Crew Battle
Well rounded vs NA
10-18 lines
Blind spit
due saturday midnight 12pm
Good L
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Crew Battle
Well rounded vs NA
10-18 lines
Blind spit
due saturday midnight 12pm
Good L
A Triple Check...
Yea..cuz writing tight flows for me is such a ultimate passionQuote:
Originally Posted by evil king
Evil gay ass tryn 2 b a nurse, cuz he's a R.ival of N.efarious A.ssassins
Typically, yes...sumtimes I quik-key 2 give my opp.'s less hurtQuote:
Originally Posted by evil king
Cuz if I didn't pre-write, it'd be wack..just like ur best work
Do wut u must, but this is a loss for you, so don't fight thisQuote:
Originally Posted by evil king
Ur so pathetic, u make otha corrupt royalty wanna go righteous
Congrats, but it won't help u much, retreat if I must say soQuote:
Originally Posted by evil king
The outcome of this, me vs. you, I predict a quik 5:0 ratio
**Let the Massacre Begin...**
U said 2 join ur crew, dat ppl need 3 battle wins per week
Y is dat, dats sumthin u not even capable 2 complete
U reek w/ stink flows, it's not cuz u always shower last
Ur rap career only lasted seconds.............................
................I see it falling fast like salt in an hour-glass
U just known 2 curse, but its real lyrics that I disperse
Think u hav a 'clue' bout rappin, cuz........................
..........................Sherlock Holmes found you a verse
Ur punches are lower-'hits', and mines are upper-'cuts'
U get ate easily, hav a harder time eatn when my supper sucks
Ur flows needs a little Maintenance, n they not Well Rounded
Evil King decided 2 go up to heaven, cuz...........................
...............he got scared at how going down to Hell Sounded
18
If I had two word's to describe him I wouldn't quote shit.
him spit crack? ha................................................ ..
closest he's got 2 that is the aftertaste after he smoke's it.
.
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your crew, fuckin sucks N' I don't think I've seen NA worse.
ur suppose to save the best 4 last....................................
.................so now do you understand why I chose NA first?
you don't realize I'm winnin guess I gotta phade it threw.
cuz last time he made it 2 da nextlevel he neva made da crew.
if this battle was a game of tug of war u won't be pullin it.
buncha newb's, his crew threadz like a sewer..full of shit.
downloadin animalplanet only time u manage a vet crew.
N' I always thought pussy didn't have a face.................
.....................................well thats until I fucking met you.
damn herb couldn't baby a win even if he was damn weezy.
and I would've added you to my roster but mak's jam easy.
would describe a good pussy but I don't wanna mess wit his fixture.
hustla?ha last time he push cane he was downlaodin wrestlin pictures.
shitted on him wit nothing 2 good so now he's gotta be piss.
and how can u be a underrated mc?.......................
..........when you've always been at the bottom of the list.
blah nothing too creative juss enough to win.........I think lol
don't get don't vote
uppin 1.
Upp 1
uppin 1
uppin.
no......... if we dont get it thats your fault.Quote:
don't get don't vote
and you said that I needed more punches, you dont know what a punchline is, and quit with the poser gangsta lines there gay.
other guy had a better go, lines were more hitting and no selling coke talk like it cool stuff or something.
vote.........mak
Vote DQed...wack
-Smoka
Breakdown...
Evil...
If I had two word's to describe him I wouldn't quote shit.
him spit crack? ha................................................ ..
closest he's got 2 that is the aftertaste after he smoke's it.
pretty dope wordplay...liked it...
your crew, fuckin sucks N' I don't think I've seen NA worse.
ur suppose to save the best 4 last....................................
.................so now do you understand why I chose NA first?
Lol, not bad
you don't realize I'm winnin guess I gotta phade it threw.
cuz last time he made it 2 the next level he neva made da crew.
LOL! Nice punch!
if this battle was a game of tug of war u won't be pullin it.
buncha newb's, his crew threadz like a sewer..full of shit.
meh...kinda played...
downloadin animalplanet prolly only time u manage a vet crew.
N' I always thought pussy didn't have a face.................
.....................................well thats until I fucking met you.
lol, pretty creative...
damn herb couldn't baby a win even if he was damn weezy.
and I would've added you to my roster but mak's jam easy.
no...just no...
would describe a good pussy but I don't wanna mess wit his fixture.
hustla?ha last time he push cane he was downlaodin wrestlin pictures.
Lol...shoulda made it Kane...for people who don't know...
shitted on him wit nothing 2 good so now he's gotta be piss.
and how can u be a underrated mc?.......................
..........when you've always been at the bottom of the list.
Seen that done before...weak closer too...
Overall...7/10...Started strong with some good punch's. But, it seemed like at the end you were just reachin' wit some of the shit. Like you didn't have the endurance for that many lines...
Reli_mak
Yea..cuz writing tight flows for me is such a ultimate passion
Evil gay ass tryn 2 b a nurse, cuz he's a R.ival of N.efarious A.ssassins
Meh...self glory...and it sucked...
Typically, yes...sumtimes I quik-key 2 give my opp.'s less hurt
Cuz if I didn't pre-write, it'd be wack..just like ur best work
lol, not a bad concept
Do wut u must, but this is a loss for you, so don't fight this
Ur so pathetic, u make otha corrupt royalty wanna go righteous
...no...no...no...no...that was whack...
Congrats, but it won't help u much, retreat if I must say so
The outcome of this, me vs. you, I predict a quik 5:0 ratio
eh...not too sure about this one...
U said 2 join ur crew, dat ppl need 3 battle wins per week
Y is dat, dats sumthin u not even capable 2 complete
kinda a good punch...mediocre at best...
U reek w/ stink flows, it's not cuz u always shower last
Ur rap career only lasted seconds.............................
................I see it falling fast like salt in an hour-glass
Hour glasses take forever...and salt is too big...they use sand...NOT an accurate punch...
U just known 2 curse, but its real lyrics that I disperse
Think u hav a 'clue' bout rappin, cuz........................
..........................Sherlock Holmes found you a verse
shoulda been..."even Sherlock Holmes COULDN'T find your verse..." Weak anyways...
Ur punches are lower-'hits', and mines are upper-'cuts'
U get ate easily, hav a harder time eatn when my supper sucks
???????WTF??????
Ur flows needs a little Maintenance, n they not Well Rounded
Evil King decided 2 go up to heaven, cuz...........................
...............he got scared at how going down to Hell Sounded
Whack, WHACK closer...
Overall...3/10...Dude...you had maybe 1 good line outa like 18...thats pretty sad...You didn't have ANY fresh concept...no good wordplay...no metaphor's...it was FL trash material...I thought for a crew leader you should have some skil...NO hate at all...Very disappointed in your drop...hope to see better from you...
V/ Evil...Above reasons...
^^Ghost, I would consider that vote as a hate one, but I'm not a complainer...(I do have links)...however, that was already anticipated w/ u because u and E.K. are cool...just hating and dick riding goin on I C...
(Creative verse)
Yea..cuz writing tight flows for me is such a ultimate passion
Evil gay ass tryn 2 b a nurse, cuz he's a R.ival of N.efarious A.ssassins
(aight)
Typically, yes...sumtimes I quik-key 2 give my opp.'s less hurt
Cuz if I didn't pre-write, it'd be wack..just like ur best work
(nice)
Do wut u must, but this is a loss for you, so don't fight this
Ur so pathetic, u make otha corrupt royalty wanna go righteous
(lol..good)
Congrats, but it won't help u much, retreat if I must say so
The outcome of this, me vs. you, I predict a quik 5:0 ratio
(aight)
**Let the Massacre Begin...**
U said 2 join ur crew, dat ppl need 3 battle wins per week
Y is dat, dats sumthin u not even capable 2 complete
(lol, damn)
U reek w/ stink flows, it's not cuz u always shower last
Ur rap career only lasted seconds.............................
................I see it falling fast like salt in an hour-glass
(aight, needed betta wording tho')
U just known 2 curse, but its real lyrics that I disperse
Think u hav a 'clue' bout rappin, cuz........................
..........................Sherlock Holmes found you a verse
(decent)
Ur punches are lower-'hits', and mines are upper-'cuts'
U get ate easily, hav a harder time eatn when my supper sucks
(different, but I liked it)
Ur flows needs a little Maintenance, n they not Well Rounded
Evil King decided 2 go up to heaven, cuz...........................
...............he got scared at how going down to Hell Sounded
(could've had a betta closer)
Vs.
If I had two word's to describe him I wouldn't quote shit.
him spit crack? ha................................................ ..
closest he's got 2 that is the aftertaste after he smoke's it.
(needed betta wording)
.
.
(u needed something there)
your crew, fuckin sucks N' I don't think I've seen NA worse.
ur suppose to save the best 4 last....................................
.................so now do you understand why I chose NA first?
(aight)
you don't realize I'm winnin guess I gotta phade it threw.
cuz last time he made it 2 da nextlevel he neva made da crew.
(Seen where u were going, but nah)
if this battle was a game of tug of war u won't be pullin it.
buncha newb's, his crew threadz like a sewer..full of shit.
(meh)
downloadin animalplanet only time u manage a vet crew.
N' I always thought pussy didn't have a face.................
.....................................well thats until I fucking met you.
(aight)
damn herb couldn't baby a win even if he was damn weezy.
and I would've added you to my roster but mak's jam easy.
(??)
would describe a good pussy but I don't wanna mess wit his fixture.
hustla?ha last time he push cane he was downlaodin wrestlin pictures.
(drug lines..? Nah)
shitted on him wit nothing 2 good so now he's gotta be piss.
and how can u be a underrated mc?.......................
..........when you've always been at the bottom of the list.
(could've had a betta closer)
To me, Mak got this one. His flow was original and direct, and Evil you had some ok lines, but your flow was all over and not centered in on the battle...v/ Mak
Relli
Yea..cuz writing tight flows for me is such a ultimate passion
Evil gay ass tryn 2 b a nurse, cuz he's a R.ival of N.efarious A.ssassins
Not feelin this man -- not really that good
Typically, yes...sumtimes I quik-key 2 give my opp.'s less hurt
Cuz if I didn't pre-write, it'd be wack..just like ur best work
Decent
Do wut u must, but this is a loss for you, so don't fight this
Ur so pathetic, u make otha corrupt royalty wanna go righteous
no nothin special bout this
Congrats, but it won't help u much, retreat if I must say so
The outcome of this, me vs. you, I predict a quik 5:0 ratio
Somethin a newb would say sorry
U said 2 join ur crew, dat ppl need 3 battle wins per week
Y is dat, dats sumthin u not even capable 2 complete
lol nce
U reek w/ stink flows, it's not cuz u always shower last
Ur rap career only lasted seconds.............................
................I see it falling fast like salt in an hour-glass
NO!!! wtf
U just known 2 curse, but its real lyrics that I disperse
Think u hav a 'clue' bout rappin, cuz........................
..........................Sherlock Holmes found you a verse
um nope not hittin
Ur punches are lower-'hits', and mines are upper-'cuts'
U get ate easily, hav a harder time eatn when my supper sucks
wut the hell -- this was directed towards yourself haha
Ur flows needs a little Maintenance, n they not Well Rounded
Evil King decided 2 go up to heaven, cuz...........................
...............he got scared at how going down to Hell Sounded
Um weak closer wow
Dude work on ya punches make them more direct dont just throw words that rhyme together i aint hatin just givin ya tips on elevatin -- use betta personals and punches and try to be more creative you started out good and then you lagged at the end so try and stay consistant as well
vs
Evil
If I had two word's to describe him I wouldn't quote shit.
him spit crack? ha................................................ ..
closest he's got 2 that is the aftertaste after he smoke's it.
meh - kinda played and coulda worded better
your crew, fuckin sucks N' I don't think I've seen NA worse.
ur suppose to save the best 4 last....................................
.................so now do you understand why I chose NA first?
haha nce wordplay
you don't realize I'm winnin guess I gotta phade it threw.
cuz last time he made it 2 da nextlevel he neva made da crew.
meh - decent
if this battle was a game of tug of war u won't be pullin it.
buncha newb's, his crew threadz like a sewer..full of shit.
meh - kinda played
downloadin animalplanet only time u manage a vet crew.
N' I always thought pussy didn't have a face.................
.....................................well thats until I fucking met you.
haha nce
damn herb couldn't baby a win even if he was damn weezy.
and I would've added you to my roster but mak's jam easy.
meh -decent
would describe a good pussy but I don't wanna mess wit his fixture.
hustla?ha last time he push cane he was downlaodin wrestlin pictures.
haha funny but not an actual punch
shitted on him wit nothing 2 good so now he's gotta be piss.
and how can u be a underrated mc?.......................
..........when you've always been at the bottom of the list.
Oh damn!! Nce finisher
You could play with your words a lil more and throw harder hitting punches but good verse and drop
My vote goes to Evil for overall better verse no hate to Relli but you still need room for elevating Evil was more consistant throughout his whole verse attempted and landed more punches than Relli as well for this reason my vote goes to Evil
this battle was fuckin confusing as fuck. U both tried way too hard, an it just sounded confusing. Use more wordplay, metas, instead of plainly stating facts about each other and not really gettin too creative wid the punches. They were boring too read. That shit was bland. Rappin bout Sherlock Holmes is wack. Reli had a weak finisher, no sting. too wordy. Evil King came harder wid the punches. His shit was more hardcore in my opinion. HIs punches had more sting. He had a better finisher. Vote: Evil King
Lol, grab the links son. I left details of what i thought. Just cause i'm tryin to get in the crew don't mean imma hate vote...Just cause i make fun of you and NA don't mean it's a hate vote...It's cool...get smoka to delete it if you think i'm being unfair here...Quote:
Originally Posted by Relli_Mak
uppin.
Quote:
Originally Posted by .:~Digital~:.
All these fuckin' hate votes I'm receiving...dude the only reason u voted against me is because I just KO'ed u last week sometime...fuckin haters need to get a grip...all these hate votes...
Quote:
Originally Posted by evil king
ya write ya verses for battles?
Yea..cuz writing tight flows for me is such a ultimate passion
Evil gay ass tryn 2 b a nurse, cuz he's a R.ival of N.efarious A.ssassins
creative..but a statement..
Quote:
Originally Posted by evil king
do you pre-write your verse before you battle someone
Typically, yes...sumtimes I quik-key 2 give my opp.'s less hurt
Cuz if I didn't pre-write, it'd be wack..just like ur best work
nice...
Quote:
Originally Posted by evil king
I know but I rather drop something off the head then a written cause there's alout of biters on site's like this
Do wut u must, but this is a loss for you, so don't fight this
Ur so pathetic, u make otha corrupt royalty wanna go righteous
nice...
Quote:
Originally Posted by evil king
True fuck it I'ma start pre-writing then and see the diifernce within my verses
Congrats, but it won't help u much, retreat if I must say so
The outcome of this, me vs. you, I predict a quik 5:0 ratio
statement
**Let the Massacre Begin...**
U said 2 join ur crew, dat ppl need 3 battle wins per week
Y is dat, dats sumthin u not even capable 2 complete
ouch...
U reek w/ stink flows, it's not cuz u always shower last
Ur rap career only lasted seconds.............................
................I see it falling fast like salt in an hour-glass
nice but worded wrong...sand not salt..
U just known 2 curse, but its real lyrics that I disperse
Think u hav a 'clue' bout rappin, cuz........................
..........................Sherlock Holmes found you a verse
meh...
Ur punches are lower-'hits', and mines are upper-'cuts'
U get ate easily, hav a harder time eatn when my supper sucks
meh...
Ur flows needs a little Maintenance, n they not Well Rounded
Evil King decided 2 go up to heaven, cuz...........................
...............he got scared at how going down to Hell Sounded
coo...closer could've been worded better
vs.
If I had two word's to describe him I wouldn't quote shit.
him spit crack? ha................................................ ..
closest he's got 2 that is the aftertaste after he smoke's it.
coo...
.
.
your crew, fuckin sucks N' I don't think I've seen NA worse.
ur suppose to save the best 4 last....................................
.................so now do you understand why I chose NA first?
ouch...
you don't realize I'm winnin guess I gotta phade it threw.
cuz last time he made it 2 da nextlevel he neva made da crew.
meh...
if this battle was a game of tug of war u won't be pullin it.
buncha newb's, his crew threadz like a sewer..full of shit.
played...but reworded..
downloadin animalplanet only time u manage a vet crew.
N' I always thought pussy didn't have a face.................
.....................................well thats until I fucking met you.
nice..
damn herb couldn't baby a win even if he was damn weezy.
and I would've added you to my roster but mak's jam easy.
coo..
would describe a good pussy but I don't wanna mess wit his fixture.
hustla?ha last time he push cane he was downlaodin wrestlin pictures.
drug lines in text battles..no
shitted on him wit nothing 2 good so now he's gotta be piss.
and how can u be a underrated mc?.......................
..........when you've always been at the bottom of the list.
good closer
pretty good battle in my eyes..could've went either way..but someone skipped a bar and got canned for it..
Relli-creative.....you used quotes to really kill him...makes your personals hit even harder..
Evil- you killed the crew name on the personal..and I felt that if you wouldn't had that one drug punch...and the one you skipped...you could've pulled it off with 2 better punches..
v-Relli...
Nice battle on both side
Evil u came constent all da way and I like dat the punches stayed ok and god a lil better readin it Like da wordplay too
Mak u had a ok verse but consistancy wazn't ya strong point and that kinda messed up ya verse after bout 2 nice punches the verse fell off wordplay waz ok tho
v/evil
Vote DQed...wack
-Smoka
king came wit punches and stuff while relli wanted to save his and for tat my vote would have to be evil still good battle just the people oppions always count Peace
Vote DQed...wack
-Smoka
LMAO...WTF...upp
This battle seemed to have more meaning than meets the eyes...seems to have a personal touch to it...especially with the quotes which some people don't like, but i see it as a form of understanding your opponent and hitting the weak spots...reli had a bunch of personals in their which i find very powerful and to the point...evil you had some good lines in their but i wasn't feeling your wording it seemed forced and thrown together, not saying you wern't potent in your punches but imo a forced rhyme doesn't look appealing, overall this was very hard for me to judge but due to the fact of personal power form reli...im goin with him
v/ reli
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=321261
I have to give the vote to Reli Mack, his punchlines were more clever if you ask me.
U said 2 join ur crew, dat ppl need 3 battle wins per week
Y is dat, dats sumthin u not even capable 2 complete THIS MADE LAUGH
U reek w/ stink flows, it's not cuz u always shower last
Ur rap career only lasted seconds.............................
................I see it falling fast like salt in an hour-glass I PROBABLY WOULDN'T HAVE BEEN ABLE TO COME UP WITH A LINE LIKE THIS.
evil king had a couple good lines but not clever enough for me.
Relimak gets the vote
Vote DQed...gay
-Smoka
dude i didnt fucken hate vote against you that wuz honest opinion and i cant poll so quit fuckin cryin i voted honestly and my vote is good wtf you talkin bout dude i even gave feed - how many peeps vote like that???Quote:
Originally Posted by Relli_Mak
Please respond how that wuz hateQuote:
Originally Posted by .:~Digital~:.
This is why no one votes on battles, you gotta write a fucking 8 page essay on why somebody won.
I'm gonna try this again:
My vote's going to Reli because:
breakdown
U said 2 join ur crew, dat ppl need 3 battle wins per week
Y is dat, dats sumthin u not even capable 2 complete
THIS IS FUNNY, TAKIN JABS AT HIS TRACK RECORD, NICE
U reek w/ stink flows, it's not cuz u always shower last
Ur rap career only lasted seconds.............................
................I see it falling fast like salt in an hour-glass
I LIKE THE SIMILE HERE I NEVER WOULD HAVE THOUGHT OF USING A REFERENCE TO AN HOURGLASS IN A VERSE
U just known 2 curse, but its real lyrics that I disperse
Think u hav a 'clue' bout rappin, cuz........................
..........................Sherlock Holmes found you a verse
um nope not hittin
NOT DIGGIN THIS ONE
Ur punches are lower-'hits', and mines are upper-'cuts'
U get ate easily, hav a harder time eatn when my supper sucks
wut the hell -- this was directed towards yourself haha
Ur flows needs a little Maintenance, n they not Well Rounded
Evil King decided 2 go up to heaven, cuz...........................
...............he got scared at how going down to Hell Sounded
Um weak closer wow
VERY WEAK CLOSER
now let's take a look at evil king's
If I had two word's to describe him I wouldn't quote shit.
him spit crack? ha................................................ ..
closest he's got 2 that is the aftertaste after he smoke's it.
THIS IS THE MOST CLEVER PUNCH IN YOUR VERSE
your crew, fuckin sucks N' I don't think I've seen NA worse.
ur suppose to save the best 4 last....................................
.................so now do you understand why I chose NA first?
DECENT, NOT VERY GOOD
you don't realize I'm winnin guess I gotta phade it threw.
cuz last time he made it 2 da nextlevel he neva made da crew.
LOL
if this battle was a game of tug of war u won't be pullin it.
buncha newb's, his crew threadz like a sewer..full of shit.
downloadin animalplanet only time u manage a vet crew.
N' I always thought pussy didn't have a face.................
.....................................well thats until I fucking met you.
damn herb couldn't baby a win even if he was damn weezy.
and I would've added you to my roster but mak's jam easy.
would describe a good pussy but I don't wanna mess wit his fixture.
hustla?ha last time he push cane he was downlaodin wrestlin pictures.
shitted on him wit nothing 2 good so now he's gotta be piss.
and how can u be a underrated mc?.......................
..........when you've always been at the bottom of the list.
THE SPELLING IS SO HORRIBLE THE WHOLE POST IS ALMOST INCOMPREHENDIBLE
i know spelling doesnt matter but the majority of this verse wasn't that good
Both of you have room for improvement and need to elevate. i can't stand the ..................in the verses try for some more simplicity in structure. But Reli mak took it. punches were harder, lines were more clever and his wasn't as confusing as evil king's was. both were confusing as fuck though
werd on dat and when ya do that people still complainQuote:
Originally Posted by skittlez
uppin.
MacRelish
You fucking put quotes in it like that agian and expect people to break it down I'll send R-kelly to moleste your daughter.
Yea..cuz writing tight flows for me is such a ultimate passion
Evil gay ass tryn 2 b a nurse, cuz he's a R.ival of N.efarious A.ssassins
no
Typically, yes...sumtimes I quik-key 2 give my opp.'s less hurt
Cuz if I didn't pre-write, it'd be wack..just like ur best work
that was weak
Do wut u must, but this is a loss for you, so don't fight this
Ur so pathetic, u make otha corrupt royalty wanna go righteous
dont get it
Congrats, but it won't help u much, retreat if I must say so
The outcome of this, me vs. you, I predict a quik 5:0 ratio
na
**Let the Massacre Begin...**
U said 2 join ur crew, dat ppl need 3 battle wins per week
Y is dat, dats sumthin u not even capable 2 complete
concept was ther but delivery was weak
U reek w/ stink flows, it's not cuz u always shower last
Ur rap career only lasted seconds.............................
................I see it falling fast like salt in an hour-glass
stretched, ad weak
U just known 2 curse, but its real lyrics that I disperse
Think u hav a 'clue' bout rappin, cuz........................
..........................Sherlock Holmes found you a verse
agai stretched, and weakly executed
Ur punches are lower-'hits', and mines are upper-'cuts'
U get ate easily, hav a harder time eatn when my supper sucks
na
Ur flows needs a little Maintenance, n they not Well Rounded
Evil King decided 2 go up to heaven, cuz...........................
...............he got scared at how going down to Hell Sounded
agai your style has shity flow, lame
some cocepts but no delivery, flow was wack at spots, a below average verse
Bad Boy Baron
If I had two word's to describe him I wouldn't quote shit.
him spit crack? ha................................................ ..
closest he's got 2 that is the aftertaste after he smoke's it.
spit crack, why would he want to
your crew, fuckin sucks N' I don't think I've seen NA worse.
ur suppose to save the best 4 last....................................
.................so now do you understand why I chose NA first?
stretched, and I dont get it
you don't realize I'm winnin guess I gotta phade it threw.
cuz last time he made it 2 da nextlevel he neva made da crew.
no, dont get it
if this battle was a game of tug of war u won't be pullin it.
buncha newb's, his crew threadz like a sewer..full of shit.
lame
downloadin animalplanet only time u manage a vet crew.
N' I always thought pussy didn't have a face.................
.....................................well thats until I fucking met you.
that was gay too
damn herb couldn't baby a win even if he was damn weezy.
and I would've added you to my roster but mak's jam easy.
how would you know
would describe a good pussy but I don't wanna mess wit his fixture.
hustla?ha last time he push cane he was downlaodin wrestlin pictures.
again why would he want to push cane
shitted on him wit nothing 2 good so now he's gotta be piss.
and how can u be a underrated mc?.......................
..........when you've always been at the bottom of the list.
no
blah nothing too creative juss enough to win.........I think lol
well you should of did a little more
nothing in there was solid, stretched in places, and concpets were stupid i places
vote reli_Mak