tRiLL vs 13th Disciple

yo the other one i fucked up i forgot to make it a battle thread....

rules:
20 lines max
no rick rydin
no crew votes

yo check in 13th disciple so i know ur gunna drop yo verse

Didn't Know This Wuz Here......But...........................Checkin In Son............................................... ..............1

yo i'm a drop mine when i get home today aiit....i'm at school now so yaw gunnna have to wait yo u wanna drop first???????

It Doesn't Matter.....I Gotta Pick Up My Son..........I'll Be Back...........So Whoever Drops First Drops...............................

A YO 13TH GO CHECK OUT MY BATTLE AND WHEN YOUR SHIT IS DONE THEN i WILL HIT THIS BATTLE UP CAUSE i KNOW YOU GONE MURDER THIS CAT!!!!!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=46292

hit my battle with killah kassius and i'll peep this when you both drop .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......

Aiight.....I'm FIxin To Drop Right Quick........So......Just Hit THis.....Whenever U Get DOne Prewriting I Mean Gettin Home.......1

*13th picks up phone...............makes a phone call............*

....r-r-r-ring......r-r-r-ring.........r-r-r-ri......c-click...............














Trill: Hello?

Operator: U Have A Collect Call From.............'ITs Disciple....Pick
Up Bitch'.... Will U Accept The Charges?

Trill: Yeah.............Who U Calli.......

Disciple: SHUTUP....I'm Callin 'Collect' Cuz I'm Commin Down The
'Middle' Respondin To Ur 'Ad' Wit A 'Sprint'/'Dialating' Ur
'Eyez' When My Verses 'Drop' Leavin U Blinded Wit An
Asian Squint..- - <--------

U COuldn't Be Hotter Than Me Sellin Bean Pies In THe
Summa Pimpin A Tux Wit A Muslim Name Of Brother
Kadifah/U-aNd-I-Tee-Y? Cuz An Eazy Victory In This
'Tournament' I'm 'Tiger Woods' While Ur Game Is Ugly
Like Queen Latifah <--------- no...seriously

Trill: yo.....yo......i'ma.....

Disciple: STOP! Sip On A 'Mountain Dew' And Cool Off Cuz I'm
Not Even Spittin At 'Code Red'/I'm 'Junkin' Ur Rhymes
Like 'Sanford And Son' Prepare Urself Cuz This Really
Is The Big One 'Fred' <----- nice....

If I Was At Ur Location I'll Beat U Wit Ur 'Phone' Cuz
That Would Be The First Ur 'Sounds' Would Be 'Heard'/
If U Defeatin Me Is Ur 'Theory' Let Me Re-'Mind' U Thats
A Thought Insanely Absurd <---- I still hate him.......

Trill: yo......i'ma spit at........

Disciple: I Said Shut It 'Youngin' Don't Make Me 'Holla Back' I'm
Already Leavin U Like 'Damm'/Make A 'Goal' For Urself
Stop Participatin In 'Kickin' Rhymes U Remind Me Of A
Retarded 'Mia Hamm' <------blah...

U Couldn't Be 'Super' Even If U Supervised 'Sonics' Cuz
Disciple Is Ur Lyrical 'Gary Payton'/*beep*...Bitch Stop
Makin Sounds Wit Ur Mouth Tryin To Duck I Know Ur
Faggot Azz Ain't Even Got Call Waitin<-------yes indeed

Trill: .....yo.....u couldn't.....

Disciple: No I Couldn't But I Did I Shouldn't Have But I Must/
Notice How I 'Eat.....Eat......Eat Emcees' After This
Battle Switchin My Avatar To 'Can-I-Bus'(T)..........click...

Disciple: hello.........HELLO!!!........................tric k.........


























*And1*

haha its called havin a life and not havin 1000 posts in 2 days, disciple open up the window and look at the sunshine every now and then its good for the skin..............haha i'm a start writing now aiit i'm a drop soon

*Trill picks up phone… calls 13th Disciple on collect… then realizes he can afford to make normal phone calls*

This cat still gotta explain his lines with "quotation marks" and added comments,
He's as smart as dinosaurs n I’m a make this cat extinct like he got hit with a comet,
< ------ alrite one…..lol something disciple would do
You drop verses so gently try n keep yo lines fresh n clean so I aint gunna call you a bitch I’ll call you a lady,
I asked D to join the army to save himself a little bit of dignity but he said “Na man I already signed up fo the Navy”, (get it navy ppl r gay yea most of you should get this),
It’s like I’m in disguise cause even if I came up to ya n revealed my identity,
Your low IQ brain radar still couldn’t pick up with the signal that I was an enemy,

Decides to call disciple……
Trill: Yo you probably live in yo mom’s basement that’s why you gotta call me collect,
I’m a be the cause of yo “murder” you so wack even if you beat “mystery” you wouldn’t get “respect” (M.M is the winner of RB’s BOW)
*hangs up imaginary online phone*

Yo record is 31-13 it’s cuse you sit in front of yo monitor all day n test and fail herbs,
My record’s 5-1 is cuse I trip out on blunts watchin Andromeda all day test n inhale herbs,
Look at-chu fu u pitiful u 23 n instead of getting into real battles you on the internet,
Do I have to explain this battle to-ya cuse I’m gettin too “intelligent” fo yo “intellect”,
Disciple always talks about dick riding on polls like he himself was a hoe,
Yo structure is like a Hydro Electric Dam without water… very weak flow,
Leavin bones exposing like bomb explosions cuse I attack victims vigorously n viciously,
Yo style cant hold strong u shuld consider goin out side getting unda the sun and get some vitamin-D,
This dude’s cheap like a vending machine cuse any time for a dollar he’ll serve-you,
Disciple’s mo sadistic then Adolph you so mentally twisted not even hell deserve-you, (Adolph Hitler).

doin these “*” r just pointless and this is elite you don’t have to do “this” peeps would get it here and by the way I think this is one of your first battles here*

you did over 20 lines

I didn't really feel either verses much but I reckon tRill came a bit better...I don't know bout Disciples verse, seen much better, didn't feel it at all, tRill had a few good lines which took it out.....

This dude’s cheap like a vending machine cuse any time for a dollar he’ll serve-you,
Disciple’s mo sadistic then Adolph you so mentally twisted not even hell deserve-you,

^^That was aiight, just came harder than 13th....Pz....

aiit thnx meadskillz..........yo uppin fo some votes.........what do i have to do for votes go advertize in other peeps threads??????????????????????????????

idont know hardto call,but i think trill came a lil bit harder . i got madrespect forboth cats but i think that TrIll Tookthisone .... no disrespect

Yeah Umm.....Good ComeBack......But Damn.....U Rode The Hell out OF My Verse......U COuldn't Come Up WIt Ur Own Shit?

Another good battle. But Trill did come in a lil harder cauz he flipped it. So beta punchez.

Vote=> Trill <=

Vote here now.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=46496

going with trill on this one....

just wasnt feelin the phone call thing from either.....

you did feed though man.... this is in elite you shouldnt need to

anyhow trill still edged it.
13 woulda taken it but the format with the emphasis on his punches and the phone call thing just made me feel it less

Yeah....Uppin This THing....I Guess......I Thought IT Was different....Tryin SUmthin New....But Not All Cats Feel It.......Good Battle Or Whateva....Blah Blah Blah <-----feel this........And Uppin............1

i was all set to give it to D until the last part of Trill's verse. that's where trill took it .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......

.................................................. ....peeps forgot to poll vote.............................................. ..........................

fuckin hell its like a KO cuse i got 5 votes already peeps just didnt poll vote DAMN IT>>>...>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.........>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>UPPIN

Bah! fuck that 13th got this.<