24 hours to drop 16 lines, good luck.
my votes were in these matches.
emc vs fh
jeff vs gabriel
knowp vs winning
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24 hours to drop 16 lines, good luck.
my votes were in these matches.
emc vs fh
jeff vs gabriel
knowp vs winning
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Open up Front Lines, Jeffs all over it at first sight
with 10 battles open-he's got to win one right?
this ain't a fair fight! I shouldn't battle kids at such a low level
I'm Usain Bolt racing dudes with legs made of plastic and metal
your wins are fishy- I'm a whole diffrent kettle- your as boring as fuck
you must know you suck- no-one will vote for you, however much you 'up'
Rap is more than just words? Jeff You need some home truths
IT REALLY ISN'T! No-ones interested in seeing your dance moves!
I'm too smooth your not gifted- your just a lonley emo
read his open mikes, he's more depressed than the poor fucks at chemo
on the real jeffro- why'd you spend so much of your time here bro?
1100 posts since you joined in april?!? I pm'd you a link to pornhub yo
you dumb ass hoe--I'm harder than the whole elite four
I can write pokemon refrences and still know I'll wipe the floor
please don't come back with anything boring and shitty
you've got 20 hours....take your time. write something witty.
78 posts since '05? where the hell have you been for the last 6 years?
hes clicky, leavin his depressed whore is what his bitch fears,
broken telephone lines, yet telemarketers still offer their nigerian scams,
this a suicide mission, i got you strapped like a suicide arminian man,
on the playgrounds he was the pickle in the middle thats what he plays,
after thats done he hit up guys he is the middle he likes bisexual 3-ways,
call him charmin, not charming the way this dude whipes my ass,
gone for so long hes not even in the rankings, hes worse than the dude in dead last,
forget about all those lines, he doesnt know what im talking about,
tatooted my dick so his chick can get some knew words in her mouth,
you ride my ass which sickens me to death i ride a beamer,
i'll body him up send him away like anthony wiener,
ill grill his bitch on the grill, his chick rocks her ass on my patio,
remember my beamer? your punk ass thought it was worse than an audi...oh,
this fool is whack, i won't remember this fuck,
thought i had a day off, till his wack ass set this battle up.
blah. keystyle. ill have 3 links by the 24 hours is due.
bump
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=452219
2 links to go
bump
Open for votes.
punches - Jeffry
flow - Jeffry
wordplay/nameplay - Jeffry
creativity - Jeffry
personals - Audio
4 - 1
both had some ok and weak moments..but in terms of coming more direct i'd say Audio took that easily with the personals. vote would've been different had they been personals + punches at the same time..but Jeff came slightly better coming more consistent throughout the drop..felt both started off bars pretty weak and closed them poorly too...i seen punches thrown but it was either the wording or delivery that hurt the potential. it seems pretty close but the execution of punches and creativity on J's side won my vote in this one.
vote -> Jeffry
link -> http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...230/index.html
no hate to either, jeff u gettin there, i see u.. good shit. 1
Well since i dont have 50 posts, ima give my opinion on this lol
Open up Front Lines, Jeffs all over it at first sight
with 10 battles open-he's got to win one right?
^ actually liked this, nice personal n pretty good punch
this ain't a fair fight! I shouldn't battle kids at such a low level
I'm Usain Bolt racing dudes with legs made of plastic and metal
^ not feelin this
your wins are fishy- I'm a whole diffrent kettle- your as boring as fuck
you must know you suck- no-one will vote for you, however much you 'up'
^ good personal, ok line
Rap is more than just words? Jeff You need some home truths
IT REALLY ISN'T! No-ones interested in seeing your dance moves!
^ ehh, dont like it
I'm too smooth your not gifted- your just a lonley emo
read his open mikes, he's more depressed than the poor fucks at chemo
^ decent punch, but not really feelin it, not hard hittin
on the real jeffro- why'd you spend so much of your time here bro?
1100 posts since you joined in april?!? I pm'd you a link to pornhub yo
^ another good personal, made me smile, nice line
you dumb ass hoe--I'm harder than the whole elite four
I can write pokemon refrences and still know I'll wipe the floor
^ not that good
please don't come back with anything boring and shitty
you've got 20 hours....take your time. write something witty.
^ weak finisher, felt you just put this up to complete the 16 lines
78 posts since '05? where the hell have you been for the last 6 years?
hes clicky, leavin his depressed whore is what his bitch fears,
^ decent, maybe could've delivered it better
broken telephone lines, yet telemarketers still offer their nigerian scams,
this a suicide mission, i got you strapped like a suicide arminian man,
^ good punch
on the playgrounds he was the pickle in the middle thats what he plays,
after thats done he hit up guys he is the middle he likes bisexual 3-ways,
^ eh, kinda corny lol, but it was alright
call him charmin, not charming the way this dude whipes my ass,
gone for so long hes not even in the rankings, hes worse than the dude in dead last,
^ flow a bit sloppy in this line, the personal attempt was good
forget about all those lines, he doesnt know what im talking about,
tatooted my dick so his chick can get some knew words in her mouth,
^ lol
you ride my ass which sickens me to death i ride a beamer,
i'll body him up send him away like anthony wiener,
^ decent punch
ill grill his bitch on the grill, his chick rocks her ass on my patio,
remember my beamer? your punk ass thought it was worse than an audi...oh,
^ lol, decent nameplay, could've been better but still solid
this fool is whack, i won't remember this fuck,
thought i had a day off, till his wack ass set this battle up.
^ weak finisher here aswell
well...my opinion is...this was a close battle because neither of you were decisive...jeffry was maybe a bit more consistant with the not so bad lines throughout the verse than audio...audio came with some personals in there, but wasnt feelin a lot of his other lines...if i could've voted, probably jeffry BARELY got this...
bump
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nothin
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the tatoo/words in ya mouth bar
both kinda have the concept of dropping punches..jeffry more so than audio so thats why he gets the w. not to mention more creative attempts
wack
v.
forget about all those lines, he doesnt know what im talking about,
tatooted my dick so his chick can get some knew words in her mouth,
V/Jeffrey
bump
Nothin'
vs.
forget about all those lines, he doesnt know what im talking about,
tatooted my dick so his chick can get some knew words in her mouth,
Pretty weak battle. AudioFixed, you actually ain't that bad. Far from good but you could be their in no time if you realize that you got some elevatin' to do. Jeffry, your only decent line was the one I quoted. Although it was still enough to get the win in this battle. Keep elevatin' though dudey.
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Open up Front Lines, Jeffs all over it at first sight
with 10 battles open-he's got to win one right?
Decent
this ain't a fair fight! I shouldn't battle kids at such a low level
I'm Usain Bolt racing dudes with legs made of plastic and metal
Ehh
your wins are fishy- I'm a whole diffrent kettle- your as boring as fuck
you must know you suck- no-one will vote for you, however much you 'up'
okay
Rap is more than just words? Jeff You need some home truths
IT REALLY ISN'T! No-ones interested in seeing your dance moves!
Nahh
I'm too smooth your not gifted- your just a lonley emo
read his open mikes, he's more depressed than the poor fucks at chemo
Ehh
on the real jeffro- why'd you spend so much of your time here bro?
1100 posts since you joined in april?!? I pm'd you a link to pornhub yo
Nahh
you dumb ass hoe--I'm harder than the whole elite four
I can write pokemon refrences and still know I'll wipe the floor
pokemon reference? seriously man?
please don't come back with anything boring and shitty
you've got 20 hours....take your time. write something witty.
Okay
vs
78 posts since '05? where the hell have you been for the last 6 years?
hes clicky, leavin his depressed whore is what his bitch fears,
You first line had nothing to do with your second line
broken telephone lines, yet telemarketers still offer their nigerian scams,
this a suicide mission, i got you strapped like a suicide arminian man,
Okay ,but don't use the word suicide twice in the same line
on the playgrounds he was the pickle in the middle thats what he plays,
after thats done he hit up guys he is the middle he likes bisexual 3-ways,
call him charmin, not charming the way this dude whipes my ass,
gone for so long hes not even in the rankings, hes worse than the dude in dead last,
Okay
frget about all those lines, he doesnt know what im talking about,
tatooted my dick so his chick can get some knew words in her mouth,
okay
you ride my ass which sickens me to death i ride a beamer,
i'll body him up send him away like anthony wiener,
nahh
ill grill his bitch on the grill, his chick rocks her ass on my patio,
remember my beamer? your punk ass thought it was worse than an audi...oh,
Grill his bitch on the grill? as opposed to freezing her on the grill? Or grilling her on the stove?
this fool is whack, i won't remember this fuck,
thought i had a day off, till his wack ass set this battle up.
Okayish
This was a pretty weak battle. I think Jeff took this for more punches. Jeff, you gotta work on removing some of those redundant words.
V/Jeff