16 BARS
GOOD CLEAN BATTLE
NO FAVORITE PERSON VOTES
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16 BARS
GOOD CLEAN BATTLE
NO FAVORITE PERSON VOTES
ILL GO 1ST...
BY THA WAY I SEEN U SPIT IT DOESNT MAKE SENSE/
ALL THOSE LINES N NOT 1 OF EM EVEN RHYME/
GET YA MYND RIGHT N FOCUS ON YA GOAL/
FOOTBALL, PUT DA RECEIVER DOWN LIKE A PHONE ON HOLD/
U A FUNNY LIL DUDE THINKIN U GOT SKILLS/
U SHOULDA WENT TO WWW.ICANT GETA DEAL...(.COM)
U KNO HOW IF FEELS TA LOOSE N GET BEATEN/
IM THA KING ON THA SITE, I WANNA KNO WHO DEFEATIN!/
CRAZY IM THA BEST NO WRITTENS IS PROCESSED/
SAY WAT U WANT NONE OF YALL CUD PROTEST/
AGINST ME ONLY THING IS YALL CUD GO AGINST ME/
THIS AINT NOTHIN, AINT EVEN INTENSE TO ME/
GET YA SHIT 2GETHER BECAUSE U MUST B UNDER THA WEATHER/
I GOT FLOWTATIONS LIKE HEAVY ROTATIONS/
SO IM FINISHED LYRICALLY RIPPIN/
U SHOLD RETIRE LIKE SCOTTY PIPPEN/
tha is poor
you should learn how to score
before you write down your floor/
you say i cant ryhme
well thats fine
but i cant seem to find your ryhme/
see you just one of them other kind
who has always got me on there mind
wishing they where in with mine/
im not even tryin but im still flyin/
no here comes the main line/
you start wishing the you new how to start dissin/
its like RAT-A-TAT-TAT
now you wont know how to follow that/
so now you wanna fuck with DRE
well you chose the wrong fuckin day
so you better start to prey/
see im P to tha D
now let me see if you got a melodie/
see now you in a lyrical mess
wishing you knew how to deetest/
it should be a crime to write those lines/
you think you shine, you think you look fine/
let me tell you bout mine
robby D got shoot by nine
then one more went through his mind/
and all i could do was cry
but then one day i got back online/
then i realised i know how to shine/
and look fine/
its time to vote people
QB sniper just face it i beat you
this battle was pretty...boring and bad there was nothing that stuck out or nothing that was really hardcore...but if id have o vote id give it to dre just cause his rhymed more...yall need to step up tho...holla bak 1
WELL ACTUALLY IN THE BEGINING I SAID 16 BARS ONLY & HE WENT BEYOND SO WHY DONT HE BE DISQUALIFIED!
YO wuz up wit thiz battle???? U saying he disqualified???
Yo anywayz...like X said shit wus boring as fuck....no real hard puches so i have to go with whoever came out the best overall
Vote: Dre.....cuz he shit wus better structure and had decent punches
Ps: please vote my battles
Lyrical G vs Skitzo nicca
Lyrical G vs Hot One
QB you know wot bars are
each / = 1
man you shit is all gone 2 far
im not sure ur aware but one bar is the equivalent of two lines but hell even with 16 lines i cant respect anyone who calls themselves P DRE so they can u lines like "fuck with DRE"..............
Vote: QB Sniper
its 1-1, outta 5 votes
oops 2-1 didnt see LYRICAL_GANGSTA's vote
vote P DRE cuz he had betta punches it flowed better n it jus stood out more
thats 3-1
keep it coming peeps
yo i say Dre because Sniper messed up at the begginin by not even rhymn and Dre had a metter flow overall
Tha only votes that will count are in tha polls... end of story..
Now QB got this with a better flow and over-all better verse. Both were simple rhymes, but P Dre's spit was really weak, and had a far too simplistic rhymes. Kinda reminds me of a NewB to rap period. Both need to elevate though. QB has potential, P Dre needs years of work.
Vote:: QB Sniper, <--bad name duk
looks like its 4-2 to me dogg
come on 1 more vote and ive done this dick. people please vote