FL Champ: Punch Vs. Accurit Phacts (Punch wins)

Front Lines Championship Match

Barcotic (champion)
vs.
Accurit Phacts



Welcome to the 4th bimonthly title match hosted in FL, last match we had Barcotic vs. Classic....in which Classic was unable to show due to net problems at home and he'll have his shot another time...winning the title by default, Barcotic has something to prove in defending his newly won title for the first time...Accurit has rapidly climbed the rankings and could pose to be a threat this week...can Barcotic successfully defend his title?


10 lines minimum
20 lines maximum
No recycling/biting
usual league battle rules apply or there will be a deduction of votes
Check ins due by Wednesday
Verses due by Friday
Both are due by midnight Pacific
this title will be defended once every two weeks



Good luck to you both

Oh I think I prooved somethin last week when I beat the TRUE champion (®andom) in a non title match (since he no longer had the belt) but yeah.. let's go like 14 lines Accurit, I'm kinda busy with shit at home....
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/o...n/untitled.png

gotcha with 14-16


Check...

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Barcotic

i know your not gonna wait till friday to drop, thats weak

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Bar ur lucky..completely forgotten bout this league so i had to hurry and key
While ur album's so "played out"..not even "playback's" will do it for "free
You the champion? and You beg for votes a bit,You suck and thats it
Come on Barcotic like ur "CDs are in quality of feces" no one "buys ur shit"
Bar's disses 'Hit me' like 'Nickel Bags' Little to No effect you're so Perplexed,
My Flows'll wreck, wit a force that'll have you hittin' the Oceans Deck
I've arose to Flex, Roast ya' text like barbeque'n toasted Hens so bet
But i noticed whenever you see my name your so upset you show as Guest
Barcotic you suck! Dont Try it See.the only way I'd lose, I might Conceive
Is if you cut my hands off, and Started writing my Rhymes For Me
Brag?You beat random? Lmao, yeah with all your personal nigas, Just choke
I got banned for freeposting,But You got banned For postin, asking for votes
Say i Hide from dude? Your just Mad that my nigs from 'Sctso' Fried ya Crew
Offered us to THE FAM, Barcotics a little mad all the good heads rejected you
The fam's Dead, And I killed it, Ima crazy btch so to them Im Hanibal Lector
This verse will disect ya,
......................And leave your grave Behind a set Like a Movie Director.





16(Yawn)

....lol
I destroyed just about everyone good in your crew, now it's your turn.. again....

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Accurit Phacts

Futile? You Dont Fit in Rb Like Prositutes attending at Churches
Cause i Could Have Easily Beat you
..........................................With One of My No-Show Verses

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....are you fucking kidding me?? lol....

Your drops are lackin sickness, stop the rapper mission,
last time I saw a line like that.... a veloca raptor sniffed it..
Listen, how the hell you gonna go to war with no weapons dude?
yeah I said you're Russian.... your boyfriend to have sex with you..
Get to steppin dude, I'm number 1, you're runner up, another punk,
tried readin your rhymes with my nakid eye.... but I had to cover up..
I rep Canada, Ireland, Scotland n Sweden, however I don't talk Swedish,
but I WILL have an Acc-sent.... to his mother's front door in small pieces..
Listen Kanye wannabe, if I don't kill you I'll give you a real scare,
n Jesus won't walk with you.... but he might push your wheelchair..
Bitch, Smoka IS a Joka for settin this match, remember our last fight?
he's got me lookin like a nerd.... runnin through the same Phacts twice..
Act right, you thought you'd eat me? well I guess I'm kinda starvin ya,
cuz if winning was your Maine goal.... you're somewhere in Antarctica..
I'm done ripping you, this is the net which is why you're still living dude,
but you're still cryin uncle.... aunt, father, mother n your siblings too..........
:spank:

..........

RTF?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-387813p2.html

Bar ur lucky..completely forgotten bout this league so i had to hurry and key
While ur album's so "played out"..not even "playback's" will do it for "free

-ok, opener coulda been better-1/3

You the champion? and You beg for votes a bit,You suck and thats it
Come on Barcotic like ur "CDs are in quality of feces" no one "buys ur shit"

-ok,played-1/3

Bar's disses 'Hit me' like 'Nickel Bags' Little to No effect you're so Perplexed,
My Flows'll wreck, wit a force that'll have you hittin' the Oceans Deck

-no-0/3

I've arose to Flex, Roast ya' text like barbeque'n toasted Hens so bet
But i noticed whenever you see my name your so upset you show as Guest

-nice,lol-2/3

Barcotic you suck! Dont Try it See.the only way I'd lose, I might Conceive
Is if you cut my hands off, and Started writing my Rhymes For Me

-no-0/3

Brag?You beat random? Lmao, yeah with all your personal nigas, Just choke
I got banned for freeposting,But You got banned For postin, asking for votes

-ok-1/3

Say i Hide from dude? Your just Mad that my nigs from 'Sctso' Fried ya Crew
Offered us to THE FAM, Barcotics a little mad all the good heads rejected you

-lol-2/3

The fam's Dead, And I killed it, Ima crazy btch so to them Im Hanibal Lector
This verse will disect ya,
......................And leave your grave Behind a set Like a Movie Director.

-'grave behind a set'...u mean his crew? meh-1/3

vs

Your drops are lackin sickness, stop the rapper mission,
last time I saw a line like that.... a veloca raptor sniffed it..

-corny-0/3

Listen, how the hell you gonna go to war with no weapons dude?
yeah I said you're Russian.... your boyfriend to have sex with you..

-i get what u were tryin, but meh-1/3

Get to steppin dude, I'm number 1, you're runner up, another punk,
tried readin your rhymes with my nakid eye.... but I had to cover up..

-ok-2/3

I rep Canada, Ireland, Scotland n Sweden, however I don't talk Swedish,
but I WILL have an Acc-sent.... to his mother's front door in small pieces..

-coulda been better-1/3

Listen Kanye wannabe, if I don't kill you I'll give you a real scare,
n Jesus won't walk with you.... but he might push your wheelchair..

-lol,nice!-3/3

Bitch, Smoka IS a Joka for settin this match, remember our last fight?
he's got me lookin like a nerd.... runnin through the same Phacts twice..

-ok-1/3

Act right, you thought you'd eat me? well I guess I'm kinda starvin ya,
cuz if winning was your Maine goal.... you're somewhere in Antarctica..

-lol,nice-2/3

I'm done ripping you, this is the net which is why you're still living dude,
but you're still cryin uncle.... aunt, father, mother n your siblings too..........

-lol, nice 2/3

Aight bar, u been talkin shit bout rooks votes lately, but imma give this to you. V/ bar, I think he had better punches and overall a nicer verse.

Vote - Barcotic

Multies: Tie
Punches: Barcotic
Personals: Tie
Wordplay: Barcotic

Best Lines of the battle:

Your drops are lackin sickness, stop the rapper mission,
last time I saw a line like that.... a veloca raptor sniffed it..

vs.

Bar's disses 'Hit me' like 'Nickel Bags' Little to No effect you're so Perplexed,
My Flows'll wreck, wit a force that'll have you hittin' the Oceans Deck

This is seriously the bast match i've seen on RB...both of you both have skill but in the end Phacts was just out classed..Bar had better multies and more cleaver wordplay

^1st you said multies were tied, then you said I had better multies in your explaination, lol.. either way I appreciate your vote, but a bar for bar breakdown woulda been better.. from now on, for the next voters, please bar for bar it n if you want to then add categories before your explaination....

Is this fa real


i dont mind losing

But please can be atually get some ehavy weights to vote

not crying or nothing just sayin

^Word, I agree, n we'll get better votes, don't worry....

Yeah for real. Shadow is a noob........Light weight and he voted crap in my battle

^Word 2 Big Bird, lol.. but atleast it ain't dickridin.. Shadow has never voted in my battles ever n BEAZY doesn't even like me cuzza the way I crit his shit so, lol....

i just want good votes thats all


for me or not

up

^Word, I want the same thing, so nowun can say shit n there's no excuses after whoever wins.. n uhh, I don't think we need to up a stickied thread, lol....

Bar ur lucky..completely forgotten bout this league so i had to hurry and key
While ur album's so "played out"..not even "playback's" will do it for "free
ok heard similar b4 tho
You the champion? and You beg for votes a bit,You suck and thats it
Come on Barcotic like ur "CDs are in quality of feces" no one "buys ur shit"
ok attmept....played line
Bar's disses 'Hit me' like 'Nickel Bags' Little to No effect you're so Perplexed,
My Flows'll wreck, wit a force that'll have you hittin' the Oceans Deck
meh
I've arose to Flex, Roast ya' text like barbeque'n toasted Hens so bet
But i noticed whenever you see my name your so upset you show as Guest
wording could have been better but still good
Barcotic you suck! Dont Try it See.the only way I'd lose, I might Conceive
Is if you cut my hands off, and Started writing my Rhymes For Me
nice one
Brag?You beat random? Lmao, yeah with all your personal nigas, Just choke
I got banned for freeposting,But You got banned For postin, asking for votes
lol...not bad
Say i Hide from dude? Your just Mad that my nigs from 'Sctso' Fried ya Crew
Offered us to THE FAM, Barcotics a little mad all the good heads rejected you
ok
The fam's Dead, And I killed it, Ima crazy btch so to them Im Hanibal Lector
This verse will disect ya,
......................And leave your grave Behind a set Like a Movie Director.
meh

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Your drops are lackin sickness, stop the rapper mission,
last time I saw a line like that.... a veloca raptor sniffed it..
ok
Listen, how the hell you gonna go to war with no weapons dude?
yeah I said you're Russian.... your boyfriend to have sex with you..
not bad
Get to steppin dude, I'm number 1, you're runner up, another punk,
tried readin your rhymes with my nakid eye.... but I had to cover up..
wasn't feeling it
I rep Canada, Ireland, Scotland n Sweden, however I don't talk Swedish,
but I WILL have an Acc-sent.... to his mother's front door in small pieces..
ok
Listen Kanye wannabe, if I don't kill you I'll give you a real scare,
n Jesus won't walk with you.... but he might push your wheelchair.
lol nice one.
Bitch, Smoka IS a Joka for settin this match, remember our last fight?
he's got me lookin like a nerd.... runnin through the same Phacts twice..
another nice one
Act right, you thought you'd eat me? well I guess I'm kinda starvin ya,
cuz if winning was your Maine goal.... you're somewhere in Antarctica..
good
I'm done ripping you, this is the net which is why you're still living dude,
but you're still cryin uncle.... aunt, father, mother n your siblings too.........
meh...wasn't feeling it

Good battle guys. But I think Barcotic came harder.

V/Barcotic

can i vote or would you take it as crew vote? always an honest voter so let me know.

barcotic said i could vote....


Bar ur lucky..completely forgotten bout this league so i had to hurry and key
While ur album's so "played out"..not even "playback's" will do it for "free
nah, stay away from played out lines.
You the champion? and You beg for votes a bit,You suck and thats it
Come on Barcotic like ur "CDs are in quality of feces" no one "buys ur shit"
meh,
Bar's disses 'Hit me' like 'Nickel Bags' Little to No effect you're so Perplexed,
My Flows'll wreck, wit a force that'll have you hittin' the Oceans Deck
ok, if you tried harder on the harshness of the punch then the flow this could of been better with wording.
I've arose to Flex, Roast ya' text like barbeque'n toasted Hens so bet
But i noticed whenever you see my name your so upset you show as Guest
ok, not hard but okay
Barcotic you suck! Dont Try it See.the only way I'd lose, I might Conceive
Is if you cut my hands off, and Started writing my Rhymes For Me
seen it before
Brag?You beat random? Lmao, yeah with all your personal nigas, Just choke
I got banned for freeposting,But You got banned For postin, asking for votes
this personal was weak
Say i Hide from dude? Your just Mad that my nigs from 'Sctso' Fried ya Crew
Offered us to THE FAM, Barcotics a little mad all the good heads rejected you
ok
The fam's Dead, And I killed it, Ima crazy btch so to them Im Hanibal Lector
This verse will disect ya,
......................And leave your grave Behind a set Like a Movie Director.
too stretched man, concept was bad to.

overall you had some ok hits, if you really did key this up that's cool but i would of took more time on a match like this. so yeah, stay away from using "your so played" concepts, the cd's line didn't appeal to me. oceans deck line could have been good with better wording. the comparison between getting banned was a basically a personal statement. the show as guest like was average in my opinion, so yea not bad verse just put more time and you'll do alot better.

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Your drops are lackin sickness, stop the rapper mission,
last time I saw a line like that.... a veloca raptor sniffed it..
played out, you know this
Listen, how the hell you gonna go to war with no weapons dude?
yeah I said you're Russian.... your boyfriend to have sex with you..
seen that wordplay so i can't give you credit here
Get to steppin dude, I'm number 1, you're runner up, another punk,
tried readin your rhymes with my nakid eye.... but I had to cover up..
meh, you said you closed ur eyes readin his verse. not feelin
I rep Canada, Ireland, Scotland n Sweden, however I don't talk Swedish,
but I WILL have an Acc-sent.... to his mother's front door in small pieces..
[this was good, best bar so far.
Listen Kanye wannabe, if I don't kill you I'll give you a real scare,
n Jesus won't walk with you.... but he might push your wheelchair.
decent.
Bitch, Smoka IS a Joka for settin this match, remember our last fight?
he's got me lookin like a nerd.... runnin through the same Phacts twice..
okay
Act right, you thought you'd eat me? well I guess I'm kinda starvin ya,
cuz if winning was your Maine goal.... you're somewhere in Antarctica..
i wrote a punch like this and made it better but still flipped decent.
I'm done ripping you, this is the net which is why you're still living dude,
but you're still cryin uncle.... aunt, father, mother n your siblings too.........
nah, if you re-read this line bar you'll know its statement ish after

overall decent verse i guess, thought you'd be better but still enough to grab the win here, so i didnt like your played ass line about sniffing a line, i've seen the russian wordplay before so didn't like that at all, naked eye/cover up was bland, small pieces line was creative, good hit. havn't seen that wheelchair line so i gave you credit for that, flipped the goal line not too bad either way, your closer tho son, you just sucked balls for a closer and thats supposed to end him with those closers. neways...

decent battle...

vote - Barcotic

Quote:

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Bar ur lucky..completely forgotten bout this league so i had to hurry and key
While ur album's so "played out"..not even "playback's" will do it for "free

No sting on this punch, useless concept

You the champion? and You beg for votes a bit,You suck and thats it
Come on Barcotic like ur "CDs are in quality of feces" no one "buys ur shit"

This was pretty bad, I wont lie to you..


Bar's disses 'Hit me' like 'Nickel Bags' Little to No effect you're so Perplexed,
My Flows'll wreck, wit a force that'll have you hittin' the Oceans Deck

There's no flip here, just flat out saying the punch...

I've arose to Flex, Roast ya' text like barbeque'n toasted Hens so bet
But i noticed whenever you see my name your so upset you show as Guest

No you didn't, I'd never sleep with you.. I don't really get this


Barcotic you suck! Dont Try it See.the only way I'd lose, I might Conceive
Is if you cut my hands off, and Started writing my Rhymes For Me


... terrible

Brag?You beat random? Lmao, yeah with all your personal nigas, Just choke
I got banned for freeposting,But You got banned For postin, asking for votes


personal, but no real punch or flip.. cmon duke

Say i Hide from dude? Your just Mad that my nigs from 'Sctso' Fried ya Crew
Offered us to THE FAM, Barcotics a little mad all the good heads rejected you

no flip.. to the.. person..al..


The fam's Dead, And I killed it, Ima crazy btch so to them Im Hanibal Lector
This verse will disect ya,
......................And leave your grave Behind a set Like a Movie Director.

I get it, but it's a simple simile.. ur best line i'd say..

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Vs.

Quote:

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Your drops are lackin sickness, stop the rapper mission,
last time I saw a line like that.... a veloca raptor sniffed it..

pretty funny and random.. not a great one..

Listen, how the hell you gonna go to war with no weapons dude?
yeah I said you're Russian.... your boyfriend to have sex with you..

I've had my fill of russian word plays this decade..

Get to steppin dude, I'm number 1, you're runner up, another punk,
tried readin your rhymes with my nakid eye.... but I had to cover up..

I liked this flip.. haven't really seen it used.. good punch

I rep Canada, Ireland, Scotland n Sweden, however I don't talk Swedish,
but I WILL have an Acc-sent.... to his mother's front door in small pieces..

god, that wordplay is shat

Listen Kanye wannabe, if I don't kill you I'll give you a real scare,
n Jesus won't walk with you.... but he might push your wheelchair..

lmao.. even with out the kanye thing, this concept still woulda got a laugh out of me..

Bitch, Smoka IS a Joka for settin this match, remember our last fight?
he's got me lookin like a nerd.... runnin through the same Phacts twice..

ehh, nameplay.. decent

Act right, you thought you'd eat me? well I guess I'm kinda starvin ya,
cuz if winning was your Maine goal.... you're somewhere in Antarctica..

good concept.. hate the wordplay, but this is cool

I'm done ripping you, this is the net which is why you're still living dude,
but you're still cryin uncle.... aunt, father, mother n your siblings too..........

I love these flips.. extended metaphores.. great closer

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Pha: work on flipping your personals into creative punches, your bars were to plain and missed. You could add some multi's into your longer bars also, just keep battling.. you have the formula for a bar, the rest is experiences.

bar: couple funny lines, some were filler bars.. keep doing what you're doing.. don't be afraid to give up a punch or set up for a bit of self glory or better multi's.. it adds to enjoyment.

Categories wise, I can't say that pha took any decisively.. Barc, took all the major factors n' cats.

Vote/ bar..

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No offense, but for a title match..
the bar count was low, and pha was out matched.

Flaws of points based battling?

I'd say so.

person with most time on there hands goes to the finals.