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where im from we smoke john , the john smoke we "blow hard"
rb got some chokers but ur the only one i've seen doing ^that^ so far
shouts out ta tdot , i had quite a vacation
but u dont go ham for ur city ... all you got is canadian bacon
ill stomp this pussy in the street for frontin with gay talk
crack out the LAWs - and u'll never see J walk
ur punches are old and played u aint ready for combat bitch
record 8tracks if u want but u'll never touch a compact disc
i am the alpha i keep my chavo and my tricks treated
wen girls see j he jus gets that johnny bravo treatment
u better sit fast or have wrists slashed….nd livin the rest of ya life on shit bags,
better duck when the clip blast, cuz u steppin out of line..like weak bladders in six flags
i got the better plans, cuz u conjure no fists, jus creatin a vision of severed hands
i'll send thumpin rights, u havent ~touched the mic~ since ya last visit to never~land
i damage ya old scripts, fuckin fag, ill clamp u to bloke dicks
look @ the structure, body's more outta proportion than anna nicole smiths (r.i.p)
NOTHING, is what ur punches garner the worth of.. im hot like saunas that burn up
u raise arms? nd get blown to pieces on sight as if osama returned hugs
ramblin ya flows, shit! my spittin is heartless while im rippin ur cartlidge
u got wit like trashmen insulting each other, cuz all the dissin is garbage
quick key, my bad bein a lil late.
vote uppp.
upp for some LEGIT votes drop a link and i'll rtf , hopefully john would also lol
flow: John J
multies: John J
punches: Compact
complexity: John J
wordplay: Both
nameplay: Compact
delivery: Compact
personals: Compact
Line of the battle:
"ill stomp this pussy in the street for frontin with gay talk
crack out the LAWs - and u'll never see J walk"
VERDICT: Compact
Pretty dope battle. I feel like John J's piece definitely had the better flow, multis and overall was a better read so props for that. However i feel like as far as punches compact came a little bit harder and had more sting behind his hits and thats what wins battles. No hate to either MC
Check this one out: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...370/index.html
lol.
0-1 uppin.
shouts out ta tdot , i had quite a vacation
but u dont go ham for ur city ... all you got is canadian bacon
ill stomp this pussy in the street for frontin with gay talk
crack out the LAWs - and u'll never see J walk
vs.
u better sit fast or have wrists slashed….nd livin the rest of ya life on shit bags,
better duck when the clip blast, cuz u steppin out of line..like weak bladders in six flags
i got the better plans, cuz u conjure no fists, jus creatin a vision of severed hands
i'll send thumpin rights, u havent ~touched the mic~ since ya last visit to never~land
actually very close battle here. I think, Compact had more direct lines and had better overall punches. John J, work on that structure man. You had pretty good lines, but your lines didn't go as hard as they could've, ive seen better lines from you though man, no hate.
v - compac
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leave links will rtf
uppp cmon guys jus vote honestly and watever battle you need voting on i'll rtf and i'll try to get john to also lol
sleepin on it damnnnn . -____- ~ZZz-up-zzzZZzzzzz...
ill stomp this pussy in the street for frontin with gay talk
crack out the LAWs - and u'll never see J walk
vs.
u better sit fast or have wrists slashed….nd livin the rest of ya life on shit bags,
better duck when the clip blast, cuz u steppin out of line..like weak bladders in six flags
Pretty close battle but Compact was definitely more direct with his punches. Overall, I think Compact went harder and will be receivin' my vote.
shouts out ta tdot , i had quite a vacation
but u dont go ham for ur city ... all you got is canadian bacon
that was ok..
compact, step up the complexity of ur concepts.. u got the idea down dope tho.
john, u are using punchlines ive seen on txt site for the last 5-7 years.
think up creative nameplays/wordplays and incorporate them into something..
metaphor/swag-bar. something.. got a dope rhyme scheme & with the right
wording/concept u could be really dope, keep doing ur thing.
cant vote so this is just feed.
BOTB:
ill stomp this pussy in the street for frontin with gay talk
crack out the LAWs - and u'll never see J walk
This was a pretty close battle. J had a lot of attempted WP that weren't really punches. I can't vote, but compact took this for better punches.
ill stomp this pussy in the street for frontin with gay talk
crack out the LAWs - and u'll never see J walk
vs
u better sit fast or have wrists slashed….nd livin the rest of ya life on shit bags,
better duck when the clip blast, cuz u steppin out of line..like weak bladders in six flags
close battle...i think john takes consistency and flow but i think compact had the lotb which hit pretty hard imo. I think had John J came slightly more consistent he could have taken this but i think compacts hits > john's consistency..
v/ compact
Compact: Well u had some good nameplay attempts and overall some good punches.
John J: Overall came hard good metaphore usage and multi usage
Compact u had a good verse with the nameplay attempts but i felt John J stepped up and came a little harder. Overall good battle. I just overall see John J's improvement in the metaphore category and punchlines are getting better.
up ?/
^upset with the vote?
uppin
nah the question marks cus this is gettin slept on lol i dont bitch like that
ye im cooked i didnt see the "up"
bump
Uppp!!
flow: John J
multies: John J
punches: Compact
complexity: John J
wordplay: Compact
nameplay: Compact
delivery: John J
personals: Compact
Close battle john you impressed me with overall better verses every drop
v-Compact tho for a bit harder punches