12 lines
due a.s.a.p but no longer then 2 hrs
(FREESTYLE BATTLE)
No DICK RYDERS!!
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12 lines
due a.s.a.p but no longer then 2 hrs
(FREESTYLE BATTLE)
No DICK RYDERS!!
12 lines = 6 bars right?? so check it!! fuck 12 lines am going 6 bars!!
YO!!,
fuck you personally, I will go and battle ya whole tri state
and yea! this fucker 'personal'ly shook like ya phone on vibrate
im a prince of bloody demons!!
i'll spit raw rap, split his ball sack N make him drink the blood N seamen
and there no love lost in this battle, cuz personally i hate ya'll
i husstle grams of crack, so when them hammers bang.....
u'll have a hole on ya chest the size of a 8 ball
Fuck a 'Wheel of fortune' "my name" be on every 'slot' an this battle is ur fualt
am done with beginners just declare me the winner.....
Am the only rookie to have Vets Shaken Up like "Using Salt"
Ya head and Skin is the Shape Of A Carpet, so when i 'Rip it off set' I'll Revel his lies
You a 'cat' that wouldnt pull out a '9' if I threatened to Redeem Ya Lives
ya skills with freestyle punches is like the 'top of ya forced hide out', somthing you had to be in
my verbal bones wont break cuz u wouldnt find a Crack in(Kracken) my 'flow' if this was Pirates of the Carribean!!!
check
mod...delete the above verse...I didn't mean to post it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=428304
even though he sucks, your opponent last week left you hurtin to the root
yet it doesn't look like you got beat by moose35..
..it looks like you got the shit beat out of you by 35 moose
so yeah your writtens are a joke, you definitely ain't got a foot towards the radio
cuz you aren't shit with a letter man, yet you still manage put on a daily show
as for me, I just finished school, the type that gives you a fee charge
but as for SonU? that sounds like the type of college for retards
I mean you think a freestyle is 2 hours? cmon dude you better be buzzed
cuz I didn't know you told time slow, I only knew your intelligence was
plus you had to ask what 12 lines was, seriously kid you're a waste
but yeah you are going to have 6 bars...smashed into your face
and I could end you out in broad day, or do it at night in ally's
either way we'll all be saying "son lost", as if advertising for tonight's finale
bump
these lines made me like SonUdaily better in this 1
Quote:
im a prince of bloody demons!!
i'll spit raw rap, split his ball sack N make him drink the blood N seamen
and there no love lost in this battle, cuz personally i hate ya'll
i husstle grams of crack, so when them hammers bang.....
u'll have a hole on ya chest the size of a 8 ball
bump...1
uppin
I'm gonna have to agree with Grapvine, these lines pushed it over the edge for me. sickkk.Quote:
Originally Posted by Grapevine
Good battle though, lots of good concepts, just tough to follow the flow in a couple spots for both of ya.
v/ Daily
fuck you personally, I will go and battle ya whole tri state
and yea! this fucker 'personal'ly shook like ya phone on vibrate
gun talk is a bit played but overall Daily was more consistant and his punches hit harder.
nuffen
vs
so yeah your writtens are a joke, you definitely ain't got a foot towards the radio
cuz you aren't shit with a letter man, yet you still manage put on a daily show
lol at this battle overall, pers u went wayy below ur standards i understand why tho so fucket . but yea onesided . lmao at the noob votes above !! jajaj
v- pers
nuffen
vs
so yeah your writtens are a joke, you definitely ain't got a foot towards the radio
cuz you aren't shit with a letter man, yet you still manage put on a daily show
lol at this battle overall, pers u went wayy below ur standards i understand why tho so fucket . but yea onesided . lmao at the noob votes above !! jajaj
v- pers
Son
uck you personally, I will go and battle ya whole tri state
and yea! this fucker 'personal'ly shook like ya phone on vibrate
Weak and wack opener
im a prince of bloody demons!!
i'll spit raw rap, split his ball sack N make him drink the blood N seamen
Ass/ bad set up weak punch
and there no love lost in this battle, cuz personally i hate ya'll
i husstle grams of crack, so when them hammers bang.....
u'll have a hole on ya chest the size of a 8 ball
Mad stretched/ wording is horrid flow off
Fuck a 'Wheel of fortune' "my name" be on every 'slot' an this battle is ur fualt
am done with beginners just declare me the winner.....
Am the only rookie to have Vets Shaken Up like "Using Salt"
Stretched as hell/ weak punch and wack
Ya head and Skin is the Shape Of A Carpet, so when i 'Rip it off set' I'll Revel his lies
You a 'cat' that wouldnt pull out a '9' if I threatened to Redeem Ya Lives
wack no
ya skills with freestyle punches is like the 'top of ya forced hide out', somthing you had to be in
my verbal bones wont break cuz u wouldnt find a Crack in(Kracken) my 'flow' if this was Pirates of the Carribean!!!
Wtf?? stretched as hell lines dam kid weak/wack closer
personal
even though he sucks, your opponent last week left you hurtin to the root
yet it doesn't look like you got beat by moose35..
..it looks like you got the shit beat out of you by 35 moose
lol ok
so yeah your writtens are a joke, you definitely ain't got a foot towards the radio
cuz you aren't shit with a letter man, yet you still manage put on a daily show
nice
as for me, I just finished school, the type that gives you a fee charge
but as for SonU? that sounds like the type of college for retards
ok
I mean you think a freestyle is 2 hours? cmon dude you better be buzzed
cuz I didn't know you told time slow, I only knew your intelligence was
ok lol
plus you had to ask what 12 lines was, seriously kid you're a waste
but yeah you are going to have 6 bars...smashed into your face
simple but ok
and I could end you out in broad day, or do it at night in ally's
either way we'll all be saying "son lost", as if advertising for tonight's finale
meh could of been better
-First off welcome back personal nice to see you battling again. Overrall this battle was one sided as hell not to mention a big WTF @ you Newbs horrible ass voting! im tired of this shit, Son your whole verse wasnt even beginner at best most of your lines were simple as hell no sting no hard hitting punches horrid set ups and bad wording with stretched lines. work on all that and read LLL battles an get the general idea of text battling. personal i seen better from you but i know you took it easy on him i can tell you took this off basically overrall more solid verse BETTER. but word of advice maybe to prevent this newb trosity by setting your battles to 500 post or more to weed em out. but with that said
MVGT: Personal
I actually agree with Alyse, if you pompous pricks dont want the input, change your shit. I just joined RB and it appears to me we gotta comment just to post, so expect it bitch.
How can you possibly agree with Alyse? all she said was that people like you suck at voting. And she's right...so if you agree with her, than you agree you suck....at everything.Quote:
Originally Posted by Mr.Ginsu
Bump
Good. Cant choose. This was even. if i had to choose i would choose
Vote would go to:Per$onal
^ huh..
I mean you think a freestyle is 2 hours? cmon dude you better be buzzed
cuz I didn't know you told time slow, I only knew your intelligence was
plus you had to ask what 12 lines was, seriously kid you're a waste
but yeah you are going to have 6 bars...smashed into your face
vs...
........
Pers had better punches even though he didn't even try... SonUDaly was just kinda rambling imo and much of the shit he said kinda made little to no sense at all.. the stuff I did make sense of i think an autistic kid could come up with better stuff and beat.. but yea I'm going with
v-Per$onal
I agree with Alyse that Im new and quite inexperienced, so Im sorry my critique isn't as valid as hers. Im merely pointing out that us 'newcomers' HAVE to vote, so dont complain. Only one way of getting better and thats by jumping right in this bitch, so relax. Just trying to "elevate" my shit as you RB vets would say. So get off my balls ya fucking clownshoe.
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Per$onal
^^^shut up
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uppin
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and there no love lost in this battle, cuz personally i hate ya'll
i husstle grams of crack, so when them hammers bang.....
u'll have a hole on ya chest the size of a 8 ball
vs
as for me, I just finished school, the type that gives you a fee charge
but as for SonU? that sounds like the type of college for retards
Multis: son
WOrdplay:Son
Nameplay:Per
Personals:Per
Creativity: son
flow: per
punches:Personal
Pretty close battle. But personal topped it off with 1 more category than son. i think sons verse was more complex but he still missed key categories
v/p
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uppin
bump...hopefully i'm not over
bump
Personal DQ'ed for over upping