaking prudent
Cuz If we mention Professor, ex...we must be talking about mutants
I wouldn't bank on that relationship. Dude had a gold digging spouse
He went back to her looking foreclosure & ended up losing his house
Your bars are all over the place. I'm not even flexing
But manual never get anywhere in text because your verses lack direction
He's a pussy in relationships. Frost will never be in charge
Doesn't matter who you date...
Cuz any Galalieo ass out & have you seeing stars
Some dudes hate me, so Frost getting a vote? There's a good shot
But you're dope, Sike...
& since I just complimented Amen, there goes that one vote you would've got
Blah
@Letterman 2 voting links
Frost- some of ur bars weren't clicking the metaphor was there just wasn't executed well to hit.
Design to fail and question mark
Vs.
Letterman reading ur verse and see its clean with some nice hits.
Side frostbite and professor x
But came good both I got letterman with 1 quote more than professor and cleaner hits
cycling backwards won't get u anywhere in the future but a habit to lose
nigga the only metal u peddling is when ur bitch ass is grabbin' my news
felt like they were not related with one another but mediocre attempt
had to send this text cuz i got a message for U, PS: remember me-
-...................shit never arrives cuz he always lett-down delivery
solid
crazy how u tried to take the easy route over Arch, that's a sign u bailed
heard of suicide attempts, but since u still alive u must be designed to fail
not feeling this
since he asked for extensions, i'ma stretch his chest apart just to test the heart
when letters stop, i'ma sentence his head under body like a question mark
love the flow right here came of real smooth when I read it
detectives looked puzzled at a family homicide, said i must bang clans;
when they found Letter's strung up in a tree, laughed n played hang Man
another solid pair of lines
before letterman battled drunks in his mom kitchen(n lost); father never had 2sell rocks
but i'd be out on the street too if my son liked packages n busting in mailbox
I put the letter to between had n never didn't sound right but good closer
I'm a beast with text. Copy Lett & you'll no longer suck
Cuz if frostbite me, we all know dude would be cold as fuck
simple but so effective nice set of lines better opener
You've had some hideous chicks. I'm just speaking prudent
Cuz If we mention Professors??ex...we must be talking about mutants
i put a s on the end and that made it better this is great IMO
I wouldn't bank on that relationship. Dude had a gold digging spouse
He went back to her looking foreclosure & ended up losing his house
this is filler IMO
Your bars are all over the place. I'm not even flexing
But manual never get anywhere in text because your verses lack direction
blah blah
He's a pussy in relationships. Frost will never be in charge
Doesn't matter who you date...
Cuz any Galalieo ass out & have you seeing stars
staying on topic I like but your going down hill
Some dudes hate me, so Frost getting a vote? There's a good shot
But you're dope, Sike...
& since I just complimented Amen, there goes that one vote you would've got
I don't like this closer. You came out body slamming and frogsplashing then just went down hill show no mercy no mediocre!
Blah
this is really close both had a some lines I liked but nether had a solid verse i think frost went to light and got to comfortable although letterman had 4 lines I really felt, professor had 6 which is more consistent I could go ether way but I gotta say professor no hate
cycling backwards won't get u anywhere in the future but a habit to lose
nigga the only metal u peddling is when ur bitch ass is grabbin' my news
I get what you was trying to say but it didnt hit for me.
had to send this text cuz i got a message for U, PS: remember me-
-...................shit never arrives cuz he always lett-down delivery
Decent swing
crazy how u tried to take the easy route over Arch, that's a sign u bailed
heard of suicide attempts, but since u still alive u must be designed to fail
punch didnt hit hard for me
since he asked for extensions, i'ma stretch his chest apart just to test the heart
when letters stop, i'ma sentence his head under body like a question mark
I liked this alot
detectives looked puzzled at a family homicide, said i must bang clans;
when they found Letter's strung up in a tree, laughed n played hang Man
this is cool
before letterman battled drunks in his mom kitchen(n lost); father never had 2sell rocks
but i'd be out on the street too if my son liked packages n busting in mailbox
ughh......all in all a decent verse
I'm a beast with text. Copy Lett & you'll no longer suck
Cuz if frostbite me, we all know dude would be cold as fuck
Nice opener
You've had some hideous chicks. I'm just speaking prudent
Cuz If we mention Professors??ex...we must be talking about mutants
for me professor x lines are played but you worded it nicely
I wouldn't bank on that relationship. Dude had a gold digging spouse
He went back to her looking foreclosure & ended up losing his house
this is not a punch at all
Your bars are all over the place. I'm not even flexing
But manual never get anywhere in text because your verses lack direction
mmmm...ok lol
He's a pussy in relationships. Frost will never be in charge
Doesn't matter who you date...
Cuz any Galalieo ass out & have you seeing stars
i get it but dont at the same time
Some dudes hate me, so Frost getting a vote? There's a good shot
But you're dope, Sike...
& since I just complimented Amen, there goes that one vote you would've got
i dont get it maybe because iam new lol
both you guys need work but i liked frost verse just a little better
V/Frost
Professor Frost- crazy how you tried to take the easy route over arch, that's a sign you bailed.
Heard of suicide attempts but since you still alive you must be designed to fail.
Vs
Letterman- Nothing.. You almost had one though..
Overall this could of been way better and this happened to be in my opinion one of Letterman's worst battles.. It's all good get em next time bro.
Vote: Professor Frost
Oh yeah, guess I should've left expos for the noobs. Amen has an alias named Sike. That is all...Quote:
Originally Posted by Letterman
wow @ these votes
cycling backwards won't get u anywhere in the future but a habit to lose
nigga the only metal u peddling is when ur bitch ass is grabbin' my news
ehh ok
had to send this text cuz i got a message for U, PS: remember me-
-...................shit never arrives cuz he always lett-down delivery
nah
crazy how u tried to take the easy route over Arch, that's a sign u bailed
heard of suicide attempts, but since u still alive u must be designed to fail
weakish
since he asked for extensions, i'ma stretch his chest apart just to test the heart
when letters stop, i'ma sentence his head under body like a question mark
this was decent could been worded better
detectives looked puzzled at a family homicide, said i must bang clans;
when they found Letter's strung up in a tree, laughed n played hang Man
nah weak
before letterman battled drunks in his mom kitchen(n lost); father never had sell rocks
but i'd be out on the street too if my son liked packages n busting in mailbox
no
vs.
I'm a beast with text. Copy Lett & you'll no longer suck
Cuz if frostbite me, we all know dude would be cold as fuck
self glory no diss
You've had some hideous chicks. I'm just speaking prudent
Cuz If we mention Professor, ex...we must be talking about mutants
lol this was cool
I wouldn't bank on that relationship. Dude had a gold digging spouse
He went back to her looking foreclosure & ended up losing his house
good
Your bars are all over the place. I'm not even flexing
But manual never get anywhere in text because your verses lack direction
decent
He's a pussy in relationships. Frost will never be in charge
Doesn't matter who you date...
Cuz any Galalieo ass out & have you seeing stars
dope
Some dudes hate me, so Frost getting a vote? There's a good shot
But you're dope, Sike...
& since I just complimented Amen, there goes that one vote you would've got
nah
since he asked for extensions, i'ma stretch his chest apart just to test the heart
when letters stop, i'ma sentence his head under body like a question mark
vs.
You've had some hideous chicks. I'm just speaking prudent
Cuz If we mention Professor, ex...we must be talking about mutants
I wouldn't bank on that relationship. Dude had a gold digging spouse
He went back to her looking foreclosure & ended up losing his house
He's a pussy in relationships. Frost will never be in charge
Doesn't matter who you date...
Cuz any Galalieo ass out & have you seeing stars
this battle was one sided imo. letterman had harder punches and better wordplay.
vote - letterman
since he asked for extensions, i'ma stretch his chest apart just to test the heart
when letters stop, i'ma sentence his head under body like a question mark
vs
You've had some hideous chicks. I'm just speaking prudent
Cuz If we mention Professor, ex...we must be talking about mutants
I wouldn't bank on that relationship. Dude had a gold digging spouse
He went back to her looking foreclosure & ended up losing his house
yea... Letterman's verse was definitely better. Not sure who any of these other cats voting are but they are absolute garbage, IMO. Fuckin idiots and I'm just calling it as I see it. It's obvious they don't know the difference between a punch and a statement.
v/Letterman - better misses and more effective punches.
cycling backwards won't get u anywhere in the future but a habit to lose
nigga the only metal u peddling is when ur bitch ass is grabbin' my news
ehh. okay.
had to send this text cuz i got a message for U, PS: remember me-
-...................shit never arrives cuz he always lett-down delivery
okayy
crazy how u tried to take the easy route over Arch, that's a sign u bailed
heard of suicide attempts, but since u still alive u must be designed to fail
nah
since he asked for extensions, i'ma stretch his chest apart just to test the heart
when letters stop, i'ma sentence his head under body like a question mark
I thought this was dope..
detectives looked puzzled at a family homicide, said i must bang clans;
when they found Letter's strung up in a tree, laughed n played hang Man
played on Letters
before letterman battled drunks in his mom kitchen(n lost); father never had sell rocks
but i'd be out on the street too if my son liked packages n busting in mailbox
ehh closer
VS
I'm a beast with text. Copy Lett & you'll no longer suck
Cuz if frostbite me, we all know dude would be cold as fuck
decent..
You've had some hideous chicks. I'm just speaking prudent
Cuz If we mention Professor, ex...we must be talking about mutants
lol nice..
I wouldn't bank on that relationship. Dude had a gold digging spouse
He went back to her looking foreclosure & ended up losing his house
cool.
Your bars are all over the place. I'm not even flexing
But manual never get anywhere in text because your verses lack direction
ehh it's a sick scheme but wording not so much
He's a pussy in relationships. Frost will never be in charge
Doesn't matter who you date...
Cuz any Galalieo ass out & have you seeing stars
dope.
Some dudes hate me, so Frost getting a vote? There's a good shot
But you're dope, Sike...
& since I just complimented Amen, there goes that one vote you would've got
okay nice..
This was a pretty slick battle. Both of you. Pro you had some sick concepts but I felt you needed to reword them in a way that would of made the punch harder. Also most of Letter wordlays are over-played but you did have some very cool flips. You my dawg but f'real I think Letters took this one with ease homie. Letters had the LOTB with the Professor X/mutant bar which was dope and I thought he had the best consistency and hits throughout this battle.. dope shit..
V/Letters
Question mark (kinda)
Vs
Cold af, professor ex, Galileo (could have been WAY doper w/ more effort, lazy bastard)
Some of PF shit wasn't worded that well. Mailbox could have been decent, hang man was terrible, there wasn't real any sting on that designed to fail bar, lett down had bad execution (concept as a whole wouldn't have been that good though), and opener was soft.
V/Letterman
designed to fail
vs
galalieo, and better attempts
frost lacked direction/impact and didn't really have anything that was direct/hard hitting enough to connect.
letterman could've had some solid hit if he reworded some concepts, the galalieo wp was pretty dope and would've been waaaay better if the set up/punch was reworded.
all in all letterman was more consistent with better direction and took this pretty easily.
lol what in the fuck is going on with the voting???? scary.
6-3 good battle @Professor Frost
@Fresh close this
Letterman wins 5-4