LLL Season 17 Championship
Wordz AhGod vs Murda Sho
20+ Lines
Due Monday 9/1/14
@Wordz AhGod. @Murda Sho
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LLL Season 17 Championship
Wordz AhGod vs Murda Sho
20+ Lines
Due Monday 9/1/14
@Wordz AhGod. @Murda Sho
here.. digging that line limit.
Going 20... Loser stop typing up novels about other men
Quote:
Originally Posted by Murda sho vs me last time
c'mon sonQuote:
Originally Posted by murda sho.
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fake personals n weak bars to win..? it seems ur just quite slow at it..
truth is I killed u both. u should thank my bandwagon for giving u a ride home, faggot.
My consistency is fire, u just flop with each try n make wrong decisions
the deal is ur bars are wack, no negotiating it.. they only drop under one condition.
u have a shitty life but ur bitch gets creamed daily.. thats how the story goes
she helps my penis reach new heights.. if anything grows on u its probably mold.
this playoff had potential, but now I say to the trash with it
cos we're hanging on by extensions.. hoping Arch still drops at the last minute.
see, if this bitch is elevating I'll hit em with my finisher n decimate em'
then toss a brick thru the windows of his soul n smash the interior decorating.
he in the chat cryin about a mag, we couldn't stop this broads grieving
Im thinking this bitch got issues.. n he ain't been mentioned in one all season.
talking hard before the battle starts then demanding a mag.. bitch u worried?
u'll get scrolled past the good parts ..we'll read about murda in the obituaries.
I was already champ when we faced, couldn't even use u to get ahead
u were just trying ur hardest to ascend.. but ended up dropping that half instead.
u were literally the worst pick.. seeded last, it aint even a roast, dawg
more like the Hong Kong Olympics from how far u were placed below smog.
ur game lacks substance bitches run from sho till their legs breakin
straight up, they dont just avoid this nerd. they'd jump into one just to escape em.
I'll get serious for this next bar cos I feel I already doused u in flames
n' push murda to the edge, since I want to make sure I get all jokes out of the way.
fact is, Im set with the mob like joe pesci ..guns spark up n ur block bails
promise, if I ever hear mermaid.. it better be him cleaning with a fox tail.
I took a 6 year break, u been at this dyin for a win n acting tenderQuote:
Originally Posted by Murda Sho at NC
now ur mad a fuck cos Ive been gone that long n ur the one nobody remembers.
after stompin duke, Ive only grown meaner. its true u see
if mercy wordz.. its me staring at his corpse in a tux while reading his eulogy.
Zip him up!
.. . . .Quote:
Originally Posted by Wordz AhGod.
Body parts everywhere! I'll sever this queen's limbs into endless of pieces
Forensics in teams would stumble over Wordz till Floyd's considered a genius
This round u're done, those voters were drugged but once I clown this bum
Who ever thinks Wor'll win must have been taken from Arch's town in one
See he beats his opponents with line limits... It's not his bars that hurt
I could blast him into next week!... & we'd still be reading that long ass verse
His wench admits it that my dick style's good...
The way she climbs my tree for the nuts'd make him reminiscent of his spic childhood
His parents probably owned a corner store to keep this kid in good health
But when I pull up to that mom and pops u better lock the shop orphan for urself
Just chill with the crying, both u & Amen would get killed for replying
If y'all keep sending shots to Mur, chemo treatment couldn't prevent u from dying
He loves big bitches, clearly the cows are on his bucket to hit
How u approach ox after ox but still can't seem to get a hug & a kiss
But I don't knock it dude pursue what u like...
If he got a boo who would commit that's what she'd do from her eyes because she's ruined her life
To keep it a hun, some people see through the front
If this dude's bars got any lighter niggas would steal it after chiefin a blunt
Why do y'all treat Wordz like the President? Please bitch...
U hype him to death well I'll give him five to the chest like the pledge of allegiance
I've had beef with Hispanics, now Nik & Hush are my bros they're hot with the craft
Butcher the worst one cause u drop & do that to most the concepts u have
Seriously bro, these dudes just laugh & grit
Ur dickriders refused to sign a prenup... and they still don't get half ur shit
Things have got to change for real, I'm tryna show y'all he's a lame & his fails vary
Then he comes with audible shit that could turn a red zone play to a Hail Mary
But they buy bull, & u sell it well that's why realness won't fuckin beat u
Keep flippin bars cause we know that Wordz AhGod were written by other people
It's been fun...
Zip Him Up!!
fake personals n weak bars to win..? it seems ur just quite slow at it..
truth is I killed u both. u should thank my bandwagon for giving u a ride home, faggot.
This cool, funny
My consistency is fire, u just flop with each try n make wrong decisions
the deal is ur bars are wack, no negotiating it.. they only drop under one condition.
Think the deal/negotiating/one condition concept was cool, being that his barz r wack that's the condition they drop under.. Smooth IMO
u have a shitty life but ur bitch gets creamed daily.. thats how the story goes
she helps my penis reach new heights.. if anything grows on u its probably mold.
Nah don't like the ending of this.. Coulda done something harsher..
this playoff had potential, but now I say to the trash with it
cos we're hanging on by extensions.. hoping Arch still drops at the last minute.
Lmao this dope....
see, if this bitch is elevating I'll hit em with my finisher n decimate em'
then toss a brick thru the windows of his soul n smash the interior decorating.
Iight..
he in the chat cryin about a mag, we couldn't stop this broads grieving
Im thinking this bitch got issues.. n he ain't been mentioned in one all season.
Nice
talking hard before the battle starts then demanding a mag.. bitch u worried?
u'll get scrolled past the good parts ..we'll read about murda in the obituaries.
Like the personal here
I was already champ when we faced, couldn't even use u to get ahead
u were just trying ur hardest to ascend.. but ended up dropping that half instead.
I guess I pronounce ascend with a n not ass but the creativity factor was cool just felt forced IMO
u were literally the worst pick.. seeded last, it aint even a roast, dawg
more like the Hong Kong Olympics from how far u were placed below smog.
Ain't nothin wrong wit bein below me son.. That's all I gotta say..
ur game lacks substance bitches run from sho till their legs breakin
straight up, they dont just avoid this nerd. they'd jump into one just to escape em.
Dope af, the void runescape, I dig this , slick shit
I'll get serious for this next bar cos I feel I already doused u in flames
n' push murda to the edge, since I want to make sure I get all jokes out of the way.
Cool
fact is, Im set with the mob like joe pesci ..guns spark up n ur block bails
promise, if I ever hear mermaid.. it better be him cleaning with a fox tail
Cool np, tied well with the set up too
I took a 6 year break, u been at this dyin for a win n acting tender
now ur mad a fuck cos Ive been gone that long n ur the one nobody remembers.
Iight
after stompin duke, Ive only grown meaner. its true u see
if mercy wordz.. its me staring at his corpse in a tux while reading his eulogy.
Cool np
Vs....
Body parts everywhere! I'll sever this queen's limbs into endless of pieces
Forensics in teams would stumble over Wordz till Floyd's considered a genius
Lol, cool
This round u're done, those voters were drugged but once I clown this bum
Who ever thinks Wor'll win must have been taken from Arch's town in one
Being that he from Kansas I'm diggin this..
See he beats his opponents with line limits... It's not his bars that hurt
I could blast him into next week!... & we'd still be reading that long ass verse
Um iight, I guess..
His wench admits it that my dick style's good...
The way she climbs my tree for the nuts'd make him reminiscent of his spic childhood
Cool personal..
His parents probably owned a corner store to keep this kid in good health
But when I pull up to that mom and pops u better lock the shop orphan for urself
Wp a lil forced , like the attempt tho
Just chill with the crying, both u & Amen would get killed for replying
If y'all keep sending shots to Mur, chemo treatment couldn't prevent u from dying
The tumor wp was well used on some personal shit too..
He loves big bitches, clearly the cows are on his bucket to hit
How u approach ox after ox but still can't seem to get a hug & a kiss
Nah not diggin this much..
But I don't knock it dude pursue what u like...
If he got a boo who would commit that's what she'd do from her eyes because she's ruined her life
Felt the punch was a tad but stretched but the wp was cool, iight bar tho
To keep it a hun, some people see through the front
If this dude's bars got any lighter niggas would steal it after chiefin a blunt
Ehh soft IMO, I get it not to harsh
Why do y'all treat Wordz like the President? Please bitch...
U hype him to death well I'll give him five to the chest like the pledge of allegiance
Cool simile actually
I've had beef with Hispanics, now Nik & Hush are my bros they're hot with the craft
Butcher the worst one cause u drop & do that to most the concepts u have
Feel but ure/ butcher is forced af IMO..
Seriously bro, these dudes just laugh & grit
Ur dickriders refused to sign a prenup... and they still don't get half ur shit
Lol, cool
Things have got to change for real, I'm tryna show y'all he's a lame & his fails vary
Then he comes with audible shit that could turn a red zone play to a Hail Mary
Audible/ all da bull, kinda works, cool idea
But they buy bull, & u sell it well that's why realness won't fuckin beat u
Keep flippin bars cause we know that Wordz AhGod were written by other people
Iight, decent closer....
Well hot damn y'all this toe to to blow fa blow shit right here.. Here's how I see it.. I feel sho prolly had one mo miss/light jab then wordz but both had a lot of heavy hitters.. I mean I feel the void runescape turned out to be the lotb from a creative standpoint but the 1 mo miss ain't really what sealed this either I just feel based on tying set ups into the punch wag a a tad but more consistent but y'all this battles hit n this is just my opinion this could prolly get votes on both ends..hella nice read fellas n props to both u n stay tha fuck up...
Vote wag
Bandwagon, all season, escape em, mermaid, nobody remembers
Vs
Considered a genius, chemo treatment, pledge of allegiance, butcher, half ur shit, audible
Both had there misses but I got Murda by a quote. IMO some of WAGs bars weren't worded harsh enough. Couple soft jabs in there. Murda had a few misses himself. I lol'd at that opener though. Favorite bar. Decent read, nice battle n like I said I've got Murda by just a quote.
V/M.Sho
fake personals n weak bars to win..? it seems ur just quite slow at it..
truth is I killed u both. u should thank my bandwagon for giving u a ride home, faggot.
My consistency is fire, u just flop with each try n make wrong decisions
the deal is ur bars are wack, no negotiating it.. they only drop under one condition.
he in the chat cryin about a mag, we couldn't stop this broads grieving
Im thinking this bitch got issues.. n he ain't been mentioned in one all season.
u were literally the worst pick.. seeded last, it aint even a roast, dawg
more like the Hong Kong Olympics from how far u were placed below smog.
I'll get serious for this next bar cos I feel I already doused u in flames
n' push murda to the edge, since I want to make sure I get all jokes out of the way.
fact is, Im set with the mob like joe pesci ..guns spark up n ur block bails
promise, if I ever hear mermaid.. it better be him cleaning with a fox tail.
I took a 6 year break, u been at this dyin for a win n acting tender
now ur mad a fuck cos Ive been gone that long n ur the one nobody remembers.
vs
Body parts everywhere! I'll sever this queen's limbs into endless of pieces
Forensics in teams would stumble over Wordz till Floyd's considered a genius
This round u're done, those voters were drugged but once I clown this bum
Who ever thinks Wor'll win must have been taken from Arch's town in one
Just chill with the crying, both u & Amen would get killed for replying
If y'all keep sending shots to Mur, chemo treatment couldn't prevent u from dying
To keep it a hun, some people see through the front
If this dude's bars got any lighter niggas would steal it after chiefin a blunt
Why do y'all treat Wordz like the President? Please bitch...
U hype him to death well I'll give him five to the chest like the pledge of allegiance
Seriously bro, these dudes just laugh & grit
Ur dickriders refused to sign a prenup... and they still don't get half ur shit
Things have got to change for real, I'm tryna show y'all he's a lame & his fails vary
Then he comes with audible shit that could turn a red zone play to a Hail Mary
This battle is close as fuck.. I have you guys even on quotes. I think the deciding factor for me is gonna be who came more personal, and with that being said... I've gotta give it to Wordz AhGod. I just feel his shit was more directed at murda. Both dudes had some decent nameflips, but Wordz came with the personals. Good battle, Props to both.
v/Wordz
fake personals n weak bars to win..? it seems ur just quite slow at it..
truth is I killed u both. u should thank my bandwagon for giving u a ride home, faggot.
This was wack, IMO.
My consistency is fire, u just flop with each try n make wrong decisions
the deal is ur bars are wack, no negotiating it.. they only drop under one condition.
Um... What?
u have a shitty life but ur bitch gets creamed daily.. thats how the story goes
she helps my penis reach new heights.. if anything grows on u its probably mold.
I've seen this concept flipped in this exact direction but not worded as nicely. This was dope, tho.
this playoff had potential, but now I say to the trash with it
cos we're hanging on by extensions.. hoping Arch still drops at the last minute.
Lol, slick.
see, if this bitch is elevating I'll hit em with my finisher n decimate em'
then toss a brick thru the windows of his soul n smash the interior decorating.
Wack.
he in the chat cryin about a mag, we couldn't stop this broads grieving
Im thinking this bitch got issues.. n he ain't been mentioned in one all season.
Slick.
talking hard before the battle starts then demanding a mag.. bitch u worried?
u'll get scrolled past the good parts ..we'll read about murda in the obituaries.
Felt like I've read "Bitch" 15 times with in 2 bars, bro. Aside from that, I didn't like this at all. I feel you should have taken this another direction. COncept there, but your execution was bad.
I was already champ when we faced, couldn't even use u to get ahead
u were just trying ur hardest to ascend.. but ended up dropping that half instead.
Seen the WP used in this same direction. I believe fresh used it, if I'm not mistaken but this concept direction was a lot better then the direction fresh went in, IMO.
u were literally the worst pick.. seeded last, it aint even a roast, dawg
more like the Hong Kong Olympics from how far u were placed below smog.
Weak.
ur game lacks substance bitches run from sho till their legs breakin
straight up, they dont just avoid this nerd. they'd jump into one just to escape em.
I think I'm missing something here? It's not makin much sense to me at the moment...
I'll get serious for this next bar cos I feel I already doused u in flames
n' push murda to the edge, since I want to make sure I get all jokes out of the way.
Played concept. I've flipped this a number of times back in like '08-'10 era of text battling.
fact is, Im set with the mob like joe pesci ..guns spark up n ur block bails
promise, if I ever hear mermaid.. it better be him cleaning with a fox tail.
This seemed off to me. Plus, never really heard or have seen anyone call him "Mur" before.
I took a 6 year break, u been at this dyin for a win n acting tender
now ur mad a fuck cos Ive been gone that long n ur the one nobody remembers.
Solid.
after stompin duke, Ive only grown meaner. its true u see
if mercy wordz.. its me staring at his corpse in a tux while reading his eulogy.
Could have flipped this a lot better. The direction you went in, incorperated a pretty old/over used concept.
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Body parts everywhere! I'll sever this queen's limbs into endless of pieces
Forensics in teams would stumble over Wordz till Floyd's considered a genius
Lol, this was dope, IMO.
This round u're done, those voters were drugged but once I clown this bum
Who ever thinks Wor'll win must have been taken from Arch's town in one
Same as Wordz, Mur attempt. This falls in the same cata.
See he beats his opponents with line limits... It's not his bars that hurt
I could blast him into next week!... & we'd still be reading that long ass verse
Feeding?
His wench admits it that my dick style's good...
The way she climbs my tree for the nuts'd make him reminiscent of his spic childhood
Complete miss. Could have worded this a bit harsher and had a potential haymaker, bruh.
His parents probably owned a corner store to keep this kid in good health
But when I pull up to that mom and pops u better lock the shop orphan for urself
Weak.
Just chill with the crying, both u & Amen would get killed for replying
If y'all keep sending shots to Mur, chemo treatment couldn't prevent u from dying
Same as the Wor'll/Mur feedback but this was a pretty dope pun, son.
He loves big bitches, clearly the cows are on his bucket to hit
How u approach ox after ox but still can't seem to get a hug & a kiss
Forced. Oh X Oh X isn't pronounced as OX, lol. But a cool creative attempt.
But I don't knock it dude pursue what u like...
If he got a boo who would commit that's what she'd do from her eyes because she's ruined her life
Lol, slick.
To keep it a hun, some people see through the front
If this dude's bars got any lighter niggas would steal it after chiefin a blunt
Played concept but decent flip, I suppose.
Why do y'all treat Wordz like the President? Please bitch...
U hype him to death well I'll give him five to the chest like the pledge of allegiance
Dope flip on a played concept, IMO.
I've had beef with Hispanics, now Nik & Hush are my bros they're hot with the craft
Butcher the worst one cause u drop & do that to most the concepts u have
Again, dope flip on a played concept.
Seriously bro, these dudes just laugh & grit
Ur dickriders refused to sign a prenup... and they still don't get half ur shit
Slick, lol.
Things have got to change for real, I'm tryna show y'all he's a lame & his fails vary
Then he comes with audible shit that could turn a red zone play to a Hail Mary
All the bullshit/audible shit? Eh, forced but can work depending on your accent, I guess. I liked it tho, tbh...
But they buy bull, & u sell it well that's why realness won't fuckin beat u
Keep flippin bars cause we know that Wordz AhGod were written by other people
Solid. Even tho it's generic and I'm sure it has been flipped on him, but I've never seen it.
OVERALL: Not going to lie, I hesitated to even vote on this battle. Wasn't really feeling Wordz' bars and felt he fell flat here. I think Murda definitely showed up hungry for the win here. After reading this several times, I've had Murda taking it every time I've read the verses so felt I'd break it down bar for bar. With that being said, in bold are the more effective bars that I felt did some damage and got Wordz with 5 quotes vs Murda with 7 quotes, so... IMO...
v/Murda - Just felt his bars were a little more effective and he was consistent here. Even his misses pretty much had some type of a minor impact as where Wordz' misses really hurt him. Boring fucking battle.
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Originally Posted by Wordz AhGod.
Quote:
Originally Posted by murda sho.
4-4 on quotes..
cool battle.
as much as i love seeing murda over here repping for thelime
i think wordz got it
closer was lotb imo
QUOTE=Wordz AhGod.;8599096]c'mon sonQuote:
Originally Posted by murda sho.
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fake personals n weak bars to win..? it seems ur just quite slow at it..
truth is I killed u both. u should thank my bandwagon for giving u a ride home, faggot.
My consistency is fire, u just flop with each try n make wrong decisions
the deal is ur bars are wack, no negotiating it.. they only drop under one condition.
u have a shitty life but ur bitch gets creamed daily.. thats how the story goes
she helps my penis reach new heights.. if anything grows on u its probably mold.
see, if this bitch is elevating I'll hit em with my finisher n decimate em'
then toss a brick thru the windows of his soul n smash the interior decorating.
he in the chat cryin about a mag, we couldn't stop this broads grieving
Im thinking this bitch got issues.. n he ain't been mentioned in one all season.
talking hard before the battle starts then demanding a mag.. bitch u worried?
u'll get scrolled past the good parts ..we'll read about murda in the obituaries.
I was already champ when we faced, couldn't even use u to get ahead
u were just trying ur hardest to ascend.. but ended up dropping that half instead.
u were literally the worst pick.. seeded last, it aint even a roast, dawg
more like the Hong Kong Olympics from how far u were placed below smog.
I'll get serious for this next bar cos I feel I already doused u in flames
n' push murda to the edge, since I want to make sure I get all jokes out of the way.
I took a 6 year break, u been at this dyin for a win n acting tender
now ur mad a fuck cos Ive been gone that long n ur the one nobody remembers.
Zip him up![/QUOTE]
I have this 10-6 WAG. MS had 2 lotbs that were really dope. So that cancels out 2 of WAG's bars making it 8-6 WAG. I have WAG on consistency, while MS had some lulls in his verse that really hindered back to back hits but midway it started getting nice. I didn't quote any of WAG's "mur" np's bc that's just a lazy approach at a np. Murda is 2 syllables so if you're going to use a portion np it should be "murd" and not "mur". I recognize Murda himself used Mur but still I won't quote anything with portion np's that don't even make sense as nicknames. I didn't quote the Wor'll win np bc of this. At first I had it as a lotb but then I thought ab it and it's just as unacceptable as "Mur".Words is a 1 syllable word so using "Wor" to do a np just isn't going to work with me.
v-WAG
More votes...
Yawn
4-2 Wordz
Staying open until FRIDAY for votes
Upping for last minute votes
@King it's Saturday
Just give it to him b, we all know you want your king to win.
Like I said it's been fun (kinda) battling over here, congrats Wordz... You know wassup though I ain't nothin to fuck with that's all I wanted to prove
I honestly think, King doesn't give a shit what day it is, lol.
Wordz AhKing?Quote:
Originally Posted by murda sho.
He calls me RBs king for some reason lol
u have a shitty life but ur bitch gets creamed daily.. thats how the story goes
she helps my penis reach new heights.. if anything grows on u its probably mold.\
he in the chat cryin about a mag, we couldn't stop this broads grieving
Im thinking this bitch got issues.. n he ain't been mentioned in one all season.
talking hard before the battle starts then demanding a mag.. bitch u worried?
u'll get scrolled past the good parts ..we'll read about murda in the obituaries.
u were literally the worst pick.. seeded last, it aint even a roast, dawg
more like the Hong Kong Olympics from how far u were placed below smog.
after stompin duke, Ive only grown meaner. its true u see
if mercy wordz.. its me staring at his corpse in a tux while reading his eulogy.
vs
Body parts everywhere! I'll sever this queen's limbs into endless of pieces
Forensics in teams would stumble over Wordz till Floyd's considered a genius
This round u're done, those voters were drugged but once I clown this bum
Who ever thinks Wor'll win must have been taken from Arch's town in one
He loves big bitches, clearly the cows are on his bucket to hit
How u approach ox after ox but still can't seem to get a hug & a kiss
I've had beef with Hispanics, now Nik & Hush are my bros they're hot with the craft
Butcher the worst one cause u drop & do that to most the concepts u have
Seriously bro, these dudes just laugh & grit
Ur dickriders refused to sign a prenup... and they still don't get half ur shit
Things have got to change for real, I'm tryna show y'all he's a lame & his fails vary
Then he comes with audible shit that could turn a red zone play to a Hail Mary
dope ass battle and close af one to call. Murda started good n fell off for a while then picked it back up with some dope wordplay. Wordz had some sick bars too. takin nothin from either but i got one with a coouple harder bars and one more quotable imo. both had their fair share of played punches and misses too. good ass battle overall.
v. murda
where you gon' battle at?Quote:
Originally Posted by murda sho.
Holding my spot..lotta shit to read here. Gotdam
4-3 in favor of Wordz Ahgod, closed.