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Nike......G/L my nigga
checkin in
think you gon find a win, lil kid ill give you a pound
cuz yea you the king of columbus,
...since you still confused what you found
listen wen i say your shit, and take in a new sense
cuz ive been on top, while you still following the blue prints
your stupid and wack dude, played in actuality
so ill shoot your cranium with mentos
...to give you a fresh mentality
not testing what im writing, im the threat to society
and wen they say your a piece of work
...works just need entirely
im dope with the punches, i could even quote ali
cuz yea this fag floats like a butterfly
...but only has the features of a bee
God Of 告n lookin for 告n but Lok-Ya-Eyes on him to see dumb,(see them)
hows your avy gonna say iRep Legendz...
...when you'll never be one!,
checkin in was your 'First Step' Toward 'The Next Level' of death state,*
id hate to b 'The Witness.' in ya judgemental arrest case...
...when Impersenateing an Emcee is 100% of ya crime rate,
look kid ya battle herbs its Constant. how u think u got to 10-0,
ya rhymes to sweet to b harsh 'Suge'...
...and wouldnt be 'killin' if they was on Death Row,
hide where ya from but if i had to guess it would b chicago but who knows,
my reason for thinkin this way u ask...
...if this is so then in chicago its more the the wind that blows,
we could dig up ya past and show the newbs u murked truth hurts,
i murk herbs to...
...Lok-n-see your my Newest-Murk,
10
uppin and yuo pronounce my name loke e not look e lol anyways upping
lol ya lol n e ways good battle famz...uppin 1
Word.
This is a tough battle...
Lokeye...
think you gon find a win, lil kid ill give you a pound
cuz yea you the king of columbus,
...since you still confused what you found
Ok...i don;t personally like the concept of making a new line for one drawn out bar...
listen wen i say your shit, and take in a new sense
cuz ive been on top, while you still following the blue prints
ok...
your stupid and wack dude, played in actuality
so ill shoot your cranium with mentos
...to give you a fresh mentality
Again...you did it...but it was fresh!
not testing what im writing, im the threat to society
and wen they say your a piece of work
...works just need entirely
Arg...
im dope with the punches, i could even quote ali
cuz yea this fag floats like a butterfly
...but only has the features of a bee
Fuck me...it's all you do...
J.C.
God Of 告n lookin for 告n but Lok-Ya-Eyes on him to see dumb,(see them)
hows your avy gonna say iRep Legendz...
...when you'll never be one!,
I hate this shit...but ok...
checkin in was your 'First Step' Toward 'The Next Level' of death state,*
id hate to b 'The Witness.' in ya judgemental arrest case...
...when Impersenateing an Emcee is 100% of ya crime rate,
ok...again...same shit...
look kid ya battle herbs its Constant. how u think u got to 10-0,
ya rhymes to sweet to b harsh 'Suge'...
...and wouldnt be 'killin' if they was on Death Row,
no...
hide where ya from but if i had to guess it would b chicago but who knows,
my reason for thinkin this way u ask...
...if this is so then in chicago its more the the wind that blows,
meh...meh...na...
we could dig up ya past and show the newbs u murked truth hurts,
i murk herbs to...
...Lok-n-see your my Newest-Murk,
I personally don;t like this style...
Both of ya'll...i do not like the style of drawing out a bar to be extremely long by just shorting up the lines...it's whack...
Imma have to vote for Lokeye...his shit seemed more direct...J.C. you seemed to be sitting there causeing way too much "traffic" with ya verse...Way to much shit goin on...
V/ Lokeye...Better verse...thats about it...
ight uppin 2 if u dont under stand the punchs dont vote
i understand loud and clear. I don;t understand the "style" meh...i'm just one voter there's more to come.Quote:
Originally Posted by Lil J.C.
uppin
up 3
Lok
think you gon find a win, lil kid ill give you a pound
cuz yea you the king of columbus,
...since you still confused what you found
*haha ok
listen wen i say your shit, and take in a new sense
cuz ive been on top, while you still following the blue prints
*ok
your stupid and wack dude, played in actuality
so ill shoot your cranium with mentos
...to give you a fresh mentality
*nahh
not testing what im writing, im the threat to society
and wen they say your a piece of work
...works just need entirely
*ok..could of been better
im dope with the punches, i could even quote ali
cuz yea this fag floats like a butterfly
...but only has the features of a bee
*nahh
not the best verse...but wutev it was alright some punches connected...6.5/10
vs
Lil jc
God Of 告n lookin for 告n but Lok-Ya-Eyes on him to see dumb,(see them)
hows your avy gonna say iRep Legendz...
...when you'll never be one!,
*ok
checkin in was your 'First Step' Toward 'The Next Level' of death state,*
id hate to b 'The Witness.' in ya judgemental arrest case...
...when Impersenateing an Emcee is 100% of ya crime rate,
*mmm k..
look kid ya battle herbs its Constant. how u think u got to 10-0,
ya rhymes to sweet to b harsh 'Suge'...
...and wouldnt be 'killin' if they was on Death Row,
*ummm k...but suge has nothin to do with him..
hide where ya from but if i had to guess it would b chicago but who knows,
my reason for thinkin this way u ask...
...if this is so then in chicago its more the the wind that blows,
*nooo wtf
we could dig up ya past and show the newbs u murked truth hurts,
i murk herbs to...
...Lok-n-see your my Newest-Murk,
*nah
bad verse nothin really had anythin to do with him your punches didn't connect i' thought u were gonna drop better but u didn't so..5.5/10
vote//lokeye...
ok FL battle here some ok punches wer thrown here guys, i feel lokeye was more consistance with hes punches but JC you had one or two ok ones, but the rest wer meh to be honest. these are the main punches in the battle in my point of view
not testing what im writing, im the threat to society
and wen they say your a piece of work
...works just need entirely
^^ ok
think you gon find a win, lil kid ill give you a pound
cuz yea you the king of columbus,
...since you still confused what you found
^^ ok
vs
checkin in was your 'First Step' Toward 'The Next Level' of death state,*
id hate to b 'The Witness.' in ya judgemental arrest case...
...when Impersenateing an Emcee is 100% of ya crime rate,
^^ ok but to stretched
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=312191
^^ links yo hit that up
i vote lokeye...... hit mah sig
uppin
uppin
think you gon find a win, lil kid ill give you a pound
cuz yea you the king of columbus,
...since you still confused what you found
rotfl
listen wen i say your shit, and take in a new sense
cuz ive been on top, while you still following the blue prints
nah
your stupid and wack dude, played in actuality
so ill shoot your cranium with mentos
...to give you a fresh mentality
decent
not testing what im writing, im the threat to society
and wen they say your a piece of work
...works just need entirely
nah weak
im dope with the punches, i could even quote ali
cuz yea this fag floats like a butterfly
...but only has the features of a bee
wack
vs.
God Of 告n lookin for 告n but Lok-Ya-Eyes on him to see dumb,(see them)
hows your avy gonna say iRep Legendz...
...when you'll never be one!,
lol nice
checkin in was your 'First Step' Toward 'The Next Level' of death state,*
id hate to b 'The Witness.' in ya judgemental arrest case...
...when Impersenateing an Emcee is 100% of ya crime rate,
decent
look kid ya battle herbs its Constant. how u think u got to 10-0,
ya rhymes to sweet to b harsh 'Suge'...
...and wouldnt be 'killin' if they was on Death Row,
decent
hide where ya from but if i had to guess it would b chicago but who knows,
my reason for thinkin this way u ask...
...if this is so then in chicago its more the the wind that blows,
lol
we could dig up ya past and show the newbs u murked truth hurts,
i murk herbs to...
...Lok-n-see your my Newest-Murk,
coolio
Vote - Lil J.C.
last up
think you gon find a win, lil kid ill give you a pound
cuz yea you the king of columbus,
...since you still confused what you found
meh
listen wen i say your shit, and take in a new sense
cuz ive been on top, while you still following the blue prints
lol decent
your stupid and wack dude, played in actuality
so ill shoot your cranium with mentos
...to give you a fresh mentality
played
not testing what im writing, im the threat to society
and wen they say your a piece of work
...works just need entirely
no
im dope with the punches, i could even quote ali
cuz yea this fag floats like a butterfly
...but only has the features of a bee
lol decent
overall too much self glory and not enough direct hits
vs
God Of 告n lookin for 告n but Lok-Ya-Eyes on him to see dumb,(see them)
hows your avy gonna say iRep Legendz...
...when you'll never be one!,
meh played
checkin in was your 'First Step' Toward 'The Next Level' of death state,*
id hate to b 'The Witness.' in ya judgemental arrest case...
...when Impersenateing an Emcee is 100% of ya crime rate,
no
look kid ya battle herbs its Constant. how u think u got to 10-0,
ya rhymes to sweet to b harsh 'Suge'...
...and wouldnt be 'killin' if they was on Death Row,
meh
hide where ya from but if i had to guess it would b chicago but who knows,
my reason for thinkin this way u ask...
...if this is so then in chicago its more the the wind that blows,
hella played
we could dig up ya past and show the newbs u murked truth hurts,
i murk herbs to...
...Lok-n-see your my Newest-Murk,
meh
not a good verse. nuthin but used lines and played punchlines. no wordplay no metaphors
overall V//Lok for atleast attempting to take shots at his opponent both of u need 2 elevate read LLL battles n elevate
God Of 告n lookin for 告n but Lok-Ya-Eyes on him to see dumb,(see them)
hows your avy gonna say iRep Legendz...
...when you'll never be one!,
vs
nothing that made me say OUCH!
this battle was pretty good on both sides...i dunno i think jc took it here he came nice with some of his punches and had some harsh personals..lok you are deff an LLL head you both are very dope but jc took it here.
Vote DQed...crew.
-Smoka
up 4
think you gon find a win, lil kid ill give you a pound
cuz yea you the king of columbus,
...since you still confused what you found
vs
God Of 告n lookin for 告n but Lok-Ya-Eyes on him to see dumb,(see them)
hows your avy gonna say iRep Legendz...
...when you'll never be one!,
we could dig up ya past and show the newbs u murked truth hurts,
i murk herbs to...
...Lok-n-see your my Newest-Murk,
lokeye-ok verse, you had 1 nice punch and a few so-so punches, concepts were on point for the most part, fairly creative but the punches weren't worded well enough for the punches to connect hard
jc-good verse, you had a couple nice punches and a few so-so punches, some concepts were good and creative but others were played, decent personals, ok wordplay
vote-Lil J.C. for consistancy
Vote DQed...crew.
-Smoka
think you gon find a win, lil kid ill give you a pound
cuz yea you the king of columbus,
...since you still confused what you found
decent
listen wen i say your shit, and take in a new sense
cuz ive been on top, while you still following the blue prints
coo shit
your stupid and wack dude, played in actuality
so ill shoot your cranium with mentos
...to give you a fresh mentality
lol
not testing what im writing, im the threat to society
and wen they say your a piece of work
...works just need entirely
nah
im dope with the punches, i could even quote ali
cuz yea this fag floats like a butterfly
...but only has the features of a bee
blah. weak concept
vs
God Of 告n lookin for 告n but Lok-Ya-Eyes on him to see dumb,(see them)
hows your avy gonna say iRep Legendz...
...when you'll never be one!,
ok
checkin in was your 'First Step' Toward 'The Next Level' of death state,*
id hate to b 'The Witness.' in ya judgemental arrest case...
...when Impersenateing an Emcee is 100% of ya crime rate,
coo concept, stretched tho
look kid ya battle herbs its Constant. how u think u got to 10-0,
ya rhymes to sweet to b harsh 'Suge'...
...and wouldnt be 'killin' if they was on Death Row,
decent
hide where ya from but if i had to guess it would b chicago but who knows,
my reason for thinkin this way u ask...
...if this is so then in chicago its more the the wind that blows,
too stretched out
we could dig up ya past and show the newbs u murked truth hurts,
i murk herbs to...
...Lok-n-see your my Newest-Murk,
ok
v/ jc
neither dominated in this battle, both had weak points and strong points, u both started out aight then ur concepts became less creative after each line, personals werent effective either, and the nameplays (jc) were ok-ish, u could work on that a lil bit more, lokeye had decent hits but most of his ideas were played, nothin too fresh, lil jc might have stretched his lines out far as hell but his concepts were a lil more creative, took time out n put more thought into what he was sayin, therefore the fresher concepts took this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=311218
^RTF...both
think you gon find a win, lil kid ill give you a pound
cuz yea you the king of columbus,
...since you still confused what you found<---iight opener.
listen wen i say your shit, and take in a new sense
cuz ive been on top, while you still following the blue prints<---not bad
your stupid and wack dude, played in actuality
so ill shoot your cranium with mentos
...to give you a fresh mentality<---nice punch
not testing what im writing, im the threat to society
and wen they say your a piece of work
...works just need entirely<---meh
im dope with the punches, i could even quote ali
cuz yea this fag floats like a butterfly
...but only has the features of a bee<---iight
vs
God Of 告n lookin for 告n but Lok-Ya-Eyes on him to see dumb,(see them)
hows your avy gonna say iRep Legendz...
...when you'll never be one!,<---lol...str8 line
checkin in was your 'First Step' Toward 'The Next Level' of death state,*
id hate to b 'The Witness.' in ya judgemental arrest case...
...when Impersenateing an Emcee is 100% of ya crime rate,<---meh, stretched as fuck too
look kid ya battle herbs its Constant. how u think u got to 10-0,
ya rhymes to sweet to b harsh 'Suge'...
...and wouldnt be 'killin' if they was on Death Row,<---not feelin, n a lil stetched again
hide where ya from but if i had to guess it would b chicago but who knows,
my reason for thinkin this way u ask...
...if this is so then in chicago its more the the wind that blows,<---nah
we could dig up ya past and show the newbs u murked truth hurts,
i murk herbs to...
...Lok-n-see your my Newest-Murk,<---lol...nice closer
overall....
j.c. - my favorite line was definately your closer, that was a real str8 punch.
your opener was decent as well. but i didnt like anything in the middle, and honestly, you were working to hard to force punches that were "iight" at best. no hate, if you had more lines like your closer and opener, this woulda been a much better drop.
Lok - my favorate line from you was your 3rd bar, i like how you flipped it, and it was a real good punch. you also had a couple other lines that were real decent. all in all, you had a much more consistant drop and thats what won this for you.
unfortunately, i got shit for posts, so i cant poll. but this was my honest opinion of this battle.
both of you plz hit somethin off the siggy.
last up get this closed
Lok- You had 1 personal on J.C. thru your whole verse...i would have liked to seen many more than that...your structure was ok, punches were ok in the beginning but then fell off...throughout most of your lines they were not direct punches..which took away to the read
J.C.- Horrible structure...But you had personals a stronger punches that hit in your battle...Your verse kinda fell off too, had some wack lines and had lines that were Really stretched..but looking at your drop as a whole...You came better and more well rounded
\/-JC..For Reasons above
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V/ LOKEYE...
more consistant and more harder packing...JC had a few lines quotable but lokeye practically almsot had his whole verse worth quoting he was str8 perfect on hitting him...lokeye was more aggressive and more direct JC had a few statemetns and like 1 played bar so...my vote goes to lokeye for reasons explained!