..Crew Executioner..[reloaded]

Da most hated lyrical threat, 2nd chairman of my team throne
I'm not Jay, but I'm known 2 'come' when I get 'king'-'dome'
However, w/ many of u weak niggas I have notable tension
Jus cuz ya'll feel dat I'm not worthy of a Honorable Mention
Oh well, I stayed away from negativity as of late
But here's a secret, Relli Mak truly love da hate
Ya'll need Salvation, observin 4rm da product of ya Hostile Minds
Time 2 feel da Kinetic energy 4rm my remaining colossal rhymes
20 Four 7, I see weak MC's praising others Lyrical Testaments
"U joined Mondo Thugs, man I see dat I'm blessed I didn't"
Afraid, cuz da 'eyes' don't lie like the Children of da Corn
Bout 2 make this environment more heated than filming of porn
I Despise da Dopeness of those who really need an Elevation Project
Affiliated w/ The Faction mean u opposite of a sensation object
U ain't a Roc-a-fella, u da type 2 let a whore trick u
Even w/ Eternal Insight, can't 'c' how a Convict can be Metamorphical
I obtain Impeccable Wordplay..ya'll shit need 2 b decoded
Blasted away nigs on pt. 1..this is Crew Executioner..reloaded

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I didn't like this homie...the whole idea you had was pretty creative, but alot of your lines we're just to forced so you could fit in all the top crews you need to just let the flow go on how it is and not force anything, you came pretty simple with the vocab it wasnt to complex maybe a line or two was complex, and you came with a pretty boring and plain structre, sorry for the truth homie, but creative drop i must say..hit the sig and keep up.

'ppreciate the feed, but I have to admit, a lil after I started I kinda lost interest n doing it so I kind of just threw something together just to finish it..

you know if any of the crew leaders see this they are gonna shred you into pieces and make a relli cheesy mac bowl right? lmao what was your inspiration for doing this i really didn't like it that much so sorry

lame topic..
hella played, and not creative at all
good flow and word choice but alot of it read forced
stay up

like dude above me said, not really that reative i've seen this done befor on my other account, kinda didn't like it but it did flow well and had nie verses it just didn't really appeal to me,but w/e keep wrighting...


hit links in sig

Uppin

OMG you dissed mondo thugs, that is the biggest mistake you will ever make on this site

prepare to be whored by myself and fellow mondo thugians.

^^
Sad!.


Weak!.

real talk, i'm digging it...this is a battle site so more niggas need to be attacking each other. I've just come back to the site after like a year away, so i dont know half of these dudes or crews on here but big ups to you for keepin the whole battle motif going and not about tear drops or emotional pepperoni pizza....keep it gutter and keep the hate up.


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ay man fuck wat everyone else said man i liked it. i liked the vocab you used but theres one thing i aint like about it man, the filmin of porn line. it aint really work out but the rest was iite my dude. stay up

Ha haha no hadez paragon

Don't worry, they'll be on part 3

'ppreciate the feed @ zach n B.S.C

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Originally Posted by Relli_Mak

Don't worry, they'll be on part 3

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i hope its better then the first two parts

lmao

Uppin...

Upp 2

Looking for honest n intelligent feed...uppin...

i don't think you'll get it sorry relli but you lost a lot of my respect on this piece

Really don't bother me, cuz if MF's goin whine and bitch about a simple O-M piece, then so be it...

I personnally really felt this was kinda goin in circles

However, w/ many of u weak niggas I have notable tension
Jus cuz ya'll feel dat I'm not worthy of a Honorable Mention

I liked this line alot It made me kinda this it was gonna come around i think its a good peice but it could use some work if reworded right could be dope
with some better 1,2 lines coulda been better

Thanks for the feed, kid...

this shit was dope. i liked the wordplay and structure. props.

Once again, 'ppreciate the comments..

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Originally Posted by Relli_Mak

Really don't bother me, cuz if MF's goin whine and bitch about a simple O-M piece, then so be it...

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not whining just saying this was a bad descion and sub par at best piece

this shit was as wack as the person who made it.

dude relli keep my crew names ou tya moutha nd we cool ya heard?!..

i used to be cool with relli this ain't like him

read the rules faggot only exprienced dope heads can make om disses

some one should castrate you or something

lol seriouslly relli if you make a part 3 its gonna be funnier than this one nand you will losse everything you built up

Man, look...why in the hell is all this dispute...over a simple O-M? Instead of just stating simple feed, MF's got to talk shit or try making negative comments on me..da fuck, if ya'll ego or status is offended by this piece...I'm sorry, so be it...once again...>>IT'S A FUCKING SIMPLE O-M, STOP MAKING A BIG DEAL OF IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!