16 bars max
deadline monday
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16 bars max
deadline monday
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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=46931
hit me up & i'll vote when this drops
i post on sight..this "kids scared" like he's seen a "monsta",
i'll "kill" a "mike" , fatal what makes u think i won't lace up and stomp ya,
as i presume to snap...grab ya head and press ya back in,
u'll pop and crack...then collapse from "fatal actions",
see i "oversee"(outer space) u son "marz" is "building" an "empire" so watch me sky like "stackhouse",
so i saw this "pussy" then "baged" the flow before he could even "let this cat out",
i hold the ruger do u know what 9mm can do to u,
oh u the "shit" well i'm rapbattles own personal "pooper scooper"
i'll impale this kid wit a pen i'll blow his backoff,
fatal u couldn't "beat me" if u "applyed" and they "laid jack off",
my bars r.i.p. god made me a starr before spliff,
u come off hard but we all know yur soft as silk,
a "serial killa" u don't believe u'll get my "drift",
when your found wit out a sound drowned in 2% "milk",
final words:
u can let go or let this boil over like volcanoes,
when attackin i prove my actions are very fatal,
uppin for fatal
i got niggas on the block tryin to get to that big payroll,
u got niggas on the block all they do is fuck wit legos,
-marrzz cutta-
i don't rap and i dn't know marrzz
back up for fatal ations
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i got niggas on the block tryin to get that big payroll,
u got niggas on the block all they do is play wit legos,
-marrz cutta-
i don't rap and know i don't know marrzz
i'll post today, but you don't want me to
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check it,
I'll cut you some slack since you're new here, even though ya shit was rehearsed/
BAttlin Fatal Actions when ya quote is tighter than ya whole verse/
Everything about him's a lie, his verse? he really don't mean it/
Cutta even lies about where his from, cause bitches originated in Venus/
He claims he's from Mars, my verses pack mixture like the Mavericks from Dallas/
HE lacks the talent, left one board now Rapbattles tossin his salad/
This dude is garbage, no way in hell Marz gone defeat these rhymes/
When this dude is the only emcee alive to still use "beat me" lines/
Just dropped somethin simple!
i wasnt really feeling either of the flows ... butFatal was more complex and shit.... so im gna have to go with him on this one
hey yo ill vote up this shit, if u hit up my battle with Ego. just vote on the best battle no dick ridin shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=47886
seein as how it took 5 days for u to write for this i don't feel defeated...nice written though fatal nice
^^^^uppin for votes
^^^lol
I didn't have to write, i typed it in like 5 minutes
uppin
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I have to go with Marzz...
I liked both rhymes, but Marzz hit a bit harder and had this funny ass line...
"i'll impale this kid wit a pen i'll blow his backoff,
fatal u couldn't "beat me" if u "applyed" and they "laid jack off",
Marzz
well I don't know
aside from that I'm still not able to fuckin' vote
I'd say the first didn't make a real sense
the punches were kinda wack
I'm mean this mothafucka spitted 16lines
and got killed by the half (fatal kicked 8)
so it's obvious: fatal had better punches
fuck it
thats what i thoughtQuote:
Originally posted by M.O.C
well I don't know
aside from that I'm still not able to fuckin' vote
I'd say the first didn't make a real sense
the punches were kinda wack
I'm mean this mothafucka spitted 16lines
and got killed by the half (fatal kicked 8)
so it's obvious: fatal had better punches
fuck it
vote fatal
don't forget to poll
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if im gonna be completely honest on this battle i gotta go with marzz. his battle was tight for a newbie. I thought his flow was better. and his punches were funnier.
^^^that's bullshit
he don't get no extra treatment for bein new dude, he's probably just from another site.
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you forgot to poll vote.. so hit this one up...http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=48728 the winner of this one is Fatal!! better pucnhes!!
uppin
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Marrz cutter got this one.........his overall Verse was iller..........and he had Iller Punches.............Vote=marzz cutter
VOTE- Fatal Actions... better punches... but yea... Mavericks suck...lol
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Nice rhymes by both......... But if i could vote this one would go 2
===========================>Fatal Actions
please poll!
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fatal action gets my vote beacuse he was a real active action in this battle wit punches that kill kids man
vote:fatal