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due sunday midnight
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vbl rules
due sunday midnight
3 mins
In, make it due Monday.
I recorded two days ago dude...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BXuOHTVAigA
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I'm high and drunk but... :cool:
@Letterman 2 links
@Fresh @Smash @Slayerr. @KnowP @Killing Spree somebody drop a vote :th_down:
Letterman had: clean house, demarco, bases, other then that your flow was straight some shit came off a little forced & to be honest when you pause an say the word "and" you sound slightly feminine just saying.
Vs
Dilly had: breaking bones, check out men. Other then that your accent doesn't dit your flow nor vibe feel like one of them is coming off forced. I can hear that its a free style it comes off obvious with the stuttering and shit but you didn't have any real punches at all just shit talk.
3 quotes to 2 Letterman wins
Let's get some votes
Dilly: why everytime you drop a video it has to be only 1 minute 40 seconds long and a freestyle?? If u took more effort in your drops you'd be dope because u had a couple good metaphores like the men's warehouse line and the break bones line. Other then that u underestimated thought u was gonna do this easy and didn't even give a fuck. Straight up waste of time if ur not gonna put effort into ur shit.
Letterman ur quality sucks man sup with the Bruce Lee movie effect lmao. Other then that ur flow was better punches usual self filler misses couple hits like Don Demarco Clean House and the black crime multi display line. I thought u had the slightly more presentable video longer timing but u need to come with more hard hitting punches. Told u many times before.
V/Letterman
Letterman, his flow was blahh, he had wordplay like thats the "Cosby/cause b" .. mentioned miracle too much, intro didn't show any confidence, flow was on and off and the self hype man adlibbing thing didn't work for me. Seems like he tried to be too much of a smack style rapper, even with the gun talk while sitting in his moms kitchen lol.
DaveDilly, had that caught body line but slipped up a lot.. hated his voice beyond anything I ever heard while being on this earth but I felt his overall presentation was better then Lettermans here.. his bars came out clearer and seemed to have more content without some much filler and attempted twists.
cool battle, gonna vote DaveDilly on this one.
This battle was pretty bad, tbh.
Letterman: You are one nerd faggot, bro. Who buttons their button downs all the way up tho? Aren't you supposed to AT LEAST leave the top button, undone? Terrible, but enough about your no swag having faggot ass. Your quality sucks. Your reactions had like a 15 second delay. Not sure wtf? LOL Bar wise, you were decent. Had a few cool bars but your presentation and delivery of those bars were awful. Nothing WOW'd me...
Dave DILLY: You look like trailer scum, tbh lol. All good, tho hahaha. What's good with recording half of your face, bro? Especially seems as if you were outside in the cold and shit, lol. Overall, I think your presence was bad... You just appeared to be reading something off of a piece of paper in front of you or something. I just think your presence wasn't there at all. Conceptually, you lacked haymakers, had a few jabs but nothing hard hitting. Lol @ the sway his hips bar, that got a chuckle out of me actually.
OVERALL: I'd have to say, Dave took this. I just think he had the more presentable verse. Both lacked presence but dave's was better. Both lacked any real hard hitting bars and I'd say they tied in this area. Delivery? I'd have to say Dave took it with a more stiff laid back no type of emotion feel as oppose to Letterman's 15 second delay, so wasn't sure where the fuck his delivery and presence was. Seemed like he was talking about cleaning house and making the motions of pumping a shot gun and shooting it. It was terrible, tbh. I'll just say, I enjoyed Dave's verse slightly more...
v/Dilly...
letter man. okay, could be a little more decisive on the intro lol. But that dont bother me. kinda a bit too many pauses for too long in it. Lines were solid though. I thought you had some cool concepts but the way they got delivered took some of the sting out. Overall i thought you had not bad delivery, at times i was like cool. But other times the delivers lackwed a little. need to bring hard it the whole time. Flow wise. not bad either. But without the pauses would have been better.
first off, lol @ the freestyle? i'll assume that might be a free at the end and the first bit was written.
okay dave not bad. Flow wise. seems all good. Nothing special. No real quotables hit me off the top on a first listen. IUt was solid, but i wasnt hearing hard hitters. Nothing is really sticking out to me as a line that kills your opponent, its mostly glancing blows. delivery is a little lethargic too.
ok, both came pretty even to be honest. Nothing really stuck out, but i wasnt dissapointed, i think i liked the way DD flowed better and delivered his verse, just, but i had letter taking this on the written side. since a battle is about punches and letter wasnt far behind on the consistant flow ima give my vote to letter. I liked his verse more. Keep it up dudes.
V.letter
4-2 up
Letterman - the way you started was very awkward, not to mention the backwards SnapBack and ugly button up that's was literally buttoned up all the way to the top. There was a million too many miracle references and the only bar that stood out to me was the swing and a miss. Very disappointing drop...
daveDILLY - there seemed to be more concepts but. It hung that actually connected hard. The line that stood out the most to me was the glossed lips, which was actually funny. Other than that, dropping the n-bomb was smooth but I wouldn't suggest. I say you got this based on substance but not by much.
Vote - daveDILLY
Moral of the story: Conviction is a part of presentation
All these mom kitchen/button up/backwards snapback/hesitant delivery jokes @ Letterman prove you can't talk about certain things while your presentation says the complete opposite
I mean, you could but when your delivery is off & you have choppy flow it reflects the confidence in what you say
Also, the Miracle references took away from Dave. You can't roast someone by mentioning another battler all throughout your verse
Presentation.
This man Dave.
"Ion give a fuck"
Got me dying laughing, I THOUGHT you was gonna spazz at the end I'm like DAAAYUUMMMM - aw he fucked up lol
I'm not too sure what to think, Dave had 3 lines that could have hit. He had better presentation than Letterman though.
I thought Letterman's bars could have been better if he advertised himself in a different manner.
Vote: Davey Jones
4-3 dilly
Anymore votes please
^^^
@Fresh you haven't voted yet lol
Letterman wasn't feeling alot of your stuff man.
Swing n a miss / over the head was iight but soo generic.. the scheme u had going after that was iight..
The clean house / and text wasn't doing it for me.
Miracle boy was blehh
All around bases /all around basis was cool
Other then that wasn't feeling it man. You had a lotttt of filler in there
Dave
Ok, the first line when ur like "so lets just take a chill pill" and then u do that stupid laugh like "huhuhh" or some shit had me dyin lol
so u had : win more votes if u tossed ur hips n glossed ur lips was funny but not very effective
pullin ur leg like kids with dumbass questions was iight
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caught a body / cheerleading team
Tharts about it man. You didn't have much material here
Ok well this battle is close as fuck. I think its literally a toss up. Letterman ur verse was not nearly as good as u usally put up... Felt there was too many pauses that weren't warranted from the caliber of the punch u were droppin. You also just had almost no content in here other then a couple punches that kinda stood out.
Dave u had better style I think, and I think u could drop some dope shit (style wise) if you put more effort into it and memorized ur words. Other then that, ur verse was very fillerish too. U had the cheerleader line and pulling ur leg line. I do respect ur attaempt at freestyling tho that shit takes some balls so kudos on that.
While DD edges this on style, I think I've got Letterman edging this in material. DD's style wasn't enough to compensate for lettermans material so hes gonna get my vote.
v/Letterman
4-4
Even tho it over yet. Good battle bro!!Quote:
Originally Posted by Letterman
Yeah, good battle @daveDILLY
come on 1 more vote
4-4
@BROKE LESNAR @Smog @Mr.Write
2 min video battle can someone please drop a vote.. its 4-4
Nothing I can say that really stands out different from what the others had stated. @lettwrman ur quality prevented your bars from actually making a difference in impact cause in person wise ur persona and delivery in general helps big time. Some of ur bars were cool nothing too shabby. Tbh nothing wow'd me just an alright verse. @daveDILLY ur better factor play great in ur favor as ur delivery was on point in some area and u involved nice presence but why the half face. Freestyle tho?? Seemed like u was reading something. Idk this battle was just a cool thing as it involved video and visual but it had little to no attempt at being great or put forth effort.
If I have to vote I actually like Dave dilly he had ok ish concepts but his approach to it and presence was overall better which u have to take into account since it is a visual battle as well not just the bars
30 percent freestyleQuote:
Originally Posted by Mr.Write
thanks for the vote
@Fresh close this and give me my win please 5-4