5 bars
house rules
due tonight
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5 bars
house rules
due tonight
sorry my computer froze
need to restart my verse again
ur verses are of no value, and worth? is enough to stop time/
cus' it seems 1800-flowers....is your only credible hotline/
i see she likes to beat on noobs, but liu just wont take it/
losing is a bitch, but i didnt think u two were related/
so u beat simple opponents, the guys like u and u got props/
if u square off with me, i'm sure u'd rather play hop scotch/
i dont have to be a gardner to show flowers i'm about to kill/
we all know ur fate, and its ashame weed out ur skill/ (we doubt ur skill)
liu wont allow u to leave here with a win, let alone breathing/
Alyse from Jupiter? makes sense cus' real women are from venus/
Lucy cruise the short yellow bus, its beef imma get fed
her sense of style is retarded...
an that was after the look of bein inbread!
This chick never be seen as good thats keen observation
this was a dramatic Turn-around..
..leavin her Beatin in her favorite position!
this bitch is screwed dead in ways all you would see is toes
hearin her flow ride the beat.....
......just shows how hard she goes!
this stupid tart kills me bein wack is why talent fled
i yelled to her to bring her A game..
........but the bitch ran over to me instead!
You suck bitch an ya flow can get you fed to the crabs
she brings her importance to RB..As of FL's Punching Bags!
10 blah
ohhhh, Alyse killed it!!
do i need further explanation!?
wtf kinda question is that u dumb bitch i dont give a fuck if the battle is one-sided atleast state that but anyways this vote is Dq'ed
-Quest.
u need to explain
makes no sense for a vote and dont know why u voted the way u did
Vote - Lucy Liu
Multies: Alyse Flowers'
Punches: Lucy Liu
Personals: Lucy Liu
Best Lines of the battle:
i dont have to be a gardner to show flowers i'm about to kill/
we all know ur fate, and its ashame weed out ur skill/ (we doubt ur skill)
vs.
This chick never be seen as good thats keen observation
this was a dramatic Turn-around..
..leavin her Beatin in her favorite position!
Good drops by both vote goes to Lucy Liu with the harder punches.
ur verses are of no value, and worth? is enough to stop time/
cus' it seems 1800-flowers....is your only credible hotline/
so u beat simple opponents, the guys like u and u got props/
if u square off with me, i'm sure u'd rather play hop scotch/
vs
nothin...
MEH battle...alyse ur verse was borin u didnt bring nothin creative n it seems like u were about structure n ur font style then actually spittin...lucy ur verse decent u had a couple ok concepts even tho the hotline shit is played i like how u flip'd it with 1800-flowers shit...
v/lucy
wtf^^ ?
naw, liu you had 2 bars that were good, the rest they just sounded dreary and lifeless and i felt like i'd seen it all before. the most original shit you had going was your weed out line and your jupiter venus line, the related losing is a bitch bar was ok too but still seemed a bit tired out. you're structure and everything was on point tho, you've got nothing to worry about there but you need to be bringing more originality! you're last two bars were tight and you turned it around with them but they shoulda been your first two and the rest of them shoulda followed suit.
I'm giving this one to flowers for over all consistency in her verse. best bars:
good luck to ya both tho, looks like another one that could easily go either way...Quote:
This chick never be seen as good thats keen observation
this was a dramatic Turn-around..
..leavin her Beatin in her favorite position!
..
You suck bitch an ya flow can get you fed to the crabs
she brings her importance to RB..As of FL's Punching Bags!
^^^i didnt like her verse..wtf??
so u beat simple opponents, the guys like u and u got props/
if u square off with me, i'm sure u'd rather play hop scotch/
vs
This chick never be seen as good thats keen observation
this was a dramatic Turn-around..
..leavin her Beatin in her favorite position!
..
You suck bitch an ya flow can get you fed to the crabs
she brings her importance to RB..As of FL's Punching Bags!
man dis battle was horrible .. lucy all of ur concepts were ultra played and simple, except dat one bar i quoted . Alyse i seen u go harder but u get my vote for being overall more consistent ..
v/ ALyse
RTF PLZ : http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...523/index.html
not swayin but what you mean by lifeless and dreary?Quote:
Originally Posted by slushcurser
up votes btw
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ur verses are of no value, and worth? is enough to stop time/
cus' it seems 1800-flowers....is your only credible hotline/
i see she likes to beat on noobs, but liu just wont take it/
losing is a bitch, but i didnt think u two were related/"
V.S
this stupid tart kills me bein wack is why talent fled
i yelled to her to bring her A game..
........but the bitch ran over to me instead!
You suck bitch an ya flow can get you fed to the crabs
she brings her importance to RB..As of FL's Punching Bags!"
my vote is for Alyse...overal better verse ..punches were okay...personals were alrite..lucy I would just punch everytime like u did with the flower hotline...start there you'll be fierce
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see she likes to beat on noobs, but liu just wont take it/
losing is a bitch, but i didnt think u two were related/
....vs
This chick never be seen as good thats keen observation
this was a dramatic Turn-around..
..leavin her Beatin in her favorite position!
You suck bitch an ya flow can get you fed to the crabs
she brings her importance to RB..As of FL's Punching Bags!
...meh battle lucy i felt like I saw all ya concepts before u didnt really have nothin witty....that losin is a btch line was pretty good...if u had more lines like that u wouldve won but I felt like ya concepts were played...for a girl ur a pretty good though ya structure and wordin is aight u jus needa get more creative and think of different concepts......alyse ya verse was mehis I've seen better but u had a couple of aight lines u could also get a little wittier but ya verse was enough to take the win..close battle no hate v/flowers
ya hit up one of my battles honestly plz
Last upp 7
Lucy Liu
ur verses are of no value, and worth? is enough to stop time/
cus' it seems 1800-flowers....is your only credible hotline/
i dont have to be a gardner to show flowers i'm about to kill/
we all know ur fate, and its ashame weed out ur skill/
liu wont allow u to leave here with a win, let alone breathing/
Alyse from Jupiter? makes sense cus' real women are from venus/
vs
Alyse Flowers
this stupid tart kills me bein wack is why talent fled
i yelled to her to bring her A game..
........but the bitch ran over to me instead!
One-sided to me. Lucy takes this shit. Decent battle i guess, Alyse, kinda weak verse. No hate to either or you tho. Alyse I'm usually really diggin ur shit.
V/Lucy Liu
up like the movie
lucy-i liked your verse..i dont know about your punches being played.i thought they were executed well,some smooth wordplay and a consistent rhyme scheme..all in all a solid verse.
alyse-i also liked your verse,id say yall were matched as far as punches,and wordplay,and consistency,to me you both came hard and when it comes down to it i have to go with who i prefered over the other since you were both matched..i think alyse' verse appealed to me more..honestly its so close in me eyes i dont really wanna choose either one.but my votes alyse..no hate.
swayings weak..just so you now.