Good Meets Evil.

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Good Meets Evil
By: Bell And J6F


The time had come, the 4 horsemen had scorched the skies
The dead had clawed out their graves, the flaming torches rise
But now its time to thwart those guys, Gabriel drew up the plans
A counterattack to take place from the UK to Japan
The celestial host stood strapped in etherial armour
Golden spears and winged helmets, fearless of drama
They were peerless in karma, the force to strike balance
Defy the serpent's ambition to grasp on Christ's chalice
Time to invade the Night Palace, home of the blood throne
Where tortured souls roam, and nightmares are flesh and bone

My army arise from the ground as we partol the sky
Awaiting the moment that we enter our hellish prime
"I wont rest until my army beholds this victory"
Words of wisdom that shall float down into history
As we begin flying past the golden gate of heaven
My army slices pedestrian angels causing a rebelion
We enter the center of olympus, war begins
The saints and sinners, who shall grasp the win

The armies rush like 2 tides, like the red sea reverses
Crash together with violence, heavy bleeding and curses
Gabriel dueling with the minotaur, pearl white feathers flying
Sledgehammers cracked the earth, the earth quakes as if crying
Tears of larva crack the surface, marred the perfect scenery
Both sides began to cook, burning bushes in the greenery
Angels and Demons knew horror as their world was collapsing
"What have we done?" Perhaps then, the last thing they were asking

Neither leader is proud, neither side is winning
If this war never ends then their will be endless killing
Endless sinning, neither side can truely die
People of earth frown as the blood of angels lowers ..
..from the sky
Shall I try, to kill Jesus as he slaughters my minions
I mean, this is the man that blessed me a soul of demons
I float up next to him, breath of hell shivers his spine
And at the same time, we cross eachothers line
"Our leaders are down! Is the war actualy over?!
Maybe as of now ..
But It'll return the month of October."

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Feed now pelase.

This piece was amazing, man. I enjoyed every second of it. The imagination I had reading this, was beautiful. The both of your vocab was on point. The multi's even.... You both did incredible. It never wouldv'e been wrote better.

I actually have a piece in Poetic Striptures called "The 4 Horseman". You both should check it out.... I'm stupid for putting it there (Its more Hip-hop, than poetry), but I didnt want the MODS deleting it. Id appreciate it if you two RTF.... The "Feedback please..." in "Open Mic". I wrote that a few days ago... The other dudes are loving it, so check it out, maybe you'll like it, too....-one

I'll check out the 4 horsemen. Thankyou for the feed.

upps

nice drop..good flow..nice multies.....i really liked the imagery and flow going on here this pieace was amazing... and it was set up just right...this was thought out very nice...overall =8/10

Thanks.

DEEP & CREATIVE peice... Good multies mostly, and this was just hot... I'm not much of a topic guy myself, but I still enjoy reading others... Very nice... The opener was my favorite... Great way to catch the reader's eyes... Keep up...

Thanks.

good piece you did here your word choice and picture usage did justice for the piece like the whole tempo of it kept me in it the whole time never drew away so kudos on that. My advice would be maybe more direct and forceful but other then that good showing

porfavor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327008

I left that with feedback.. I think.

Uppin.

This was creative and intriging but very unrealistic. Now you know that Satan, his demons & all the unsaved will be tossed into The Lake of Fire. Why would God "The Creator" lose or even tie with The Devil "A creation"?......

DUDE! It doesnt have to be real fucker. It's called imagenation, you might want to get one or stop reading poetry!

you mean imagination. Imagine reality! respect God.

Fuck god. I'm atheist fool.

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atheist fool.

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Your Right! You Are!

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Originally Posted by †Crossed†

DUDE! It doesnt have to be real fucker. It's called imagenation, you might want to get one or stop reading poetry!

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Don't fucking tell someone to stop writing just because they questioned your piece.

This piece was alright. With the topic you chose to write about, it could have been better. It was decent. Nothing more, nothing less

j6f's part was good though :p

^^
i concur...

you dont tell someone that shit especially from you...cus you aint even on a level of being praised homie nor have you have vcome yet to produce apiece worth even remmebering lex...dude seriously..stop with your ego...and back tp the piece but seriously this piece was ok i guess. decent...nothing special i mean it was a good collab though...nice wording here and there nah mean....but nothing stood out to me lex...get more into ORIGINALITY and FIX your wording man...do rough drafts and shit homie..before posting up a verse.

Closed. Too much shit talking going on in here and besides, this piece is old and shouldn't have been upped. Even if i AM on this.