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listen bitch.
your over your head in this rap game, so lose? dont think you wont
even if you are banging the blocks...on your feet, youll never float
so retire with some class, either that or end up getting trashed
see he's always in 1st, as person we all think of as being last!
so stop it. i've seen your style, and wonder. whered you jock it?
this isn't blast off. but i WISH i could send your style on a rocket
your such a weakling man, just stop it. leave now, forreal
me losing this battle is as likely as your flow getting you a deal
ha, loser. i'm a dog, and you suck? man thats more then a maybe
man it's obvious you give skull, just look at this fags fuckin avy
nigga I fart 10 lines after breakfast on monday mornin /
this nigga is brunch punches is borin & unimportant /
ya little swag wont work I'm unemployin it/
destroyin this little wack backpack rappers annoyin spit/
with wit words whippin yo ass , I'll eat chu & then enjoy a shit ,/
whip my ass witcha work then I'm flushin the toilet bitch/
fuckin tranny dont get it twisted hoe your a bitch /
surely I'm not the nigga he figurin he could score against/
you gettin jumped like your a fence, if I say i'll smoke u it's
cuz you a fag nigga..no offense/I kno how you homos get fuckin lame at
ur little leauge games I'm bettin your the bench/
[QUOTE=khris killem;7155210]
whip my ass witcha work then I'm flushin the toilet bitch/
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lmao spelled wipe wrong my bad u guys wuz in a hurry
uppin this tho
so retire with some class, either that or end up getting trashed
see he's always in 1st, as person we all think of as being last!
so stop it. i've seen your style, and wonder. whered you jock it?
this isn't blast off. but i WISH i could send your style on a rocket
your such a weakling man, just stop it. leave now, forreal
me losing this battle is as likely as your flow getting you a deal
ha, loser. i'm a dog, and you suck? man thats more then a maybe
man it's obvious you give skull, just look at this fags fuckin avy
LOL
....vs
cuz you a fag nigga..no offense/I kno how you homos get fuckin lame at
ur little leauge games I'm bettin your the bench/ lol
King you had a decent verse couple punches made me smirk structure was good that avy line was a good personal....over str8 verse
kris you need to get more creative you could've done a better verse jus get more creative and personal next time don't rush.....king has more experience on this site anyway so he has a better feel on this whole txt shit just read some LLL battles or sum shit.......v/ancel
no hate
hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...850/index.html
your such a weakling man, just stop it. leave now, forreal
me losing this battle is as likely as your flow getting you a deal
ha, loser. i'm a dog, and you suck? man thats more then a maybe
man it's obvious you give skull, just look at this fags fuckin avy
vs
?????
KK never attacked with creativity
King won it with those last 2 bars (if at all)
v/ KING
wtf guys... ancel couldve done better n like i said in another vote post, khris seems to be learning but damn, this was as boring as it gets. Ancel, you aint really slay'em like i thought u would n khris, your verse was bout as bland as they come. only highlight of this battle was
so retire with some class, either that or end up getting trashed
see he's always in 1st, as person we all think of as being last!
with that said.
V/ Ancel
Both verses were lacking, Ancel obviously didn't try and it showed, poor verse...no quotables from either...Ancel get's my vote cause he atleast had some meh'ish punches whereas other dude had nothing...absolutely nothing.
Vote = Ankle
after reading the other posts, i decided not to do bar by bar because it seems Ancel didnt try or something. both were weak and didnt really have puches that hit.Ancels last line didnt even rhyme for god sakes.
vote ancel for having this line
"see he's always in 1st, as person we all think of as being last!"
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well i got 5 but not everyone polled vote....so uppin.
up2.
c'mon vote, and leave links.
you can't leave links no more.
your over your head in this rap game, so lose? dont think you wont
even if you are banging the blocks...on your feet, youll never float
so retire with some class, either that or end up getting trashed
see he's always in 1st, as person we all think of as being last!
ha, loser. i'm a dog, and you suck? man thats more then a maybe
man it's obvious you give skull, just look at this fags fuckin avy
Vs
Nothing
Vote- King Ancel better set ups and punches, his closer made me laugh though, KK keep at it bro', King is another level though man.
so retire with some class, either that or end up getting trashed
see he's always in 1st, as person we all think of as being last!
your such a weakling man, just stop it. leave now, forreal
me losing this battle is as likely as your flow getting you a deal
vs
nothing quotable
khris first of all get rid of the brackets at the end of each line, i can see a little bit of potential in your setups but they are not direct enough imo.
try switching it with wordplay personals etc.
ancel this was a decent drop from you, you had some ok lines i didnt wanna quote but overall a good read, keep it up. in my opinion ancel killed this battle and should be an easy decider.
vote - ancel