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Originally Posted By look$:
3000+ post n u still aint achieved nothin 2 brag about kid ur not illin
all i see from ur drops..
...is the collection of dust cus ur verses no 1's feelin
dats the reason u cnt b touched,not cus ur dope u dumb whore
i said now ima nut in ur face......
n the bitch went n bought peanut butter from the store
im hard to the core, and dat reflects on the beatins dat i give
and if ders live after death...yours is gonna be hard to relive
n dnt act as if, cus ur not hard all ur muscles in the past 'tense'
u have no deffence like unsafe sex..
......so dis beatin gon be more intense
you from florida? kid why you such a disgrace to the south for
ur the reason every time we punch...
...wit the left, we wanna switch from southor
dis shits easy 2 me, even if i was...
....a locked up postmen id still be able to deliver
p.u.n.c.h.l.i.n.e <---- letters through your ribs and liver
its not hard 2 get just go n figure....while i put it through ur head
now ur fantasy can come true...
....cus hes gon see men in action when hes dead
^applys to you without a doubt...son your beyond fuckin unknown
the best elevation you've shown was hand+computer while home alone
true, look$ are god given...so he must have said "fuck you"
good ^^^....well to say the least its something god couldnt do
wtf is that avatar...probably an image of this kids' face
...a thousand post deep and still u cant find a vets' place
come on now...you've been here for ever...wheres ya LLL tuff talk
...well now its gone...since we all have seen the way IT walks
its amazing how he look$ at all these battles...no improvement yet
because on-lookers have no rep...<---you've never had respect
Bolded-the line i was talkin bout...
play times over, what the fuck is a kid blitz son ill rip you to bits
i go a bar a minute, 10 lines in 20? well watch me double the hits
no doubt its gon be hard 2 resist, cus im not a very paitient man
you came with tactics?...........well now ima ruin your game plan
ur a str8 fan, dats y u stay under my verses cus im hard to cool
n every thing u spit is boaring,so im sent ur verse 2 boarding skool
to many fl kids clamin 2 b great lately u gotta stop the pretend
cus we all know it take more den..
...8 wins and a kid blitz2 b'come a legend
and yea we all know im 'from' ur nightmare kid now watch him
as my heat burns up hes av and hes start talkin in slang like weibchen
lol...upppinnnn for votes.....
up.1 can we get sum votes already
^applys to you without a doubt...son your beyond fuckin unknown
the best elevation you've shown was hand+computer while home alone
[No point to that quote really-played and weak punch]
true, look$ are god given...so he must have said "fuck you"
good ^^^....well to say the least its something god couldnt do
[Weak-average]
wtf is that avatar...probably an image of this kids' face
...a thousand post deep and still u cant find a vets' place
[nah-miss]
come on now...you've been here for ever...wheres ya LLL tuff talk
...well now its gone...since we all have seen the way IT walks
[average]
its amazing how he look$ at all these battles...no improvement yet
because on-lookers have no rep...<---you've never had respect
[pretty good]
play times over, what the fuck is a kid blitz son ill rip you to bits
i go a bar a minute, 10 lines in 20? well watch me double the hits
[terrible]
no doubt its gon be hard 2 resist, cus im not a very paitient man
you came with tactics?...........well now ima ruin your game plan
[weak football reference- not strong at all]
ur a str8 fan, dats y u stay under my verses cus im hard to cool
n every thing u spit is boaring,so im sent ur verse 2 boarding skool
[first part needs rewording- second part pretty weak]
to many fl kids clamin 2 b great lately u gotta stop the pretend
cus we all know it take more den..
...8 wins and a kid blitz2 b'come a legend
[not too effective as u bring up his wins- though I see u trying to imply that he is being blitzed and dominated by you]
and yea we all know im 'from' ur nightmare kid now watch him
as my heat burns up hes av and hes start talkin in slang like weibchen
[weibchen-wtf- ur attempt at a personal makes no sense and doesnt rhyme]
more consistency and one strong punch from kid blitz wins this easy- looks some of ur punches were indirect and nothing was really hitting hard
hit this up if you get the chance: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=311741
^^^ lol u clearly dont know wot ur talkin about but ill give u on wot u said about thw wording, i dnt really give a fuck n 20 mins is just enough for me 2 bring dis up. so let the votin come in den will talk on hopw wack I AM. (dats toward u dangermanship.)
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that was solid feedback and going more in depth than i already did wouldnt do you any favors - i gave u and kid blitz equally critical feedback and im not getting any bitchy pms from him - i should be able to drop by midnight tonight , tommorow night at the latest- you can set it becuz you challenged me - bitching about good feedback
up.3
Umm, vote - Looks
this battle was kinda weak. Blitz, i dunno man.. i've seen better drops from you before. You had a lot of filler in there. Looks, your verse was sub-par. Some concepts were aight, but other than that nothing to comment on in neither of ur verses. So anywho.. Im votin looks for better concepts. No hate to both.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=312173
Honest vote^^
peace...
well only had 20 mins to key up but thanks for the feedback. will check dat link soon
Actually I enjoyed both really, but i just Got to hand this one to Kid Blitz,
Just better structure really and flowed better than Look$'s Poem / Rap.
^applys to you without a doubt...son your beyond fuckin unknown
the best elevation you've shown was hand+computer while home alone
ehh shakey
true, look$ are god given...so he must have said "fuck you"
good ^^^....well to say the least its something god couldnt do
nah too bland
wtf is that avatar...probably an image of this kids' face
...a thousand post deep and still u cant find a vets' place
played concept
come on now...you've been here for ever...wheres ya LLL tuff talk
...well now its gone...since we all have seen the way IT walks
ok
its amazing how he look$ at all these battles...no improvement yet
because on-lookers have no rep...<---you've never had respect
blah
vs
play times over, what the fuck is a kid blitz son ill rip you to bits
i go a bar a minute, 10 lines in 20? well watch me double the hits
str8
no doubt its gon be hard 2 resist, cus im not a very paitient man
you came with tactics?...........well now ima ruin your game plan
bad wordin at the end bruh
ur a str8 fan, dats y u stay under my verses cus im hard to cool
n every thing u spit is boaring,so im sent ur verse 2 boarding skool
nah @ concept
to many fl kids clamin 2 b great lately u gotta stop the pretend
cus we all know it take more den..
...8 wins and a kid blitz2 b'come a legend
aha
and yea we all know im 'from' ur nightmare kid now watch him
as my heat burns up hes av and hes start talkin in slang like weibchen
ok close
v/Look$
first dude came very mediocre, none of his shit stood out, besides the constant repetition of look$ name alone made me bored, personal usage wasnt as good as it should have been....look$ had a few more hits, his verse lacked a few things but overall it was more consistent n less forced
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...52#post5201052
^RTF...gracias senorz :)
o 300, sucks...well thats my opinion^feel free 2 check my battle anywayz
up mayne
to many fl kids clamin 2 b great lately u gotta stop the pretend
cus we all know it take more den..
...8 wins and a kid blitz2 b'come a legend
vs
^applys to you without a doubt...son your beyond fuckin unknown
the best elevation you've shown was hand+computer while home alone
this was a nice battle fo real but i gotta say looks just took it his punches caught my eye...i dont much bout yall so i cant say nuttin bout personals..nice battle guys could you hit up my sig sorry i cant poll.
damn yo lol only 1 vote so far
upppinn...for feed on every verse....thank u...
This was an aightish battle...Kid Blitz you started then stopped and had many many fillers...filler don't hit na mean and caused you to lose many hitpoints...your structure was good though and flow was aight.
Look$ your vers wasn't whoa! but it had more punches and less fillers...a better ratio IMO and i reckon your structure and flow were aight to.
\/ Look$ for having better more harder punches.
^applys to you without a doubt...son your beyond fuckin unknown
the best elevation you've shown was hand+computer while home alone
wtf no
true, look$ are god given...so he must have said "fuck you"
good ^^^....well to say the least its something god couldnt do
meh didnt like it
wtf is that avatar...probably an image of this kids' face
...a thousand post deep and still u cant find a vets' place
your point is
come on now...you've been here for ever...wheres ya LLL tuff talk
...well now its gone...since we all have seen the way IT walks
where does is it walk??? no
its amazing how he look$ at all these battles...no improvement yet
because on-lookers have no rep...<---you've never had respect
meh ok coulda been worded better though
vs
play times over, what the fuck is a kid blitz son ill rip you to bits
i go a bar a minute, 10 lines in 20? well watch me double the hits
self glory so no
no doubt its gon be hard 2 resist, cus im not a very paitient man
you came with tactics?...........well now ima ruin your game plan
no and not creative
ur a str8 fan, dats y u stay under my verses cus im hard to cool
n every thing u spit is boaring,so im sent ur verse 2 boarding skool
na
to many fl kids clamin 2 b great lately u gotta stop the pretend
cus we all know it take more den..
...8 wins and a kid blitz2 b'come a legend
ok....
and yea we all know im 'from' ur nightmare kid now watch him
as my heat burns up hes av and hes start talkin in slang like weibchen
wtf i didnt understand this lol
v/Looks
both need to elevate on their wording and creativity and wordplay since i didnt really see any
hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=312574
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=312627
hit that link
^applys to you without a doubt...son your beyond fuckin unknown
the best elevation you've shown was hand+computer while home alone
^^meh
true, look$ are god given...so he must have said "fuck you"
good ^^^....well to say the least its something god couldnt do
^^nah
wtf is that avatar...probably an image of this kids' face
...a thousand post deep and still u cant find a vets' place
^^played
come on now...you've been here for ever...wheres ya LLL tuff talk
...well now its gone...since we all have seen the way IT walks
^^meh
its amazing how he look$ at all these battles...no improvement yet
because on-lookers have no rep...<---you've never had respect
^^nah
vs
play times over, what the fuck is a kid blitz son ill rip you to bits
i go a bar a minute, 10 lines in 20? well watch me double the hits
^^iight
no doubt its gon be hard 2 resist, cus im not a very paitient man
you came with tactics?...........well now ima ruin your game plan
^^nah
ur a str8 fan, dats y u stay under my verses cus im hard to cool
n every thing u spit is boaring,so im sent ur verse 2 boarding skool
^^meh
to many fl kids clamin 2 b great lately u gotta stop the pretend
cus we all know it take more den..
...8 wins and a kid blitz2 b'come a legend
^^lol
and yea we all know im 'from' ur nightmare kid now watch him
as my heat burns up hes av and hes start talkin in slang like weibchen
^^meh
V/looks
flippin hell man close this for fucks sake
close this yo
this was an even battle in my eyes looks your opener and this line i thought wer the best
to many fl kids clamin 2 b great lately u gotta stop the pretend
cus we all know it take more den..
...8 wins and a kid blitz2 b'come a legend
^^ made me laugh a bit
kid blitz no quotables from you i thought u wasnt hittin as hard man no hate but v/ looks
play times over, what the fuck is a kid blitz son ill rip you to bits
i go a bar a minute, 10 lines in 20? well watch me double the hits
^^ lol coo
vs
nothin really hitin man sorry. fam i just felt you wasnt straight enough with the punches ur personals was aight but dey dont win battle, you need punches