Untitled verse (drop links!)

just a random verse (out of boredom).. drop your links!

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LINKS:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...529/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...632/index.html

this was good man, deep beat, flow was good, emotion sounds right with it, lyrics were real good, def shoulda made this into a song bro

i love this beat. i really like your style. the lyrics are sick as hell. shit is unique, mad respect for that. adlibs a lil heavy, but i think it fits your style well... wtf its over?! hahah damn, ima be lookin out for you shit was sick for a quick 16

ok ok im diggin the beat.. a little short, but i like it. Its a good flo, tryin figure out the message tho? Overall tho it was alright, like to hear more tho.

holla back:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=448551

oh yea, heres my link if you get a sec, rtf

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...679/index.html

right on my dude, good flow and beat, lyrics were nice, keep it up - Leo
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...708/index.html

thank you all

You should most definitely finish this cuz it's dope as fuck, period.

I like the distinguished vibe you possess, you've got your own style, props on that. Flow is pretty solid. I liked the delivery as well, there's that dark tone in it that kept me eager to hear what would happen next, you need to do some story telling tracks, I think with your style you can make some top notch shit. Lyrically it wasn't complex or anything but I bet that wasn't a motive in this piece. Anyways, I really enjoyed this despite the fact it was just a tiny verse...Keep it up man.

PLZ RTF:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...760/index.html

thank you

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beat is just real nice...

most notable is your flow is precisely on point. Lyrics are thoughtful, deep. I like this, definitely something you could of finished up and made full track before posting i think. You sound more than capable of bringing a full piece.

thanks, chris.

Dont love the recording with the 2 layers on the track Flow is ok nice and consistent good riding of the beat would like to hear more

Please return feed
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Plz RTF on "Be Ez (Woo Woo)"
Thanks in advance

Voice reminds me of L.E....which isn't a bad thing

I like the heaviness of the beat...it creates a moody atmosphere which fit your lyrics here

Short but coo for what it was




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thanks

You remind me of my homie Spoonfull, definitely love the introspection that is presented here and you have above average skills. Definitely continue to grow fam...

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thanks, praverb.. as a fan of your music (and spoonfull's music), i really appreciate it.

Beat is cool. Your wordplay is pretty decent. Your flow and delivery fit this song very well. This is good man. I can tell where you punch in a couple times though. Try to mix them a little better!

nice free verse I feel you could have spit this harder instead of being laid back in your delivery I feel your flow at the end falls off but its good man. Keep grinding

return the feedback here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...227/index.html

checking this....liking this beat....good lyrics...hmm not feeling the double vocals jus dub parts of ur verse....flow ai'nt too bad could be more smooth and creative with the beat...sounds like you just playing it easy....delivery could also change a bit sounded a bit monotone the whole way through depict those lyrics man make them come to life

overall not a bad verse man

hit me back please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...23#post8058323

i got those links

I definitely like the delivery and the emotion you put into your voice, never boring every word projected if you know what I mean.... I personally didn't feel like it was montonous to be honest.

Also like how, even in a little 50 second verse or whatever you still managed to paint a pretty vivid picture, to me at least. No idea what you had in your mind when you wrote this but heres what it made me think of:

A story of a local DJ slaving hours on end just to get a little set in a club hoping for some money and recognition, and as he looks around him while hes performing he sees all these frivolous people wasting their money on drink and shit. He then packs up and walks home looking at the little money he made and wonders if he'll ever "make it"...

So if thats not what you were thinking when you wrote this, you've inspired me to write the story of that character if nothing else haha!

Good job man

Peace

^ thank you, i really appreciate that