aight heres how its goin down 10 bar max (2 lines=1 bar) verses due in 1 hour thats 3:40 eastern time....(now its 2:40) so let that shyt drop....aight 1
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aight heres how its goin down 10 bar max (2 lines=1 bar) verses due in 1 hour thats 3:40 eastern time....(now its 2:40) so let that shyt drop....aight 1
check 1 2...lets goooo
yo chek in or i aint droppn
my fault - didn't see this shit till right now, let's go little bitch . . .
you're just a defendant, i'm the judge about to render your sentence, //
it's XECUTION by a wordsmith, so remain silent as I inject anesthetic//
i got lyricism in my bloodline, verbally i'm in my own pedigree//
the only ism in your blood is that jizzim you swallowed to get your weed//
my metaphors are too complex for juvenile delinquents//
either i recruit you or ridicule you, i'm the lyricist your weak ass need to link wit'//
you a heavy weight? honestly you need to elevate//
i wouldn't even use your demonstration tape as a paper weight//
i'm leapin' your weak shit like sand buggees to sand dunes//
I'm ridiculin' you so bad after this you're gonna have to retreat to Cancun//
when i spit it's like every word is laced with cyanide//
leavin' piles of lyri-miss' behind, so just try 'n' survive?//
son, (pause) your ryhmes are PLAYed like KID's fade//
so before you spit your shit graduate a couple grades//
better yet, have your mom fill out this permission slip//
and asked her for a few bucks so you can afford admission bitch//
cause you're in the presence of ecclectic over-achiever//
and any response you spit'll be pathetic, you best take a breather//
i've just ended your rap dream, do you wanna live with mom the rest of your life?//
no?, then go finish your homework and get off this web site//
20 . . . spit . . .
my bad . . . line 17 should say "(an) ecclectic over-achiever"
metaphysical one can you vote on my battle with Gizmo please. if you do, make it a poll vote. I will vote when this battle gets started.
come on' son, you got no excuse seeing as you're the one that posted this battle
hey while you're waiting for x to drop peep me vs clearstatic
thanks man
sry iwa out im really sry im droppin now
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ima "decapitate" ya "head" from ya "shoulders"/
and your only chance of "rocken" the mic is spitten "boulders"/
ma words incave ya chest like you got lung deflamation/
like asthma ma words taken ya breath like clogged respiration/
you better step up cause you need a solution/
need a better answer? just bow down to the king, X Ecution/
ma punches leave ya brain shook/
and they fly right by you, like NAS i "made you look"/
as ma words hit ya ment membrane is slowly evaporating/
and you about to spontainiously combust from ya head fully inflating/
ya rap career can be written n fit on a "bazooka" "gum wrapper"/
and all ya "jokes" n rhymes are just "knee slappers"/
ima send "jolts" to ya body like "electrocution"/
when the "thunder" hit ya, "life" passes by like a real "X Ecution"/
I'll Stab a "surfboard" through your "head" just to ride on your "BrainWaves"/
Damage your chest plate cuz You couldnt see my "joints" with use of
"X-Rays"/
I'm like a Sniper with Text, the only time you Shoot with "Scopes" is spittin "Mouth-Wash"/
this guy probably uses more giga-"bites" than "bill" and "macintosh"/
yo u went way over the limit i said 10 bars max u spat 20 bars...yo that shyt was way to long...wtf...this shouldnt count...yo erse half of it....bring it to 10 bars not 20 .....1
son, you said "10 bar max (2 lines=1 bar)", and I laid down 20 lines, which equals 10 bars according to your rules. Stop fuckin' bitching. I don't even need a vote of this shit to know I housed you. heavy weight?????????????
w/e.........votes 1
vote- X better punchline and flow.....meta urs was good had good vocab and some nice punches but i think x came out on top and had just overwhelming disses and punches...fav line- ma words incave ya chest like you got lung deflamation/
like asthma ma words taken ya breath like clogged respiration/
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1-0 me....more votes please 1
^^^^^^^^^ for votes wake up......1 .....ill rteturn the favor
Vote Xecution ur opener was tite n the rest of ur was reasonable seen better from u
vote - X
metaphysical u rhyme bout nonsense n shit iin a battle rhyme iuts bout punches like for example
i got lyricism in my bloodline, verbally i'm in my own pedigree//
the only ism in your blood is that jizzim you swallowed to get your weed//
^^ wtf was that not only is it garbage but it makes no sense
my 2 cents
yeah, a battle is about punches, and he didn't direct one line at me, he just spit some pre-written shit. and nonsence, what the fuck is "lung deflamation", deflamation isn't even a fuckin' word, and even if he meant "lung defamation" is still made no sense. but, hey you've got Jay-Z in your avatar, so . . ..
2-0.....thx con....more votes...1
Ur A Joke Metaphysical. u wanna battle.. step up.. n by the way DEFLAMATION is a word u cock muncher dont get jelous becuz u weak take time to elevate.. u guys asked me to vote on ur battle n i did nopw ur bitchin well tehn son u wanna battle?
Come on if you follow tha 2 linez= 1 bar that's 20 linez...anyways, hard to count...nearly equal but if I have to vote I say Xecution...Cause of these linez:
ya rap career can be written n fit on a "bazooka" "gum wrapper"/
and all ya "jokes" n rhymes are just "knee slappers"/
I'm like a Sniper with Text, the only time you Shoot with "Scopes" is spittin "Mouth-Wash"/
this guy probably uses more giga-"bites" than "bill" and "macintosh"/
meta's best:
i got lyricism in my bloodline, verbally i'm in my own pedigree//
the only ism in your blood is that jizzim you swallowed to get your weed//
son, (pause) your ryhmes are PLAYed like KID's fade//
so before you spit your shit graduate a couple grades//
Like I said it was close...but X edged it...keep spittin'...Oh an' how bout votin' on mine w/Shadow...Linez Vs. shadow dog...It's close
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common sleepers...vooooooooote
vote-X
cause he had more casistant flow , way betta punches, and betta wordplay one
fav line-
ya rap career can be written n fit on a "bazooka" "gum wrapper"/
and all ya "jokes" n rhymes are just "knee slappers"/
I'm like a Sniper with Text, the only time you Shoot with "Scopes" is spittin "Mouth-Wash"/
this guy probably uses more giga-"bites" than "bill" and "macintosh"/
X took this one
3-0.......KO.....MODS CLOSE THIS N UPDATE RECORDS PLEASE...1
x ecution got my vote , tigh flow good shit
^^^ close this n update please
yo mods close this and update ma record please......1