Who is in control?

Let's admit who's dominant.. Multi million dollar conglomerates
which don't make honest chips, only concerned with prominence
BET trys to represent a culture, playing ironic clips with ebonics scripts
they're a prominent glitch, only concerned with being iconic & rich
and I have complaints against it, unlike any I've meant before
it's ironic because it demeans those it was intended for
Infiltrated by stereotype - but supported by those it degrades
an instant solution for this institution? it should be opposed & betrayed
exposed as a charade of a real network, and closed & displayed
as what it really is: what a white man owns,
So he has no bones about how his "own" are portrayed
I won't say they portray a slave mindset, just stuff of the sewers
Because they duplicate material they think is loved by the viewers
So useless hate towards them such as "its evil so stop it"
Is better aimed at the people who watch it...


bitches

Piece a bit short... but the flow was decent , also the structure. also i felt the vocabulary, and how you state some facts, that some people are blind by. you showed some good imagry. nuttin to comment on really... spread the message fam

peep the sig... What is hip hop
and exposure

Feeb.....this was pretty fucking dope....there was a strong sense of emotion...and fierce delivery as I began to read it....The rhyme scheme was crazy and I loved it...the flow was amazing throughout the whole piece...I loved the concepts you hit with this one...I haven't really seen you post in OM but with shit like this you should post more often....overall this was a very entertaining and good read....Keep it ^....and RTF...pls..

Nice. Last line killed the topic too. Gave the rest more meanin` than it already had. Liked the flow and rhyme schemes you used. Nice short drop.

nice topic here and the truh of it really hurts... MY EYES..lol just messing this was a nice piece with nice multi rhymes and the flow of things set off nicely...nice get off man... and the content was good aswell i just for some odd reason really liked the flow.. it was like a bush rap..LMFAO str8 to the point....areas pointed out were nice aswell and real life calamities ya know nice stuff feebs

nice job feebs
hit this up if ya can ya know
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=323948

thanks. all my pieces are brief lol

^^
highly noted!

i realli liked ur topic... jus showin ppl wuts realli goin on... its deep n u used good vocab. waaay better than me lol... but that aint hard haha... but ya u got some deadly ass rhymes... keep this shiit up!

this was amazing.. this is how a mod shoud be there are no words to describe how good an what talent you posess.. i can really learn from you honestly i do need help in ery aspect thoe.. im tryin to improve much but good drop an when i drop suttin soon i hope u lik that also.. nice..

MAd Props.... The Best Arsenal In A Poet Is REALITY And U Used It Wisely......
Mad Props Man.........
Im New On The Site But DAMn This Is Really Poetry..
Nice Comlexity And Delivery...
RAw Concept..

Peace And Props

wow @ everyone sucking up so much.

i think i'm the only person on the board that didn't feel this that much.

rhyme scheme was simple. vocab was a bit over-used. there's a time to use big words.. there's a time to use complex wording.. but i mean honestly.. who really spits like that lol ?

topic was cool. i liked the concept. the actual writing just wasn't on par with the message you tried to convey. this is the first time i've ever peeped your topicals and.. i'll more then likely be peeping more. keep them coming. you're not incredible but you're nice. you'd be pretty dope with some change up in your style.

Dont really sound like a freestyle.. it was nice dont get me wrong but u gotta work on usin ur voacbulary a lil bit better , dont use big words like every line strecth them out u dont want ryhmes that are compliacted cuz who spits like that? it was nice tho just work on ur vocab a lil bit better but it was tight i liked it

You're not black, Feebs...

Why do you care what's on BET?

That's like me...a Latino...bitching about Indian run Casinos...

I mean...I can...but it has nothing to do with me.

Anyway...

Very tight vocab and flow...outstanding.
The message...eh...I dunno...
This shit isn't exactly news. We all already knew everything you stated.
You just stated it in a really dope way.

Still...entertaining...not too short, not too long...

Pretty close to perfect...would be even closer if I somehow felt you had a real reason to write this other than to "rubberneck" a flaw everyone's already seen.

Peace, my friend.

So because I'm not black it's not my place to comment on something I see wrong with society? The reason I wrote this in the first place is because I saw people complaining about BET in the lounge or something. It's not a new issue but that doesn't matter. Yes, I believe it is wrong that BET basically stereotypes a culture based on the bullshit they play. But I also felt the need to comment on the fact that people watching it repeatedly are the ones complaining about it's content. Thats my take on it anyway.

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Dont really sound like a freestyle.. it was nice dont get me wrong but u gotta work on usin ur voacbulary a lil bit better , dont use big words like every line strecth them out u dont want ryhmes that are compliacted cuz who spits like that? it was nice tho just work on ur vocab a lil bit better but it was tight i liked it

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wow

*dead*

This isn't supposed to sound like a freestyle. And conglomerate, prominent, and everything else I used in here are words everyone should understand.

Go read my OM, Feebs...

Thanks!

Feebs... i know one big word... does this count... refridgerator???

get your fucking links dammit

lol, dude, you're allowed to close it if you want. I'm not stopping you. But I will get my links. I'm gonna hit up all the pieces to those who replied in here tomorrow. I have a headache or I'd do it now

:(

complex rhyme skeme, the wording was done in a way that made sence of how you see this problem. an industry in corruption basically... i liked the complexity of your point of view. the flow was at a perfect pace in the beggining and slightly toned down then picked back up here-
Infiltrated by stereotype - but supported by those it degrades
an instant solution for this institution? it should be opposed & betrayed

i thought the vocab was fine. not understandin is one thing, but not putting any effort into finding what a word means is pure lazyness and retardation i've seen from some of the feed.

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lol, dude, you're allowed to close it if you want. I'm not stopping you. But I will get my links. I'm gonna hit up all the pieces to those who replied in here tomorrow. I have a headache or I'd do it now

:(

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ha, no I was just being a dick. I give leeway to AI.. because I can. but yeah, try and get those in by the end of the day or I'll have to close it.

definatly was a short piece alot of decent control of your wording
easy to read simple structure flow was direct enjoyed this piece .
elevatin the key this game keep it man .

the jews are in control

yo son dis shiit hott best i seen lately nikkas fell off on here but u still up there peace