10-12 lines
45 to check
drop a.s.a.p.
house rules
blind spit
g/l
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10-12 lines
45 to check
drop a.s.a.p.
house rules
blind spit
g/l
check check yurp its that boi........
check
to be honest you and yea pen aint ready for me cuz
you got blisters on ya fingers im writtin on nubs
my pens heated so to write i need a glove
i say damn you read that and say you in love
dont offend me my rappers delight is the king pen
how you sayin fuck it but you reppin new zealand
im the stank in the weed your just the sweet scent
you goin need to recuperate after this recurring event
hit you wit one punchline and in the side of yea mouth you got a dent
im eatin yea lines and this supposed to be lent
nigga you got me bent im precocious and its to preclude 2 kill this dude
so catch this line and take it like its cool
meh w/e heres a quick one......herb!
Faggot well play to five see if he can even J-1,
votein for whackest rymes is the only way u could say J won,
treat j's life like a frog go ahead and watch him croak,
name ya mixtape pissed off coke and still it aint mad dope,
must b in the country its wind mills i come through on,
newb ya gettin burnt like ya stayed out in the sun to long,
fillers erey where but yet no point intended,
next time in bitch slapped for a easy win battle me text recomended,
fruity bakery is my bank the way im rasien-bread
bullets stay like cattle the way hollows graze ya head,
meh blah.... uppin
Vote - Text
Just an overall better verse. Both had simplistic rhymes in them, but at least text attempted to throw punches that connected. J1, ur verse was easy to read and all but it was just boring. No personals, no punches or nothing. No hate guys.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=309505
Honest vote^^
Peace.
must b in the country its wind mills i come through on,
newb ya gettin burnt like ya stayed out in the sun to long,
vs
nothin
text took this one sided...came with harder punches...lacked personals..but you need to work on your vocab its to simple right now...j1 you came meh...nothing special in your verse but you'll get better work on your peronsals before anything you become good...hit the sig .
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=310937
^this is for you dudes ..
wack battle, text wins because he really had much better lines. they weren't good lines, but the concepts to the lines could've been nicer. text your wording was mad off and you could do way better than that. J-1, dunno ..your verse just wasn't anything really to me. nothing insulting or appealing of creativity ..so sorry ..
v/ text
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=310982
must b in the country its wind mills i come through on,
newb ya gettin burnt like ya stayed out in the sun to long,
vs
nothin
this was a basic battle J-One had a total diferent style than the one we use here on rb and text used it so he wins
uppin 1
Bump 2
damn it close this already bump 3
must b in the country its wind mills i come through on,
newb ya gettin burnt like ya stayed out in the sun to long,
vs
nothin
text-half assed verse i see, but you still pulled in the victory, weak punches, solid flow and structure, but thats it
j1-just str8 ass verse, no punches, flow was everywhere, structure was ok although there was a couple overly stretched lines
v//text for throwing a punch
meh ight uppin 4 close this......
bump 5 close this shit
to be honest you and yea pen aint ready for me cuz
you got blisters on ya fingers im writtin on nubs
^^no no...
my pens heated so to write i need a glove
i say damn you read that and say you in love
^^wtf no
dont offend me my rappers delight is the king pen
how you sayin fuck it but you reppin new zealand
^^not hard
im the stank in the weed your just the sweet scent
you goin need to recuperate after this recurring event
^^blah
hit you wit one punchline and in the side of yea mouth you got a dent
im eatin yea lines and this supposed to be lent
^^weres the punc?
nigga you got me bent im precocious and its to preclude 2 kill this dude
so catch this line and take it like its cool
^^wtf...makes no sense
vs
Faggot well play to five see if he can even J-1,
votein for whackest rymes is the only way u could say J won,
^^meh ok
treat j's life like a frog go ahead and watch him croak,
name ya mixtape pissed off coke and still it aint mad dope,
^^playd
must b in the country its wind mills i come through on,
newb ya gettin burnt like ya stayed out in the sun to long,
^^kinda playd..but meh ok
fillers erey where but yet no point intended,
next time in bitch slapped for a easy win battle me text recomended,
^^not a punch
fruity bakery is my bank the way im rasien-bread
bullets stay like cattle the way hollows graze ya head,
^^not bad..pretty dec
j1...had no punches all selfgory or dumb concepts
text...had simple concepts but atleast some directed punches
vote/ text