Salamander vs Galactic (Galactic Wins)

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@Salamander 10 or 12?

Doesn't matter.

@Galactic

Call an ambulance quick.. scandalous kids are better dead, pal.
When it comes to talent that wins championships, it's never Bengals.
I'm doin' me & you're doing you, I'm refusing to unite our actions.
So if I ever take a page out of your book, I'm using it to wipe my ass w/.
Proving you're unlike the last kid? Your shitty rap is whack indeed.
It doesn't just strain our eyes, that shit'd make 50 packs of Mac & Cheese.
My wording's earning every bit, you can't word a clever hit that moist.
And rankings? You won't climb 'actic.. 'cuz your verses never hit that point.
He's due to be dissed, brutally ripped & this brute is equipped w/ guns...
If Galactic ever shows some infant tree, he's luring kids w/ drugs.

10

I see you Lookin Down on Alpha w/ attempts of clownin dude
But bro you're never Amountin to him when he's Peaked w/ more crowns than you
Bitches be Doing me daily while you're dead in the sack
Doing you involves more Conspiracy over a Loss than the 911 Attacks
Reading your verse is a Drag like steering a tugboat
Dog you're persona's so tired & misleading ya whole career is a Hush vote
You never get pussy while I'm w/ new bitches smashing weekly
It's become so difficult for Estimate he avoids math completely
Dude you got skills I'll admit but who you stressin to be?
All who follow a Durant knows he's HOF but NEVER the best in the League

VOTES!

salamander's verse
Flow was bomb.
The opener seemed a little forced. Dead,Pal/ Bengals is a stretch. But metaphor was on point. How do u word a hit that's moist??? Just saying I don't get it. Multis are there.. Punches are so-so.. Metaphors were hit n miss. Closer was ok.
Galactic
Flow was good.. Multis were so so but I fuck with your opener. Most of ur bars were on point.. The hush vote line was blahh ..ur closer was more of a compliment then anything. Soooo I'm going base my vote on the opener. Cause everything that followed was up to par with each other sooo my vote is

Galactic

Uppin for votes.

don't up league batts lol

Call an ambulance quick.. scandalous kids are better dead, pal.
When it comes to talent that wins championships, it's never Bengals.
Proving you're unlike the last kid? Your shitty rap is whack indeed.
It doesn't just strain our eyes, that shit'd make 50 packs of Mac & Cheese.
He's due to be dissed, brutally ripped & this brute is equipped w/ guns...
If Galactic ever shows some infant tree, he's luring kids w/ drugs.

vs

Bitches be Doing me daily while you're dead in the sack
Doing you involves more Conspiracy over a Loss than the 911 Attacks
Reading your verse is a Drag like steering a tugboat
Dog you're persona's so tired & misleading ya whole career is a Hush vote

cool batt

sal just had better concepts, less played

v/salaman

Sal

Bengals was forced on the word play, page out of your book is played, Mac and cheese was nice, climb actic was just weird, infant tree was a fresh flip. Overall feel like you half assed this verse lots of your shit came off forced, or played. Not the best I've seen from you by a long shot, that Mac & Chz was dope though.


Vs

Amoutin was weak and over done, conspiracy over a loss was funny, hush vote was rofls, I think Estimate was FIRE might go over some peoples heads, Durant came off very odd I get it but out loud makes no sense. This is probably one of the better verses I have seen from you yet. No real flaws except wording, the opener was played and closer was odd but middle was nice.


Mac n cheese vs estimate= Estimate

Vote- @Galactic

@Galactic

Call an ambulance quick.. scandalous kids are better dead, pal.
When it comes to talent that wins championships, it's never Bengals.
I though this was nice np

I'm doin' me & you're doing you, I'm refusing to unite our actions.
So if I ever take a page out of your book, I'm using it to wipe my ass w/.
Iight

Proving you're unlike the last kid? Your shitty rap is whack indeed.
It doesn't just strain our eyes, that shit'd make 50 packs of Mac & Cheese.
Dope af

My wording's earning every bit, you can't word a clever hit that moist.
And rankings? You won't climb 'actic.. 'cuz your verses never hit that point.
Ok,

He's due to be dissed, brutally ripped & this brute is equipped w/ guns...
If Galactic ever shows some infant tree, he's luring kids w/ drugs.
Dope

Vs...

Re: Salamander vs Galactic
I see you Lookin Down on Alpha w/ attempts of clownin dude
But bro you're never Amountin to him when he's Peaked w/ more crowns than you
Nice wp

Bitches be Doing me daily while you're dead in the sack
Doing you involves more Conspiracy over a Loss than the 911 Attacks
Ok

Reading your verse is a Drag like steering a tugboat
Dog you're persona's so tired & misleading ya whole career is a Hush vote
Lol..pretty nice

You never get pussy while I'm w/ new bitches smashing weekly
It's become so difficult for Estimate he avoids math completely
I mean if I call him s but iunno, his names too long to call him s


Dude you got skills I'll admit but who you stressin to be?
All who follow a Durant knows he's HOF but NEVER the best in the League
Ok...


Iunno I like sals verse better here man but I'm a fan of having rhymes in the mix of bars that also land punches.. Gals verse was nice af too but IMO felt on a punch scale it was even, even wit y'all's best bars so then I went to scheme n got sal here... Good shit y'all


Vote sal

Sal...

Bengals was a horrible stretch not even close to pronounced that way....page out of your book is ehh....Make and cheese was clever...nice....I get the whole climatic/moist thing...but whats a moist hit in a battle?...and the wordplay was ehhh...And infant tree ive seen at least 2 other times and this was the worst play outta those..


Gal....

amountin/peak....played and blahh......911 was wack....feeling the Hush vote lines...nice...Estimate almost flew over my head tbh...I guess callin him S aint so bad and the wording was slick as fuck...I like it dopee....Last bar was weak


Honest I got only 1 bar from Sal that I was truly feeling....Ive seen him come wayyy better....some played shit and some shit it seems you tried to hard to make hit that it didn't...Gal you had some played as well but I got you with 2 bars I was feeling estimate was worded really well

V/Galactic

Call an ambulance quick.. scandalous kids are better dead, pal.
When it comes to talent that wins championships, it's never Bengals.
Cool

I'm doin' me & you're doing you, I'm refusing to unite our actions.
So if I ever take a page out of your book, I'm using it to wipe my ass w/.
Not bad

Proving you're unlike the last kid? Your shitty rap is whack indeed.
It doesn't just strain our eyes, that shit'd make 50 packs of Mac & Cheese.
Pretty funny

My wording's earning every bit, you can't word a clever hit that moist.
And rankings? You won't climb 'actic.. 'cuz your verses never hit that point.
Lol

He's due to be dissed, brutally ripped & this brute is equipped w/ guns...
If Galactic ever shows some infant tree, he's luring kids w/ drugs.
Kinda cool

Vs...


I see you Lookin Down on Alpha w/ attempts of clownin dude
But bro you're never Amountin to him when he's Peaked w/ more crowns than you
Not bad

Bitches be Doing me daily while you're dead in the sack
Doing you involves more Conspiracy over a Loss than the 911 Attacks
Old ass reference, not bad

Reading your verse is a Drag like steering a tugboat
Dog you're persona's so tired & misleading ya whole career is a Hush vote
Cool

You never get pussy while I'm w/ new bitches smashing weekly
It's become so difficult for Estimate he avoids math completely
Cool

Dude you got skills I'll admit but who you stressin to be?
All who follow a Durant knows he's HOF but NEVER the best in the League
I get kevin durant, maybe im missing somethin


Shit this honestly just comes down to preference both had some average shit nothin too crazy to see but I'll give the edge to sal jist barely tho bc galactic had some crazy shit too/QUOTE]

Cry baby ass faggot

Proving you're unlike the last kid? Your shitty rap is whack indeed.
It doesn't just strain our eyes, that shit'd make 50 packs of Mac & Cheese.

vs

Bitches be Doing me daily while you're dead in the sack
Doing you involves more Conspiracy over a Loss than the 911 Attacks
Reading your verse is a Drag like steering a tugboat
Dog you're persona's so tired & misleading ya whole career is a Hush vote

Sal didn't do his usual good shit this battle, Infant tree was forced as fuck, page out your book wasn't executed strongly at all. Gals verse wasn't harsh either, wording felt soft but the concepts felt more consistent.

v/Gal.

Salamander:

Opener was forced, plus didn't like it TBH. Page out of your book is crazy played, I've seen that concept flipped a thousand times. Mac & Cheese was nice, liked it actually. Actic was eh, not crazy about it, felt like the execution was corny. Infant tree was forced, wouldn't it be Infant trees? I think that would have helped that concept a lot, but it was still corny too me, IMO. I think you had a pretty weak verse here, like the beginning stages of writers block, TBH. Not your usual. This verse just completely lacked harshness that I'm accustomed reading from you, bro.

vs

Galactic:

Amountin is a played concept, tbh and your flip was corny. 911 attacks was ok, Hush vote was blahhh/corny. Estimate was dope, I'm not really fond of Initial plays on a name but this was fire, IMO. Durant was wack. Overall, not one of your better verses but pretty consistent here.

I think Gal definitely did edge this barely, IMO. His verse was just a little more consistent. I mean, 2 forced vs 2 corny, 2 played vs 1 played and wacl/corny. So basically Mac & Cheese vs. Estimate and, IMO Estimate was a fresher/more direct PUN. So with that being said, I have to go with...

v/Gal over Sal by Smog's wifey's twat hair.

It doesn't just strain our eyes, that shit'd make 50 packs of Mac & Cheese.
My wording's earning every bit, you can't word a clever hit that moist.
He's due to be dissed, brutally ripped & this brute is equipped w/ guns...
If Galactic ever shows some infant tree, he's luring kids w/ drugs.


vs


Bitches be Doing me daily while you're dead in the sack
Doing you involves more Conspiracy over a Loss than the 911 Attacks
Reading your verse is a Drag like steering a tugboat
Dog you're persona's so tired & misleading ya whole career is a Hush vote
You never get pussy while I'm w/ new bitches smashing weekly
It's become so difficult for Estimate he avoids math completely


Sal rushed n keyd this verse. he usually doesnt have played bars but he had a couple in this one. Galactic surprised me with some dope ass flips in this one. way more consistent and with harder bars overall. good battle though.

v. gal

salamander
Call an ambulance quick.. scandalous kids are better dead, pal.
When it comes to talent that wins championships, it's never Bengals.
nice wordplay here.
I'm doin' me & you're doing you, I'm refusing to unite our actions.
So if I ever take a page out of your book, I'm using it to wipe my ass w/.
lmfao
Proving you're unlike the last kid? Your shitty rap is whack indeed.
It doesn't just strain our eyes, that shit'd make 50 packs of Mac & Cheese.
this was bad here, don't like it
My wording's earning every bit, you can't word a clever hit that moist.
And rankings? You won't climb 'actic.. 'cuz your verses never hit that point.
He's due to be dissed, brutally ripped & this brute is equipped w/ guns...
If Galactic ever shows some infant tree, he's luring kids w/ drugs.
i'm not liking this either, i don't know what happen.

you started off nice, and ripping the kid, but towards the end, ur verse hit a low, I see what you did with the infantry wordplay but it didn't tickle my fancy


Galactic
I see you Lookin Down on Alpha w/ attempts of clownin dude
But bro you're never Amountin to him when he's Peaked w/ more crowns than you
nah, i'm not liking this
Bitches be Doing me daily while you're dead in the sack
Doing you involves more Conspiracy over a Loss than the 911 Attacks
eh, this is okay
Reading your verse is a Drag like steering a tugboat
Dog you're persona's so tired & misleading ya whole career is a Hush vote
rofl, nice punch here
You never get pussy while I'm w/ new bitches smashing weekly
It's become so difficult for Estimate he avoids math completely
[b]nah, more self hype than anythin, not feelin[/]b
Dude you got skills I'll admit but who you stressin to be?
All who follow a Durant knows he's HOF but NEVER the best in the League
this was week here , also you complimented him a bit.

same as salam, u started off nice, but fell of towards the end, your post to diss the fuck out of him not compliment him, the hush reference killed it, if you had more punches like this, ur verse would have been unbeatable


v = salamander.

both battlers where evenly matches here, there verses even started, and fell off in the same area, I felt like I was reading their verses backwards, the reason I'm giving this to sal is because his verse was more technically sound, and his wording was killer, something galactic lacked here.

Call an ambulance quick.. scandalous kids are better dead, pal.
When it comes to talent that wins championships, it's never Bengals.
pretty good, liked the play.
I'm doin' me & you're doing you, I'm refusing to unite our actions.
So if I ever take a page out of your book, I'm using it to wipe my ass w/.
decent
Proving you're unlike the last kid? Your shitty rap is whack indeed.
It doesn't just strain our eyes, that shit'd make 50 packs of Mac & Cheese.
lol this was fresh, was feelin this
My wording's earning every bit, you can't word a clever hit that moist.
And rankings? You won't climb 'actic.. 'cuz your verses never hit that point.
ehh ok.
He's due to be dissed, brutally ripped & this brute is equipped w/ guns...
If Galactic ever shows some infant tree, he's luring kids w/ drugs.
pretty good play, seemed a lil forced, but pulled it off.

vs

I see you Lookin Down on Alpha w/ attempts of clownin dude
But bro you're never Amountin to him when he's Peaked w/ more crowns than you
[B]cool opener, feelin it/B]
Bitches be Doing me daily while you're dead in the sack
Doing you involves more Conspiracy over a Loss than the 911 Attacks
pretty good
Reading your verse is a Drag like steering a tugboat
Dog you're persona's so tired & misleading ya whole career is a Hush vote
this was decent lol
You never get pussy while I'm w/ new bitches smashing weekly
It's become so difficult for Estimate he avoids math completely
good hit
Dude you got skills I'll admit but who you stressin to be?
All who follow a Durant knows he's HOF but NEVER the best in the League
alright closer

this battle was close as hell, could go either way. both came with some good shit. sal had his opener and mac and cheese bar those were fresh...Gal his opener, 911 attack, and a toss up between hush vote and avoiding math but either way in my eyes, i thought gal came more consistent with hits here.

v/Gal

Call an ambulance quick.. scandalous kids are better dead, pal.
When it comes to talent that wins championships, it's never Bengals.
I'm doin' me & you're doing you, I'm refusing to unite our actions.
So if I ever take a page out of your book, I'm using it to wipe my ass w

vs


I see you Lookin Down on Alpha w/ attempts of clownin dude
But bro you're never Amountin to him when he's Peaked w/ more crowns than yo
Reading your verse is a Drag like steering a tugboat
Dog you're persona's so tired & misleading ya whole career is a Hush vote

both had some forced wordplay that just didnt work IMO, climb actic and infant tree from sal were just off imo, bengals kinda works for me so i'll give you that, estimate didn't really make a whole lot of sense from gal and i'm not really a fan of one letter plays. this is a hard one to call but i have gal getting the slight edge for having less misses than sal, could go either way depending on preference i guess tho...

Thought climactic and bengals lines were dope from sal and crown / hush vote were equally dope from gal. Honestly both came consistent it's hard to decide a winner but my VOTE GOES TO SAL because I just thought his lines were witty as fuck. The hush vote line was funny to me and crown was well execute but I just honestly enjoyed sals quotes a bit more. Great battle here guys best of luck moving forward