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what a dumbass
post up then dummy...see wassup
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This bitch is lame, no flame just smoke like when an old dragon spits...
I already won this...s'cause I'm holding a W over V like a Volkswagon flipped...
Gully, really? How's this bitch gangster while being trapped in the Army...
The only time V pushes weight is when he bumps his battle with LB...
we all know your script is gonna definately end on a lame note...
he reminds me of George Bush the way he goes to war.....and sways votes...
You never beat me dude, that last battle was bullshit, your music is lacking...
and to make sure he gotta shot at the FL title....he had to get 2 crews to back him...
don't ask don't tell, he's sticking to his guns...just try not to be fruity...
s'cause when the Sarge is yelling at him......he's just doing his Doodey...
your turn :)
just got back...gimme a 30 min extension...I'm keyin now
He tried his hand at pimpin, lmao @ how he failin it
So I'm puttin his Nissan to the Maxima...with the rest of his relatives
This gay been goin at it for a while, we all seen his long barrage
N the way he given Vincent Chase, get 'em a screenin on Entourage
He's a dope musician, for days he goes for dolo in men groups
It's no wonder his forte is playin solo's on a skin flute
With women shoot,.....he cant get a broad to grope his paws
The only time Art pickup lines is inhalin coke through a straw
He don't have any accomplishments, he just loses all his skits
n you arent in our fucking crew, stay out of our forum, get off our dicks
These two battlers are some of the top dogs so i'll do a in depth vote
This bitch is lame, no flame just smoke like when an old dragon spits...
I already won this...s'cause I'm holding a W over V like a Volkswagon flipped...
-sick wordplay
Gully, really? How's this bitch gangster while being trapped in the Army...
The only time V pushes weight is when he bumps his battle with LB...
-meh
we all know your script is gonna definately end on a lame note...
he reminds me of George Bush the way he goes to war.....and sways votes...
-mehs
You never beat me dude, that last battle was bullshit, your music is lacking...
and to make sure he gotta shot at the FL title....he had to get 2 crews to back him...
-haha, stretched, but still decent
don't ask don't tell, he's sticking to his guns...just try not to be fruity...
s'cause when the Sarge is yelling at him......he's just doing his Doodey...
-pretty weak personal
vs
He tried his hand at pimpin, lmao @ how he failin it
So I'm puttin his Nissan to the Maxima...with the rest of his relatives
-good wordplay
This gay been goin at it for a while, we all seen his long barrage
N the way he given Vincent Chase, get 'em a screenin on Entourage
-meh
He's a dope musician, for days he goes for dolo in men groups
It's no wonder his forte is playin solo's on a skin flute
-haha
With women shoot,.....he cant get a broad to grope his paws
The only time Art pickup lines is inhalin coke through a straw
-kinda played
He don't have any accomplishments, he just loses all his skits
n you arent in our fucking crew, stay out of our forum, get off our dicks
-ok, more of a strong message than a witty punch
1st bar=...Art, the volkswagen line was just too good to pass up. nice opener
2nd bar=an average personal vs a decent punch, vote goes to Vallus by an edge
3rd bar=Vallus had me laughing, ...Art came ok, but Vallus came witty/funny goes to him
4th bar=...art, both were even in this bar, but the needle points in arts direction for spitting something personal
5th bar=
Vallus.. hard decision but his strong message won it over the weak personal.
Vote Vallus
good battle both of you
VVVVVVV
up 1
up 2
Art
This bitch is lame, no flame just smoke like when an old dragon spits...
I already won this...s'cause I'm holding a W over V like a Volkswagon flipped...
- Dope
Gully, really? How's this bitch gangster while being trapped in the Army...
The only time V pushes weight is when he bumps his battle with LB...
- WHACK AS FUCK... PATHETIC!! SHIT!!......... Meh.. it was k
we all know your script is gonna definately end on a lame note...
he reminds me of George Bush the way he goes to war.....and sways votes...
-meh
You never beat me dude, that last battle was bullshit, your music is lacking...
and to make sure he gotta shot at the FL title....he had to get 2 crews to back him...
- ok-ish
don't ask don't tell, he's sticking to his guns...just try not to be fruity...
s'cause when the Sarge is yelling at him......he's just doing his Doodey...
- meh
Vallus
He tried his hand at pimpin, lmao @ how he failin it
So I'm puttin his Nissan to the Maxima...with the rest of his relatives
- dope... but not as dope as arts
This gay been goin at it for a while, we all seen his long barrage
N the way he given Vincent Chase, get 'em a screenin on Entourage
-k
He's a dope musician, for days he goes for dolo in men groups
It's no wonder his forte is playin solo's on a skin flute
- Hahahaha
With women shoot,.....he cant get a broad to grope his paws
The only time Art pickup lines is inhalin coke through a straw
-nah. ok concept. bad wording resulted in poor punch
He don't have any accomplishments, he just loses all his skits
n you arent in our fucking crew, stay out of our forum, get off our dicks
- Statement
Ok. Both verses were pretty nice actually. Art you started with fire. first two lines were nice, apart from dissing that LB guy who is just... fuckin out of this world. *gives evils*
Vallus you had some nice wordplay too, although Arts was nicer.
I think you both came pretty even on punches, but Val in my opinion you started to drop towards the end. This is tough and... OK... I just realised i cant vote anyway.
AAAH!! Commits suicide after wasting 3 minutes of precious life!!! AAAAHHHH
GRRRRR AHHHH GRRR
GRRRR AHHH!!!!!!
V/Art (If both of you PM me saying you don't mind crew votes, I'll poll it.Though considering i'm voting against a crewmate, it shouldn't be a problem)
wtf if it's against your crew member it's okay always dummy! Crew vote are only not allowed if you vote for your crew mate...poll!
This bitch is lame, no flame just smoke like when an old dragon spits...
I already won this...s'cause I'm holding a W over V like a Volkswagon flipped...
we all know your script is gonna definately end on a lame note...
he reminds me of George Bush the way he goes to war.....and sways votes...
You never beat me dude, that last battle was bullshit, your music is lacking...
and to make sure he gotta shot at the FL title....he had to get 2 crews to back him...
(i was expectin that last to bar to hit, but it fell off)
vs
He tried his hand at pimpin, lmao @ how he failin it
So I'm puttin his Nissan to the Maxima...with the rest of his relatives
This gay been goin at it for a while, we all seen his long barrage
N the way he given Vincent Chase, get 'em a screenin on Entourage
tough battle here but ya boy killed it with the VW line
vote/ Art
both of you guys came with it this time mixing in wits, personal, punches, nameplay, and wordplay...this boils down to who didnt come as hard as the other.i felt as if Val slipped up on wording a few of his punches which took away from his verse. same goes for your first bar, Art. if worded better, that wouldve def. increased your edge...everythign after your first bar was pretty solid though, Val's i got most of ya punches but they didnt seem to hit hard to me so i gotta give this to...
Art.
Val' work on wordin those wordings man. you got all that other shyt together thought so gl on the champ match.
...Art
This bitch is lame, no flame just smoke like when an old dragon spits...
I already won this...s'cause I'm holding a W over V like a Volkswagon flipped...
..Decent-ish, though I've seen flips like these before with name plays..
Gully, really? How's this bitch gangster while being trapped in the Army...
The only time V pushes weight is when he bumps his battle with LB...
..Okay-ish..
we all know your script is gonna definately end on a lame note...
he reminds me of George Bush the way he goes to war.....and sways votes...
..eh played concept..
You never beat me dude, that last battle was bullshit, your music is lacking...
and to make sure he gotta shot at the FL title....he had to get 2 crews to back him...
..Lol this made me laugh for a personal..
don't ask don't tell, he's sticking to his guns...just try not to be fruity...
s'cause when the Sarge is yelling at him......he's just doing his Doodey...
..eh could of been better for a closer..
Vallus
He tried his hand at pimpin, lmao @ how he failin it
So I'm puttin his Nissan to the Maxima...with the rest of his relatives
..Lol I liked the word play bro'..
This gay been goin at it for a while, we all seen his long barrage
N the way he given Vincent Chase, get 'em a screenin on Entourage
..could of set this up a little better, but I got what you was aiming for..
He's a dope musician, for days he goes for dolo in men groups
It's no wonder his forte is playin solo's on a skin flute
..lol not bad at all..
With women shoot,.....he cant get a broad to grope his paws
The only time Art pickup lines is inhalin coke through a straw
..Damn bro', this is a madddd played and even if it was flipped better it'll still be played that's how played of a concept this is, but don't worry WE ALL done similar concepts like these before, even vets..
He don't have any accomplishments, he just loses all his skits
n you arent in our fucking crew, stay out of our forum, get off our dicks
..yeah statement-ish you could of set this up much more funnier or harder here for the personal effect..
Vote- ...Art Well this was actually a tough one to vote on, I really felt Art just won by 1 bar, when it came to constantly both of you had that but that one bar from Vallus pretty much changed my opinion.
This bitch is lame, no flame just smoke like when an old dragon spits...
I already won this...s'cause I'm holding a W over V like a Volkswagon flipped...
ok
Gully, really? How's this bitch gangster while being trapped in the Army...
The only time V pushes weight is when he bumps his battle with LB...
ok
we all know your script is gonna definately end on a lame note...
he reminds me of George Bush the way he goes to war.....and sways votes...
lol
You never beat me dude, that last battle was bullshit, your music is lacking...
and to make sure he gotta shot at the FL title....he had to get 2 crews to back him...
lol
don't ask don't tell, he's sticking to his guns...just try not to be fruity...
s'cause when the Sarge is yelling at him......he's just doing his Doodey...
nah
vs
He tried his hand at pimpin, lmao @ how he failin it
So I'm puttin his Nissan to the Maxima...with the rest of his relatives
ok
This gay been goin at it for a while, we all seen his long barrage
N the way he given Vincent Chase, get 'em a screenin on Entourage
ok
He's a dope musician, for days he goes for dolo in men groups
It's no wonder his forte is playin solo's on a skin flute
ok
With women shoot,.....he cant get a broad to grope his paws
The only time Art pickup lines is inhalin coke through a straw
nah
He don't have any accomplishments, he just loses all his skits
n you arent in our fucking crew, stay out of our forum, get off our dicks
nah
vote - Art
For me it came down to:
This bitch is lame, no flame just smoke like when an old dragon spits...
I already won this...s'cause I'm holding a W over V like a Volkswagon flipped...
&
we all know your script is gonna definately end on a lame note...
he reminds me of George Bush the way he goes to war.....and sways votes...
VS
He tried his hand at pimpin, lmao @ how he failin it
So I'm puttin his Nissan to the Maxima...with the rest of his relatives
&
He's a dope musician, for days he goes for dolo in men groups
It's no wonder his forte is playin solo's on a skin flute
I liked both of them a lot, but overall I had to give it to ...art
His verse was come off sounding better to me and the punches were close, but I think ...Art's consisted of a bit more wordplay.
PS: I forgot that I can't vote >.<
But please spare the time to RTF.
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