10 lines each standard rules apply etc etc
due in few hours or so
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10 lines each standard rules apply etc etc
due in few hours or so
ill post ma links soon
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...650/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post7680641
check in drop in like n hour or so
check, I'll drop sometime in the evening, won't be home by 4-5pm. No later than 6 though, don't worry.
yeh alguds bro i dnt actually no wat the time is there so it dont no how long that is but algud we.
your name is moose???lol that aint even a punch thats jus stating facts,
like jamicans sacs you get blazed so fast youl be cooked quicker than asians cats.
but moose is a loser who looks stupid and queer at the same time,
with lame lines that couldnt blaze mine if he was more flaming than rape crimes by gay guys,(which does happen..........go ask you father)
this faggots lines are fuckin weak way more than trash you cant even sorta rap,
this corny fag takes the balls from behind more times than a quarterback,
this guy knows a lot about shit. no, about ACTUAL SHIT,
thats what happens wen ya pack shit back in ta friends ass wit a fat dick......just ASK HIM,
i better lay off the gay jokes before he gets upset and start callin me a raging bigot,
if you go to jail ud get anal fisted made a bitch and still wouldnt trade it for women,
homo.............lol nah just kidding
but seriously your gay................
-He posted in "Poor man's booth solution"
-Look at his Sig
Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...627/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...676/index.html
Lol at calling me gay
Look at your sig, you suck...I know my limits and no way you'll push me
Munching on puppies-must be your replacement for not eating out any pussy,
Kid's got ass warts and asked me not to say this,
But it's not the hemorrhoids...
...that have you coming out the bedroom bleeding from the anus,
You spitting flames? That's biting off more than you can chew,
Shit, your own heat seeker in your avy wouldn't pick up on you,
100 posts but still no win to your name-isn't it strange?
But challenging me and Dosia? Looks like some things never change...
And that "Poor Man's Booth Solution"? Thowin out advice, you were in the zone
But nobody guessed you were talking about decorating your home-the local pay phone,
this faggots lines are fuckin weak way more than trash you cant even sorta rap,
this corny fag takes the balls from behind more times than a quarterback,
slightly played but it was the only thing that stood out in ya verse tbh
vs
Look at your sig, you suck...I know my limits and no way you'll push me
Munching on puppies-must be your replacement for not eating out any pussy,
okay
You spitting flames? That's biting off more than you can chew,
Shit, your own heat seeker in your avy wouldn't pick up on you,
This wasnt too bad
This battle was a pretty easy win for moose..the other dude's lines were stretched and they didnt hit hard and most lines were either played or didnt rhyme too well..Moose u had a couple of decent punches to win which was enough for this battle..no hate to either.
v/moose
uh-up
our name is moose???lol that aint even a punch thats jus stating facts,
like jamicans sacs you get blazed so fast youl be cooked quicker than asians cats.
Vs.
Look at your sig, you suck...I know my limits and no way you'll push me
Munching on puppies-must be your replacement for not eating out any pussy,
I wasn't feeling Akolyte except for his opening. I can't vote, so I can just give an opinion.
Advantage: Moose.
does nobody vote anymore? up
this faggots lines are fuckin weak way more than trash you cant even sorta rap,
this corny fag takes the balls from behind more times than a quarterback,
ok...
vs
Look at your sig, you suck...I know my limits and no way you'll push me
Munching on puppies-must be your replacement for not eating out any pussy,
You spitting flames? That's biting off more than you can chew,
Shit, your own heat seeker in your avy wouldn't pick up on you,
decent...
this was a pretty weak battle but moose had 1 more decent hit plus was more polish with the verse structure and delivery both had a decent flow imo but the punches was not really hard hitting but there but anyways my vote is for moose...
upsies
your name is moose???lol that aint even a punch thats jus stating facts,
like jamicans sacs you get blazed so fast youl be cooked quicker than asians cats.
OoOo, Nice second line... First line SUCKED!
but moose is a loser who looks stupid and queer at the same time,
with lame lines that couldnt blaze mine if he was more flaming than rape crimes by gay guys,(which does happen..........go ask you father)
Nice use of multi's! though... A lil long for a bar don't ya think?
this faggots lines are fuckin weak way more than trash you cant even sorta rap,
this corny fag takes the balls from behind more times than a quarterback,
Really? more Gay jokes? ok....
this guy knows a lot about shit. no, about ACTUAL SHIT,
thats what happens wen ya pack shit back in ta friends ass wit a fat dick......just ASK HIM,
Love the use of "Him" at the end... As it kind of fit! if you know how to spit it...
i better lay off the gay jokes before he gets upset and start callin me a raging bigot,
if you go to jail ud get anal fisted made a bitch and still wouldnt trade it for women,
Uh... NO! Bad... what's your name again?
homo.............lol nah just kidding
but seriously your gay................
Now this... This gots to be the funniest lines in the cypher... wait they're not part of... aw fuck!
Look at your sig, you suck...I know my limits and no way you'll push me
Munching on puppies-must be your replacement for not eating out any pussy,
Oooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BEAUTIFUL STARTER!
Kid's got ass warts and asked me not to say this,
But it's not the hemorrhoids...
...that have you coming out the bedroom bleeding from the anus,
Yaaaawwwwwwnnn... more gay jokes...
You spitting flames? That's biting off more than you can chew,
Shit, your own heat seeker in your avy wouldn't pick up on you,
Nice personal!
100 posts but still no win to your name-isn't it strange?
But challenging me and Dosia? Looks like some things never change...
Eh, s'ok s'ok
And that "Poor Man's Booth Solution"? Thowin out advice, you were in the zone
But nobody guessed you were talking about decorating your home-the local pay phone,
...The other guy's closer would've been better if that was the actual closer...
Presentation: Ako! beautiful use of Mutlis!
Personals: Moose...
Creativity: Moose...
Overall: Moose got this... Ako, lay off the gay jokes, and try to be creative like the second line, both of you honestly... When you write, do you spit this? I mean... I know it's just Text, but damn... You guys sound like this shit if OFF KEY! If you can't rap, PLEASE PLEASE lay off the mother fucking pen and do something better with your life... Cuz rap isn't just about punches...
Punches: 15% (Only cuz it's quick witted!)
Presentation: 75%
meaning: 10%
uppin this motherfucker, thanks for voting so far
lol coulda been worded a little better but pretty cool punchQuote:
your name is moose???lol that aint even a punch thats jus stating facts,
like jamicans sacs you get blazed so fast youl be cooked quicker than asians cats.
another pretty cool punchQuote:
this faggots lines are fuckin weak way more than trash you cant even sorta rap,
this corny fag takes the balls from behind more times than a quarterback,
vs
lmao niiiiceQuote:
Look at your sig, you suck...I know my limits and no way you'll push me
Munching on puppies-must be your replacement for not eating out any pussy,
coolQuote:
Kid's got ass warts and asked me not to say this,
But it's not the hemorrhoids...
...that have you coming out the bedroom bleeding from the anus,
gotta say that both were pretty well matched up but moose was little more onsistant. Slightly harder punches from Moose. AK need to work on your structure a little bit...pretty good battle but I got to give this one to Moose for being a little more consistant...
v/moose
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...650/index.html
thanx for voting, 3-0, up
haha,not a bad battle.I was laughing at everything I read.you guys just practicaly went back and forth calling each other gay,but i think moose did it a little better.he had better punches and flow,althoug the hemorroids thing threw the structure off.ak struc was off a lot,and punches didnt come as hard.hit up my battle with trade.
v=moose
uuppp
akolyte i was gonna do the bar for bar breakdown but your structure was SO fucked up i didnt even wanna try and figure out where shit started and finished, you had a weak verse nothing was hard hitting but you did have some humor although it wasnt dirrect. Moose you had 1 cool line in that verse, stop doing the quote and links shit in every battle your only suppose to do that when ur battling someone u have history besides ur not really relevant w/ em. v-Moose