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Chizeck GL
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K im Droppin. GL bru.
Come out your dome, n realize its the game youve blown,
i hope you know, elevation takes more then miracle grow,
Im an underdog, beatin me is all fiction you see,
I must have uninated in my sleep cuz i jus pissed on his dreams,
Your not worth the time to write, uppercut put ur mind in flight,
If I told you it was free verse, your thinkin writin no lines was right,
No one follow this gay ass, hes got matics which throw hollows that hit kats,
ill fill your guts wit gas, and have ya swallow a lit match,
You flow is basic n shy, depic yer brain, replace it wit dynamite n die,
ur fake~n~u~lie, he couldnt win this battle if he took out the "U" and replaced it with "I"
When it comes to battling, youd be the last person I'd rely upon
Damn you were never a felon, so how you became an ExCon
stop fakin and please do us a fav n change ur skill n name
because your lines be getting more played than a video game
this lines a filler...no need to go hard, no need to drop decently
been here for months, but ur skills seem like you joined recently
kid you must be a newb when ur loses are greater than ur wins
ur stuck goin in circles, sumthin like a shark with only one fin
dont drop garbage plz,if anythin make an excuse,call it writers block
time to get votes but dont 4get to wear ur seatbelt when riding cock
Decent drop, Uppin x1
Im an underdog, beatin me is all fiction you see,
I must have uninated in my sleep cuz i jus pissed on his dreams,
v//excon
harder punches
better verse overall
great vote :2thumb:Quote:
Originally Posted by Da Patriot
lmao *dead*
ups
excon
Come out your dome, n realize its the game youve blown,
i hope you know, elevation takes more then miracle grow,
meh
Im an underdog, beatin me is all fiction you see,
I must have uninated in my sleep cuz i jus pissed on his dreams,
lol
Your not worth the time to write, uppercut put ur mind in flight,
If I told you it was free verse, your thinkin writin no lines was right,
naw
No one follow this gay ass, hes got matics which throw hollows that hit kats,
ill fill your guts wit gas, and have ya swallow a lit match,
straight
You flow is basic n shy, depic yer brain, replace it wit dynamite n die,
ur fake~n~u~lie, he couldnt win this battle if he took out the "U" and replaced it with "I"
meh
G£s†U®£s
When it comes to battling, youd be the last person I'd rely upon
Damn you were never a felon, so how you became an ExCon
meh
stop fakin and please do us a fav n change ur skill n name
because your lines be getting more played than a video game
naw
this lines a filler...no need to go hard, no need to drop decently
been here for months, but ur skills seem like you joined recently
meh ok
kid you must be a newb when ur loses are greater than ur wins
ur stuck goin in circles, sumthin like a shark with only one fin
meh
dont drop garbage plz,if anythin make an excuse,call it writers block
time to get votes but dont 4get to wear ur seatbelt when riding cock
meh
Gesttures if u would have came harder wit ur punches u would have had the battle....but ex came harder and G som of ur stuff was played....just come harsher next time
V/Excon.....reason above
both hit up one of the battles in my sig please thanx
bump
Bump. Get this shit closed homie.
I have exc on as well here while both verses was fl worthy ex had the more solid verse it had wit in it some played by both but good verses overall by both blablablablablab balba bal bal abal abla abla abla abla bal bala bala bala bala bal abal abal abal abla bala abnla aba
Im an underdog, beatin me is all fiction you see,
I must have uninated in my sleep cuz i jus pissed on his dreams,
^ not bad at all
vs.
alot of played lines in there step it up.
v Excon
up this fuckin cockfest
Bump x3 lets get mo fuckin votez yo.
..3..
When it comes to battling, youd be the last person I'd rely upon
Damn you were never a felon, so how you became an ExCon
vs
nothing
V/Gestures for better punches.
Gestures :
When it comes to battling, youd be the last person I'd rely upon
Damn you were never a felon, so how you became an ExCon
Nice opener, punch
stop fakin and please do us a fav n change ur skill n name
because your lines be getting more played than a video game
Wak, oldest line in the net battlin
this lines a filler...no need to go hard, no need to drop decently
been here for months, but ur skills seem like you joined recently
Dope, I like this punch & the flow was done good
kid you must be a newb when ur loses are greater than ur wins
ur stuck goin in circles, sumthin like a shark with only one fin
WAk similie, not a good punch at all
dont drop garbage plz,if anythin make an excuse,call it writers block
time to get votes but dont 4get to wear ur seatbelt when riding cock
Wak closer
VS
Excon
K im Droppin. GL bru.
Come out your dome, n realize its the game youve blown,
i hope you know, elevation takes more then miracle grow,
Elevation concepts are played
Im an underdog, beatin me is all fiction you see,
I must have uninated in my sleep cuz i jus pissed on his dreams,
if your sleep and pissed, wouldn't this mean you pissed on your own dreams?
Your not worth the time to write, uppercut put ur mind in flight,
If I told you it was free verse, your thinkin writin no lines was right,
Good multi usage, but doesnt hit hard as a punch
No one follow this gay ass, hes got matics which throw hollows that hit kats,
ill fill your guts wit gas, and have ya swallow a lit match,
a threat, but not a hard punch
You flow is basic n shy, depic yer brain, replace it wit dynamite n die,
ur fake~n~u~lie, he couldnt win this battle if he took out the "U" and replaced it with "I"
Good finisher, finally a punch
Vote - Gestures, because of better punches/disses
..4..
Im an underdog, beatin me is all fiction you see,
I must have uninated in my sleep cuz i jus pissed on his dreams,
vs
kid you must be a newb when ur loses are greater than ur wins
ur stuck goin in circles, sumthin like a shark with only one fin
wasnt really feelin this battle. the urine bar was mad corny but i liked it. excon had nothin cept that. gestures only had that one quotable n the rest of his stuff was really really played. excon got it for his quote.
v/ excon
Well I think both sides were pretty decent
attempt- gestures
punches-excon
flow-both
content-excon
I think this was pretty basic, maybe due to the fact that it was only ten lines..I'm gonna give this to excon kuz he had consistent punches while gestures started to force the ending lines a bit...no hate though...keep it up
v/ ex
this lines a filler...no need to go hard, no need to drop decently
been here for months, but ur skills seem like you joined recently
vs
nothing
v/ges
this battle sucked ass crack....that line was the only one worth mentionin but it wasnt good so w/e
Cinco!!
Come out your dome, n realize its the game youve blown,
i hope you know, elevation takes more then miracle grow,
Nah
Im an underdog, beatin me is all fiction you see,
I must have uninated in my sleep cuz i jus pissed on his dreams,
HAHA
Your not worth the time to write, uppercut put ur mind in flight,
If I told you it was free verse, your thinkin writin no lines was right,
Nah
No one follow this gay ass, hes got matics which throw hollows that hit kats,
ill fill your guts wit gas, and have ya swallow a lit match,
Cool
You flow is basic n shy, depic yer brain, replace it wit dynamite n die,
ur fake~n~u~lie, he couldnt win this battle if he took out the "U" and replaced it with "I"
Meh
vs.
When it comes to battling, youd be the last person I'd rely upon
Damn you were never a felon, so how you became an ExCon
Nah
stop fakin and please do us a fav n change ur skill n name
because your lines be getting more played than a video game
Nah
this lines a filler...no need to go hard, no need to drop decently
been here for months, but ur skills seem like you joined recently
Decent
kid you must be a newb when ur loses are greater than ur wins
ur stuck goin in circles, sumthin like a shark with only one fin
Nah
dont drop garbage plz,if anythin make an excuse,call it writers block
time to get votes but dont 4get to wear ur seatbelt when riding cock
Nah
v/Excon....better and more consistent
Gestures- "because your lines be getting more played than a video game
this lines a filler...no need to go hard, no need to drop decently
been here for months, but ur skills seem like you joined recently
kid you must be a newb when ur loses are greater than ur wins"
^^ good lines
No one follow this gay ass, hes got matics which throw hollows that hit kats,
ill fill your guts wit gas, and have ya swallow a lit match,
^^ those were aight..but, i thought that those were the only good ones u had..
I thought gestures had better lines and harder punches..i wasnt really feelin Excon's verse...but..good battle..
V//Gestures
Im an underdog, beatin me is all fiction you see,
I must have uninated in my sleep cuz i jus pissed on his dreams,
nice
^^ Ex thats the only thing you had in this battle but it did enough for you
vs
Nothing
Gest-youve done better dunno what happend you dropped wack tho
V-EX
When it comes to battling, youd be the last person I'd rely upon
Damn you were never a felon, so how you became an ExCon
ha ok
stop fakin and please do us a fav n change ur skill n name
because your lines be getting more played than a video game
ok
this lines a filler...no need to go hard, no need to drop decently
been here for months, but ur skills seem like you joined recently
LMFAO
kid you must be a newb when ur loses are greater than ur wins
ur stuck goin in circles, sumthin like a shark with only one fin
ha k
dont drop garbage plz,if anythin make an excuse,call it writers block
time to get votes but dont 4get to wear ur seatbelt when riding cock
LMAO
vs.
Come out your dome, n realize its the game youve blown,
i hope you know, elevation takes more then miracle grow,
ok
Im an underdog, beatin me is all fiction you see,
I must have uninated in my sleep cuz i jus pissed on his dreams,
...wat...not rhyming...
Your not worth the time to write, uppercut put ur mind in flight,
If I told you it was free verse, your thinkin writin no lines was right,
lol...
No one follow this gay ass, hes got matics which throw hollows that hit kats,
ill fill your guts wit gas, and have ya swallow a lit match,
meh
You flow is basic n shy, depic yer brain, replace it wit dynamite n die,
ur fake~n~u~lie, he couldnt win this battle if he took out the "U" and replaced it with "I"
stretched and meh
*ExConn came weak WITH stretched lines///so Gestures takes it anyway cuz his was funny as shit...
V/Gestures no hate...
When it comes to battling, youd be the last person I'd rely upon
Damn you were never a felon, so how you became an ExCon
vs.
shit nuttin nada
v/gest for overall better verse and he had more punches in there wit some personals everything else was the same
When it comes to battling, youd be the last person I'd rely upon
Damn you were never a felon, so how you became an ExCon
stop fakin and please do us a fav n change ur skill n name
because your lines be getting more played than a video game
vs
nothing
V//Gestures for comin freshah. ex u had sum decent punchlisne but overall it seemed lyke yo shyt was kinda laccin. idk man maybe read LLL 2 help u. Gestures u came fresh dis is one of the best verses that i have seen from u. nice wordplay and great punchlines. no hate to either of yall tho