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you can't drop that slick shit, cuz it's hard after i rapture your bowels
he claims to be the sickest rapper that spits...but he's really the sickest rapper that swallows
learn how to throw in the towel, but don't act like it's a boxin match
ask the tootsie pop owl, how many licks does he have to take...to put out an awesome rap?
cockin' back, and aimin' at whats under your stocking cap, i wont even read your phony post
you'll need a miracle to beat me...from the father, the son AND the holy ghost
this homies toast, Jimmy will spank you then thank you for taking defeat
I'll get a standing ovation, and on your behalf.....beg the crowd to stay in their seats
cause it's over before it even began, like you and your girl..and i'm tired of hearin her shit
me an her had a sandwhich but used mayo...she told me you would stick with her though cuz Miracle's Whipped
aight damn
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no effort.
dont matter if u come out on top..ill stay storming your lines..
cause 'either way ,you suck , man' - like two fags performing 69's/
Jp's nothing, people quick to forget after reading this lame..
so being known?- even this fuck had trouble saying his name/ *
u'll never see him make it- reason being he never had skill..
so rising to the top? ill stop payne like the purpose of advil/
this guys whack....im sure being garbage wasnt in ya plans..
but everything about u..... blew J, like hardcore toronto fans/
hes not a gangster -hes just crappy..
cuz the only time he sprays blood is his mother fucking ava/
**(he spelt his name wrong in the title..Pagne)
very nice
im gonna vote for miracle,much better punches and a flow that was easy to follow.jim was aight,need to work on flow and structure.I thought that you were headed in the right direction with punches,but the rhymes are what make them connect.Also tighten up that flow.
v=mir
you can't drop that slick shit, cuz it's hard after i rapture your bowels
he claims to be the sickest rapper that spits...but he's really the sickest rapper that swallows
lol i like this, not bad..
learn how to throw in the towel, but don't act like it's a boxin match
ask the tootsie pop owl, how many licks does he have to take...to put out an awesome rap?
lol owned him on that one.. like the creativity, fresh.
cockin' back, and aimin' at whats under your stocking cap, i wont even read your phony post
you'll need a miracle to beat me...from the father, the son AND the holy ghost
could have been a bit more harsh.. ok at best
cause it's over before it even began, like you and your girl..and i'm tired of hearin her shit
me an her had a sandwhich but used mayo...she told me you would stick with her though cuz Miracle's Whipped
another fresh one.. like the creativity.
vs
dont matter if u come out on top..ill stay storming your lines..
cause 'either way ,you suck , man' - like two fags performing 69's/
ok at best
Jp's nothing, people quick to forget after reading this lame..
so being known?- even this fuck had trouble saying his name/ *
ok personal, should have hit harder.. the set up ok, punch failed
u'll never see him make it- reason being he never had skill..
so rising to the top? ill stop payne like the purpose of advil/
okish
this guys whack....im sure being garbage wasnt in ya plans..
but everything about u..... blew J, like hardcore toronto fans/
lol fresh shit here buddy
J got this battle with fresher concepts, harder punches, and consistency.. M, you under estimated him it seems.. or u just half assed it lazy.
you can't drop that slick shit, cuz it's hard after i rapture your bowels
he claims to be the sickest rapper that spits...but he's really the sickest rapper that swallows
lol alright
learn how to throw in the towel, but don't act like it's a boxin match
ask the tootsie pop owl, how many licks does he have to take...to put out an awesome rap?
lol good
cockin' back, and aimin' at whats under your stocking cap, i wont even read your phony post
you'll need a miracle to beat me...from the father, the son AND the holy ghost
nice
this homies toast, Jimmy will spank you then thank you for taking defeat
I'll get a standing ovation, and on your behalf.....beg the crowd to stay in their seats
nah..
cause it's over before it even began, like you and your girl..and i'm tired of hearin her shit
me an her had a sandwhich but used mayo...she told me you would stick with her though cuz Miracle's Whipped
nah...
vs
dont matter if u come out on top..ill stay storming your lines..
cause 'either way ,you suck , man' - like two fags performing 69's/
lol alright
Jp's nothing, people quick to forget after reading this lame..
so being known?- even this fuck had trouble saying his name/ *
haha nice
u'll never see him make it- reason being he never had skill..
so rising to the top? ill stop payne like the purpose of advil/
ok, pretty good
this guys whack....im sure being garbage wasnt in ya plans..
but everything about u..... blew J, like hardcore toronto fans/
meh, I saw the concept but the punch wasn't good
hes not a gangster -hes just crappy..
cuz the only time he sprays blood is his mother fucking ava/
nope
Both started off hard but fizzled out towards the end, but I'll give it to miracle.
2-1 uppin
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...89/index2.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...496/index.html
left comments on these but can't vote cuz im a newbie lol
jimmy - punches were good, work on rhythm tho, it didn't roll of the toungue to good
miracle - good flow and good punches
w/ jimmy - both had good punches but jimmy's were better.
to the moon
upp
uppin
what are u jimmy to? why u uppin my thread
no i am not that guy lol...uppin again
upp
v/ j
his mircale whipped line and his opener got him the win, mircale had played concepts and bad misses..
Aight....
Jimmy - Started off mad slow homie not gonna lie i wasn't feelin your shit the first 2 bars, then you went crazy at the last couple bars homie that shit was dope ..Work on your vocab a little bit though, and also the whole "your girl" shit is kinda played, but you still worked it out good homie, so i giyu like a 3.5/5 (woulda been like a 4.5/5 if the whole thing was as dope as the last part)
Miracle - You were the opposite, IMO, you started off pretty good but then your shit deteriorated. you had the better vocab here IMO, but i think Jimmy won this cuz he had some pretty dope punches in his.
V/Jimmy
dont matter if u come out on top..ill stay storming your lines..
cause 'either way ,you suck , man' - like two fags performing 69'sC
this guys whack....im sure being garbage wasnt in ya plans..
but everything about u..... blew J, like hardcore toronto fans/
VS
you can't drop that slick shit, cuz it's hard after i rapture your bowels
he claims to be the sickest rapper that spits...but he's really the sickest rapper that swallows
this homies toast, Jimmy will spank you then thank you for taking defeat
I'll get a standing ovation, and on your behalf.....beg the crowd to stay in their seats
VOTE : miracle, cuz he had better rhymes n flow
Jimmy Pagne, u gotta work out yo rhymes cuz there was alota shit that didnt rhyme, good luck bro
lmao up
lmao coming from a guy whos best line was...Quote:
Jimmy Pagne, u gotta work out yo rhymes cuz there was alota shit that didnt rhyme, good luck bro
^^doesn't even make senseQuote:
Lickety you a homo a bitch and a hoe
no homo but suck my dick with a huge pole
upp
man this one is pretty close
come on wit the votes dammitttttt
umm
v/ Miracle
He had better punches and I think was more consistent. Jimmy you had some nice shit there but you weren't consisten enough.
you can't drop that slick shit, cuz it's hard after i rapture your bowels
he claims to be the sickest rapper that spits...but he's really the sickest rapper that swallows
Weak opener
learn how to throw in the towel, but don't act like it's a boxin match
ask the tootsie pop owl, how many licks does he have to take...to put out an awesome rap?
I see the concept, but your punch wasn't straight
cockin' back, and aimin' at whats under your stocking cap, i wont even read your phony post
you'll need a miracle to beat me...from the father, the son AND the holy ghost
Ehh
this homies toast, Jimmy will spank you then thank you for taking defeat
I'll get a standing ovation, and on your behalf.....beg the crowd to stay in their seats
Weak
cause it's over before it even began, like you and your girl..and i'm tired of hearin her shit
me an her had a sandwhich but used mayo...she told me you would stick with her though cuz Miracle's Whipped
Decent
vs
dont matter if u come out on top..ill stay storming your lines..
cause 'either way ,you suck , man' - like two fags performing 69's/
Decent opener
Jp's nothing, people quick to forget after reading this lame..
so being known?- even this fuck had trouble saying his name/ *
Personal, Okay..
u'll never see him make it- reason being he never had skill..
so rising to the top? ill stop payne like the purpose of advil/
Ehh, okay
this guys whack....im sure being garbage wasnt in ya plans..
but everything about u..... blew J, like hardcore toronto fans/
Set up wasn't great, okay closer
hes not a gangster -hes just crappy..
cuz the only time he sprays blood is his mother fucking ava/
Nahh
Vote - Miracle
Jimmy I see your elevating. You have these concepts, but seem to have trouble wording them & setting them up. Miracle came consistent and had more direct punches.