ten lines
one hour
my check
LINKS:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...159/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...348/index.html
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ten lines
one hour
my check
LINKS:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...159/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...348/index.html
Check, one two.
This fake rings a bell, wouldnt be surprised if he's telling lies
like the way he needs more assistance, coming from a phony's eyez
My drop will be straight and smooth, rather than your's black and bruised
must've been when the mods, beat you rather twisted just to be amused
And as the story unfolds, this man is rather a mystery
his age reveals his plot line.......that of a sinister 23
Im droppin n00b status..................i have to go run errands
and this bar is running you into the sun........and burn your fair-skin
keye'd on the fritz, while your verse is stolen from a ditz
how could you believe in yourself....when your getting rushed.....blitzed
Fuckin' idiot, I could piss on you, and you'd think it was raining,
My rhymes will liquify you, I'll throw you on a canvas and call you a Matt painting,
Need to get it through your head that you suck at this,
You're the very definition of ignorance is bliss,
You hear no evil, see no evil, and we all know you can't fucking spit it,
Beating you is going to be like OJ's trial - It's gonna be easy, and we all know I did it,
You're gonna break down, to the ground, in the fetal position,
Giving the term crying like a bitch a brand new definition,
So when the tears dry, and people ask who beat you,
Tell'em it took a man with the power of Lies to defeat you.
Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...08&postcount=8
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...2&postcount=15
smh, this battle was horrid, you guys serioulsy suck.
V/ Lies
the only reason is cuz he tried for punchlines, alot of stupid lines about how "your the new defintion of" blah, which is lame as hell, but Matt had no real clever wordplays, just a bunch of statements and shit.
both ayll need to elevate.
Up, up, and away.
Rise 1
3 days one vote very pathetic up 2
This fake rings a bell, wouldnt be surprised if he's telling lies
like the way he needs more assistance, coming from a phony's eyez
vs
Fuckin' idiot, I could piss on you, and you'd think it was raining,
My rhymes will liquify you, I'll throw you on a canvas and call you a Matt painting,
Overall: boring boring battle..wow..i dont even want to talk about it for real....seems like you both rushed, throwing blind punches.....like a nerd fight....but matt had a better verse overall, he hit the most punches with his eyes closed than lies did.....
Vote=matt..
lies gets it for better wordplay.liked the matt or matte painting line.I think matt didnt really try too hard on this battle cuz the punches didnt really standout or do too much damage. both had str8 flow and struc though.
v=lies
Matt.:
This fake rings a bell, wouldnt be surprised if he's telling lies
like the way he needs more assistance, coming from a phony's eyez
hmm, not my favorite, seems fillerish
My drop will be straight and smooth, rather than your's black and bruised
must've been when the mods, beat you rather twisted just to be amused
no
And as the story unfolds, this man is rather a mystery
his age reveals his plot line.......that of a sinister 23
not too bad
Im droppin n00b status..................i have to go run errands
and this bar is running you into the sun........and burn your fair-skin
not so much
keye'd on the fritz, while your verse is stolen from a ditz
how could you believe in yourself....when your getting rushed.....blitzed
not too bad
Overall:
mostly fillerish, not too much hard hitting, really should work on some personal attempts, and actually put some punches in
vs
Lies:
Fuckin' idiot, I could piss on you, and you'd think it was raining,
My rhymes will liquify you, I'll throw you on a canvas and call you a Matt painting,
personal, decent
Need to get it through your head that you suck at this,
You're the very definition of ignorance is bliss,
no
You hear no evil, see no evil, and we all know you can't fucking spit it,
Beating you is going to be like OJ's trial - It's gonna be easy, and we all know I did it,
ok, decent enough
You're gonna break down, to the ground, in the fetal position,
Giving the term crying like a bitch a brand new definition,
eh
So when the tears dry, and people ask who beat you,
Tell'em it took a man with the power of Lies to defeat you.
eh, no
Overall:
pretty strong opener, then just fell off from there for the most part
Breakdown
Fairly weak battle to be honest, lies had a good opener, pretty much the only good line from the entire battle, no hate, you guys have the right idea, structure going on, just work some stronger wordplay/nameplay
V/Lies
Up.
I didn't really feel any of this battle and only line I really like was...
Fuckin' idiot, I could piss on you, and you'd think it was raining,
My rhymes will liquify you, I'll throw you on a canvas and call you a Matt painting
so on that I would have to give it to Lies
keye'd on the fritz, while your verse is stolen from a ditz
how could you believe in yourself....when your getting rushed.....blitzed
This was the only line in the battle close to quoting tbh. no hate but both need to step it up on the concepts and punches. matt takes this with this one decent line.
V-matt
This fake rings a bell, wouldnt be surprised if he's telling lies
like the way he needs more assistance, coming from a phony's eyez
this bar was dope like any thing........
@Lies
ur bars were having no concepts.....
vote-matt
PEACE
This fake rings a bell, wouldnt be surprised if he's telling lies
like the way he needs more assistance, coming from a phony's eyez
Nahh. To simple.
My drop will be straight and smooth, rather than your's black and bruised
must've been when the mods, beat you rather twisted just to be amused
? Nahh, wasn't feeling this.
And as the story unfolds, this man is rather a mystery
his age reveals his plot line.......that of a sinister 23
Wasn't diggin' this.
Im droppin n00b status..................i have to go run errands
and this bar is running you into the sun........and burn your fair-skin
Blah.
keye'd on the fritz, while your verse is stolen from a ditz
how could you believe in yourself....when your getting rushed.....blitzed
Wasn't feeling this shit either.
Not many good concepts in this verse and for some reason it seemed rushed.
vs.
Fuckin' idiot, I could piss on you, and you'd think it was raining,
My rhymes will liquify you, I'll throw you on a canvas and call you a Matt painting,
Ehh, nah.
Need to get it through your head that you suck at this,
You're the very definition of ignorance is bliss,
Nah, this was a statement.
You hear no evil, see no evil, and we all know you can't fucking spit it,
Beating you is going to be like OJ's trial - It's gonna be easy, and we all know I did it,
Blahhh
You're gonna break down, to the ground, in the fetal position,
Giving the term crying like a bitch a brand new definition,
Alright.
So when the tears dry, and people ask who beat you,
Tell'em it took a man with the power of Lies to defeat you.
Alright, this was cool.
First couple bars were blah, but it started to pick up towards the end.
I'm a have to say Lies took this one with a couple more stand out punch lines.
Vote Lies
Hit this link:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...087/index.html
Surprisingly 3-3, up
again
This fake rings a bell, wouldnt be surprised if he's telling lies
like the way he needs more assistance, coming from a phony's eyez
^ ehhh
Fuckin' idiot, I could piss on you, and you'd think it was raining,
My rhymes will liquify you, I'll throw you on a canvas and call you a Matt painting,
^ blah
punches: matt, close and wack tho
Flow: tie
wordplay:blah
personals:blah
Vote: matt
weak ass battle, i didnt enjoy this one bit
RTF: HEREORHERE
keye'd on the fritz, while your verse is stolen from a ditz
how could you believe in yourself....when your getting rushed.....blitzed
vs
nada
step it up fellas matt barely had a quotable
vote matt