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Fuckin imigrant you aint nothing, the same as the other shit's
youll get to see the land of oppertunity as I bury you under it
damn retard you mess your knowledge half at best
cause dude actually looked to find skills on mapquest
see you trying to impress, going for some record dude..
..for the most battles up and not one win for you
n this site is full of class got legends galore
fl is for developing talent. and you cant even picture yours
im bored dawg so ima expose this fake hoe
and we all can dig your lines. up cause there so fucking old
lose the user title bitch, its wak & there’s no disputin
When I run .exe, its proven, we'll watch his own execution
So, I signed this contract killin…while u'll get signed off
& if I recited it back at u, this would be ur last write off
Fuck mentorin u...I'll damage whatever voters hope for u
"OH SHIT" >, read my verse & that's his best ever quotable
hit u wit every law, & a brick, it’s gonna be a hell of a journey
I'm trippin off my talent, while ur trip is propelled thru a gurney
No question, I’m bashin this dude, scorned on his best day
If we argued his point, it would be in the form of a essay
Fuckin imigrant you aint nothing, the same as the other shit's
youll get to see the land of oppertunity as I bury you under it
meh
damn retard you mess your knowledge half at best
cause dude actually looked to find skills on mapquest
nah, played
see you trying to impress, going for some record dude..
..for the most battles up and not one win for you
heh,
n this site is full of class got legends galore
fl is for developing talent. and you cant even picture yours
meh, weak
im bored dawg so ima expose this fake hoe
and we all can dig your lines. up cause there so fucking old
ok..
few ok concepts i seen, some of this material is kind of bland and had not good set-ups, it was either too much of a statement or wasnt worded to its fullest potential... step up that creativity and harshness.
vs
lose the user title bitch, its wak & there’s no disputin
When I run .exe, its proven, we'll watch his own execution
cool, wordin cud be a lil harsher tho.
So, I signed this contract killin…while u'll get signed off
& if I recited it back at u, this would be ur last write off
ehh, iight
Fuck mentorin u...I'll damage whatever voters hope for u
"OH SHIT" >, read my verse & that's his best ever quotable]
mehh, could be harsher,
hit u wit every law, & a brick, it’s gonna be a hell of a journey
I'm trippin off my talent, while ur trip is propelled thru a gurney
iight
No question, I’m bashin this dude, scorned on his best day
If we argued his point, it would be in the form of a essay
ehh, needs to be harsher
the wording is wat you need to focus on now, you have the right concepts in place but you just need to word out the punch a little bit harsher in the connection, but your on the verge of some nice ideas.
lol... rushed my post
v/Ant
Uppin #1 for voters
Uppin #2 for voters
Uppin #3 for voters
Uppin #4 for votes
yo easy battle to decide...exempt ur verse was real basic and boring, best part in ur whole drop was ur closer which made me laugh shit was dope, you shouldve came that harsh and creative the whole battle and u wouldve won cuz antonio didnt go that hard...antonio ur verse was decent but i seen better from you, but u still came hard enough to take the win, i liked the .exe line shit was mad creative and it was a dope punch..so for havin the better punchers, concepts, and wit..imma have to go with antonio
v/antonio banderas
hit this yo!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=322898
how can a .exe line be creative that shit has been done more then Paris
both off them suck,,,, let me kno who can beat me.....if i had to pick i guess Ant won though...Ima end his career tho come let him battle me.......Get em
sorry to free post, but honestly thats the first time i seen it so its new to me..didnt want you to bitch and think my vote was BS..but yo hit the link!Quote:
Originally Posted by Exempt
I disagree with these votes. Hm. I think i liked Exempts better. Althought both were merely weak, exempt showed more in his, by far.
Exempt- You opened fairly decent. You stayed consistant through most of your verse, and if you lacked off it wasnt by much. Your punches were that strong but you did indeed throw more. That indeed grabbed you the W in my eyes.
Ant- Your drop to me was plain and basic. You tried to force wordplay a little too much, actually most of ur lines were indeed forced. I dont like reading forced shit, because in turn it doesnt flow, or even sound good. Your punches were ok...But you could hit much harder then what your doing.
v/Exempt
Hit up battles in my sig plz.
not mad my first battle sence LLL a couple seasons ago... Rusty it happens Uppppi #1
Uppin #5 for votes......
Check out what a FL battle is supposed to look like:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=322764
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Exempt
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Fuckin imigrant you aint nothing, the same as the other shit's
youll get to see the land of oppertunity as I bury you under it
decent
damn retard you mess your knowledge half at best
cause dude actually looked to find skills on mapquest
wasn't feelin this punch
see you trying to impress, going for some record dude..
..for the most battles up and not one win for you
tried to be creative, yet, still pretty weak
n this site is full of class got legends galore
fl is for developing talent. and you cant even picture yours
ehh.. so-so
im bored dawg so ima expose this fake hoe
and we all can dig your lines. up cause there so fucking old
weak punch, i dont know if this concept was played, seems like it would be tho
Overall, this did seem like a 'shakin the rust off' type of verse. Saw some potential, yet most of these bars were weak. The opener was good, and... that was about it IMHO. What's up with the 4 bars, instead of 5???? 4/10
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Antonio Banderas
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lose the user title bitch, its wak & there’s no disputin
When I run .exe, its proven, we'll watch his own execution
so-so nameplay
So, I signed this contract killin…while u'll get signed off
& if I recited it back at u, this would be ur last write off
uh... hmm... nah
Fuck mentorin u...I'll damage whatever voters hope for u
"OH SHIT" >, read my verse & that's his best ever quotable
this was okay
hit u wit every law, & a brick, it’s gonna be a hell of a journey
I'm trippin off my talent, while ur trip is propelled thru a gurney
nice multi, i liked this punch
No question, I’m bashin this dude, scorned on his best day
If we argued his point, it would be in the form of a essay
another good multi, and nice concept
Overall, this verse started off pretty weak, but your last two bars really did it for me. They flowed nice, rhymed nice, and hit pretty good. If only all 5 of your bars had those qualities, this would've been an even more convincing KO. Above average verse... 5.5/10
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VOTE: Antonio Banderas
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none came that hard
lose the user title bitch, its wak & there’s no disputin
When I run .exe, its proven, we'll watch his own execution
vs
Fuckin imigrant you aint nothing, the same as the other shit's
youll get to see the land of oppertunity as I bury you under it
...good battle but i think Antonio had a better verse overall
V/Antonio
Fuckin imigrant you aint nothing, the same as the other shit's
youll get to see the land of oppertunity as I bury you under it
lame/played and it's a "burry you" bullshit punch
damn retard you mess your knowledge half at best
cause dude actually looked to find skills on mapquest
no ..lame
see you trying to impress, going for some record dude..
..for the most battles up and not one win for you
ehh, too simple ..not hard
n this site is full of class got legends galore
fl is for developing talent. and you cant even picture yours
ok, picture wordplay is a bit dated though
im bored dawg so ima expose this fake hoe
and we all can dig your lines. up cause there so fucking old
no ..you had a burry joke already ..now you wanna dig it up? fuck that
vs
lose the user title bitch, its wak & there’s no disputin
When I run .exe, its proven, we'll watch his own execution
ehh, nah, could've been better.
So, I signed this contract killin…while u'll get signed off
& if I recited it back at u, this would be ur last write off
ok at best, nothing more
Fuck mentorin u...I'll damage whatever voters hope for u
"OH SHIT" >, read my verse & that's his best ever quotable
lol, mehhhh ...too simple
hit u wit every law, & a brick, it’s gonna be a hell of a journey
I'm trippin off my talent, while ur trip is propelled thru a gurney
heh, ok
No question, I’m bashin this dude, scorned on his best day
If we argued his point, it would be in the form of a essay
could've been a doper punch ..
exempt did horribly, while AB came with a few decent CONCEPTS. your wording is still meh, but i guess that comes with being gone for so long. get back into shit, you'll start getting better again ..
v/ Antonio