10 lines, 24 hours from checks, check.
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10 lines, 24 hours from checks, check.
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yo i need to extend this til midnight tomorrow eastern standard time
cool...so another 24 hours?
ext til tomorrow midnight est time.
no exceptions
me losin to u would be rare, but ya cant handle the truth, like i rather be takin a dare
never improved, what ya scared? u elevatin would be like acrophobics takin the stairs
never happenin...
me believe ya lies? thats only if i befriend a liar, but for u? im sprayin mac 10's to fire
ur likely tend to retire knowin u wouldnt be vile lint wagin war against a dryer
u sound shit when spittin ya nouns, so for me it's a breeze to be killin this clown
sick of me now? ur jus chump change beggin to be sacrificed' like bums at indian grounds
u may think that ur dope,. u dont hold a gram to mine, wit ur stammered lines
think ur hammerin dimes? what you fail to notice is "She's The Man" like amanda bynes
u've been a bitch but i've got the mind of a hero, "im better than u" ur lyin to me tho?
coward aint been honest once, been lion since birth..u got the sign of a leo! lol
fuck totally forgot bout this.... take my dq
naw, i wont take a dq.
if ur just sayin "fuck it i wont drop" then it is what it is..
but if u wanna key somethin up and let the votes ride im more about that honestly..
no i seriously fergot about this, my b. take the dq.
do u wanna key somethin up?
my bad i just dont wanna take a dq win, lol.
if u wanna lemme know ill extend it..if not ill take it..its w.e
ugh okay ext til 12pm est tomorrow?
im gunna drop this fool faster then tiger woods and his endorsements,
his skills are lacking, just look at his past performances,
tried to sign up for the LLL but got denied fast,
gas is 4 bucks but i wouldn't pay to see this whack ass rap,
clownin around FL, but hes the thing from fantastic four,
ive heard youve phallin, notice his ass his dropped to the floor,
I shoot to kill, lee harvey oswalt percision ill snipe phan quicker than JFK,
With your pathetic rap skills i saw you get sniped by RPK
I got mods and vets, all covered and surrounding me,
he asked for another round, but im done with him, fuck him, fuck another round 3
blah keystyle
u've been a bitch but i've got the mind of a hero, "im better than u" ur lyin to me tho?
coward aint been honest once, been lion since birth..u got the sign of a leo!
vs.
I shoot to kill, lee harvey oswalt percision ill snipe phan quicker than JFK,
With your pathetic rap skills i saw you get sniped by RPK
Weak battle. You each only had one quotable and Phan Man's was the better of the two. Jeffry, your punch would've landed much harder if the setup would've been worded differently. I still think Phan Man would've took this either way though. That closer was pretty dope. Keep elevatin' though.
'preciate the votes
1 - 0 uppin..
u've been a bitch but i've got the mind of a hero, "im better than u" ur lyin to me tho?
coward aint been honest once, been lion since birth..u got the sign of a leo! lol
Decent multi
vs.
I shoot to kill, lee harvey oswalt percision ill snipe phan quicker than JFK,
With your pathetic rap skills i saw you get sniped by RPK
moi? I'm flattered. The rhyming was a little off though
I gotta give this one to Phan. Even though the lion/lyin' wordplay sounds played, he used it in a way different from the regular. This wasn't a very good battle.
V/Phan
u've been a bitch but i've got the mind of a hero, "im better than u" ur lyin to me tho?
coward aint been honest once, been lion since birth..u got the sign of a leo! lol
vs
nothin'
weak battle...nothin really hit from jeff's stuff but some had ok concepts and potential to be at least a decent punch, its just that i think wording really hurt him.
v/ phan
PHANMAN
me losin to u would be rare, but ya cant handle the truth, like i rather be takin a dare
never improved, what ya scared? u elevatin would be like acrophobics takin the stairs
never happenin...
nice setup good multi usage and good creativity when it comes to the metaphore
me believe ya lies? thats only if i befriend a liar, but for u? im sprayin mac 10's to fire
ur likely tend to retire knowin u wouldnt be vile lint wagin war against a dryer
nice wordplay good creativity nice concept flip
u sound shit when spittin ya nouns, so for me it's a breeze to be killin this clown
sick of me now? ur jus chump change beggin to be sacrificed' like bums at indian grounds
again good creativity
u may think that ur dope,. u dont hold a gram to mine, wit ur stammered lines
think ur hammerin dimes? what you fail to notice is "She's The Man" like amanda bynes
nice multi usage didnt get the concept flip here?????
u've been a bitch but i've got the mind of a hero, "im better than u" ur lyin to me tho?
coward aint been honest once, been lion since birth..u got the sign of a leo! lol
too stretched
yeah to be honest...dont feel like makin a breakdown vote here...
phan man took it clearly...had some ok punches in there, decent lines...acrophobic n leo bars were decisive and quotable...
PHANMAN
me losin to u would be rare, but ya cant handle the truth, like i rather be takin a dare
never improved, what ya scared? u elevatin would be like acrophobics takin the stairs
never happenin...
me believe ya lies? thats only if i befriend a liar, but for u? im sprayin mac 10's to fire
ur likely tend to retire knowin u wouldnt be vile lint wagin war against a dryer
u sound shit when spittin ya nouns, so for me it's a breeze to be killin this clown
sick of me now? ur jus chump change beggin to be sacrificed' like bums at indian grounds
u may think that ur dope,. u dont hold a gram to mine, wit ur stammered lines
think ur hammerin dimes? what you fail to notice is "She's The Man" like amanda bynes
u've been a bitch but i've got the mind of a hero, "im better than u" ur lyin to me tho?
coward aint been honest once, been lion since birth..u got the sign of a leo! lol
Had alot of good creativity metaphores and nice concept flips. Also came with a few multies. Overall improvement on this drop. Wasnt really feeling the closer no hate but
too stretched.
Jeffrey
im gunna drop this fool faster then tiger woods and his endorsements,
his skills are lacking, just look at his past performances,
this is were wording messed u up here threw off this opener no hate
tried to sign up for the LLL but got denied fast,
gas is 4 bucks but i wouldn't pay to see this whack ass rap,
clownin around FL, but hes the thing from fantastic four,
ive heard youve phallin, notice his ass his dropped to the floor,
I shoot to kill, lee harvey oswalt percision ill snipe phan quicker than JFK,
With your pathetic rap skills i saw you get sniped by RPK
better punch of the verse here overall setup was well executed
I got mods and vets, all covered and surrounding me,
he asked for another round, but im done with him, fuck him, fuck another round 3
Jeffrey
No hate here just not on of ur best verses i seen from you. Wording threw u off a lot here. Just need to flip off concepts better
.im gunna drop this fool faster then tiger woods and his endorsements,
his skills are lacking, just look at his past performances
u shoulda put something to do with his performance on the 1st line then flipped the
tigerwoods line on the second.
MVGT: Phanman
Just he had much of an overall improvement on his drop just seen more signs of creativity wordplay and concept flips. Jeff No hate just wording definitely hurt u alot as well as how u were setting up ur punches.