10 lines
24 Hours
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10 lines
24 Hours
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post8118227
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...190/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...154/index.html
hope the links work lol
24 hours from when you started the topic i guess..good luck
Check..Links coming ina min
the deadline is like in 2 hours, right? i'll edit this post when im done...
Well you cant edit ya posts just drop..im almost done writing..imma post my verse den links
devil lmao, swagga jackin fag & challengin cai was a dumb thing
wack type & couldnt spit like arch if you merged with his tonge ring*
imma murder this kid, im off the top cuz im known for poppin lids
yeah you spent alot time in the vault,flipin punches from the vids
i'll have all of your homeys pourin out Hennessey after I take ya life
you ain't the banga type;
......you'd have to become a referee just to gain some stripes
plus his bitch is on my dick; like really she swallows it all B
but im ritalin to this kid;..so of course im puttin a stop to this A.D**
so i’ll keep this brief.. like I’m droppin an essential case
coz as for that verse?
he either stole "OR bit"..like a black hole robbing celestial space
*-he tries to change his ryhme style like archtypes
**-a.d (attention disorder)
You gotta hour...quick lil verse fa ya
LOL
gotta change my whole structure n style completely
some quick expo's
he set the battle for yesterday, 10 lines due in one hour...i couldnt do it yesterday
ten/tension...rest should be easy...
Be serious, only reason makin you hopeful is maybe swayin few votes through
But i'll be aimin to smoke you and have ten missin like im playin sudoku
Shit im makin is so cool and a bar of mine would ruin a half of his
You loosin the battle quick cuz i keep tension on my balls like doin a straddle split
ya stupid n arrogant its blatant ya useless, you shud be takin a few tips
Statin the truth prick see i stay over ten lines...without breaking the rules bitch
Rape n abuse kids like a molester may, my spit? nothing hotter ya ever made
Time? need a lot of to get away cuz i'll X tension...couldnt be bothered on yesterday
Lot of ya flesh decays when im maimin ya chest sooo the basement's ya next home
Face it ya text blows you only mentioned as a legend havin your name in the expo's
ArchDevil,
2015
devil lmao, swagga jackin fag & challengin cai was a dumb thing
wack type & couldnt spit like arch if you merged with his tonge ring*
i'll have all of your homeys pourin out Hennessey after I take ya life
you ain't the banga type;
......you'd have to become a referee just to gain some stripes
plus his bitch is on my dick; like really she swallows it all B
but im ritalin to this kid;..so of course im puttin a stop to this A.D**
vs
Lot of ya flesh decays when im maimin ya chest sooo the basement's ya next home
Face it ya text blows you only mentioned as a legend havin your name in the expo's
vgt tension, arch needs to work on his set ups
devil lmao, swagga jackin fag & challengin cai was a dumb thing
wack type & couldnt spit like arch if you merged with his tonge ring*
imma murder this kid, im off the top cuz im known for poppin lids
yeah you spent alot time in the vault,flipin punches from the vids
i'll have all of your homeys pourin out Hennessey after I take ya life
you ain't the banga type;
......you'd have to become a referee just to gain some stripes
vs.
ya stupid n arrogant its blatant ya useless, you shud be takin a few tips
Statin the truth prick see i stay over ten lines...without breaking the rules bitch
tension came harder in this one, pretty easily. arch you need to work on landing your punches better and coming up with setups than land the punch. both need to be a little bit more creative, no hate. elevate.
v- tension
ups
Lets get some votes..
will rtf
devil lmao, swagga jackin fag & challengin cai was a dumb thing
wack type & couldnt spit like arch if you merged with his tonge ring*
i'll have all of your homeys pourin out Hennessey after I take ya life
you ain't the banga type;
......you'd have to become a referee just to gain some stripes
vs
Be serious, only reason makin you hopeful is maybe swayin few votes through
But i'll be aimin to smoke you and have ten missin like im playin sudoku
this was fuckin' nice.
damn. I woulda though ArchD coulda taken this after readin his opener but the rest of the verse didnt really compare to his opener, had he kept it up i woulda given him the vote but i couldnt find anything decent or hit after that, I think Ten/Caiyo came decent enough to win.
v/ Caiyo/Tension
Wow,really one sided guys....
Flow:Tension
Punches Tension
Personals:Tension
Arch work on set up yes ! lol and your punches
v/Tension
lmfao...yeah appreciate the votes fellas haha
thanks for the battle man
Quote:
Originally Posted by ArchDevil
really don't do to much textin but its whatever
good battle hell
i'll have all of your homeys pourin out Hennessey after I take ya life
you ain't the banga type;
......you'd have to become a referee just to gain some stripes
set up seemed sorta irrelevant to the played bunch, but it was okish..seein as how the concepts been used countless times. ok punch nevertheless
plus his bitch is on my dick; like really she swallows it all B
but im ritalin to this kid;..so of course im puttin a stop to this A.D**
semi-creative nameplay here, punch still connected tho.
vs
Lot of ya flesh decays when im maimin ya chest sooo the basement's ya next home
Face it ya text blows you only mentioned as a legend havin your name in the expo's
your best bar, it was the only one in my eyes in which the concept, flow, creativity, and execution was shown decently.
i see tension takin this pretty comfortably, reason being he came or atleast was more creative on the personal, nameplay, punch side of things. arch was ok but some punches and nameflips didnt connect how maybe u woulda thought. the x tension line, coulda been worded into a punch, it felt that in the bar the only thing there was the nameplay, but if it doesnt follow some sort of connectin punch then its useless, really. still tho there were weak sides on both parts, caiyo i didnt like the referee line really cause that meta has been abused before i was born prolly. still tho u came more direct and had the better verse in my eyes. arch if all your set ups followed with a decent punch at best, i think u woulda taken this cause tension only had a couple jabs in. regardless, he took this for more punches, decent drop for both but keep battlin is all i can say and shit like punches, originality, creativity will come easier.
with that said..
vote - tension