YOU SPIT FIRST BITCH YOU KNOW THA RULES
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YOU SPIT FIRST BITCH YOU KNOW THA RULES
checkin in droppin a max of 12 a min 10
playa u dont kno me so y u callin me a bitch u said tha wrong things now ur layin in a ditch wit a retarded twitch//
sticthin ya mouth shut so u wont be able to spit any lyrics tat u got conjurin up in ya mind, i just cursed ya body and u can call me tha male witch//
leavin ya displayed out on a cross viciously wounded sapped of all energy and mentally drained got blood on my hands and there foreva stained//
u could neva go toe to toe wit me let alone beat me in tis verbal industry, got many rhymes packed away in my head for me to recite em will mean tat ur gonna be dead and not remain//
on tis solid platform just got ya a new identity and ya whole character has been transformed//
got caught in a match where u thought u could win but ended up lossin goes to say u havent proven ur self to be a worthy opponent so im lettin ya be informed//
havin ya bein burried in a open casket cuz u wouldnt have survived my lyrical shots even if u did wear a flack jacket//
u thought u had it but u thought wrong couldnt come close to bein hot even if u were Alicia Keys wearin a thong, just face it u couldnt hack it so let close tis and let me bag it u fuckin fagget//
leavin ya shocked cus i let off a shot wit my gun tat was cocked and i let it glow, and tha only thing movin on u was tha amount of blood flow//
couldnt come wit a precise amounts of hits on me so u have been lyrically dismissed so ill cut ya wrist give ya neck a twist drink a fifth now tis verbal assult is over its time to go//
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YOUR SHIT DONT MAKE SINCE
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just fuckin post ya verse and wats wit tis 100 charatcer bullshit i find it kinda ridiculous if u ask me
waitin for tis bitch to post his verse so we can sum votes on tis uppin for tis dude to post it shouldnt take ya tha whole night to do it come on now
yo im a godly fingure remember this face/cause imma about 2 erase every dream u chase,while ur bodys still ur mind begins 2 pace//
every time i see "fresh meat i think lunch-time/but u need more in a rap than a weak punch-line//
how u gunna spit with outaskin,u stalkin/challengin me is like killin ur self and buyin ur own coffen//
little pansy lucky im keyin u say ur gunna end my run/haven lost a battle scince minus,now im havin fun//
what makes u think u can stand on the peda stool without even fallin/listen 2 ur concince *dont battle* ur confused mind is callin//
who got line that can retract then replace without a refrain/how many people can speak 1 bar that can make u go insane and stick in side ur head till it over takes ur brain//
so befor u decide 2 spit think about ur health and how ull need help/remember ur only diggin ur own coffen u juss rip a whole into urself//
{NOW FOR ME TO GET IN YOUR 1000 POST ASS}
MY PUNCHES GLAZE HIS FACE BAM BOOM!!!!/SHARP AS RAZOR'S AND I SLASH AND DASH //SWIFT AS A ''NIGHT'' IN THE ''NIGHT''//I LEAVE CUT'S FROM HIS ''HEAD'' 2 HIS ASS//I LEFT ACIDIC
SERVERELY ''GASHED''//BLEEDING FROM ALL OVER HIS BODY//
MY LYRIC'S ARE TIGHT KNOCK YOU DOWN WITH HALF MY MIGHT!! HE GET'S UP LOOKING WITH FEAR AND FRIGHT//IM A BEAT THIS MAN LIKE THE BUC'S DID THE RAIDER'S//CHEW HIM LYRICLY LIKE I WAS A ''GATOR''//U DONT FEEL ME THEN YOU A HATOR//MY GRADDE AND AGE AIT THE ''MATTER''//WHEN I BEAT YO ASS IT'S GONA MAKE IT EVEN SAD'ER//
IM HACKING YOU WITH LYRIC'S//IM A SAY THIS OUT LOUD SO YOU HEAR IT!!! MY FLOW YOU FEAR IT!!!!//SO MY MUSIC WAZZ BUMPEN ON HOTT ''97'' THIS GUY DIDENT WANT 2 HEAR IT//HIS PUNCHES ARE LIKE SARDIENS LEFT IN A ''CAN''//THEY JUST OLD AND ROTTEN MANN!!!!![2 THIS RAPP GAME YOUR A DISGRACE TOOK MAH LYRICAL ''BAT'' AND BEAT IN HIS FACE
FINISHED
SORRY i TOKE SO LONG i JUST WANTED TO [MURDER YOU BITCH]
uppin tha votes
time for me to win this battle
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EMmh Both came tight MC i didnt like the Style Switch u should have gone wit the same style
Acidic
on tis solid platform just got ya a new identity and ya whole character has been transformed//
got caught in a match where u thought u could win but ended up lossin goes to say u havent proven ur self to be a worthy opponent so im lettin ya be informed//
^^^^NICE...i wus feelin thiz
havin ya bein burried in a open casket cuz u wouldnt have survived my lyrical shots even if u did wear a flack jacket//
u thought u had it but u thought wrong couldnt come close to bein hot even if u were Alicia Keys wearin a thong, just face it u couldnt hack it so let close tis and let me bag it u fuckin fagget//
^^^^
LOng but comedy.....lol Alicia keys wearing thong...she keeps on fallin...lool
MC KILLA
who got line that can retract then replace without a refrain/how many people can speak 1 bar that can make u go insane and stick in side ur head till it over takes ur brain//
^^^^^^^ NICE but u kept it basic Vocab.....
IM A BEAT THIS MAN LIKE THE BUC'S DID THE RAIDER'S//CHEW HIM LYRICLY LIKE I WAS A ''GATOR''//
^^^ wusnt feelin thiz at all...lol Why am RAIDERS FAN GOD DAMMIT...But am still seeing basics nice done though
I have to Conclude thiz by saying
Vote: Acidic
because his punches were better and more creative
Not bad, close shit actually.....i'll explain below.
Amount of punches=mc killa
Strength of punches=acidic
Cleverness=acidic
Wordplay=mc killa
Descriptiveness=acidic
metas=acidic
multis=no one
overall=acidic
Even tho you had a choppy flow your punches were strong and clever.
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hrmz..... i think Acidic did JUST take this one. Just a bit more appealin.
VOTE => Acidic <=
Pleaz vote here now.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=1
im up 3-0 in tha text area but 2-0 in tha poll araea uppin for sum more votes come on yall where yall at
I thought your bitch ass was going to bed
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both verses wuz puny, i can barely vote on this one.. i seen sum played lines and a cuple of lines off other sites but i want say no names thou!! (sike)
but yeah, dis shyt wuz weak ass fuck, i read each verse carefully and didnt see nothing eye catching but to vote i'll have to sat T for just str8 commin at accid..accid wuz aiight ok but slack'd punches
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mc killa t was hilarious and for real the other guy was a punk ass,. killa had betta flow and puncks
vote killa
YO KILLA RETURN THE FAVOR http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=44916
MC killa totally took this one. He dominated at the begining middle and end. what's with the retarded twitch stuff?
i like your imagination dog kinda hesitant in the begining and i liked the partevery time i see "fresh meat i think lunch-time/but u need more in a rap than a weak punch-line//
how u gunna spit with outaskin,u stalkin/challengin me is like killin ur self and buyin ur own coffen//
but this was hot tou thought u had it but u thought wrong couldnt come close to bein hot even if u were Alicia Keys wearin a thong
but my vote killa
anyways uppin for more votes fuckin newbs dont kno anything but fuck it lets get tis thing rollin once again
acidic had nice punches and was cleaver with his lines
on tis solid platform just got ya a new identity and ya whole character has been transformed//
got caught in a match where u thought u could win but ended up lossin goes to say u havent proven ur self to be a worthy opponent so im lettin ya be informed//
ILL
havin ya bein burried in a open casket cuz u wouldnt have survived my lyrical shots even if u did wear a flack jacket//
u thought u had it but u thought wrong couldnt come close to bein hot even if u were Alicia Keys wearin a thong, just face it u couldnt hack it so let close tis and let me bag it u fuckin fagget//
Very Clever
vote acidic
ya this goes to acidic you stupid ass bitch mc killa t, you go to every fuckin battle and say, i quoted this shit, i'll vote on this shit if you go and vote for my shit and vote for me and whoever votes for me I will vote for them>>>>>>?<<<<<
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46758
and he puts his battle there, your a lil bitch mc killa, you can't get a win so ya go n pull off that shit, get outta here