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Lol what?Quote:
Originally Posted by Rilla
YO,
Stop tryin to hang wit me son. Ur bars cold wrecked and dumb,
U couldn't touch my skill, Let.. so TRY and get burnt like the rest of em,
I know u play cool and it's chill, U my homie for real..but I get buck on a bitch,
Dog my dick aint a fuckin bull, so stop bein so quick to fuckin jump on it,
Damn it's too easy kid, look at everything you've fuckin done,
I'm on my proud father shit.. like you gettin a beat down from my son,
You an ugly fuck. But he go out every night and get em to holler,
See I got bitches comin out the woodworks, yours got ticks canines and fuckin collars,
You all about the wordplay, But I got the crown and it won't fade,
It's like I'm the 12th man with the D... cuz even ur bitch know I don't play
Wow, you should get 5-0'd for dropping that. I'll applaud Occam for daysQuote:
Originally Posted by Rilla against Occam Razor
In the NFL, Ray got suspended for knocking out a bitch...but here we're like "You get Herr Rayzz!"
He's the type to use pick up lines. You aint getting pussy jam packed
Nobody's thinking realplayer...cause your style is more outdated than that
Rill's upset that he's white. He don't wanna fight & it's true
That if I left this wigger black and blue...he'd OD on depression pills just to stop being blue
He can't connect with chicks. They'll look at you, snap, then give you the shoulder
Cuz If we put your mug on camera...you would get arrested and FaceTime for indecent exposure
He looks for love online but he gives bad sex & can't offer them wealth
So if he met a chick that was fine like wine, he would make more accounts just to big up himself
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Stop tryin to hang wit me son. Ur bars cold wrecked and dumb,
U couldn't touch my skill, Let.. so TRY and get burnt like the rest of em,
^^^ 3/5 this was decent, the skillet had a lot more potential though. You thought up the dop concept then let it fall.
I know u play cool and it's chill, U my homie for real..but I get buck on a bitch,
Dog my dick aint a fuckin bull, so stop bein so quick to fuckin jump on it,
^^^ 2.5/5 meh... I don't know if maybe Letterman was a cowboy at some point? Haha otherwise I don't know many people that are super eager to hop on a bull. Made the punch fall flat for me. Plus if you're going to call someone a dickrider this day-in-age it needs to be fresh.
Damn it's too easy kid, look at everything you've fuckin done,
I'm on my proud father shit.. like you gettin a beat down from my son,
^^^ 2.5/5 this didn't really hit. I did laugh at "I'm on my proud father shit" but who is your son in this equation? He's getting beat so he's not your son, unless you fucked your own mom you're not your son... so who is beating him down?
You an ugly fuck. But he go out every night and get em to holler,
See I got bitches comin out the woodworks, yours got ticks canines and fuckin collars,
^^^ 3.5/5 hahahahahahhahaha alright this one was slick. I was dying.
You all about the wordplay, But I got the crown and it won't fade,
It's like I'm the 12th man with the D... cuz even ur bitch know I don't play
^^^ 4/5 sick closer. Very dope man.
Overall: 15.5/25 you started okay, then you fell off. I was like "What the fuck Rilla has been soft in both of these battles" but then you picked up speed again and ended it with a very sick line. Those last two couplets are more your style.
Wow, you should get 5-0'd for dropping that. I'll applaud Occam for days
In the NFL, Ray got suspended for knocking out a bitch...but here we're like "You get Herr Rayzz!"
^^^ 3.5/5 hahahahahahaha this was cool, I don't know if directly using his "punch" is acceptable? I mean you quoted it and everything so it's not like you're trying to steal it. So I think it's fine. And it was funny although the second line was a smidgen wordy.
He's the type to use pick up lines. You aint getting pussy jam packed
Nobody's thinking realplayer...cause your style is more outdated than that
^^^ 2/5 nah...I get realplayer like the oldschool music player on windows, which is funny.. but his name isn't Real-la it's Ril-la.
Rill's upset that he's white. He don't wanna fight & it's true
That if I left this wigger black and blue...he'd OD on depression pills just to stop being blue
^^^ 1.5/5 This was horrible man. The repetition of the word blue, plus it was really wordy, nah man this one hurt honestly haha
He can't connect with chicks. They'll look at you, snap, then give you the shoulder
Cuz If we put your mug on camera...you would get arrested and FaceTime for indecent exposure
^^^ 3/5 this was pretty cool I dug it.
He looks for love online but he gives bad sex & can't offer them wealth
So if he met a chick that was fine like wine, he would make more accounts just to big up himself
^^^ 3.5/5 oh man, congrats to be the first one to get to use that fool as a punch. I was hoping to do it. I do think you could have exected it a smidgen better but none the less it was nice.
Overall: 13.5/25 honestly your verse was good but that OD on depression pills line killed you. I mean that was really bad. You could polish punches a bit to take some extra words out that you don't need (I have the same issue) but your concepts are really cool.
Vote- Rilla just had a better rounded verse and his "misses" were a bit better. Plus he did have probably my favorite line of the battle. Letterman has really sick concepts just doesn't get them across that well.
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Rilla-
Stop tryin to hang wit me son. Ur bars cold wrecked and dumb,
U couldn't touch my skill, Let.. so TRY and get burnt like the rest of em,
...meh ok...
I know u play cool and it's chill, U my homie for real..but I get buck on a bitch,
Dog my dick aint a fuckin bull, so stop bein so quick to fuckin jump on it,
...lol not bad...
Damn it's too easy kid, look at everything you've fuckin done,
I'm on my proud father shit.. like you gettin a beat down from my son,
...nice...
You an ugly fuck. But he go out every night and get em to holler,
See I got bitches comin out the woodworks, yours got ticks canines and fuckin collars,
...ok ok...
You all about the wordplay, But I got the crown and it won't fade,
It's like I'm the 12th man with the D... cuz even ur bitch know I don't play
...decent ending...
vs.
Letterman-
Wow, you should get 5-0'd for dropping that. I'll applaud Occam for days
In the NFL, Ray got suspended for knocking out a bitch...but here we're like "You get Herr Rayzz!"
...lol nice personal and punch...
He's the type to use pick up lines. You aint getting pussy jam packed
Nobody's thinking realplayer...cause your style is more outdated than that
...not bad not bad...
Rill's upset that he's white. He don't wanna fight & it's true
That if I left this wigger black and blue...he'd OD on depression pills just to stop being blue
...mmm ok, a bit forced...
He can't connect with chicks. They'll look at you, snap, then give you the shoulder
Cuz If we put your mug on camera...you would get arrested and FaceTime for indecent exposure
...meh not feeling it, good attempt though...
He looks for love online but he gives bad sex & can't offer them wealth
So if he met a chick that was fine like wine, he would make more accounts just to big up himself
...hah using my name, wow dude...
overall I think this was close and even though letter used that last bar with my name, once again all over some shit that I did not do, I still think he had a better verse and came more personal and had harder hitting punches. I liked some of rillas too but still there were some played old-ish kinda concepts
v/Letterman
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Lol I always forget @KnowP
Skill let, 12th man
Vs
Get her rays, indecent exposure, fine wine
This was a decent read. I think Rillas misses might have cost him. If I had quoted one more punch n it was a tie, I'd lean more towards rill but as it stands I have letterman winning by a quote.
V/Letterman
Vote rillaQuote:
Originally Posted by Letterman
Rilla
Stop tryin to hang wit me son. Ur bars cold wrecked and dumb,
U couldn't touch my skill, Let.. so TRY and get burnt like the rest of em,
wording on this messed it up
I know u play cool and it's chill, U my homie for real..but I get buck on a bitch,
Dog my dick aint a fuckin bull, so stop bein so quick to fuckin jump on it,
nah wasn't feeling this
Damn it's too easy kid, look at everything you've fuckin done,
I'm on my proud father shit.. like you gettin a beat down from my son,
nah not this one either
You an ugly fuck. But he go out every night and get em to holler,
See I got bitches comin out the woodworks, yours got ticks canines and fuckin collars,
ha ha alright dope
You all about the wordplay, But I got the crown and it won't fade,
It's like I'm the 12th man with the D... cuz even ur bitch know I don't play
ha ha I like the word play
Letterman
Wow, you should get 5-0'd for dropping that. I'll applaud Occam for days
In the NFL, Ray got suspended for knocking out a bitch...but here we're like "You get Herr Rayzz!"
lol weird wordin on the punch tho
He's the type to use pick up lines. You aint getting pussy jam packed
Nobody's thinking realplayer...cause your style is more outdated than that
who the fuck still uses a real player aint heard about that in while so yeah this cool
Rill's upset that he's white. He don't wanna fight & it's true
That if I left this wigger black and blue...he'd OD on depression pills just to stop being blue
lol nigga
He can't connect with chicks. They'll look at you, snap, then give you the shoulder
Cuz If we put your mug on camera...you would get arrested and FaceTime for indecent exposure
na dude thats like a your momma joke
He looks for love online but he gives bad sex & can't offer them wealth
So if he met a chick that was fine like wine, he would make more accounts just to big up himself
damn nice closer
Best Punches
You an ugly fuck. But he go out every night and get em to holler,
See I got bitches comin out the woodworks, yours got ticks canines and fuckin collars,
LOtb
You all about the wordplay, But I got the crown and it won't fade,
It's like I'm the 12th man with the D... cuz even ur bitch know I don't play
vs
Wow, you should get 5-0'd for dropping that. I'll applaud Occam for days
In the NFL, Ray got suspended for knocking out a bitch...but here we're like "You get Herr Rayzz!"
Rill's upset that he's white. He don't wanna fight & it's true
That if I left this wigger black and blue...he'd OD on depression pills just to stop being blue
He looks for love online but he gives bad sex & can't offer them wealth
So if he met a chick that was fine like wine, he would make more accounts just to big up himself
Good battle but imo Rilla first three punches wasn't that hard hittin last two were dope btw ,letter was tad bit more consistant I say he takes this by a quote
Vote Letter
Stop tryin to hang wit me son. Ur bars cold wrecked and dumb,
U couldn't touch my skill, Let.. so TRY and get burnt like the rest of em,
coulda been dope had u tied in something hot or cookin with skillet
I know u play cool and it's chill, U my homie for real..but I get buck on a bitch,
Dog my dick aint a fuckin bull, so stop bein so quick to fuckin jump on it,
weak. not a good concept
Damn it's too easy kid, look at everything you've fuckin done,
I'm on my proud father shit.. like you gettin a beat down from my son,
naw, landing was weak
You an ugly fuck. But he go out every night and get em to holler,
See I got bitches comin out the woodworks, yours got ticks canines and fuckin collars,
lol good flip
You all about the wordplay, But I got the crown and it won't fade,
It's like I'm the 12th man with the D... cuz even ur bitch know I don't play
not bad but too not a direct punch
vs
Quote Originally Posted by Rilla against Occam Razor
Sorry bout ur mom. I know u gotta look up to someone in the sack..
..But u just ain't Herr Rayzz! So stop cheering everytime u get a dick in ur back,
Wow, you should get 5-0'd for dropping that. I'll applaud Occam for days
In the NFL, Ray got suspended for knocking out a bitch...but here we're like "You get Herr Rayzz!"
LMAO!!!!
He's the type to use pick up lines. You aint getting pussy jam packed
Nobody's thinking realplayer...cause your style is more outdated than that
good np
Rill's upset that he's white. He don't wanna fight & it's true
That if I left this wigger black and blue...he'd OD on depression pills just to stop being blue
nawww. landing fell off
He can't connect with chicks. They'll look at you, snap, then give you the shoulder
Cuz If we put your mug on camera...you would get arrested and FaceTime for indecent exposure
wording killed this one. dope concept but execution was off.
He looks for love online but he gives bad sex & can't offer them wealth
So if he met a chick that was fine like wine, he would make more accounts just to big up himself
again good concept but ending didnt land well imo
pretty good flips in this battle from Letterman. started strong yet finished poor. Rilla struggled to tie in his punches to the set up which hurt him in this one.
v. letterman
Rilla
Stop tryin to hang wit me son. Ur bars cold wrecked and dumb,
U couldn't touch my skill, Let.. so TRY and get burnt like the rest of em,
nice nameplay I felt u could've polished up the wording on the finisher a bit better tho
I know u play cool and it's chill, U my homie for real..but I get buck on a bitch,
Dog my dick aint a fuckin bull, so stop bein so quick to fuckin jump on it,
nah
Damn it's too easy kid, look at everything you've fuckin done,
I'm on my proud father shit.. like you gettin a beat down from my son,
wasn't feeling this reference
You an ugly fuck. But he go out every night and get em to holler,
See I got bitches comin out the woodworks, yours got ticks canines and fuckin collars,
lmfao nice flip this was creative and funny
You all about the wordplay, But I got the crown and it won't fade,
It's like I'm the 12th man with the D... cuz even ur bitch know I don't play
ok good flip decent metaphorical comparison
letterman
Wow, you should get 5-0'd for dropping that. I'll applaud Occam for days
In the NFL, Ray got suspended for knocking out a bitch...but here we're like "You get Herr Rayzz!"
lol funny concept tad stretched tho
He's the type to use pick up lines. You aint getting pussy jam packed
Nobody's thinking realplayer...cause your style is more outdated than that
lil forced on the nameplay but I like the idea and creativity here
Rill's upset that he's white. He don't wanna fight & it's true
That if I left this wigger black and blue...he'd OD on depression pills just to stop being blue
nah wasn't feeling this
He can't connect with chicks. They'll look at you, snap, then give you the shoulder
Cuz If we put your mug on camera...you would get arrested and FaceTime for indecent exposure
lmao nice wordplay good creativity
He looks for love online but he gives bad sex & can't offer them wealth
So if he met a chick that was fine like wine, he would make more accounts just to big up himself
lmfao
Wine O's woodwork bar LOTB that shit had me dying and his closer was nice. Other then that he had some misses. Letterman surprised me here he came consistent and creative here his opener and his last two bars were pretty creative. I have Letterman taking this for more creativity and consistency
V/Letterman
Letterman wins 5-1