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10lines max, Not 2in 1 line, or 1bar equalls 2 lines, just 10 lines..OK
Explained and Poll votes will decide
No Crew/D.Ryding/or Hate votes
No Recycling...that means no bitting off each other verses either
No Prewrites...all keystyle, be honest with it
check in and we will have a 45 minutes keying limit....ready?
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imma rip out ya heart and lungs and replace them with ma verbal toxins /
im more deadlier than a group of water Mocasins /
i punch "lines" in ya chest to give you scoliosis /
i saw ya mom askin for creame fillin at hostes /
these brutal lyrics are gonna beat ya ass worse than a round trip to a prison /
the only way you'd flow looser than me is if you lost your tendons /
let me mention the suspension ya life has when ya clentchin /
on here rappin like some kind of minister /
my raw sensability is enough for a finisher /
i make you hotter than having scarlet fever..... im the only mutha fucka to become the lyrical sinister /
holla
had to hurry thunder storm is starting
yo i'ma hit up this shit when it's done, but can ya hit up mine
kerrdezzy vs. punk'd
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**Nas beat drops**
**Gun Go's Off**
**they shootin**
its like all he pressed was the long key on his KeyBoard, the way this amauters got boards::
They "Blank"...cause we see threw you<--->My AVATAR SHOT YOURS::
Peep tha avatars...lol
He's more pussy than a 80's-Play::(cats)
dam his punches suck, even his "bites" dont connect like "Macy Grey::
smoke I'm splitting you, especially cause your in the N.othing B.ut S.oft L.yrics crew::
Dont worry you'll still be 4-0 after I win, cause even your loss dont want to stick with you::
LiL hopes we, dont see, how I leave his verse a "lil smokey"::
Pussy-cat wheres Josie?....I'm at the top NOW, while your like aids patients, your getting ill SLOWLY::
Rock your Bell..south, like I droped your Nokia::
after this, everyone will be glad your gone, just like that show"Cita"::
Anoying MuFukah........Rise
shit was hot but you callin me a mutha fucka ???....................................??
uppin for votes
Lol.....yep..............................
J/k.............yes I am.............not........lol
Up this MuFuaka for votes.........
uppin for sum votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...................holla
i say Rise coz he had some good punches like the avatar line...tight but smokey ur shit was a tight aswell i just think rise had the edge
vote doesnt count did not poll vote.........................REMEMBER TO POLL VOTE PEOPLE...................peace
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remember to poll vote aswell
tha aviator line took it for rise i'd say,liked both dudes flows,thought it was close but as i have to decide i'm goin rise.
Poll = Rise,return tha favor,peace.
1-0 your favur holla peeps and i'll return the favur............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...................................peace
im goin wit lilsmokey on this his punches connected better than rise's did...vote = lilsmokey.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.
aight thanx 1-1 uppin
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More explained than that people..and more Poll Votes Plz
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Rise got this one with some nasty punchlines...the other dewd was just plain and simple..rise..just shined more..
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i like rise for the harder punches, it was a good close battle
vote=rise
hit up my shit, kerrdezzy vs. irrelivance
my vote goes ta rise becuase of way better punchlines and flow
vote=rise
reurn tha favor and vote for my battlesw against newrapper and tha one against NH.
Up Plz...........we need more Poll votes
CMon People...thanx
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Rise was better with punches and word play. like a few others said, his avatar line was good but then again his whole verse was. lilsmokey u was good just didnt have the creativity and flow that rise had. good battle though.
Vote = Rise
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my vote goes to my nigga rise.
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slob on my knob like
corn on the cob, check
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rise ripped this shit...
better punches and flow...
avator line killed this kid alone...
great spit as always dawg...
other dude was tight but rise took advantage of spittin second...
nice battle anyway...
peep my battle vs. pestilence...
YO...ARE YALL THERE?....VOTE PLZ
ITS Simlpe....explain than POLL..thanx
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