10 lines max
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Must post your verse in 45 minutes
...No swaying votes...
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10 lines max
No crew/D.Riding/Hate Votes
Must post your verse in 45 minutes
...No swaying votes...
Man I have my verse but It's more then ten lines, I thought you said min 10 lines.... 20 lines in all
what's a sway vote? and i'll come poll-vote up here when the shits been dropped..................................
Why you pre-writen, Just spit it
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*yawns*
hahaha can ya vote on con vs persianplaya n ill chek this wen u bof post nah mean peace
It wasnt prewritten, I was assuming we were going by normal rules, watever though it's all good...
I’d like to say were on even grounds man but that just aint straight
Before you’ve even had a chance, it was already too late
Cause my rhymes got you incarcerated just like an inmate
And now I wanna talk to ya, but I can’t even communicate
How can I even get through to a kid who just wants to ejaculate
GET away from to the computer more to do in life than masturbate
But wait…
With a 2 inch dick maybe the options aren’t too great
Just watch the way I flow and maybe you can imitate
But fo’ real man I’m clownin’, let’s step away from the sarcasm
I had a long talk with your girl man… and she’s faking her orgasms
She told me you she couldn’t even tell once you were inside
She has fuckin needs man and you can’t even provide
She said it was so small it reminded her of cocktail shrimp
And I even when you got it up she still thought it was limp…
Seems like your rhymes are a lot like your dick
You throw your punchlines an’ they fall like a brick
If you want your girl back tho, I got ya a fail safe scheme
Go for Candies and chocolate stay with that sweets theme……
Do whatever you want man but it really did seem
At the end of our talk she loved Swallowing Ice Kareem
Your up man
A swayed vote is when someone presaudes a voter to change there mind....So therefore they use like past reference about there opponent...
Time To Trick
This kid is obviously obsessed with my ..dick..//
My lyrics are so hurtful, they spread deseases in hurdles, like aid's was made into a horror flick//
Trix comes fully equiped with hits//
As I had out more losses then marijauna to addicts//
My vast knowledge leaves you in debt//
Rhyming dictionaries everywhere, there still wont be an upset//
Your pre-written shit is fake//
Those rhymes he is using are past there expiration date//
Clear no slates, spits that you flow ditearerate(spelling)//
vacate the premisis, mixed you so bad you turned to a milkshake in liquid state//
Losing is your fate//
Watch how it makes you combust, your verse is like explanitory FUSS//
Trix will herb you directly//
watch how your weakest lyric serves you correctly//
8 bars are all it took to end you//
Becareful because you just bit off more then you can chew//
it is late where I live but I still did iight
Uppin its 2:10 and im tired like whoah
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k real nice verse man, lets get some votes up in here.............................................. .......
ice had two big punches: trix's girl and the ejaculation line. i didnt like the flow either. Trix was flowing and had quality over quantity punchlines.
VOTE ---> Trix
poll me back at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=47484
Thnx for the vote
Uppin for more
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Yo I would say that Kaream had this when he talked bout you being a little kid. BUT THEN...................... TRIX made a big ass come back and threw those lines back in ya face. HA HA
vote = TRIX
ima have to vote trix... he had many more personals n better punches
i liked
"Your pre-written shit is fake//
Those rhymes he is using are past there expiration date//
Clear no slates, spits that you flow ditearerate(spelling)//
vacate the premisis, mixed you so bad you turned to a milkshake in liquid state//"
vote - trix
GOD DAMNET MAN!!!............................................ ............................... MY STUPID INTERNET WONT LET ME POLL VOTE GODDAMNET. DAMN WELL ATLEAST YOU KNOW WHO I THINK WON. LATER
STAY UP PLAYAZ
yo TRIX gets mah vote for dis one playahs his shit was good luvn it vote = trix^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
yo heres tha breakdown
flow= trix
punches= trix
personals= ice
vocab=tie
overall= trix
he got tis by a few catergoires but he did throw tha punches u threw at him back in ya face and if he didnt do tat u wouldve won it
k gotta go with Kareem on this 1 even though Trix made it happen , Kareem pulled it offf but not by far..
Good Line " Do whatever you want man but it really did seem
At the end of our talk she loved Swallowing Ice Kareem" lol ifunny shit man
vote = Kareem
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My vote goes to TriX
He had funnier punches
And his firstline summed all of kareems verse...
Maybe Ice likes dick????
The only thing I liked about Ice's verse was the last bar. Shit was funny and nice word play. Other than that trix murdered you. I would vote trix if I could...
I jus wanna know why TriX is still battlin newbs lol, he's like 10-1 after this bitch. He needs to step it up to elite where he belongs.... After ym next battle imma hit elite up too... but this battle was obviously a murda by TriX, kid got ill punches, jus needs to start takin down bigger names...