@Apodoca @Throat Cancer
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10 lines
3 - 0 TKO WIN
due when ever lol
Winner gets his dick beaten by the loser.
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@Apodoca @Throat Cancer
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10 lines
3 - 0 TKO WIN
due when ever lol
Winner gets his dick beaten by the loser.
Check
Checkity check. Hmm how about best two of three? I put one up then you and vice versa. three raps each. 10 or more lines and a few judges will decide
no sir.. just 10 lines straight.. GO!!
I'm mighty and mean, take ya to the cleaners!
How about I take alittle off tha top.. I'm not talking about da beaners!
Chop yo fucking head off with a large axe!
I'll leave you w/ that stupid look on ya face... Like you just learned som bizarre facts!
I'm that twisted, w/ mad instincts like sand ninjas!
You'll see red when I cross yo PATH bitch... Got you looking like plaid gingers!
Your dumb and grimy, I'ma fucking limey punching guy g
You a lunchin timely munchin guy that fuckin sucks at wilin
I'm an action packing thrill seeker and I'm attacking then I kill!
I make stacks, call me an integer while You just a faggot w/ the fraction of my skill,
Come get some! @Apodaca
Your missing the vision,
This spittings crimson whistling through your head,
whipping out useless information thinking im gonna be seeing red,
theres always more than what meets the eye,
you''ll be eclispsed by my far cries,
Having been bled, redrum did you in,
Your skills having caused no offense,
Blantantly said.
Dammit wasnt even 10. Ill put another.
Im caged and in rage, placed with a diseased lame in a room to spit,
Why the fuck do i always get the end of the short stick,
i picked up quick at how bad you can be,
half this rhyme is trash talking someone you cant beat or compete with,
they all came to see the reincarnated jesus with free fish,
your history lazareth, no money in your casket,
stand back a bit and admire the classyness,
ya crabby tit,
dont get mad you know im just joshin with
I just don't know
I think u guys tied
Go another round IMO
You think ya gonna win a battle w/ throat cancer? Bitch please
That theory has more holes in it than Earths entire supply of sliced swiss cheese
Your skill is 0, every time you battle you go out on a limb
I'm cutting you off straight at the source...
..He's forever-green and thats just watching the fall of him
You're frail bitch, and believe me you'll never amount to shit
My disses'll make him cry a river...
Just another tool I carry to fucking drown him with
Potato chips and parsley go together better then
The thought of this Avocado like fruit ever becoming a veteran
Took a piss on your grave the other day, been paving the way for others to follow, your the only one here with lyrics to hollow to understand, when i come through i have aloe blacc's, im the man bumping in the back, so concede to your defeat, i tire of spitting lava around your feet, you have nowhere else to go, plenty of people can flow but are you able to row?
Apodaca you post one verse with the agreed line limit and thats it. I will edit your extra verses out when I get on my pc. Hop on some new battles or a cypher if you want to drop some more lines homie.
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Sorry ive been busy latley havent sat down to throw a proper ten liner his way. Ill do it today after work and we'll go from there.
Whatchu know about theories,Quote:
Originally Posted by Throat Cancer
im clearly the hero here,
you getting numerical is unbearable,
im centerfold while your on page 98 as the glory hole bitch,
acting all innocent,
i know your ass is getting it,
im purple from royalty so while your sitting soiling,
im gaining, boiling, making this river holy,
No tools golden except mine,
So fuck off before i leave you in the sun to dry,
Fuckin green top
That mutha fucka said I think y'all tied, go again
Who won?
I'm going to vote apodaca...
Because if he losses, Micheal Douglas dies.
And I liked him in a movie once...
So,
V/Apcocca
Lol thanks man, i try my best haha. Come on people vote!
Cancer
You have the idea of battling but your concepts are off and not really direct, you have potential but need sharpening your closer was probably your best bar throughout the verse. Some concepts you aired cleanly and some barely missed. You only had one real connecting jab.
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Apo
You where literally all over the place, I didn't know wether this was a song dedicated to him or I don't know wtf. You didn't have any concepts no personals no metaphors no punches. Your structure needs work, your direction needs work, your flow needs tweaking but if you give it a little dedication it will work in your favor hold your head up & continue to work & move forward.
Vote Throat for having battle material
Cancer: you were more about attack your opponent. I think you have to really read some battles on here. The key is to learn how to use your set up to make your joke hit hard. It will take time, but wordplay works to aid it. I do believe you need to include some my technical writing techniques. This is along the lines of metaphors, hyperboles which are extreme exaggerations, and also similies - you know the "like a" or "as the" type of punchlines.
Apo - too indirect you need to keep it on your opponent at all times. It will come with practice but i think you should read tutorials. You must make clever flips on double entrendres using them to degrade your opponent. I do however see potential in you both. You just have a rough path in front of y'all. So good luck just keep reading the better writers work on here and you will be fine. Metaphors, wordplay, similies folks, this is golden for you lot to use at your digression.
v/ cancer
uhhh...
Look. Be prepared prior to posting, know what you wanna throw out there and do it. Remember that this is a text forum, so you need to be able to convey what you're trying to get across properly, as if you're explaining directions to a foreigner.
By my count, Throat Cancer had one decent attempt at a punch with a meta in it, the ginger line was what you're supposed to do.
Apodaca just didn't bring anything concrete to the table. My review is in the first part of my post.
1-0
V/TC
ok I want to vote, but I am confused as to which verses im suppose to be voting on... (not trying to freepost but this battle confusing) hit me with a pm letting me know, thanks.
I'm givin the win to apodaca since this is a troll.