Due Thursday. 10 lines @miracle ...
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Due Thursday. 10 lines @miracle ...
get ur pic post asap.. im headed out brb in 2hrs ill post pic thenQuote:
Originally Posted by Lenox
You can tell Miracles girl hits the needle till she's aching and her bones shiver,
I'm not complaining, but that bitch got more facial injections than Joan Rivers,
He looks familiar, maybe from one of my favorite shows, But in life It seems like he's losin,
Shit, it's not my fault his mother shit out Moe from The Three Stooges,
You are one ugly mother fucker, a fucking burden to be worshiped as a vet,
So I guess that ape you took that picture with isn't the only one with a birth defect
i dont even want this youngin' writing for this battle, im ending this fight, ya'll
if his parent come home n see him staring at my pic, ill be on chris hansen by nightfall
this kids never getting laid. he ain't fingering bitches n hitting that shit
the only thing he ever bangs is that haircut his mother took him to get
your so fucking youth..n lettermans trying to help u in the worst way
but i wouldnt listen bro, his concepts n your life share the same birth day
Lenox
You can tell Miracles girl hits the needle till she's aching and her bones shiver,
I'm not complaining, but that bitch got more facial injections than Joan Rivers,
He looks familiar, maybe from one of my favorite shows, But in life It seems like he's losin,
Shit, it's not my fault his mother shit out Moe from The Three Stooges,
You are one ugly mother fucker, a fucking burden to be worshiped as a vet,
So I guess that ape you took that picture with isn't the only one with a birth defect
pretty impressed u actually had punches referenced towards the pic along with some decent humor factor
miracle
this kids never getting laid. he ain't fingering bitches n hitting that shit
the only thing he ever bangs is that haircut his mother took him to get
lmao good flip
well I felt miracle underestimated Lenox here and rushed his 6 bars only bar stood out to me in reference to the pic. Lenox incoeprated more punches in reference towards the pic and had the overall humor factor in my opinion.
V/Lenox
Lenox-
He looks familiar, maybe from one of my favorite shows, But in life It seems like he's losin,
Shit, it's not my fault his mother shit out Moe from The Three Stooges,
You are one ugly mother fucker, a fucking burden to be worshiped as a vet,
So I guess that ape you took that picture with isn't the only one with a birth defect
vs.
Mir-
this kids never getting laid. he ain't fingering bitches n hitting that shit
the only thing he ever bangs is that haircut his mother took him to get
your so fucking youth..n lettermans trying to help u in the worst way
but i wouldnt listen bro, his concepts n your life share the same birth day
miracle takes this one. he came harder and the punches were better.
v/miracle
You can tell Miracles girl hits the needle till she's aching and her bones shiver,
I'm not complaining, but that bitch got more facial injections than Joan Rivers,
eh weak
He looks familiar, maybe from one of my favorite shows, But in life It seems like he's losin,
Shit, it's not my fault his mother shit out Moe from The Three Stooges,
no
You are one ugly mother fucker, a fucking burden to be worshiped as a vet,
So I guess that ape you took that picture with isn't the only one with a birth defect
not good..
vs.
i dont even want this youngin' writing for this battle, im ending this fight, ya'll
if his parent come home n see him staring at my pic, ill be on chris hansen by nightfall
ok
this kids never getting laid. he ain't fingering bitches n hitting that shit
the only thing he ever bangs is that haircut his mother took him to get
weak
your so fucking youth..n lettermans trying to help u in the worst way
but i wouldnt listen bro, his concepts n your life share the same birth day
ok
weak battle for only being 6 lines.. overall i got mir taking the W his misses were better then lenoxs missed. both word on writing better wordplay and using wit in your verses
vote - miracle
ok so, um I think lennox got this one, I felt his verse more, miracle can write you can tell but honestly I don't feel the same sting when reading her verse has I do lennox's
hate it or love it that's how I see it
I will break it down if I have to....
needs more feedback - Wordz AhGod
Joan Rivers
Vs.
Bangs and birthday
Really short battle. Miracle went harder here.
I quoted this bar but I felt it was a semi-miss. Comparing her face to Joan Rivers was a huge stretch, lol. I did think it hit somewhat, but the rest of your verse suffered from some really bland humor i.e. a 3 Stooges concept (lmao) and the ape comparison.Quote:
Originally Posted by Lenox
Great, consistent verse. It being only 3 bars, u went 2 for 3 and they were both unquestionably lotbs. Terrific stuff.Quote:
Originally Posted by miracle
MVGT: Miracle
4 - 1 Miracle
Joan rivers
Vs
Nightfall lol, bangs
Miracle got this w/ a more polished drop. Good showing from Lenox though.
V/miracle
@Wordz AhGod.
close this please 5-1