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due in 24
drop ASAP
no d/r or bullshit votes
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10 lines
due in 24
drop ASAP
no d/r or bullshit votes
this is my checkin
check
dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*
^wtf is that?
i know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
you have freedom of speech. ur words suck. mine are hotter than soot
cuz though you stand for you writes, no one else bothered to look
ur broke as fuck. and you have taxes. you get gayer still
can't say you duck me. cuz you can't even pay for the bill
^^FUCKED UP NUGGA my bad
dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*
he trys to convince us hes dope, hes dying to bling (shine)
i could throw a bitch at him ass first....
............he wouldnt hit cuz hes the strike out king**
sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?Quote:
Originally Posted by Angel Of Dopenes
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings
u try ta cover ur face wid ur record like a vinyl mask
LOP needs to revise his paper...
cuz im pretty sure u shouldnt have made the final draft
*Batting practice refers to masturbation
**Strike Out King is someone who couldnt gid pussy if they was a female
^^can be found here
up 1
i know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck
^^rofl.. lmfao.. *dead*
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
^^lol
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
^^meh
you have freedom of speech. ur words suck. mine are hotter than soot
cuz though you stand for you writes, no one else bothered to look
^^meh
ur broke as fuck. and you have taxes. you get gayer still
can't say you duck me. cuz you can't even pay for the bill
^^lol
vs
nothing... srry man... nothing.... damn....
V/aod
Vote DQed...it wasnt that one sided Philly..
-Smoka
^^^^its Straight fam
but UP 2
dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*
he trys to convince us hes dope, hes dying to bling (shine)
i could throw a bitch at him ass first....
............he wouldnt hit cuz hes the strike out king**
Quote:
Originally Posted by Angel Of Dopenes
No One Said hi 2 Me
sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings
u try ta cover ur face wid ur record like a vinyl mask
LOP needs to revise his paper...
cuz im pretty sure u shouldnt have made the final draft
nice punches and personals in that verse.
vs
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
those were the hottest in ur verse fam. i've seen better, u drop unxpected of him comin hard like he did. Next time. U lacked the harder punches and personals. elevate more.
NO hate to either of u. GOod job tho.
V/JFC.
up 3 dont sleep on this
sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings
kill point
Vs.
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
Kill point
I felt that both did good and had nice personals but JFC took it with wording. The way he worded his made it more affective than A.o.D. that's my opinion no hate. Good shit @ both!
V = JFC
i know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck
no
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
good crew personal
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
nice, best line whole verse
you have freedom of speech. ur words suck. mine are hotter than soot
cuz though you stand for you writes, no one else bothered to look
pretty good
ur broke as fuck. and you have taxes. you get gayer still
can't say you duck me. cuz you can't even pay for the bill
not feeling this closer
vs.
dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*
no
he trys to convince us hes dope, hes dying to bling (shine)
i could throw a bitch at him ass first....
............he wouldnt hit cuz hes the strike out king**
meh, wasnt feeling this
sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
lol cool
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings
pretty good line here
u try ta cover ur face wid ur record like a vinyl mask
LOP needs to revise his paper...
cuz im pretty sure u shouldnt have made the final draft
dope final draft personal
v/AOD for beign more constant and creative.
no hate
sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings
lmao, nice
Vs.
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
lol, this was alright
JFC-i liked all the personals you used, nice/decent punches throughout, solid flow and structure
AOD-you had 1 crew personal, no nameplay, you had some decent punches but i felt a couple of your bars were just statements, solid flow and structure
vote-JFC for an overall better verse, no hate
hit this up honestly
i know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck<---lol...nice line
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer<---decent
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you<---iight
you have freedom of speech. ur words suck. mine are hotter than soot
cuz though you stand for you writes, no one else bothered to look<---so-so
ur broke as fuck. and you have taxes. you get gayer still
can't say you duck me. cuz you can't even pay for the bill<---iight closer
vs
dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*<---decent
he trys to convince us hes dope, hes dying to bling (shine)
i could throw a bitch at him ass first....
............he wouldnt hit cuz hes the strike out king**<---iight
sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope<---stetched and forced
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings<---not bad
u try ta cover ur face wid ur record like a vinyl mask
LOP needs to revise his paper...
cuz im pretty sure u shouldnt have made the final draft<---good diss
overall...
aod - my fav. line was your opener, that was a good personal. and you had a couple other lines that were iight with some pretty decent concepts. you had more consistancy in my opinion too.
jfc - i like your closer and a couple other lines were iight, but some of the punches werent direct or witty enough. your drop didnt have enough consistancy, but it did flow good for the most part.
i think aod won this w/ better concept and more consistancy.
but i cant poll fellaz, i got shit for posts...but i will if i get enough b4 this closes. good battle though.
both yall hit my battle on FL plz, its in my siggy.
dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*
vs
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
meh... JFC what was that first bar.. that shit was weak man... honestly....
iv seen was better verses, you both are much capeable of doing better.. but JFC had a more....expressed verse and 1 or 2 okay punches...AOD you should have came harder i know you cann so V//JFC
up4.
i know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck
LOL, NICE
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
LOL, COOL
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
MEH
you have freedom of speech. ur words suck. mine are hotter than soot
cuz though you stand for you writes, no one else bothered to look
NOT TOO BAD
ur broke as fuck. and you have taxes. you get gayer still
can't say you duck me. cuz you can't even pay for the bill
LOL, FUNNY WORDPLAY
vs
dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*
NAH, HE MASTURBATES?...PFF
he trys to convince us hes dope, hes dying to bling (shine)
i could throw a bitch at him ass first....
............he wouldnt hit cuz hes the strike out king**
NO
sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
MEH, BASIC
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings
NO...STATEMENTISH
u try ta cover ur face wid ur record like a vinyl mask
LOP needs to revise his paper...
cuz im pretty sure u shouldnt have made the final draft
BETTER, OK CLOSER
OK, aod good opener, 2nd bar cool, then u fell of a bit but your last bar was witty, maybe not that harsh, but decent drop, your improving.
jfc, 1st punch was gay, 2nd forced, 3rd n 4th bars were way too simple, do not make stastements, try a lil wit, your closer was better tho, at least you thought a lil in that bar.
on the contrary to what smoka thought, this was kinda one sided vote aod more consistent
VOTE
AOD
i know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck
i didnt get this line....you know his name? yay?
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
.... its alright, you didn't transition well
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
you have freedom of speech. ur words suck. mine are hotter than soot
cuz though you stand for you writes, no one else bothered to look
ur broke as fuck. and you have taxes. you get gayer still
can't say you duck me. cuz you can't even pay for the bill
dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*
he trys to convince us hes dope, hes dying to bling (shine)
i could throw a bitch at him ass first....
............he wouldnt hit cuz hes the strike out king**
Quote:
Originally Posted by Angel Of Dopenes
No One Said hi 2 Me
sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings
u try ta cover ur face wid ur record like a vinyl mask
LOP needs to revise his paper...
cuz im pretty sure u shouldnt have made the final draft
know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck
i didnt get this line....you know his name? yay?
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
.... its alright, you didn't transition well
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
i didnt understand what state you left him in...
you have freedom of speech. ur words suck. mine are hotter than soot
cuz though you stand for you writes, no one else bothered to look
ehhhhh
ur broke as fuck. and you have taxes. you get gayer still
can't say you duck me. cuz you can't even pay for the bill
this has to be the best line out of this all..
V.S.
dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*
Dope!
he trys to convince us hes dope, hes dying to bling (shine)
i could throw a bitch at him ass first....
............he wouldnt hit cuz hes the strike out king**
good punch
Quote:
Originally Posted by Angel Of Dopenes
No One Said hi 2 Me
sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
lol pride killer right there
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings
clipped them wings off!
u try ta cover ur face wid ur record like a vinyl mask
LOP needs to revise his paper...
cuz im pretty sure u shouldnt have made the final draft
sickest line out of the bunch
*now i posted twice and i acknowledge this cause that was my bad, but if i could vote, JFC got this locked down, but AOD, your shit was mild though. a lil work here and there would get you to actually fly*
i did have nameplay IDIOT. my opener. uppin.Quote:
Originally Posted by Coherent.
i know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck
all you said was, "i know your first name....just in" that's played, if you could've came up with something for his initials other than his actual name, then that'd be a different story, and i haven't polled yet anyway
know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck
^ROFL.
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
^Lol. Good.
you have freedom of speech. ur words suck. mine are hotter than soot
cuz though you stand for you writes, no one else bothered to look
^Decent.
ur broke as fuck. and you have taxes. you get gayer still
can't say you duck me. cuz you can't even pay for the bill
^Lol.
vs.
sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
^Lol.
Pretty one sided. JFC, you had some iight punches but they just didn't hit as hard. Your getting better though so don't worry about it man. This was a pretty good battle. Both of you are levating I can see. But AOD had the better verse out of this battle so....
\\//AOD
^^^WTF nigga hes in yo crew? we allowed 2 have crew votes?
i know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck
lol decent
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
meh...decent punch
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
meh
you have freedom of speech. ur words suck. mine are hotter than soot
cuz though you stand for you writes, no one else bothered to look
no
ur broke as fuck. and you have taxes. you get gayer still
can't say you duck me. cuz you can't even pay for the bill
no
overall pretty decent verse. sum lines were better than others
vs
dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*
meh decent
he trys to convince us hes dope, hes dying to bling (shine)
i could throw a bitch at him ass first....
............he wouldnt hit cuz hes the strike out king**
meh
sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
ROFLMFAO *dead*
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings
LMFAO nice punchline
u try ta cover ur face wid ur record like a vinyl mask
LOP needs to revise his paper...
cuz im pretty sure u shouldnt have made the final draft
lmfao nice crew play
overall good verse. u were more consistant during the end.
V//JFC for havin better punchlines and personals
so. you and coherent are both in 2 minutes of hate. uppin again.