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18 lines?
meh its whatever man....ima just go 18 anyway's...so yea...peace dog ill drop my verse later...
Fuck clisk and since when is IJL letting in wack heads
Rip you to shreds; you got more accounts than newb threads.
Yet no one knows who the fuck you are, you aint up to par
I was looking at you close, it hurt my eyes so lets keep this far
Can’t raise a bar…20 Nobodies…homie your on a roll
Went against NawkOut and lost ya soul…
Your fault, your lines are more played than the 360 console
Asked if you got this and you replied “I’m unsure of this”
Remember the old days when you were good now ya jus reminisce
Give the ground a kiss…because you seem to be down there a lot
Until This battle I never once gave your wack ass a thought
We’re dope once yes but now everyone forgot...You just talk
Afraid to walk past the girls…so he mastered the sport of msn stalk
He really does live on the block…but fuck this wack kid
We’re gonna have to read 18 lines of his verse? God forbid
Really your om’s are played, your only good thing gone
But hey if you want more wins…I suggest you battle a pawn
Clisk really you suck…22 Losses Like Holy Fuck
I just hope you show because you seem like a faggot to Duck.
18 Good Luck.
lmfao..wow so much dirt....PUNK BITCH!
psh...
im the half ass king, you aint half of me
copying my style and steez,
...cop my verse just to get the bite of the week.
I confront live battles...dude only wines up to choke
U use tha' text approach,my daily respect's more then you get in bulk
white wash, so u commitin Betrayal to black folks, TreasOn
i should type in shorthand, cuz my punches land without reachin
ya rhymes lack style so it makes yer verse lifeless...
FUCKIN 15 year old... stuck on a stewie Griffin crisis...PRICELESS!
you boring with that flow that you forcin', nothing but distortion
parents want an abortion cause you take yoga to lick your own foreskin
Push DJ’s face in dough to make Gorilla Cookies i dont wanna be mean
he looks worse than The Thing...
from F4 My son wants to dress like HIM for Halloween
DJ got no fans, left out of God's master plan, the blacksheep of creation
Even the Lord signed on the boards to give him a negative reputation
this kids a young'en, a dope emcee he'll neva be
j.d. just called...bow wow's askin back for his identity
If you don’t wanna a beating next time, I got an active solution…
Don’t let me cross your face again…save that for your Proactive Solution
Push DJ’s face in dough to make Gorilla Cookies i dont wanna be mean
he looks worse than The Thing...
from F4 My son wants to dress like HIM for Halloween
this made me laugh, but it wasn't that creative.
EVERYTHING else in this battle was wack as fuck ..sorry for being so blunt about it but it seemed like a bland battle. dj's style is more like a storytelling type shit and it gets tedious to read. its so repetative and there's no creativity really in anything he wrote. while as clisk's wording sucks major ass ..
both did bad, but clisk had the better hits and concepts.
v/ Clisk
coming for the championship kiddos ;).
ok.
DJ..your verse was like iunno a poem or sumshit, to be honest i have to say it was poor, i didnt see any wit or dissing punches, just very basic statements, really you need to refresh your outlook on what constitutes a battle verse, not hating on you kid but it kinda sucked.
Clisk...ok no doubt your verse was better than his, but still nothing really stood out to me, your wording & concepts need to be harsher & more creative. but just keep working on it, punch wise nothing was harsh with the possible exception of the halloween line, but the concept was poor coupled with poor wording, so even that struggled to hit.
VOTE CLISK...less sucky
vote clisk just for bein more harsher in hes verse, for example the halloween punch was good and creative dat was the best bar of the battle i rekon.
dj ur verse was aight but got abit borin half way through i just thought u wasnt consistant enough man, so ima have 2 give it to clisk.
man what kind of championship is this.
nothing at mother fucking all.
vs
Push DJ’s face in dough to make Gorilla Cookies i dont wanna be mean
he looks worse than The Thing...
from F4 My son wants to dress like HIM for Halloween
on the real famila, this battle was weak as hell, clisk gets it tho for atleast trying to be creative, dj you came basic and hell, and your concepts were like shit you would expect from some1 your age, but yeah think outside the square..
v . c l i s k
V/-Clisk
fuck was this...no hate,juss this battle was crap.I vote for Clisk cuz he attempt'd wit.
Vote - Clisk
Didn't like either verse. Dj... your verse seemed like you didn't even wanna try. And in some parts it was pretty wack. Clisk... Wording was terrible, but at least you threw a decent punch. No hate.
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Honest vote^^
Pz....
Meh.
V. Clisk
vote-clisk
but you need to drop harder for next weeks championship battle because i expected this to be a clash of the titans and well, it was shitty
lol @ this battle both of you came with nothing really likeable both could use some rewording but mainly concepts need help
V.Clisk for attempting a couple witty punches
Push DJ’s face in dough to make Gorilla Cookies i dont wanna be mean
he looks worse than The Thing...
from F4 My son wants to dress like HIM for Halloween
vs.
Nothing.
Dj... just had a terrible verse overall, nothing hit, a lot of played concepts, you didn't come hard at all.
Clisk had decent concepts and a good bar or two, liked yours a lot better than dj's verse.
V/ Clisk for coming harder.
Closed...congratulations Clisk....