14 lines due tomorrow sometime....
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14 lines due tomorrow sometime....
arch vs crooks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=428802
fuck vs 4rensick
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=428836
my diction is simple but a little more than average.
Yours on the other hand is bland as a damn kids
elementary ramblings, monatonous and maddening.
It doesn't mean a damn thing. notta one.
cept for you're rich and ya gotta gun.
a pallethra of bitches and bling that mocks the sun.
and outta all that shit well i got none.
still im not un/happy with this plot cause i got some legit shit to spit.
Can spot a cop and not run.
i'm coming at ya mach one with top gun style like tom cruise only drinking bomb booze. Mixing my gin with a little bit of POM juice.
I'm like a snake fucking raping a mongoose.
Riki Tiki Tavis sure to file a law suit.
im gone dude!
Check. Will drop tonight or tomorrow.
Murder.
Dude thinks he gets chicks, rofl! well do u and live son
But girls only seem to get rid......of everything u give um
I use to stuff chronic in the duffle and flip it with no hesitation
Im money chasin, and cloud couldn't make it rain with precipitation
Atleast you know the shit u wrote was whack u slut whoreQuote:
Originally Posted by RidiculeCloud999
And whats said is you did 2 and they sucked, now the 3rd'll suck more
People ridicule your drops, they boring and none of ur flows prime
Cuz your verse puts me through more hell, then flipping those nines
Fagget nigga, ill treat ya body like when ya emotions boil ova man
And really leave R.C. bottled up.........without a fuckin soda brand
10 keyed.
Uppin, will get links in by tonight.
nothing
vs
People ridicule your drops, they boring and none of ur flows prime
Cuz your verse puts me through more hell, then flipping those nines
Fagget nigga, ill treat ya body like when ya emotions boil ova man
And really leave R.C. bottled up.........without a fuckin soda brand
last bars were dope...nice name flips bro...R/C haha, i woulda spit some shit like that too, that drink use to suck like the shoprite brand of cola an shit lolz but R/C need work on your structure, your shit was everywhere my nigga and work on developin some punches an deliverin them yo...then you'll be iight my nigga...
easy win for DOS, son thought yo uwas gonna holla at me yo, smh lol leave these noobs alone nigga lolz you bully haha
v/dos
nothing
vs.
I use to stuff chronic in the duffle and flip it with no hesitation
Im money chasin, and cloud couldn't make it rain with precipitation
People ridicule your drops, they boring and none of ur flows prime
Cuz your verse puts me through more hell, then flipping those nines
Fagget nigga, ill treat ya body like when ya emotions boil ova man
And really leave R.C. bottled up.........without a fuckin soda brand
very much a one sided battle rid didnt throw a punch of any kind not really any battle material yung had 2 pretty good bars and 1 real nice bar i liked the flippin nines bars v/yung
Uppin.
Uppin. My bad arch. Links will be in tomorrow got busy
vsQuote:
Originally Posted by YungDosia
.......YungDosiaQuote:
Originally Posted by RidiculeCloud999
RTF:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...014/index.html
or
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...005/index.html
whys every body always hating my shit...oh well
i never planned on having a good record...i suck at rappin...
i just want to write some good lines to use in real songs
up 1
up 2
ridicule Cloud999 had the better verse if it was OM or something but not strong punches....
vote: Dosia
thanks grape....up 3
Ridicule you've moved a lil something from the last battles i've read man, but seriously, to take on a vet.... not like that bro... your punches werent there, your flow fell off miserably, work on your rhyme structure... your creativity is most important... you know how many people spit the same shit in different ways? You gotta pull punches from outta no where now a days dude... creativity key work here man...
vs
Dude thinks he gets chicks, rofl! well do u and live son
But girls only seem to get rid......of everything u give um
Im money chasin, and cloud couldn't make it rain with precipitation
Atleast you know the shit u wrote was whack u slut whore
And whats said is you did 2 and they sucked, now the 3rd'll suck more
Fagget nigga, ill treat ya body like when ya emotions boil ova man
And really leave R.C. bottled up.........without a fuckin soda brand
Your last line was a killer closer dude, i liked it... that shit was raw dude, lmao.... good job.
vote - Yung