10 lines due whenever.. Let's go fuck boy @alphadog
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10 lines due whenever.. Let's go fuck boy @alphadog
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No links to images in a text battle unless its agreed on by both parties -Wordz
Lets not fuck,
cuz when I grab the mic and strike these rappers is fast to fall,
Spittin acid at rappers to make their body parts dissolve,
If rapping was basketball then my ball game is like LeBron,
James
Kobe and a mix of Jordan
The art I craft like darts that hit your organs
Im an Ox in this battle
use horns n bring Len to the canteen between classes,
Then pour him a drink of caffeine in some thin plastic,
This does NOT seem drastic
But he needs to be focused,
crisp n pristine
Cuz he's fifteen if you noticed
bout to get his ass whipped Ina RB classic like im Moses
Loaded with acid tipped locusts,
Your opponent is faster like Jones is
My punches like Roy Jrs closed fist
You should drop crew I.P and have your I.Qs replenised moron
You dumb, cuz you cant see IQIP means "im queuing in position" of a movie titled Lenox horror
10+10 lines
Alpha is known for getting bullied in his past, dude is a demented faggot,
One insult I throw at him, he'll take his life quicker than Pyle in Full Metal Jacket,
Says he sells crack but in real life he'd ask me to spare him a buck,
So If I see him dealing with "ice" I'll slice his throat open like Clint Malarchuk,
I must say you come with a fake style, claims he dress like a thug,
You're about as fake as an ID that teens use to get in a club,
I took shots at some of the greatest, now I gotta fight this fucker?
I got long range with the sight like Chris Kyle in a Sniper Bunker,
Alphadog a toddler, I'm bombing and killing kids,
See more people eating dog in battle than Vietnam Villages
Nothing
Vs
Vietnam Villages- other then that your getting better bsttle by battle & I congratulate you for that.
This was an easy one sided battle in favor of Lenox.
nothin
vs.
Alphadog a toddler, I'm bombing and killing kids,
See more people eating dog in battle than Vietnam Villages
i liked the chris kyle concept too u just messed it up lol.
pretty one sided battle. alpha writes like his droppin an audio diss which will never work in text. lenox had the vietname punch which took the battle for him..
vote - lenox
Vietnam villages
Vs
N/a
This was a better drop for Lenox. Alpha has ALOT to work on so this was a CAT sweep win for Len
V/Lenox
Lets not fuck,
cuz when I grab the mic and strike these rappers is fast to fall,
Spittin acid at rappers to make their body parts dissolve,
Statement no punch involved n no direction here..
If rapping was basketball then my ball game is like LeBron,
James
Kobe and a mix of Jordan
The art I craft like darts that hit your organs
Ur just kinda rhyming n not really attackin ur opponent..
Im an Ox in this battle
use horns n bring Len to the canteen between classes,
Then pour him a drink of caffeine in some thin plastic,
Again just makin statements..
This does NOT seem drastic
But he needs to be focused,
crisp n pristine
Cuz he's fifteen if you noticed
bout to get his ass whipped Ina RB classic like im Moses
Same dhit just statements
Loaded with acid tipped locusts,
Your opponent is faster like Jones is
My punches like Roy Jrs closed fist
You should drop crew I.P and have your I.Qs replenised moron
You dumb, cuz you cant see IQIP means "im queuing in position" of a movie titled Lenox horror
Nothing here either..
Vs..
Alpha is known for getting bullied in his past, dude is a demented faggot,
One insult I throw at him, he'll take his life quicker than Pyle in Full Metal Jacket,
Not hard ... No real substance here..
Says he sells crack but in real life he'd ask me to spare him a buck,
So If I see him dealing with "ice" I'll slice his throat open like Clint Malarchuk,
If I was u I'd use less similies in ur barz, I see what u went for here but just went flat at the end IMO
I must say you come with a fake style, claims he dress like a thug,
You're about as fake as an ID that teens use to get in a club,
Nah..
I took shots at some of the greatest, now I gotta fight this fucker?
I got long range with the sight like Chris Kyle in a Sniper Bunker,
Self hype..the entire bar didn't go at ur opponent..
Alphadog a toddler, I'm bombing and killing kids,
See more people eating dog in battle than Vietnam Villages
Lol, this was actually cool IMO..
Alpha u gotta structure ur verse better n go st the guy ur facing, u basically just rapped that entire verse.. Lenox if u use less similies n work with ur concepts better u'll be iight.. Ur last bar was good IMO.. I see ur tryin n showing signs of improvement so stay at it n yeah u got this win pretty easy..
Vote Lenox..
AlphaDog: Your drop sounded like a basic freestyle of the dome when you in the house fucking around, I think you need to portion your lines better and put more time in creativity and solid execution.
Lenox: You need to think up fresher concepts and add more sting to the execution, I feel you headed in the right direction based on your drop you just need to be more clever.
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Nothing
vs.
Alphadog a toddler, I'm bombing and killing kids,
See more people eating dog in battle than Vietnam Villages
v/Lenox
Idk wtf Alpha had going on here. His was more like a freestyle than a battle verse. That being said, Lenox actually attempted punches here so he takes this battle. That Vietnam bar was ok.
v/Lenox
I'll close it when @Lenox gets his links inQuote:
Originally Posted by Killing Spree
I will get them tonightQuote:
Originally Posted by Fresh
alpha
This does NOT seem drastic
But he needs to be focused,
crisp n pristine
Cuz he's fifteen if you noticed
this was pretty cool because I liked the rhyme scheme and personal but still man ur dropping ur bars and formatting them like its an audio battle.
Lenox
Alphadog a toddler, I'm bombing and killing kids,
See more people eating dog in battle than Vietnam Villages
not a bad metaphorical reference with the nameplay here
u had some potential concepts just need to get that display of your wording up to par. ur choices of concepts are getting there though.
V/Lenox
Im willing to sticky this so everyone can see what a battle with infinite votes and no winner looks like.
1.) no poll added (easiest shit ever that you MUST go out of your way to fuck up)
2.) no vote links from anyone
3.) members from FL have been nice enough to vote on it to the point where it's 7 - 0 now.. you STILL haven't voted.
@Fresh lets keep this one open for ever and stickied bro.
dead.
If he keep setting battles up incorrectly don't give him the wins(wen he does)
Just give him a Loss whenever people don't vote. Easy as that. For every missing link = + Loss. People rather not get the L's so force them to comply by giving them an L. Simple solution.
Pmsl haha im not droppin links in here cuz there's no point tbh, im the least experienced writer in here fact,, and I've no computer so every posts on the phone, im still learning from yall by reading other battles an shit but yo,,,, practice makes perfect so they say, none of my mates are into this hiphop battle shit so im literally a beginner tbr
Keep jackin away. But I do this on my phone as does smog. Voting isn't tough. U saying your not going to vote will make ppl not give two fucks about your battle.Quote:
Originally Posted by alphadog
I will n do vote,, just not using the links in this thread,, lol idk wat i was thinking postin tat garbage but ill live n learn,,
Fresh you can close this... @Fresh
Holy Jesus its a miracle, and not the heavy set variety.