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House Rules
No D/R - Noob or Loyalty Votes Please
Vote for the better verse, not your friend lolz
DUE 1 HOUR MAX from Check Ins.
Check...
*locks the door*
you're dead
...Lolz nah...you're dead my nigga...with a quick key...
Listen dude stop, it's clear your losing as you watch,
...Me stick my foot up your ass...
...............Til i'm wearin your intestines for tube socks.
And I'm not lying, your attempts dude'll get ripped quick,
Cause i've seen better shots <-- at the special olympics.
So please give up...cause effortless, Def is crushin you,
Truth is...
...Only you connect on RB <-- none of your punches do.
you suck it's true...wack multis, plus...this man is a fairy.
So fuck a grave site <-- where you stand; you'll get burried.
Peep'em out...AK noob bodied you...your just lame as shit,
Plus your lines couldn't touch <-- should change to script.
Blahhh...Bodied.
Define
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...797/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=428691
Blah?? get off of Archs go-nads
Creativity is lacking, you ask for votes so yeah, you hella swayed
Maybe its heard being Def, and cant see that your punches are old n played
You’re spineless, gutless, hair on ya lip, doctors nair the shyt
Now your only appointment for the day, is on the net, killing your Herritage
Weakest in the crew, you getting them screwed, Mime don’t know what he’s thinking
If he’s NOT tryin to shake up any competition, he must see your lame ass is tweaking
I retired from FL cause of noobs like you, now voting is out of control
U must get paid every time you vote……. the way it gets stripped from the pole
Sorry to put you on blast little fella, put it’s a crime if I don’t point it out
True love is really hard to Fine….so he decide to join a Mime and a Trout
lolz @ go-nads, you silly guy...
you like phat sack better???
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=428856
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...821/index.html
vote upz
Wow; I know niggas see this...smh BUMP.
Listen dude stop, it's clear your losing as you watch,
...Me stick my foot up your ass...
...............Til i'm wearin your intestines for tube socks.
Vs.
I retired from FL cause of noobs like you, now voting is out of control
U must get paid every time you vote……. the way it gets stripped from the pole
Sorry to put you on blast little fella, put it’s a crime if I don’t point it out
True love is really hard to Fine….so he decide to join a Mime and a Trout
v/ Know P. took this battle by a quotable. Not spectacular, i was generous with quotes for this battle. Not the best I've seen from P, and first shit i've seen from Def.
tube socks +
So please give up...cause effortless, Def is crushin you,
Truth is...
...Only you connect on RB <-- none of your punches do.
vs
You’re spineless, gutless, hair on ya lip, doctors nair the shyt
Now your only appointment for the day, is on the net, killing your Herritage
+ trout n pole
Know got it. felt like D was tryna come all guns blazing but KP wasn't phased n jus killed it anyways.
v/KP
^ WTF? Aren't ya the same person yo...
uppin
define
isten dude stop, it's clear your losing as you watch,
...Me stick my foot up your ass...
...............Til i'm wearin your intestines for tube socks.
^^this was a good concept but wording killed its effect
badly could of been hard as hell.
So please give up...cause effortless, Def is crushin you,
Truth is...
...Only you connect on RB <-- none of your punches do.
^^i liked this to. but 3 bar set up wasnt needed really could of been
set up regularly.
KP
Creativity is lacking, you ask for votes so yeah, you hella swayed
Maybe its heard being Def, and cant see that your punches are old n played
^^i liked this kp but wordin could been better here lol
you so rushed this.
I retired from FL cause of noobs like you, now voting is out of control
U must get paid every time you vote……. the way it gets stripped from the pole
^^this was LOL i was laugin hard for some reason ok bar
Sorry to put you on blast little fella, put it’s a crime if I don’t point it out
True love is really hard to Fine….so he decide to join a Mime and a Trout
^^i get this lol but again your wording made me mad! lol
but decent
Overrall Kp not your best flat out you keyed this you didnt even proof read this imo lol but thoes 3 lines were the ones i felt stuck out. honestly define your first bar could of been dope your wording was bad just fix that an some bars didnt need to be in 3 bar format. fix your wording an if you would of done that an had solid shit you would of had this. kp stop being so lazy. lol
MVGT: KP
yup:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...646/index.html
lol at asia
uppin
punches :def (made more sense)
multis: def
flow: tie
wordplay: none To weak
nameplay: kp
CONSISTENCY: DEF
overall DEF TBH this battle is just WOW to me but W.E this battle i'm gonna rate on due to CONSISTENCY and def had that cat by a long shot
Define-
Listen dude stop, it's clear your losing as you watch,
...Me stick my foot up your ass...
...............Til i'm wearin your intestines for tube socks.
HC kinda feel.......punch not really hard but still ok
And I'm not lying, your attempts dude'll get ripped quick,
Cause i've seen better shots <-- at the special olympics.
eh....ok
So please give up...cause effortless, Def is crushin you,
Truth is...
...Only you connect on RB <-- none of your punches do.
The log in connection...I get it...pretty clever.
you suck it's true...wack multis, plus...this man is a fairy.
So fuck a grave site <-- where you stand; you'll get burried.
eh
Peep'em out...AK noob bodied you...your just lame as shit,
Plus your lines couldn't touch <-- should change to script.
eh
KnowP-
Creativity is lacking, you ask for votes so yeah, you hella swayed
Maybe its heard being Def, and cant see that your punches are old n played
Nope!!! no punch
You’re spineless, gutless, hair on ya lip, doctors nair the shyt
Now your only appointment for the day, is on the net, killing your Herritage
cool bar but no Punch
Weakest in the crew, you getting them screwed, Mime don’t know what he’s thinking
If he’s NOT tryin to shake up any competition, he must see your lame ass is tweaking
Just a snobbish remark...no punch
I retired from FL cause of noobs like you, now voting is out of control
U must get paid every time you vote……. the way it gets stripped from the pole
Garbage....concept was beat to death
Sorry to put you on blast little fella, put it’s a crime if I don’t point it out
True love is really hard to Fine….so he decide to join a Mime and a Trout
Corny!! Just corny!!
This wasnt a great battle but its clear that Define (even though i'm not a fan of quick keys) just has wayyyy more talent than KnowP....I dunno what the fuck you hillbilly ass dick ride'em cowboy ass niggahs is doin up in here....but your clearly hate voting and thats not cool. No one in here had an honest vote......thats why you punk bitches stay here......now do a fuckin real breakdown......I've had an account here for a long time but I forgot the password so I had to make up a new one.Now I know why I left in the first place cuz of this shit. Give the better battler his fucking props dammit!!
QzA is right you guys... give the vote to the better battler
3-0 me still.... uppin for more votes
lol
^^^You disgust me KnowP....I would smash you easily.....why dont you throw these votes out and get real votes? You afraid of an L? Sick of you weak bitches getting mercy wins.
Quote:
Originally Posted by QzA
u lost it or u left?
who were you?
:hosea:
thats wut i thought
uppin
clear example of a little ladies wanting to get their way, as usualQuote:
Originally Posted by KnowP
either you guys need to vote, or take fingers out eachothers butt hole...smh
This part was quotable....decided it for me....decent battle all aroundQuote:
You’re spineless, gutless, hair on ya lip, doctors nair the shyt
Now your only appointment for the day, is on the net, killing your Herritage
V/KnowP btw
Vote Dqed....Not a Proper break down
-Quest.
V/KnowP btw
^ wack vote...MOD DQ that, thanks.
Listen dude stop, it's clear your losing as you watch,
...Me stick my foot up your ass...
...............Til i'm wearin your intestines for tube socks.
ok, wording kinda messed it up but ok
And I'm not lying, your attempts dude'll get ripped quick,
Cause i've seen better shots <-- at the special olympics.
meh
So please give up...cause effortless, Def is crushin you,
Truth is...
...Only you connect on RB <-- none of your punches do.
nice
you suck it's true...wack multis, plus...this man is a fairy.
So fuck a grave site <-- where you stand; you'll get burried.
ok
Peep'em out...AK noob bodied you...your just lame as shit,
Plus your lines couldn't touch <-- should change to script.
ok
vs
Creativity is lacking, you ask for votes so yeah, you hella swayed
Maybe its heard being Def, and cant see that your punches are old n played
weak
You’re spineless, gutless, hair on ya lip, doctors nair the shyt
Now your only appointment for the day, is on the net, killing your Herritage
meh
Weakest in the crew, you getting them screwed, Mime don’t know what he’s thinking
If he’s NOT tryin to shake up any competition, he must see your lame ass is tweaking
doesnt even rhyme and not really a punch at all
I retired from FL cause of noobs like you, now voting is out of control
U must get paid every time you vote……. the way it gets stripped from the pole
ironic @ voting out of control. ok line
Sorry to put you on blast little fella, put it’s a crime if I don’t point it out
True love is really hard to Fine….so he decide to join a Mime and a Trout
ok
some serious dick sucking riding anal licking voting going on here.
honestly, define came harder, it doesnt matter if define put in more effort n knowp thought he was a badman but keying a more laidback verse, aint the point. def came more consistent, prefered his punchlines as they hit harder but both came alright no hate.
v/Def 100%
lol @ d/r when i dont know none of yall niggas...smh
vote up man, lets get this closed
Listen dude stop, it's clear your losing as you watch,
...Me stick my foot up your ass...
...............Til i'm wearin your intestines for tube socks.
...vs
Creativity is lacking, you ask for votes so yeah, you hella swayed
Maybe its heard being Def, and cant see that your punches are old n played
aight to be real meh battle...both were pretty even if everything...both couldve worded and delivered some punches better...and both opners wouldve been a lot better if executed better but to be honest I felt like def had slightly wittier concepts def u need to deliver ya lines better some came off to bland and know y a wordin messed up a lot of ur lines...overall very close battle no hate v/def
ya hit up one of my battles honestly plz
thanks for the honest vote my nig...
vote up
Listen dude stop, it's clear your losing as you watch,
...Me stick my foot up your ass...
...............Til i'm wearin your intestines for tube socks.
decent
And I'm not lying, your attempts dude'll get ripped quick,
Cause i've seen better shots <-- at the special olympics.
kinda played...weak
So please give up...cause effortless, Def is crushin you,
Truth is...
...Only you connect on RB <-- none of your punches do.
alright
you suck it's true...wack multis, plus...this man is a fairy.
So fuck a grave site <-- where you stand; you'll get burried.
nah
Peep'em out...AK noob bodied you...your just lame as shit,
Plus your lines couldn't touch <-- should change to script.
na
vs
Creativity is lacking, you ask for votes so yeah, you hella swayed
Maybe its heard being Def, and cant see that your punches are old n played
coulda been worded better
You’re spineless, gutless, hair on ya lip, doctors nair the shyt
Now your only appointment for the day, is on the net, killing your Herritage
nah
Weakest in the crew, you getting them screwed, Mime don’t know what he’s thinking
If he’s NOT tryin to shake up any competition, he must see your lame ass is tweaking
ok
I retired from FL cause of noobs like you, now voting is out of control
U must get paid every time you vote……. the way it gets stripped from the pole
ok
Sorry to put you on blast little fella, put it’s a crime if I don’t point it out
True love is really hard to Fine….so he decide to join a Mime and a Trout
nah
Vote-Define....Knowp i've seen you come a lot harder...your lines were a little stretched, and your concepts weren't on point. You must've keyed this.
Define that was a decent verse. Not all of the punches were that hard hitting, but you had enough, and the smoothness of your flow put it over the top.
can a mod delete that wack vote please, 3-3 it should be...thanks for the feed an votes as well maf, pers, daz an the rest...
Bump...^ Mods? WTF...
word...uppinQuote:
Originally Posted by Define
Done.
And I'm not lying, your attempts dude'll get ripped quick,
Cause i've seen better shots <-- at the special olympics.
So please give up...cause effortless, Def is crushin you,
Truth is...
...Only you connect on RB <-- none of your punches do.
vs
Weakest in the crew, you getting them screwed, Mime don’t know what he’s thinking
If he’s NOT tryin to shake up any competition, he must see your lame ass is tweaking
I retired from FL cause of noobs like you, now voting is out of control
U must get paid every time you vote……. the way it gets stripped from the pole
close but imma give it too define...just enjoyed his verse a tad bit more in this one....
Vote=define...
Define-
Listen dude stop, it's clear your losing as you watch,
...Me stick my foot up your ass...
...............Til i'm wearin your intestines for tube socks.
o.k punch couldve been better though, i liked
the intestine part, kinda comedic in a HC sense.
And I'm not lying, your attempts dude'll get ripped quick,
Cause i've seen better shots <-- at the special olympics.
nice concept, lacked in the punch area though
So please give up...cause effortless, Def is crushin you,
Truth is...
...Only you connect on RB <-- none of your punches do.
lol ok, nice
you suck it's true...wack multis, plus...this man is a fairy.
So fuck a grave site <-- where you stand; you'll get burried.
rhyming and flow was off, meh
Peep'em out...AK noob bodied you...your just lame as shit,
Plus your lines couldn't touch <-- should change to script.
pretty cool ender but you couldve ended harder man
KnowP-
Creativity is lacking, you ask for votes so yeah, you hella swayed
Maybe its heard being Def, and cant see that your punches are old n played
deaf=not hearing, blind=not seeing. and you said
"def, and cant see" it made your punch attempt hella irrelevant.
you had a good concept though.
You’re spineless, gutless, hair on ya lip, doctors nair the shyt
Now your only appointment for the day, is on the net, killing your Herritage
no line connection, i liked it but it didnt hit ...at all
Weakest in the crew, you getting them screwed, Mime don’t know what he’s thinking
If he’s NOT tryin to shake up any competition, he must see your lame ass is tweaking
cool but lacked a punch
I retired from FL cause of noobs like you, now voting is out of control
U must get paid every time you vote……. the way it gets stripped from the pole
nice idea....
Sorry to put you on blast little fella, put it’s a crime if I don’t point it out
True love is really hard to Fine….so he decide to join a Mime and a Trout
honestly..1st line looked promising but then the 2nd
line came and i was seriously confused as hell. I get that you were trying
to say he settled with a mime and a (fish) meaning he couldnt do better
but you just worded it really awkwardly.
define, you had nice ideas, concepts and executed them real nicely. you had nice wordplay and puns in your verse, and consistent with your punches even if some of them didnt hit all that hard, you still had more.
knowp, ive seen you drop BOMB shit before and this was just hella laxed I think, you thought youd get an easy win by dropping a keystyle verse. Alot of your ideas were played, and no hate bruh i know you can drop way better shit than this.
MVGT/ Def, had better punches, more consistency and was more creative.