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10-16 linez
3-0=ko
first to five votes
poll and well explained votes
no crew votes:kid:
Ok I've checked in ..we both have 45-50 minutes to post...1
aight
checkin
Shall we begin this massacre...LeTs Go
your rymes are like "Rb battle threads", you have all these RAPPERS BORED(board)//so when it come TO SCORES,your hands are tied, like the first two kids in your AVATOR//your rymes a "joke", that you dont get LAUGHTER FOR//so your verse wouldnt come out on top,even if I posted my ryme AFTER YOURS//..
Its over spits,so your like a "lent out watch", your on BORROWED TIME//and my name will never be in your signiture, even if you BORROWED MINE//just "to be on the map", you put your pen to Streets and write your LINES//but even after there on "concrete", you still will never have the "HARDEST" RYMES//
..:Let Slow it down:..
Dont MENTION ME....even in Dictionary between SHit and syphillis,you wouldnt get SYMPOTHY//you couldnt "breakdown Defeat(DaFeet)", even if you gave me a "Foot INJURY"//you could give me "Parinoya" Pills, you still couldnt PUT FEAR INTO ME//
becuase your QUEER TENDENCIES...got you "Blowing more Horns"..then "DEER SYNPHANIES"//
..:FuCK Tha BullShIt, Its time to Murk::..
this battle, got LOTS ON YOUR HEAD....but yours, are NOT TO BE READ//because even when you wearing the latest fashions, you aint getting no PROPS ON YOUR THREADS//
16bars is like peeps "talking about your skills", NOT ALOT TO BE SAID//but I still got your rap "papers on lockdown", kinda like a COP WITH HIS BREAD//
..::ItS OvA::..
..::1::..
Your Victory... Un-Accetpable, Verbally Paralyze Your Nervous System Causin Inexorable 'Traits'//
Provoked Anger, Raged, You Couldn't 'Confuse-My-Mind' if you Put-Your-Flow-In a Maze//
Remorseless Hatred, Fuck Shootin Gats, It's Back to da Basics//
Cripplin Spines, Lobotomic Sugeries Dodgin You're Verbal Bullets More Impressional 'Than-Da-Matrix//
I Guess You Should Call me da 'Demoniac Plastic Surgeon' da Way I Gave this Faggot a 'Face-Lift'//
My Raps? Vicious, Igonminous Distinctive Rhymin 'Divergin-Brain-Cells', My Flowin Can't Be Defined//
I Didn't Know They had 'Prison-For-Words' Until I Got Dejuretharaw Lyrics Confined//
im pinnin-ur-verbals-in-a-morbid-cat-fight its like u wrestlin-wit-gerbils-when-ur-tracks-juss-dont-run-right//
pimpin-this-herb-ill-attack-to-hit-his-left-eye Cuz my punches have u spinnin-in-circles-like-orbited-satillites//...
i slice ur flows to have you deal-wit-the-stitches-and-scars Cuz i take ribs out of you to reveal-the-bitch-that-u-are//
Niggas like me... 'Blessed First', Place Upon you a 'Perplex Curse', Sinnful Piercin Grotesque-Hurt//
This muthafucka Couldn't Flow-TIGHT Rappin in a 'Spandex-Shirt'// (DAMN) haha
Dejurethraw can't FLOWS-Dirty If His Mouth was Stained wit 'Specks-of-Dirt//
Erratic Derision, Instinctional Friction, Causin More Heat Than Nuclear Blast Missions//
This Nigga Dejuretharaw on-my-Balls like it's My Sperm-High He's Addictin//
Your Punches, Theyre Missin, More Back-Uped Souls Than A Team of Army Coalitions//
nice drop man, damn that shit is nice
lets get some votes
yo who is young dee?
I Didn't Know They had 'Prison-For-Words' Until I Got 'Yound Dee' Lyrics Confined//...lol
you either forgot what battle you was in/ or you used the wrong prewrite...lol
but nice drop
Up for votes...1
Man this was a good battle, but i gotta go with Dejure with the line "your rymes are like "Rb battle threads", you have all these RAPPERS BORED(board)//so when it come TO SCORES,your hands are tied, like the first two kids in your AVATOR//"
1-0 u uppin
more votes please
need votes
lets go folks we need votes
I LIKED QUIK WORD STRUCTURE
VOTE=QUIK
after all this time i been gone there was only one morw voter...dam
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aiight....i'll break it down some and not just say my vote is for.........anyways....both came wit I.L.L. lyrics and punches....i cant quote everything word for word so I'll put it like this......Dejure threw mad punches that were nice but Spit threw not only mad punches but sick wordplay....alot of newbs can't follow wordplay and verbs like that but I'm not a newb....good battle but I'm goin wit Quik
Wow. You all amaze me. I passed out with the illness. Ouch
u shyt was tight but quick he came back harder and i like how he used
Remorseless Hatred, Fuck Shootin Gats, It's Back to da Basics//
Cripplin Spines, Lobotomic Sugeries Dodgin You're Verbal Bullets More Impressional 'Than-Da-Matrix//
I Guess You Should Call me da 'Demoniac Plastic Surgeon' da Way I Gave this Faggot a 'Face-Lift'//
My Raps? Vicious, Igonminous Distinctive Rhymin 'Divergin-Brain-Cells', My Flowin Can't Be Defined//
I Didn't Know They had 'Prison-For-Words' Until I Got Dejuretharaw Lyrics Confined//
dat shyt was nice
my vote=quick
Can't vote on this battle :(
Dejure is my fam !
i'm goin wit de jure on this
feelin his punches better but spittin quik urs was dope too.....close
my vote goes to quik spitt cos he had better punches n better organised word play
Dejure... i admired the style more....Quick yours was still slick
Dejure......peep this KID wonder dude wanna get in with War Lords.......i asked em to chalange any1 he asked me check our battle what you think???
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=42462
4-3 text votes me uppin
5-4 poll=Me
cmon folks lets get some more votes
i thin spittin quik was the best
i voted him cuz was hitting hardest
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6-4 poll
. Keep em comin
Even though you did not take up on our battle, and called me a newbie (smh..), I have no room to sleep on nikkas battles, cuz I know how the shit feels comin' from sites that sleep..
Vote - DeJureThaRaw
Felt he came better wit more punches, and personals.. Witty vocab and wordplay in both ya verses, but I feel DeJure edged this nikka in mostly every category.. Creativity level was nice too..
The battle was nothing eye-popping about yall but it's a battle not to be slept on..
Good battle y'all..
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5-4 text aight
thats cool, but its comin to ya
sick takes this shit simply for use o' wordplay....killer vocab by tha way
holy hot battle.. I vote for dejure.. only because spittin' quiks was a mad pre-write.. I know it was because I battled him in a keystyle before and it wasn't nearly that good.. you both had crazy punches and wordplay.. some ill multies and shit.. hot battle yo..
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-Dont MENTION ME....even in Dictionary between SHit and syphillis,you wouldnt get SYMPOTHY//
/i slice ur flows to have you deal-wit-the-stitches-and-scars Cuz i take ribs out of you to reveal-the-bitch-that-u-are//
It's hard to decide when you gotta compare shyt like that but all in all Quik's verse was harder to get into than Dejure's,he kept it hot and simple.
vote-Dejure